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The Interface Series
Collection of all 100 parts and the epilogue named 'Mourning,' with links to the original posting.
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1 book16 followersThe pen name of the anonymous author of the Interface series. Known for using nontraditional methods of publication, primarily on forums in ways similar to what is often found in alternate reality games.
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December 8, 2022I rarely leave books unrated but this is truly a singular experience. I couldn't give it a star rating if I tried.
It sickened me. It made me cry. It was vile. It was complex. Its ending was dogshit. Its middle was damn-near flawless. It made me rethink the way I look at history. I was so scared while listening to it at work one morning that I had to wait for my boss to come in before I went into the back office. (It was dark in there. I'm a big baby.)
I'm a romance reader who is simultaneously easily afraid and easily impressed by horror. So take this with a grain of salt. But even so. Even though I can't sort through my feelings enough to give it a star rating, I love this story and I hope the author goes on to write more.
I'd have a lot of trouble recommending this to anyone. (What, considering the brutal gore. And LSD. And the body horror. And the violent Nazi interludes. And the continuous abuse of children by governments and evil, primordial mothers alike.) But if anybody sees this and is interested, try an audio narration. It was a massive step from my comfort zone that I don't regret. Despite my disturbing dreams and inability to go in my basement without one of my cats accompanying me.
It sickened me. It made me cry. It was vile. It was complex. Its ending was dogshit. Its middle was damn-near flawless. It made me rethink the way I look at history. I was so scared while listening to it at work one morning that I had to wait for my boss to come in before I went into the back office. (It was dark in there. I'm a big baby.)
I'm a romance reader who is simultaneously easily afraid and easily impressed by horror. So take this with a grain of salt. But even so. Even though I can't sort through my feelings enough to give it a star rating, I love this story and I hope the author goes on to write more.
I'd have a lot of trouble recommending this to anyone. (What, considering the brutal gore. And LSD. And the body horror. And the violent Nazi interludes. And the continuous abuse of children by governments and evil, primordial mothers alike.) But if anybody sees this and is interested, try an audio narration. It was a massive step from my comfort zone that I don't regret. Despite my disturbing dreams and inability to go in my basement without one of my cats accompanying me.
January 29, 2026
3/5. I like this, but it’s not a complete story and it fell off very hard at the end in the attempt to wrap it up. A fun experience I’ll probably revisit.
May 13, 2023
This "book" began as a series of Reddit comments by user _9MOTHER9HORSE9EYES9 in response to unrelated posts across the site. They were bizarre interconnected microfictions about LSD, flesh-interfaces, body horror, addiction, and summers in which your mother is not your mother.
It was very weird, but that was of course the point. Eventually a sub as created for the user who then focused all their posts there and made it into a proper story (albeit in a very untraditional medium) that is on Goodreads and everything. It's a fix-up by way of creepypasta.
Its first 2/3rds are captivating and sickening and insane and awesome. But at some point he realizes he has to payoff all the story threads he's been weaving, and it just... all falls apart.
What becomes clear is that the author was making it all up as he went along, and it results in this sort of "drift" happening to the story, so that the beginning of the book is absolutely nothing like the end. He loses everything that made it special and ends up down some very hacky roads instead. Really disappointing.
That said, it's such a unique experience that I can't bring myself to rate it less than 3 stars. I'm very glad I read it, and I would absolutely recommend it to people, but my advice? As soon as it stops being interesting, just drop it. It won't win you back.
It was very weird, but that was of course the point. Eventually a sub as created for the user who then focused all their posts there and made it into a proper story (albeit in a very untraditional medium) that is on Goodreads and everything. It's a fix-up by way of creepypasta.
Its first 2/3rds are captivating and sickening and insane and awesome. But at some point he realizes he has to payoff all the story threads he's been weaving, and it just... all falls apart.
What becomes clear is that the author was making it all up as he went along, and it results in this sort of "drift" happening to the story, so that the beginning of the book is absolutely nothing like the end. He loses everything that made it special and ends up down some very hacky roads instead. Really disappointing.
That said, it's such a unique experience that I can't bring myself to rate it less than 3 stars. I'm very glad I read it, and I would absolutely recommend it to people, but my advice? As soon as it stops being interesting, just drop it. It won't win you back.
July 3, 2025
Whoaaaa this was cool! This one was once again read/listened to via the Creep Cast pod cast. I'm glad I read it this way to help keep everything going on straight. There are a lot of plot lines and crossing story arcs. It's an impressive piece of work! Isaiah and Hunter's commentary helped figure out what was going on. My favorite segments from the story were the cat one and the 80s one. The 80s one (and pretty much any of them) would work well even as a stand alone story. This story also had a unique way of writing, being spread around in random subreddit comments in a series of 100 posts. Would be quite the trip to come across in the wild!! (Also Hunter's rendition of "Fairy Queen" was great!)
November 28, 2020
The first half of this book is utterly captivating, ie every chapter that has to do with Flesh Interface Structures was brilliant to the T. I accidentally stumbled upon an audiobook version of one of the chapters from the first half on youtube and that's what got me interested in this book.
The Latter half though is a different story, it seemed so unrelated to the first half that I had doubts if I messed up while downloading. As this is not a real book, but a consolidation of Reddit comments done by 9M9H9E9 fans, the publishing and editing standard is pretty low.
The book is super disjointed and confusing. No character seemed central. The narrator also keeps changing without any acknowledgment. Nothing really connects very well to anything.
I still don't know what Q has to do with Mother or the flesh interface.
Enjoyed the hell out of first 50 some chapters, the rest is just punishment for that.
The Latter half though is a different story, it seemed so unrelated to the first half that I had doubts if I messed up while downloading. As this is not a real book, but a consolidation of Reddit comments done by 9M9H9E9 fans, the publishing and editing standard is pretty low.
