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Harrison County Gems #1
Hidden Gem
The last thing Officer Max St. Stevens expects when he responds to an armed robbery at a grocery store is meeting the woman of his dreams. Now, he needs to figure out what she’s hiding and how to convince her that she belongs with him.
For over five years Opal and her younger sister, Pearl, have been on the run, hiding from the dangerous people who wish them harm. Everything in their lives is a lie, and they need help, but don’t know how to get it. One night, Opal meets Max when the grocery store she’s working is robbed. There’s an instant connection that can’t be denied. Will she trust him with her secrets that could destroy more than just her?
Author's Note :
This is a dark new adult romance and is intended for readers 18 and up due to sensitive content, that some may find difficult to read. Please be aware, this book does contain sexual assault, as well as psychological and physical violence. Reader discretion is advised.
For over five years Opal and her younger sister, Pearl, have been on the run, hiding from the dangerous people who wish them harm. Everything in their lives is a lie, and they need help, but don’t know how to get it. One night, Opal meets Max when the grocery store she’s working is robbed. There’s an instant connection that can’t be denied. Will she trust him with her secrets that could destroy more than just her?
Author's Note :
This is a dark new adult romance and is intended for readers 18 and up due to sensitive content, that some may find difficult to read. Please be aware, this book does contain sexual assault, as well as psychological and physical violence. Reader discretion is advised.
- GenresContemporary Romance
325 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 1, 2020
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About the author
Jennifer Kayne
9 books130 followersJennifer Kayne is a Massachusetts native, who now resides in East Texas. She’s been married to the love of her life for over 25 years and has three kids – technically, two adults and a 10-year-old.
When she's not writing or reading romance, Jennifer is can be found watching werewolf or zombie movies, shopping, and making stained glass designs in her garage.
She loves hearing from people who enjoy her books.
When she's not writing or reading romance, Jennifer is can be found watching werewolf or zombie movies, shopping, and making stained glass designs in her garage.
She loves hearing from people who enjoy her books.
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May 26, 2020
3.5 stars
Opal and Pearl are sisters in hiding and things don't start off that great for Opal right from the start...or do they? You see Opal is is a cashier at a grocery store that is in the process of being robbed when Officer Max St. Stevens arrives on the scene. I will say that the owner of the store Glo was HYSTERICAL and I absolutely loved her, she is the momma bear of all momma bears. There is an instant connection between Max and Opal and I really enjoyed their romance progression.
You can read my full book review here: bit.ly/NBReviewHG
You can find me here: https://linktr.ee/NadineBookaholic
Opal and Pearl are sisters in hiding and things don't start off that great for Opal right from the start...or do they? You see Opal is is a cashier at a grocery store that is in the process of being robbed when Officer Max St. Stevens arrives on the scene. I will say that the owner of the store Glo was HYSTERICAL and I absolutely loved her, she is the momma bear of all momma bears. There is an instant connection between Max and Opal and I really enjoyed their romance progression.
You can read my full book review here: bit.ly/NBReviewHG
You can find me here: https://linktr.ee/NadineBookaholic
May 21, 2020
This is the first book I’ve read by this author and believe me I’m a fan. This is so not safe so be prepared to have your heart broken when reading this story of Opal, Pearl and Max.
Opal is escaping a life of hell thats more than anyone should endure at the hands of her husband. Knowing that she had to take her sister and run before he destroyed them both she’s making a new life for them. They’ve changed their names and their lives start now as Opal and Pearl. Making rent and living becomes all Opal knows how to do, it’s been five years since they walked away from the horror that was their lives. It’s at the store where she works that she meets Max and Felix and although she is reluctant to start anything starts to let Max in but just when it looks like she could be happy life takes a dangerous turn. Now her husband Lance knows where they are he’s coming for them and he takes no mercy. Could she lose the life she’s built, her sister and the right man to love?
Max couldn’t get the girl from the store out of his mind. After a rather awkward, funny and dramatic start to their friendship he was never expecting to fall hard and fast for Opal. He’s been hurt before and just when he lets his guard down he finds the life Opal and Pearl have been living was nothing but lies and turns his back on them. Will he realise what he’s losing by turning away and when he dies will he be too late?
Rollercoaster of emotional ride that will keep you gripped from start to finish. I highly recommend this book but I warn again it’s not safe and may contain triggers. 5* read. I am voluntarily reviewing an advanced copy of this book.
Opal is escaping a life of hell thats more than anyone should endure at the hands of her husband. Knowing that she had to take her sister and run before he destroyed them both she’s making a new life for them. They’ve changed their names and their lives start now as Opal and Pearl. Making rent and living becomes all Opal knows how to do, it’s been five years since they walked away from the horror that was their lives. It’s at the store where she works that she meets Max and Felix and although she is reluctant to start anything starts to let Max in but just when it looks like she could be happy life takes a dangerous turn. Now her husband Lance knows where they are he’s coming for them and he takes no mercy. Could she lose the life she’s built, her sister and the right man to love?
Max couldn’t get the girl from the store out of his mind. After a rather awkward, funny and dramatic start to their friendship he was never expecting to fall hard and fast for Opal. He’s been hurt before and just when he lets his guard down he finds the life Opal and Pearl have been living was nothing but lies and turns his back on them. Will he realise what he’s losing by turning away and when he dies will he be too late?
