What the fuck did I just read?
I'm usually not rating or writing a review but this one got my first. My emotions were on the roof after reading this stupid book and I can't go without releasing my anger LOL.
Again, a quirky character was introduced to us. Yay, another cringey character! Thanks, author 😍 Lol but safe to say her character is more bearable than Luna (I CAN'T WITH THAT QUIRKY BITCH PLS). It's just that, the constant reminder that she's carefree and liberated was so annoying. It feels forced. Idk kung gusto lang ng author isampal sa mga readers na empowered woman ang main character or what. Although, yes she is but YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO REPEAT AGAIN AND AGAIN. But then, 4reuminct tends to spoon feed.
Safe skies, Archer started with them being fuck buddies, and to tell you, THERE WASN'T EVEN A TENSION AND A BUILD UP. I had to read the blurb again to see if I was reading the same thing. I'm not a sucker for r-18 but seriously? Didn't even bother to write at least a good build-up of their meeting. And the sex scenes, please, I'm begging you, stop writing them 🥺🥺🥺 LMAO ang cringe lang talaga sobra. Magugulat ka na lang umuungol na si Yanna HAHAHAHA. Iskeri talaga mga sis. ATP, I wanna DNF kung di lang ako nasayangan sa pera ko at paghihintay.
But what made me throw the book across the room was the part where Hiro discovered Yanna's pregnancy. But of course, 4reuminct girls would go ballistic and deny the truth for the sake of their love interest's dreams 😍 THE STANDARD? THE STANDARD! 😍 WHEN KAYA? 😍 LMAO.
I DIDN'T KNOW IT'S THE "I'm letting him go for him to reach his dreams and let my daughter grow up without a dad" type of plot. Like at least the author didn't make Hiro an heir of well-known airline para naman it actually makes sense, diba? Like HOW SURE ARE U THAT HE WON'T REACH HIS DREAMS AT ALL WHEN HE LITERALLY HAVE ALL THE MEANS TO DO SO? It doesn't add up, especially with the fact that the characters are living in a modern world. It doesn't sit right with me how Yanna claims that she loves Avi (her daughter) so much when she didn't even think about Avi growing up without a father. She knows how it feels like for fuck's sake. Lumaki siyang walang tatay at hindi natutukan ng nanay pero pinaranas niya rin sa anak niya for the sake of Hiro's dreams. What's worse is that it took them (Hiro and Avi) to know each other. All because of Yanna's stupid decision.
Overall, the whole book is a poor and stupid representation of the quote "true love knows how to sacrifice" 😍 I'm just a casual reader of both local and international books. I don't read Wattpad so I have no idea at all about this aside from what I've read sa description and some snippets from Facebook. I also learned that this isn't a self-published. It makes me wonder kung gaano na bumaba ang standard ng mga publishing house ngayon. There are tons of underrated authors who dedicate their passion into writing pero you settle sa gantong mga storyang walang matibay na foundation when it comes to plot, story flow, and execution? No hate to the author but this kind of story screams nothing but mediocre.