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Blushing Blakely
An ABDL MM Romance
BLAKELY
I’m barely eighteen, but I need a Daddy.
I can’t believe I got kicked out of another foster family. Apparently, Daddies don’t like it when you try to seduce them in the bathtub in a diaper. The foster care system is going to send me to the streets.
Thank God my best friends Kyle and Trevor came up with a plan. “We’ll start a life just for us. We’ll move to the woods and grow our own food. You’ll never get in trouble for chasing a Daddy again.”
It sounded like a good idea.
New flash: it did not go to plan.
Now, it’s day three and we’re running out of food. Kyle and Trevor want to go back for help. They say I’m going to die if they don’t. But all I can see is red. “How can you do this to me?” I cry, “you promised you wouldn’t abandon me!”
“We don’t have a choice, Blakely. We’re going back for help.”
And so they leave. In the middle of the night. And something is scratching at the tent.
I’m alone. I need a Daddy to save me.
EMERSON
My ex-husband was the love of my life — and a lover of baby things.
But when he cheated on me with the housekeeper, I moved to the North woods and swore off baby things forever.
But when little Blakely — cold, wet, trembling — knocks on my door in the middle of the night, I want to break every promise. His quivering eyes beg for Daddy. His delicate skin needs my touch. But the last thing I want to do is hurt him. So when the storm passes, I’m going to drive him right back to Minneapolis where he came from.
The only problem is I just discovered little Blakely likes baby things.
Blushing Blakely is a fast-paced MM steamy ABDL romance with one cute boy, a sensitive Daddy, an adorable little bear and a whole lotta love. It has enough age play, Daddy kink and ABDL to satisfy any reader.
Blushing Blakely is the first full-length novel in the “Safe Boys” series scheduled for spring release. THEY ALL HAVE AGE PLAY AND AGE GAPS SO IF YOU DON’T LIKE THAT THEN THESE AREN’T FOR YOU!
BLAKELY
I’m barely eighteen, but I need a Daddy.
I can’t believe I got kicked out of another foster family. Apparently, Daddies don’t like it when you try to seduce them in the bathtub in a diaper. The foster care system is going to send me to the streets.
Thank God my best friends Kyle and Trevor came up with a plan. “We’ll start a life just for us. We’ll move to the woods and grow our own food. You’ll never get in trouble for chasing a Daddy again.”
It sounded like a good idea.
New flash: it did not go to plan.
Now, it’s day three and we’re running out of food. Kyle and Trevor want to go back for help. They say I’m going to die if they don’t. But all I can see is red. “How can you do this to me?” I cry, “you promised you wouldn’t abandon me!”
“We don’t have a choice, Blakely. We’re going back for help.”
And so they leave. In the middle of the night. And something is scratching at the tent.
I’m alone. I need a Daddy to save me.
EMERSON
My ex-husband was the love of my life — and a lover of baby things.
But when he cheated on me with the housekeeper, I moved to the North woods and swore off baby things forever.
But when little Blakely — cold, wet, trembling — knocks on my door in the middle of the night, I want to break every promise. His quivering eyes beg for Daddy. His delicate skin needs my touch. But the last thing I want to do is hurt him. So when the storm passes, I’m going to drive him right back to Minneapolis where he came from.
The only problem is I just discovered little Blakely likes baby things.
Blushing Blakely is a fast-paced MM steamy ABDL romance with one cute boy, a sensitive Daddy, an adorable little bear and a whole lotta love. It has enough age play, Daddy kink and ABDL to satisfy any reader.
Blushing Blakely is the first full-length novel in the “Safe Boys” series scheduled for spring release. THEY ALL HAVE AGE PLAY AND AGE GAPS SO IF YOU DON’T LIKE THAT THEN THESE AREN’T FOR YOU!
- GenresM M Romance
291 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 30, 2020
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June 17, 2020
It’s really is as awful as the reviews say
The boy in this book is mentally ill and very slow. He is INCAPABLE of giving informed consent. Those that care about the genre of Ageplay should not buy this book.
That being said...
It’s really, really bad. Like “did I just waste my life” bad. I wrote notes through the first half, documenting the extremely bad writing. Turn on notes and read along.