Rollercoaster of emotional ride that will keep you gripped from start to finish. I highly recommend this book but I warn again it’s not safe and may contain triggers. 5* read. I am voluntarily reviewing an advanced copy of this book.
May 31, 2020
This was the first book I've read by Jennifer Kayne, but it won't be the last. I thoroughly enjoyed this book. If you're looking for a good romantic suspense, this is for you!
June 16, 2020
I read an early copy of this debut novel for the author. As a whole the book was really great. It had a really good storyline. I enjoyed the story a lot.
Opal and her sister Pearl are on the run. Opal meets Max when he is the officer that shows up when the store she works at is robbed. This book has a lot of triggers so beware!
I enjoyed Max and Opal. They had some great chemistry and Opal was a great heroine. She was feisty, strong, smart and witty, despite her past. Max was a great hero. Very caring and paid attention! He has flaws but who doesn’t. The suspense in this book was amazing!!! I am very intrigued for the next book in the series!
This is a great debut novel.
Opal and her sister Pearl are on the run. Opal meets Max when he is the officer that shows up when the store she works at is robbed. This book has a lot of triggers so beware!
I enjoyed Max and Opal. They had some great chemistry and Opal was a great heroine. She was feisty, strong, smart and witty, despite her past. Max was a great hero. Very caring and paid attention! He has flaws but who doesn’t. The suspense in this book was amazing!!! I am very intrigued for the next book in the series!
This is a great debut novel.
May 12, 2020
I am an avid reader of romance novels so when a good friend offered the chance at an ARC I immediately said yes. I am one who when I start a book if I’m not hooked within the first few chapters, I know I more than likely will not finish reading the book.
I will warn you now...be prepared to not be able to put this book down. I devoured this book in less than 2 days (and I have 2 toddlers). I absolutely love how she writes. I love that she kept me wanting to know more about the characters and that the story wasn’t predictable.
You will not be disappointed when you buy this book. If there is another story to continue the series I cannot way to read it.
Give me more Jennifer, give me more!
I will warn you now...be prepared to not be able to put this book down. I devoured this book in less than 2 days (and I have 2 toddlers). I absolutely love how she writes. I love that she kept me wanting to know more about the characters and that the story wasn’t predictable.
You will not be disappointed when you buy this book. If there is another story to continue the series I cannot way to read it.
Give me more Jennifer, give me more!
May 17, 2020
Hidden Gem by Jennifer Kayne. Ophelia was married to Lance Graysen and went through hell with him and his family. Then one day Opheila was in a lot of pain and bleeding very badly as she was going through another miscarriage caused by Lance and she had to watch her 17 year old sister Paige [Pearl] being gang raped by Lance and 6 other guys and she was unable to help. Then one day she took her sister and ran away. The sisters changed their names and have been on the run from the people who were dangerous. They both have been hiding for 5 years. All Opheila [Opal] wanted was to make enough money to keep a roof over their heads and protect Paige [Pearl]. The one day some guy tried to rob the store Opal worked at. That is when Opal met Max. One day Max and his friend Felix went to the grocery store so because Max wanted to see Opal and the weather had turned real bad and the guys offered to give Opal a ride home but,mother nature and horrible driving conditions Max's truck ended up in a ditch fortunately no one was hurt. Opal invited the guys back to her house while they waited for someone to pull his truck out and Opal knew it would probably affect her sister but, it couldn't be helped. Max and Opal start to see more of each and start to get close. Pearl was even starting to like Felix. While Opal is at Max's house he gets a call in the morning from Felix that there was something wrong with Pearl. Max and Opal met Felix at the hospital and find out that Pearl is in bad shape. Due to the fact that the robbery was on the news lance and his family found Opal and Pearl. Opal wishes she had told Max the truth about what she and Pearl went through but, the Graysen's had filled Max's head with a bunch of lies and when Opal tried to explain things Max didn't want to listen due to his history with a lying witch who'd made a fool out of him. Opal went into hiding again Lance found her again and set up a place that she was suppose to go to. Opal went to the place and all hell broke loose. If you want to find out more you truly truly need to read this book!! This is the first book that I read by Jennifer Kayne and I loved.
May 20, 2020
Finding courage to live....
by and1515
The first time she'd meet Max, she'd been working at the local grocery store and honestly tonight had been way more exciting then she'd hoped.
All she really wanted was to make a little money and to walk home safely.
Opal would do anything for her sister Pearl she was her whole world unfortunately her sister was very fragile and totally vulnerable.
Max couldn't get the girl from the store out of his head in fact she was absolutely all he thought about.
With the weather turning bad he'd meant well when they'd offered Opal a ride home however mother nature and horrible driving conditions had his truck in a ditch fortunately no one was hurt.
Opal knew inviting Max and his friend to crash with them while they waited for someone to pull his truck out would probably affect her sister but there really wasn't much she could do.
Max laid there wide awake his mind wouldn't shut up there was something about her that simply drove him crazy.
Yeah probably not the smartest idea in the world but hey his guy making questionable choices is what we do especially when you get caught by said girl mid self loving.
But wow he was definitely a lucky man tonight he'd never dreamed she'd be his this quickly and now that he had a tasted her sweetness he promised her they were not a one an done.
