Being an avid fantasy reader, I was a little skeptical when I picked this book. It was my first time reading a fantasy book written in the paranormal romance category by an Indian author and it didnt disappoint.
I liked that the author based the story on Yaksha, a uniquely Indian thing, and not something common like werewolves or vampires or witches.
I enjoyed reading about their magical abilities but I wish she had written more about the Yaksha lore, histories, back stories etc. I wish their abilities had been explored further during the course of the book, rather than just getting a cursory mention.
I liked Vikram's character, and his basic outlook on life. It was fun reading about his magical abilities and how he used them.
Vikram's family was quite interesting to read about and I wish the author had also written about his family's abilities. Since every Yaksha has different abilities, it would have been fun to read about what his family could do.
Also, that sort of left a glaring loophole in the story's climax. I mean, how could a girl with seemingly no powers or outside help manage to outwit an entire family of Magic weilding Yaksha?
Samantha started off as rude and haughty, and I didnt like her much at all, but I warmed up to her as the story progressed. She didnt have any magical abilities and was shown as a very practical, independent young woman - which I cheered for. I was glad that's she wasnt some delicate darling or a mooning puppy and she was written as a pretty realistic character.
About sam and Vikram's relationship/friendship/almost-romance - I found it quite unreal how quickly they seemed to develop such a deep connection. It felt like even their friendship started off too abruptly. I get that they had this whole "rebirth" and past life equation and all, but the way their story was written didnt feel organic. It didn't even feel like the intense love@first-sight kind of love. So the beginning of their relationship felt forced and flat. It would have made more sense had they been old acquaintances or had dreams of each other from their past life or an instant spark of connection - or just something like this.
The romance of their ancestors, Meera and Michael, shown here felt more real, honest and beautiful, much more believable than Vikram and Sam's story because the author gave us a clear first glance, and then slowly built up their relationship. Even with such short snippets of chapters that they got, their romance felt more intense, profound.
Now, for what i didnt like about this book -
1. The traditional Indian girl cliche, about her dress and hair style and kohl lined eyes - all of it made me roll my eyes. We don't want to see stereotypes in such books, as it doesnt make sense.
2. The dialogues exchanged between Vikram and Samantha in the very first chapter when she sees him whispering over her bouquet was absolutely cringe worthy. I nearly DNFd the book because of how terrible that exchange was. I mean, who looks at someone touching flowers and blames them for 'fondling' the flowers? And who says such dialogues whole talking to someone? It wasnt realistic at all. A little bit of editing could have done wonders for that first meeting between our hero and heroine.
3. The Devika/Deepika loophole - It didn't make sense to me that a family of Yaksha with varied magical abilities could be so easily caught and outwitted by a girl who was a mere human. Even her supposed motivations to do such a ghastly crime didnt really hit the target. It was strange that she went into complete psycho mode just because her necklace glowed and she had heard some stories from her ancestors. Why not wait, why not explore the situation properly?
4. Nysha- the climax that they got stuck in all happened because of how silly Nysha acted, totally out of character for her. I mean, she was shared witless about this unknown person attacking her family and threatening her, and then suddenly, when she knows she has to be careful, she ups and goes to hang out with a virtual stranger at a mall? It was so totally out of character that it made me growl in frustration. The climax, therefore felt forced again.
5. If Arjun had someone, who was a Yaksha in the police, why not take his help to deal with climax situation. It would have been fun to see another character, a policeman nonetheless handling the situation and dealing with the after effects.
Over all, the book was a decent read. I quite enjoyed reading it. Even with it's faults, the clean romance and the past to present shifting POVs made it an enjoyable read. I'll definitely read book 2 when it comes out.