How to describe this book. First of all it feels like this book was written over a long period of time. The first half of the book is written differently than the second half. The first half is so bad it’s truly painful to read if you don’t accept that your in the middle of an Ed Wood movie and go with it. Still, it’s equal parts terrible writing, and so creepy, stupid and gross that it’s like watching a horrible train wreck. The second part of the book feels like it was written when the author was more mature. Don’t get me wrong, it’s still bad, but not as bad.
To be honest, I’ve never read any book as bad as this, which makes the experience worthwhile to me. I can’t recommend this pedophiles dream book to anyone. It’s a cautionary tale of just how horribly wrong a Daddy/boy book can be in the hands of a writer that doesn’t really understand age play.
The worst part, Blakely is clearly mentally slow, maybe very, very slow. He does not understand social norms, the consequences of his actions, or really sex at all. He is incapable of giving informed consent for a sexual relationship. This throws down all the red flags for age play readers. It’s disturbing to read Blakely‘s inner monologue and then Emerson’s, who clearly knows Blakely has mental problems, even fights himself, but in the end he takes a mentally ill and handicapped boy to his bed. What follows is bad erotica, I mean really bad—I waited this long for the sex this long and is words on the page, zero emotion except “that isn’t physically possible” and “eww where was the warning for THAT! There is urine play, a sexually perverse teddy bear that Blakely pretends is both his older brother and his sexual partner and masturbates with, and very unrealistic sex scenes that could be dangerous.
I had heard on my list serve that this was a book to stay away from (while I didn’t read it, my list says the sequel is just as awful). I couldn’t imagine a book being as bad as they said, but it is. It’s actually worse than I was led to believe.
To the author. The writing in this book wasn’t just bad, it was terrible. Your analogies made no sense and neither did your visuals. Your did just about everything wrong in creating your characters and instead of creating a vulnerable boy who needed a Daddy, you created a mentally challenged boy and a Daddy that takes advantage of him. Your book was filled with continuity errors from start to finish. In the end you created a book that grosses people out when you actually wanted them to care about your characters. I think you have a passion for writing and that should continue. You need to grow your skills. Take some creative writing classes, find a writers group, and be open to suggestions to make your stories better. I won’t tell you to stop writing, but I will say that writing is a skill that needs practice and I think you need more practice. Keep at it, but maybe wait to publish another book until you get some honest and unbiased feedback on your next story.
The boy in this book is mentally ill and very slow. He is INCAPABLE of giving informed consent. Those that care about the genre of Ageplay should not buy this book.
That being said...
It’s really, really bad. Like “did I just waste my life” bad. I wrote notes through the first half, documenting the extremely bad writing. Turn on notes and read along.
How to describe this book. First of all it feels like this book was written over a long period of time. The first half of the book is written differently than the second half. The first half is so bad it’s truly painful to read if you don’t accept that your in the middle of an Ed Wood movie and go with it. Still, it’s equal parts terrible writing, and so creepy, stupid and gross that it’s like watching a horrible train wreck. The second part of the book feels like it was written when the author was more mature. Don’t get me wrong, it’s still bad, but not as bad.
To be honest, I’ve never read any book as bad as this, which makes the experience worthwhile to me. I can’t recommend this pedophiles dream book to anyone. It’s a cautionary tale of just how horribly wrong a Daddy/boy book can be in the hands of a writer that doesn’t really understand age play.
The worst part, Blakely is clearly mentally slow, maybe very, very slow. He does not understand social norms, the consequences of his actions, or really sex at all. He is incapable of giving informed consent for a sexual relationship. This throws down all the red flags for age play readers. It’s disturbing to read Blakely‘s inner monologue and then Emerson’s, who clearly knows Blakely has mental problems, even fights himself, but in the end he takes a mentally ill and handicapped boy to his bed. What follows is bad erotica, I mean really bad—I waited this long for the sex this long and is words on the page, zero emotion except “that isn’t physically possible” and “eww where was the warning for THAT! There is urine play, a sexually perverse teddy bear that Blakely pretends is both his older brother and his sexual partner and masturbates with, and very unrealistic sex scenes that could be dangerous.
I had heard on my list serve that this was a book to stay away from (while I didn’t read it, my list says the sequel is just as awful). I couldn’t imagine a book being as bad as they said, but it is. It’s actually worse than I was led to believe.