Opal tried to forget all about the monster she'd been married to there was nothing good about him or his family and without a doubt the people who worked for them each and everyone were cut from the same discussed cloth.
Opal felt so guilty she should have been there for her poor sister Pearl she'd been thinking only of herself and her needs.
Now Pearl was being hospitalized she couldn't believe how bad her sister's health had become she tried to take care of her.
Opal wished she'd found the courage to tell him the horrible truth about her life but she'd been worried he wouldn't believe her.
And now she'd been right because apparently they'd fed him a pack of lies
that left her devastated.
He'd been so infuriated all Max ever wanted was the truth after he'd told her about his history with a lying witch who'd made a fool out of him.
Opal wanted her life back she was tired of cowering in the corner in fear she'd do anything to make them all pay.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
by and1515
The first time she'd meet Max, she'd been working at the local grocery store and honestly tonight had been way more exciting then she'd hoped.
All she really wanted was to make a little money and to walk home safely.
Opal would do anything for her sister Pearl she was her whole world unfortunately her sister was very fragile and totally vulnerable.
Max couldn't get the girl from the store out of his head in fact she was absolutely all he thought about.
With the weather turning bad he'd meant well when they'd offered Opal a ride home however mother nature and horrible driving conditions had his truck in a ditch fortunately no one was hurt.
Opal knew inviting Max and his friend to crash with them while they waited for someone to pull his truck out would probably affect her sister but there really wasn't much she could do.
Max laid there wide awake his mind wouldn't shut up there was something about her that simply drove him crazy.
Yeah probably not the smartest idea in the world but hey his guy making questionable choices is what we do especially when you get caught by said girl mid self loving.
But wow he was definitely a lucky man tonight he'd never dreamed she'd be his this quickly and now that he had a tasted her sweetness he promised her they were not a one an done.
Opal tried to forget all about the monster she'd been married to there was nothing good about him or his family and without a doubt the people who worked for them each and everyone were cut from the same discussed cloth.
Opal felt so guilty she should have been there for her poor sister Pearl she'd been thinking only of herself and her needs.
Now Pearl was being hospitalized she couldn't believe how bad her sister's health had become she tried to take care of her.
Opal wished she'd found the courage to tell him the horrible truth about her life but she'd been worried he wouldn't believe her.
And now she'd been right because apparently they'd fed him a pack of lies
that left her devastated.
He'd been so infuriated all Max ever wanted was the truth after he'd told her about his history with a lying witch who'd made a fool out of him.
Opal wanted her life back she was tired of cowering in the corner in fear she'd do anything to make them all pay.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 16, 2020
Hidden Gem by Jennifer Kayne
I have read another book by a first time writer author and Jennifer Kayne you can stand up and take a bow! This one is a keeper and I would advise reading it when you have the next day off, you just can’t put it down. Fast paced, wonderful characters (oh that Gloria), suspense, laughter and oh yeah “sex" , lol!
Opal and Pearl are on the run and have been hid out in a small town in Texas for 5 years. Opal is working in a small town grocery store on the edge of the seedy side of town. Pearl stays home because she has lots of problems. Darned if the store doesn’t get robbed and in comes Sgt. Maximilian StStevens and ain’t he fine! Because of the robbery Opals ex finds them. Max and his partner Felix eventually became their protectors.
Abuse is a terrible thing to live with and the devastating after effects it leaves behind. I love the way Ms Kayne handles this in her book.
Now the wait because I know you have some more good books in that brain! ....pat....
I have read another book by a first time writer author and Jennifer Kayne you can stand up and take a bow! This one is a keeper and I would advise reading it when you have the next day off, you just can’t put it down. Fast paced, wonderful characters (oh that Gloria), suspense, laughter and oh yeah “sex" , lol!
Opal and Pearl are on the run and have been hid out in a small town in Texas for 5 years. Opal is working in a small town grocery store on the edge of the seedy side of town. Pearl stays home because she has lots of problems. Darned if the store doesn’t get robbed and in comes Sgt. Maximilian StStevens and ain’t he fine! Because of the robbery Opals ex finds them. Max and his partner Felix eventually became their protectors.
Abuse is a terrible thing to live with and the devastating after effects it leaves behind. I love the way Ms Kayne handles this in her book.
Now the wait because I know you have some more good books in that brain! ....pat....
May 16, 2020
I had a feeling from the first few pages that this was going to be a good book. Before I knew it I was halfway through, the pages just kept turning and the feels kept coming!
Max and Opal are the main characters and they are great! Opal has really been through some shocking, heartbreaking stuff along with her sister. She escaped that life with her sister; Pearl and they are just trying to stay hidden and make a new life. Whilst Opal is working there is a robbery, which is when she meets the lovely police officer Max. What a journey they have ahead of them. Especially when Opal and Pearl's past catches up with them!
This is a great story, the characters are great, you really have a bit of everything in this, I even found myself chuckling at times with the humour. Then I was on the edge of my seat with butterflies in suspense. It was very well written, I felt like I was there living their journey! Definitely a one click!
