"I hope I find a good relationship now. Men can be so controlling at times.
I had such high hopes for this one...so many sterling reviews from those I trust. And though it certainly wasn't bad, it was nowhere close to a five-star story for me...for two main reasons.
1. It was over the top. I was all in regarding the first two twists. In fact, I thought it was all quite clever and struggled to put my Kindle down. The third and fourth twists, however...not so much. They actually gave the story a cartoon-ish quality I did not find appealing.
2. The way in which the story was written. I'm honestly not sure what the goal of this writing style was, as it had the characters telling the actual story to each other instead of the reader. It was such an odd technique, making me feel very separate from the story in which I should have been immersed.
Beyond that, I really struggled with the changing narration within each chapter. Each section was labeled with a character's name, indicating the chosen narrator...but from one paragraph to the next, it would randomly change. It was so confusing. My assumption is, that will be cleaned up in final edits...but man, did it make for some awkward reading. I remember one section, the female lead, Emma, was narrating. All the sudden, it read, "I climax inside you, but this time I do not feel your muscles tightly clamped around me, encouraging me like they used to."
I was, obviously, scratching my head about that one.
I won't get into the wonky police procedural, but rest assured, you will need to suspend belief.
Regardless, this was a fun, easy, if somewhat problematic, story. It had tons of potential but simply took things too far.
Jayme, as expected, I one hundred percent agree with you.
Trigger Warning: Sexual assault, domestic violence, and mild animal abuse
Available August 24th.
**My sincere thanks to NetGalley and Avon Books UK for my review copy.