To the author. The writing in this book wasn’t just bad, it was terrible. Your analogies made no sense and neither did your visuals. Your did just about everything wrong in creating your characters and instead of creating a vulnerable boy who needed a Daddy, you created a mentally challenged boy and a Daddy that takes advantage of him. Your book was filled with continuity errors from start to finish. In the end you created a book that grosses people out when you actually wanted them to care about your characters. I think you have a passion for writing and that should continue. You need to grow your skills. Take some creative writing classes, find a writers group, and be open to suggestions to make your stories better. I won’t tell you to stop writing, but I will say that writing is a skill that needs practice and I think you need more practice. Keep at it, but maybe wait to publish another book until you get some honest and unbiased feedback on your next story.
May 5, 2020
I usually adore Daddy/little books, it's the love and affection, the taking care of someone that needs it, and encouraging them to be their best self. Not once have I questioned a book until this one.
I read the prequel to this story and I was curious enough to start the book, mostly because of his friends. But it was just too much. Blakely is constantly stammering without a cause, it's proclaimed time and time how small he is, how young he looks, how Emerson likes how small everything about Blakely is. And it creeped me out in the end.
It felt like the author didn't want us to read about a Daddy/little but a Daddy that got off on someone childlike instead. He didn't help Blakely become independent and strong, he just made him more dependent on him.
It was all odd, from Emerson's coming out with his love for boys and the seduction of every damn person that was older than thirty.
In the end I just felt dirty after finishing it.
I read the prequel to this story and I was curious enough to start the book, mostly because of his friends. But it was just too much. Blakely is constantly stammering without a cause, it's proclaimed time and time how small he is, how young he looks, how Emerson likes how small everything about Blakely is. And it creeped me out in the end.
It felt like the author didn't want us to read about a Daddy/little but a Daddy that got off on someone childlike instead. He didn't help Blakely become independent and strong, he just made him more dependent on him.
It was all odd, from Emerson's coming out with his love for boys and the seduction of every damn person that was older than thirty.
In the end I just felt dirty after finishing it.
October 7, 2021
This was one of the most bizarrely enticing books I’ve ever read. There were parts that made my jaw drop in incredulity( hello journal entires and Daddy does WHAT in Blakely’s diaper?) It took a bit for my mind to catch up to the writing style for Blakely. Once I read his parts with his mindset, it was a little easier. Still, you have to be able to suspend a little bit of reality because there are parts that are pretty unbelievable. I mean, Honey Pot, really? Oh, and we mustn’t forget Blakely and the tulip by Madeline’s Pond. As I said, bizarrely enticing.
With all that being said, I couldn’t stop reading it. I will absolutely be reading the next book in this series. It’s oddly compelling, really.
With all that being said, I couldn’t stop reading it. I will absolutely be reading the next book in this series. It’s oddly compelling, really.
May 11, 2020
A Different Take
Although this book was an ABDL daddy/boy age gap book it was different than the typical ones I'm used to reading. The type of sexual interaction between the mc's felt more taboo perhaps because it felt like Blakely did not have the mental capacity of an 18 year old. I don't know if it was written like this or if I was just not interpreting the book correctly. I'm not opposed to taboo but I believe others could be shocked so definitely take heed before reading. I will continue with Kyle's book as I'm curious to see if in fact it's the author's writing style or just me.
Although this book was an ABDL daddy/boy age gap book it was different than the typical ones I'm used to reading. The type of sexual interaction between the mc's felt more taboo perhaps because it felt like Blakely did not have the mental capacity of an 18 year old. I don't know if it was written like this or if I was just not interpreting the book correctly. I'm not opposed to taboo but I believe others could be shocked so definitely take heed before reading. I will continue with Kyle's book as I'm curious to see if in fact it's the author's writing style or just me.
July 24, 2020
I rarely post negative reviews, but...
This book had the potential to be really good. Blakely is a little and needs a Daddy, and Emerson is lonely and still hurting from his ex husbands betrayal and says he will never be a Daddy again. They find each other and get together.
But this book is riddled with problems. There are so many continuity issues, it’s crazy, even from one sentence to the next. The talking about themselves in the 3rd person all the time drove me nuts. Blakely has ADHD but isn’t really written like he has ADHD. I think he is in his little persona all the time, but if not there might be some mentally challenged traits there. He stutters a lot but I think it’s supposed to covey nervousness, not an actual speech problem. If this is the case it should not be so bad for the whole book.
I almost DNF on this but struggled to the end, as not knowing how it ended would bother me. While I would love to know Kyle and Trevors stories, I do not think I can handle another book by this author. He really needs a good editor and some beta readers to point out all the things that need to be fixed prior to publication. Maybe that would help. The worst story in the world can be helped with good editing.