Max and Opal are the main characters and they are great! Opal has really been through some shocking, heartbreaking stuff along with her sister. She escaped that life with her sister; Pearl and they are just trying to stay hidden and make a new life. Whilst Opal is working there is a robbery, which is when she meets the lovely police officer Max. What a journey they have ahead of them. Especially when Opal and Pearl's past catches up with them!
This is a great story, the characters are great, you really have a bit of everything in this, I even found myself chuckling at times with the humour. Then I was on the edge of my seat with butterflies in suspense. It was very well written, I felt like I was there living their journey! Definitely a one click!
May 16, 2020
3.5 stars!!
This book was beautifully tragic. So much transpired I don’t even know where to start.
I love all the characters in the book. Especially Pearl and Opal!! Max and Felix are fantastic!! Can I say that I feel for Max the minute he pulled his gun. Lol.
This book takes you on a woman’s journey, basically, through hell. Though the sisters story is sad and heart breaking it is courageous and beautiful.
This is the author’s debut novel, and it does read that way. I am quite impressed at the story line. I do think this book is good. Think it just needs a little work.
**I received this book as an ARC and in return gave my honest review**
This book was beautifully tragic. So much transpired I don’t even know where to start.
I love all the characters in the book. Especially Pearl and Opal!! Max and Felix are fantastic!! Can I say that I feel for Max the minute he pulled his gun. Lol.
This book takes you on a woman’s journey, basically, through hell. Though the sisters story is sad and heart breaking it is courageous and beautiful.
This is the author’s debut novel, and it does read that way. I am quite impressed at the story line. I do think this book is good. Think it just needs a little work.
**I received this book as an ARC and in return gave my honest review**
May 15, 2020
When asked if I was interested in an ARC from a debut author and was sent a blurb the answer was yes...I love an insta attraction story, add a dark past she is trying to run from. This story is full of insta attraction, strength, determination, love, heartache, friendship...I laughed and cried. I became invested in the characters. This book is a real gem and hope to see more of these characters in their own stories.
May 16, 2020
This book was fantastic!
I loved how the main characters meet and their chemistry, along with her sister and her issues which really helped build the story. I would love to see a book about her sister as well!
Definitely worth a read!
I loved how the main characters meet and their chemistry, along with her sister and her issues which really helped build the story. I would love to see a book about her sister as well!
Definitely worth a read!
May 17, 2020
Hidden Gem by Jennifer Kayne is just that. This is a great story. Opal who is working to keep a roof over her and her sister’s head needs to keep a low profile. Then one night the store she works at gets robbed. One of the responding officers is Max who after meeting Opal can’t get her off his mind. This book was a rollercoaster of emotions. It had me laughing at the funny things that happened during the robbery and crying at another situation. It had me on the edge of my seat unable to stop reading until the end. I can’t wait to see what Jennifer will write next.
May 17, 2020
I was gifted this book as an ARC. Opal meets max when the grocery store she works in is involved in a robbery, they soon start dating but opals past catches upto her. The rollercoaster of emotions this book takes you on will leave you hooked and wanting more! You won't be able to put this book down! Can't wait to read more of Jennifer kaynes work.
June 1, 2020
Max... you are a horses backside!
You could have swallowed broken glass and I still wouldn't have given you a second glance
Darn lucky that girl loves you 💓
Felix, you can handcuff me anytime
Lance hope you meet the underside of a bus
I'll be back I still have a couple of chapters left but my blood is boiling and I needed to vent 🤷♀️
I'm back ...
At a little past the midway point the story finally captured my complete attention and I couldn't flip the pages fast enough-
I almost put this one down - So glad I didn't.
Max and Opal find an instant attraction between them which they pursue. Opal is hiding something and Max knows it, having been betrayed before he is a bit weary but he can not deny how he feels when they are together. As things begin to unravel Max finds that he may have been made the fool once again.
The beginning chemistry between these two felt a bit forced but as the story progressed their connection became tangible. A couple of times I wanted to smack Max upside the head for letting his past cloud his present. Opal needed a good talking too as well.
I think this should have been a duet or longer. There is a lot to these characters and the author does touch on it but for me, as a reader, I wanted more - I wanted a deeper connection.
The supporting cast was a blast their personalities were spot on providing the reader with a bit of laughter, comradely, and family.
I really am looking forward to their stories.
You could have swallowed broken glass and I still wouldn't have given you a second glance
Darn lucky that girl loves you 💓
Felix, you can handcuff me anytime
Lance hope you meet the underside of a bus
I'll be back I still have a couple of chapters left but my blood is boiling and I needed to vent 🤷♀️
I'm back ...
At a little past the midway point the story finally captured my complete attention and I couldn't flip the pages fast enough-
I almost put this one down - So glad I didn't.
Max and Opal find an instant attraction between them which they pursue. Opal is hiding something and Max knows it, having been betrayed before he is a bit weary but he can not deny how he feels when they are together. As things begin to unravel Max finds that he may have been made the fool once again.
The beginning chemistry between these two felt a bit forced but as the story progressed their connection became tangible. A couple of times I wanted to smack Max upside the head for letting his past cloud his present. Opal needed a good talking too as well.
I think this should have been a duet or longer. There is a lot to these characters and the author does touch on it but for me, as a reader, I wanted more - I wanted a deeper connection.
The supporting cast was a blast their personalities were spot on providing the reader with a bit of laughter, comradely, and family.
I really am looking forward to their stories.
May 20, 2020
This was my first Jennifer Kayne book and I was a little disappointed. The plot started off a little slow but picked up rapidly. I don’t have any complaints with that. It was entertaining once the pace picked up.
My biggest complaint would be the editing. There were some pretty big issues. The biggest would have to be the random POV switching mid-chapter towards the end. All of the editing issues is why I gave it 3 stars and not 4.
I liked the characters, it was an interesting story and had a little bit of a dark twist that I wasn’t expecting. I enjoyed that. There were some super funny lines. Her banter was pretty on point. I didn’t like a few of the words she used in the adult scenes, not my favorite.
Overall, I liked it but it could’ve used some more help before it published. I would definitely try reading another one of her books, if she got a better editor next time.
My biggest complaint would be the editing. There were some pretty big issues. The biggest would have to be the random POV switching mid-chapter towards the end. All of the editing issues is why I gave it 3 stars and not 4.
I liked the characters, it was an interesting story and had a little bit of a dark twist that I wasn’t expecting. I enjoyed that. There were some super funny lines. Her banter was pretty on point. I didn’t like a few of the words she used in the adult scenes, not my favorite.
Overall, I liked it but it could’ve used some more help before it published. I would definitely try reading another one of her books, if she got a better editor next time.
May 23, 2020
I'm done! It took me a while to read this book because my body wanted me to sleep instead of reading but my mind and my heart fought back and I was able to read the final half of the book in 5 hours! I just HAD to finish it! I had to know what was happening.
Firstly, can we all stand and give an applause to Jennifer for publishing her first book! As a failed writer myself, I know how hard it is to write and finish a book!
Another thing I want to applaud Jennifer for is the fact that she did not shy away from the really dark and seriously messed up scenes! A warning first: This book contains very vivid scenes of sexual and physical abuse so read with caution. I've found that when other authors decide that one of their characters were a victim of a very horrible and sick abuser, it's just skimmed over. The character just give a summary or what happened or explain it as briefly as possible because they don't want to relive the trauma. I think authors find it too hard to write because let's face it - it's never easy to write about rape or sexual assault. Or maybe they don't want to upset their readers.
But Jennifer wrote one particular chapter that was incredibly detailed and it made me cringe at first and then I couldn't read any more and had to stop for a while. What happened to these women is so so horrible and even though they're fictional characters, there's real women who has to suffer through something like this in real life and that's why I'm so grateful that Jennifer decided to write that scene. Maybe this will open a lot of eyes and make people see how the real effects of sexual violence!!
But it explained so much and emotionally I understood the two sisters better. It was necessary for the plot to know what these girls went through. And now we can hate those vile monsters like they deserve to be hated!
This review is a bit mixed up but I'm writing like it pops up on my head! The beginning was a tas bit slow and boring but in hindsight it shows that Opal wasn't really living until she met Max and when they met the fireworks were all over the place! Opal's behavior was a but like... ummm what are you doing girl? But once you get to know her and see what she's been through, you will understand why she never learned how to control her hormones!
I'm trying not to give away any spoilers but I want to shake my head and call Jennifer a sneaky little hobbits because she got away with a mayor plot twist that was there all along but I didn't see it coming because I didn't recognize a certain character's name immediately... even though it was mentioned before.
The ending had me whooping and air punching like an idiot in my bed, still in my PJs, but I had to celebrate on behalf of all my sisters out there! What I didn't expect was that final chapter... the 2nd epilogue... I was so confused at first because I had no idea what was going on and why everyone was not acting like they where supposed to! But then it all made sense and I loved Pearl even more for what she did for her sister! It also hinted at a second book which Jennifer confirmed on her page a few days ago!
Now I'm going to address the big grey elephant in the room! At first I thought it was just the ARC copy that had the errors and mistakes (which is totally fine because a lot of authors send out their ARC before it was edited and checked for the final draft) but it seemed that that was not the case. However... I don't think you can take away a star from a book just because the editing fell short. The last few chapters was a bit messy with the POVs from Max and Opal jumping into each other's chapters for a paragraph or two. I have to admit that it was quite confusing and really hope it was an editing problem and not the writing style. A few times I noticed that the beginning of the dialogue didn't have a capitol letter at the beginning of a sentence. The names were changed a few times but I think that was done on purpose... it might not make sense now but once you've read the book, you will understand what I'm saying! I'm sure this won't be a problem in the future.
I'm giving this book 5 stars because it deserves 5 stars. For her first book, Jennifer did an excellent job. The characters were explained in so much detail and you wanted to weep with them. The plot twists were excellently timed and I didn't see it coming!
We have to give Jennifer some slag here. It's her first book and no one got it right the first time. I feel she has the potential to become an amazing writer. She just need to learn the importance of editing and making sure that the manuscript is perfect and all the errors are fixed before sending the book out into the world. She's getting some bad cred because of it and I don't believe she deserves it. I'm anxiously waiting for Broken Gem and I can't wait to see where this story takes us!
I am so incredibly proud of you, Jennifer. You did something I haven't been able to do so I salute you! In 10 year's time when you're on the Best Seller's List, I will be able to say that I was one of the first people to read your ARC.