This book had the potential to be really good. Blakely is a little and needs a Daddy, and Emerson is lonely and still hurting from his ex husbands betrayal and says he will never be a Daddy again. They find each other and get together.
But this book is riddled with problems. There are so many continuity issues, it’s crazy, even from one sentence to the next. The talking about themselves in the 3rd person all the time drove me nuts. Blakely has ADHD but isn’t really written like he has ADHD. I think he is in his little persona all the time, but if not there might be some mentally challenged traits there. He stutters a lot but I think it’s supposed to covey nervousness, not an actual speech problem. If this is the case it should not be so bad for the whole book.
I almost DNF on this but struggled to the end, as not knowing how it ended would bother me. While I would love to know Kyle and Trevors stories, I do not think I can handle another book by this author. He really needs a good editor and some beta readers to point out all the things that need to be fixed prior to publication. Maybe that would help. The worst story in the world can be helped with good editing.
May 13, 2020
Blakely was kicked out of his foster home, abandoned by his friends in the middle of the woods and now had nowhere to go. In the pouring rain, a light in the dark tunnel shines on him when he comes across Emerson's home. Emerson is famous and Blakely knew he lived out in the woods but had no idea where or would ever believe he would find the man. But Emerson is broken, his boy, Jamie had left him broken-hearted when he found him with his assistant. Now, Blakely arrives on his doorstep, the perfect boy, someone in dire need of a Daddy. Emerson just has to decide if that Daddy can be him.
SPOILERS
I really, really didn't like this book. I was so repulsed by it though that I had to keep reading, I was hoping that it would get better and some odds and ends would provide more insight into the characters but I was left more confused and frustrated. First, Blakely is a little. It could be because I'm not super familiar with reading ABDL books, but a lot of them I have read there is certain instances where the MC is not a little but then goes into his little space at certain point. Everyone has their own thing, but Blakely's little persona was very unbelievable. Mostly because even if he's a little, he is 18 years old but yet the whole novel he acts like a little. There is no point in the book where we see who he is when he's not in this little-space. It just doesn't make sense to me. Second, Emerson was weird. He kept on pushing Blakely away but then would take about all the things he wanted to do to him. It felt more obscene that Emerson had an unhealthy obsession with younger boys and not just men who were littles. I really didn't like the representation of ABDL in this book. To me this isn't the kind of nurturing Daddy/boy relationship I find to be a sweet read, this was a warped tale of a man taking advantage of an 18 year old that didn't really know what he wanted.
SPOILERS
I really, really didn't like this book. I was so repulsed by it though that I had to keep reading, I was hoping that it would get better and some odds and ends would provide more insight into the characters but I was left more confused and frustrated. First, Blakely is a little. It could be because I'm not super familiar with reading ABDL books, but a lot of them I have read there is certain instances where the MC is not a little but then goes into his little space at certain point. Everyone has their own thing, but Blakely's little persona was very unbelievable. Mostly because even if he's a little, he is 18 years old but yet the whole novel he acts like a little. There is no point in the book where we see who he is when he's not in this little-space. It just doesn't make sense to me. Second, Emerson was weird. He kept on pushing Blakely away but then would take about all the things he wanted to do to him. It felt more obscene that Emerson had an unhealthy obsession with younger boys and not just men who were littles. I really didn't like the representation of ABDL in this book. To me this isn't the kind of nurturing Daddy/boy relationship I find to be a sweet read, this was a warped tale of a man taking advantage of an 18 year old that didn't really know what he wanted.
July 29, 2020
DNF and I barely ever say that. Terrible writer and it's just wrong on so many levels. Also, the author tries to shame readers saying if u don't like it you're not open minded or don't get the Daddy lifestyle. Ummm hell no. I have read many books on the subject and this is just creepy cringey and I seriesly think Blakely might actually have some deep mental issues that is taken advantage of in a pedophile predatory manner. There are many warning signs. This writer is sick IMO. 🤷♀️
June 9, 2020
Bad, bad, bad
It was painful to read. Very inconsistent and poorly written. It had the potential to be a great story, but fell apart very quickly.
It was painful to read. Very inconsistent and poorly written. It had the potential to be a great story, but fell apart very quickly.
October 23, 2020
The story was ok but they really need to proof it better
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