Firstly, can we all stand and give an applause to Jennifer for publishing her first book! As a failed writer myself, I know how hard it is to write and finish a book!
Another thing I want to applaud Jennifer for is the fact that she did not shy away from the really dark and seriously messed up scenes! A warning first: This book contains very vivid scenes of sexual and physical abuse so read with caution. I've found that when other authors decide that one of their characters were a victim of a very horrible and sick abuser, it's just skimmed over. The character just give a summary or what happened or explain it as briefly as possible because they don't want to relive the trauma. I think authors find it too hard to write because let's face it - it's never easy to write about rape or sexual assault. Or maybe they don't want to upset their readers.
But Jennifer wrote one particular chapter that was incredibly detailed and it made me cringe at first and then I couldn't read any more and had to stop for a while. What happened to these women is so so horrible and even though they're fictional characters, there's real women who has to suffer through something like this in real life and that's why I'm so grateful that Jennifer decided to write that scene. Maybe this will open a lot of eyes and make people see how the real effects of sexual violence!!
But it explained so much and emotionally I understood the two sisters better. It was necessary for the plot to know what these girls went through. And now we can hate those vile monsters like they deserve to be hated!
This review is a bit mixed up but I'm writing like it pops up on my head! The beginning was a tas bit slow and boring but in hindsight it shows that Opal wasn't really living until she met Max and when they met the fireworks were all over the place! Opal's behavior was a but like... ummm what are you doing girl? But once you get to know her and see what she's been through, you will understand why she never learned how to control her hormones!
I'm trying not to give away any spoilers but I want to shake my head and call Jennifer a sneaky little hobbits because she got away with a mayor plot twist that was there all along but I didn't see it coming because I didn't recognize a certain character's name immediately... even though it was mentioned before.
The ending had me whooping and air punching like an idiot in my bed, still in my PJs, but I had to celebrate on behalf of all my sisters out there! What I didn't expect was that final chapter... the 2nd epilogue... I was so confused at first because I had no idea what was going on and why everyone was not acting like they where supposed to! But then it all made sense and I loved Pearl even more for what she did for her sister! It also hinted at a second book which Jennifer confirmed on her page a few days ago!
Now I'm going to address the big grey elephant in the room! At first I thought it was just the ARC copy that had the errors and mistakes (which is totally fine because a lot of authors send out their ARC before it was edited and checked for the final draft) but it seemed that that was not the case. However... I don't think you can take away a star from a book just because the editing fell short. The last few chapters was a bit messy with the POVs from Max and Opal jumping into each other's chapters for a paragraph or two. I have to admit that it was quite confusing and really hope it was an editing problem and not the writing style. A few times I noticed that the beginning of the dialogue didn't have a capitol letter at the beginning of a sentence. The names were changed a few times but I think that was done on purpose... it might not make sense now but once you've read the book, you will understand what I'm saying! I'm sure this won't be a problem in the future.
I'm giving this book 5 stars because it deserves 5 stars. For her first book, Jennifer did an excellent job. The characters were explained in so much detail and you wanted to weep with them. The plot twists were excellently timed and I didn't see it coming!
We have to give Jennifer some slag here. It's her first book and no one got it right the first time. I feel she has the potential to become an amazing writer. She just need to learn the importance of editing and making sure that the manuscript is perfect and all the errors are fixed before sending the book out into the world. She's getting some bad cred because of it and I don't believe she deserves it. I'm anxiously waiting for Broken Gem and I can't wait to see where this story takes us!
I am so incredibly proud of you, Jennifer. You did something I haven't been able to do so I salute you! In 10 year's time when you're on the Best Seller's List, I will be able to say that I was one of the first people to read your ARC.
July 8, 2020
Hidden Gem is the debut novel by Jennifer Kayne. It’s a dual POV second chance romance that’s ripe with suspense and darker themes that are tastefully touched upon. The primary characters, Max and Opal, meet after Opal’s store is robbed and the pair are instantly attracted to one another. Max is a police officer who responds to a silent alarm and then makes it a priority to return to the store for another glance at the woman he can’t get him mind off of. 😉 Opal is running from a tragic and disturbing past that readers will find heartbreaking. The darker elements of this story—the abuse Opal and her sister, Pearl—endured might be a trigger for some readers but Jennifer Kayne wrote them tastefully while not entirely shying away from the ugliness that the pair endured. Opal’s walked through hell and come out on the other side stronger. She’s been the rock for her sister for years and her story while at the forefront of the book doesn’t lessen Pearl’s heartbreaking past.
Hidden Gem offers a glimpse at what readers will be able to expect from Jennifer Kayne as she grows in her journey as an author. It’s a promising start worthy of one-clicking this new release and settling into your favorite chair to read straight through. Like all debut novels, there is room for growth with Jennifer’s storytelling. I found Hidden Gem to be an entertaining and easy read and I’d give it 4.5 Stars. I LOVED the secondary characters in this story—particularly Pearl, Glo, and Felix—and I’d love to see the other characters get their own HEA. I anticipate Jennifer Kayne will soon have stockpiled readers who are clamoring for her stories! Readers will find her Hidden Gem sexy, sweet, and suspenseful. There are a few areas that I believe could have improved the story. Namely the pacing and the character’s connection. I’d love to see the story’s pacing smoothed out a little—as it stands, it is either told in fast succession or a bit to slow for my taste. Also, I’d love to see more growth in the character’s connection. Max has been badly burned in the past and feels that while his attraction to Opal is strong, he’s not able to fully trust her either. Max senses she isn’t telling him everything and it causes some internal conflict for his character. The pair are intensely drawn to one author, yet Jennifer might have been able to develop this connection a little better. It does grow in the second half of the book—as I’d expect from a story—but I wasn’t fully convinced of that connection. At times, the chemistry between Max and Opal was written succinctly and at others, it felt a little forced within the confines of the scene. Overall, I’m a very critical reader and while I may seem harsh in my review as this is a debut novel for the author, I genuinely enjoyed the story and will look for more of this author’s work.
I received an ARC and voluntarily reviewed Hidden Gem.
Hidden Gem offers a glimpse at what readers will be able to expect from Jennifer Kayne as she grows in her journey as an author. It’s a promising start worthy of one-clicking this new release and settling into your favorite chair to read straight through. Like all debut novels, there is room for growth with Jennifer’s storytelling. I found Hidden Gem to be an entertaining and easy read and I’d give it 4.5 Stars. I LOVED the secondary characters in this story—particularly Pearl, Glo, and Felix—and I’d love to see the other characters get their own HEA. I anticipate Jennifer Kayne will soon have stockpiled readers who are clamoring for her stories! Readers will find her Hidden Gem sexy, sweet, and suspenseful. There are a few areas that I believe could have improved the story. Namely the pacing and the character’s connection. I’d love to see the story’s pacing smoothed out a little—as it stands, it is either told in fast succession or a bit to slow for my taste. Also, I’d love to see more growth in the character’s connection. Max has been badly burned in the past and feels that while his attraction to Opal is strong, he’s not able to fully trust her either. Max senses she isn’t telling him everything and it causes some internal conflict for his character. The pair are intensely drawn to one author, yet Jennifer might have been able to develop this connection a little better. It does grow in the second half of the book—as I’d expect from a story—but I wasn’t fully convinced of that connection. At times, the chemistry between Max and Opal was written succinctly and at others, it felt a little forced within the confines of the scene. Overall, I’m a very critical reader and while I may seem harsh in my review as this is a debut novel for the author, I genuinely enjoyed the story and will look for more of this author’s work.
I received an ARC and voluntarily reviewed Hidden Gem.
May 20, 2020
3.5 Stars!!
So this was a very good mystery from a debut author and a definite fast read.
Opal first came across as meek and scared, but I really liked how her character developed. She definitely took back her power from those who hurt her and it was great to watch it all unfold. I liked her character probably the most.
I have mixed thoughts on Max. While he was very sweet and caring, I think he was a little bit of a fool for not letting Opal get her story out. But the boy grovelled and I think he could have done better. I did love his relationship with Felix. These two are bromance goals.
While the story was a solid mystery, I just think it lacked a bit of depth for being a book with such dark elements. I would have loved it more if I was emotionally invested in the characters or the story but it didn't really happen for me.
I definitely will follow this author to see where her stories go in the future.
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So this was a very good mystery from a debut author and a definite fast read.
Opal first came across as meek and scared, but I really liked how her character developed. She definitely took back her power from those who hurt her and it was great to watch it all unfold. I liked her character probably the most.
I have mixed thoughts on Max. While he was very sweet and caring, I think he was a little bit of a fool for not letting Opal get her story out. But the boy grovelled and I think he could have done better. I did love his relationship with Felix. These two are bromance goals.
While the story was a solid mystery, I just think it lacked a bit of depth for being a book with such dark elements. I would have loved it more if I was emotionally invested in the characters or the story but it didn't really happen for me.
I definitely will follow this author to see where her stories go in the future.
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May 21, 2020
Good story of sisters having lived through the worse imaginable and finding the path out to the other side. After their parents die, 18 year old Opal has to make difficult choices to care for her younger sister. An abusive, twisted family takes them in and so begins their descent into the dark depths of hell. When they finally escape, her sister is severely traumatized and Opal barely exists living day to day. Opal steps out of her comfort zone to start living again when she meets Max. This was a good story of what people will do to survive and the secondary characters were a good addition. Unfortunately, I was not a fan of Max. I understand he had been hurt in the past. But as a cop, he recognized Opal and Paige has issues and had been through abuse. His reaction was too much over the top against someone he supposedly loved. His friend, Felix, was a much better person. The sister's story made this book a four star and worth the read.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 23, 2020
Such a great story with fantastic characters. This story is a journey of a woman's journey through hell. It's sad, heartbreaking, courageous and beautiful. Opal and Pearl have been on the run and are hiding out in a small town in Texas. Opal is working at a grocery store when it get robbed. That's how she meets Sgt. Maximilian St.Stevens. Because of the robbery Opal's ex finds them. There is where she is going to have to trust Max and his partner Felix to protect them. This might be fiction but there are so many women that are living these kinds of lives. This story turns out beautifully and Opal and Pearl find the safety they deserve. Great First story from this author. Can't wait to read another. I received a copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving an honest review.
May 20, 2020
Debut author. I really LOVED Max and Felix. They couldn’t be more perfect.
This book had great secondary characters. I Loved Pearl, Gloria and Tam. I liked the story and the twist was pretty fantastic. Dang, Talk about having too many siblings. I enjoyed everything except, Opal annoyed me a lot. Opal seems like two totally different people. Timid and scared then sexy, flirty, and adventurous. I would notice the shift and it would break my focus. She wasn’t my favorite. The slang use was confusing at times. This book was Super HOT! 🔥 The epilogue was the best! I’m very impressed with this debut novel. I recommend this book to anyone who likes damaged heroines, and hot cops.
This book had great secondary characters. I Loved Pearl, Gloria and Tam. I liked the story and the twist was pretty fantastic. Dang, Talk about having too many siblings. I enjoyed everything except, Opal annoyed me a lot. Opal seems like two totally different people. Timid and scared then sexy, flirty, and adventurous. I would notice the shift and it would break my focus. She wasn’t my favorite. The slang use was confusing at times. This book was Super HOT! 🔥 The epilogue was the best! I’m very impressed with this debut novel. I recommend this book to anyone who likes damaged heroines, and hot cops.
May 18, 2020
This is the first book she has written so I will say she has got a way to her writing. But, it is a dark romance as it's got abuse in it, to the heroine and sister.
Opal has escaped her abusive past to make a new life for herself and her younger sister.
Until she meets a Max, a police officer, and sometimes life gives a second chance at love and life but she still remains hidden in her past to keep herself, mostly her sister, safe from the past and all it did to them. So they are living one day at a time, trying to survive.
But you can never run away from your past, you have to confront it and then life can return to normalcy, trying to find love and happiness.
This book is her first and it won't be her last.
*I Received An Advanced Reader's Copy for Truthful Review*
Opal has escaped her abusive past to make a new life for herself and her younger sister.
Until she meets a Max, a police officer, and sometimes life gives a second chance at love and life but she still remains hidden in her past to keep herself, mostly her sister, safe from the past and all it did to them. So they are living one day at a time, trying to survive.
But you can never run away from your past, you have to confront it and then life can return to normalcy, trying to find love and happiness.
This book is her first and it won't be her last.
*I Received An Advanced Reader's Copy for Truthful Review*
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 20, 2020
The debut novel by Jennifer Kayne and I loved it! Hidden Gem has so much emotions pour into each and every page it was a delight to read. These characters, mainly Opal and Max will steal your heart. The chemistry between them was so much fun to read, I couldn’t get enough. Solid plot to carry the story mixed with easy to read characters that you just instantly like. That’s a winner in my book! Hidden Gem is great and I can’t wait to see what comes next from this author!
-Mackenzie
-Mackenzie
May 21, 2020
Book one in the Harrison County Gems series a well written story. What an intense story. Ophelia/Opal Clark and her sister Pearl go through some really nasty things at the hands of some really bad men. Officer Max St. Stevens meets Opal when The Grocery Gal was robbed. I also like Felix, Gloria, and the rest of the people that come into the two sisters lifes. This is a new Author to me. I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 25, 2020
This is the first book I have read by this author and it was very intriguing. It took me a while to get into it, but I did, I was consumed by the lives of opal and pearl. Max seemed a little tough around the ends with a sure dominance about him, but it was a calming influence in opals life which she wanted to cling to. The horrors that were still chasing them were no doubt a plague to their souls and this story dragged you and made you feel it all with them. Great read.
May 16, 2020
The characters are strong and well built Their attraction immediate. She tries to ignore it but he does whatever he can to pull her close. I really enjoyed everyone’s banter. I was swept away in the story it was beautifully awkward and adorable. I loved getting to know them and watching the story unravel. Their story is heart warming and worth the read!
May 25, 2020
This is the 1st book I've read written by Jennifer Kayne; she has done a great job at writing a good book; I can’t wait to read more of her books.
The story line caught my attention at the very beginning and kept me interested throughout the entire book.
I loved the characters.
I received a free copy of this book via booksprout and I’m voluntarily leaving a review.
The story line caught my attention at the very beginning and kept me interested throughout the entire book.
I loved the characters.
I received a free copy of this book via booksprout and I’m voluntarily leaving a review.
June 2, 2020
Hidden Gem, is a new favorite of mine. Jennifer Kayne is a hidden gem for sure. Her debut was an amazing and emotional read.
And, seriously it was her FIRST book. Wow!! If I didnt know going into it, I never would have guessed. She writes like she has been doing it her whole life.
She just got herself a big fan. I cannot wait to see what else she does.
And, seriously it was her FIRST book. Wow!! If I didnt know going into it, I never would have guessed. She writes like she has been doing it her whole life.
She just got herself a big fan. I cannot wait to see what else she does.
June 27, 2020
"OPAL" is an outstanding leading lady!!! She is strong but doesnt know it and a fearless protector but wont give herself credit!!
MAX is everything but gets in his own way. The perfect man once he stops to listen!!
This book has everything, suspense, lots of laughs, and very well written steamy bits!! I very much enjoyed this book and look forward to the next one!! Definitely reccomend this read!!
MAX is everything but gets in his own way. The perfect man once he stops to listen!!
This book has everything, suspense, lots of laughs, and very well written steamy bits!! I very much enjoyed this book and look forward to the next one!! Definitely reccomend this read!!
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