The book is super disjointed and confusing. No character seemed central. The narrator also keeps changing without any acknowledgment. Nothing really connects very well to anything.
I still don't know what Q has to do with Mother or the flesh interface.
Enjoyed the hell out of first 50 some chapters, the rest is just punishment for that.
June 30, 2025
some of the best horror i’ve consumed in recent memory. whoever the author is NEEDS to come forward because i have to buy all their stuff
July 14, 2025
Bro this was something else. Absolutely innovative storytelling. The alternate history of it all was really cool. I LOVED the prehistoric storyline, and the one in the future was downright bleak. I loved the commentary on conspiracies and how it's actually scarier if there is some large conspiracy.
February 7, 2026
Not a book, but technically a series of reddit posts from an anonymous author, partly as comments to random threads (I downloaded a compiled epub). The extent of this is impossible to describe. The “chapters” switch perspectives, locations, and times, with elements slowly revealed, abandoned, returned to, and connected, or not. Absolutely the scariest, most disturbing thing I have ever read, but I don’t generally read horror. Scientists and government entities studying mysterious “portals” made of human flesh, sleepers atrophying in beds for decades with all senses plugged into a virtual world, visceral descriptions of 4D space; the narrator is a wild cat, an alcoholic, a hoarder, a chitinous alien, a soldier, a recently awakened sleeper; they’re fed to the portal, they discover a cave of bones, they’re swimming with whales in an underground bunker, they’re Blake Lively in an 80’s VR narrative… and through everything is this permeating sense that we as people only see the surface of things, that our experience of the world is itself an interface concealing some evil machination.
There are chapters that break the fourth wall, and the author admits throughout that they don’t know how to properly end things. And it’s true that the ending does sort of fall off. But, like, this is a series of reddit posts on the internet for free, I’m not about to judge it based on the standards of a published novel. I think it’s enough to explore and ruminate on ideas, without there needing to be some satisfying conclusion.
There are chapters that break the fourth wall, and the author admits throughout that they don’t know how to properly end things. And it’s true that the ending does sort of fall off. But, like, this is a series of reddit posts on the internet for free, I’m not about to judge it based on the standards of a published novel. I think it’s enough to explore and ruminate on ideas, without there needing to be some satisfying conclusion.
March 21, 2023
"When I was little, they took mommy away and put me with a new mommy in a smelly dark house. They said she was a real person, but I knew she wasn't. They had made her. Her face was made from pieces of animal. pig cheeks hairy goat jaw old horse eyes They sewed her together badly, and the seams were crusty. I hated her. Real mommy called me from underground. I opened the attic window at sundown and let the spring breeze flow in. I heard her song floating in on the cool air, soft singing from the grave."
"It was spring and it had been raining all day, but the rain stopped just before it was going to be sunset. So all the clouds were purply and the sky was really orange. And the grass was all wet with rain and there were fire flies around, like all in the sky, way up in the sky, big ones. And me and my grandma went out to these hills way out past the edge of town, and under the hills there were people sleeping. Not in caves. They were buried under the hills. The people were asleep but they were hugging each other. Families, like moms and dads and little kids. Just packed together, a few thousand. The hills were just blown up like balloons because they were so full of people. Like a pregnant woman's stomach. My grandma told me to lie down but I didn't want to. She laid down and got sucked into the ground. I heard her voice coming out of the ground telling me to come inside."
"In explaining our cruelty, which, I admit, was quite beyond scope of all humanity, I feel I must remind you of how we lost the war. We lost the war in the cruelest way imaginable. Island after island fell, and the enemy drew closer and closer. More and more bombs fell on our cities. Food grew more and more scarce. People starved. House burned, people burned, children burned. We were punished by our own sense of dignity, by our own inability to admit inevitable and total defeat. It was like watching a sword slowly being sunk into your chest, millimeter by millimeter, but you refuse to cry out, refuse to whimper or beg for mercy, and there is nothing you can do but watch the metal disappear into your weeping flesh."
"The world enslaved. Flesh networks spanning the globe. The blood of humanity moving through veins thousands of miles long, cavernous curving tubes as big as super highways. Biological superstructures. Bones the size of the Golden Gate Bridge. Living engineering. Hearts as big as mountains, pumping with tectonic force, chained in relays, moving blood across continents. Exotic neurochemical pestilence flowing from monstrous glandular ridges. Flesh encased nightmares. Farms of non-human tongues babbling blasphemous gibberish. A vast sea bed dotted with lonely eyes."
"I call it "coming back online." That moment when you first come out of drunken blackout. It's always frightening. Where am I? What is this neighborhood? What happened to my face? Where's my wallet? Some people, when they drink enough to disable their short term memory, immediately collapse into an immobile heap. This is nature's failsafe. But I lack this feature. I can walk and talk and carry a tune, yet have no idea of what's going on. I have never come back online to find myself up to any good. I have never emerged from a blackout to find that I have built a convenient spice rack or delivered a moving speech about women's rights. It's always been some fucking calamity."
"Enter the CIA. Their motto: "Where ethical approbation ends, our work begins.""
"The train arrived with the cries of its passengers blending into the squealing of the metal wheels. The blue units worked themselves into their usual frenzy, pulling the passengers out, shouting and clubbing and herding them toward the main gate. Amidst the crush of passengers, the limp bodies of children occasionally came spilling out onto the platform, and the blue units tossed them into a pile. Engel watched all of this impassively.
"A woman came out of the train clutching a child of perhaps three years. She looked about frantically, screaming for a doctor. I gave her a sympathetic look and held out my arms. She approached me, the handsome stolid-looking authority figure that I am. I took the child from her and tenderly examined it. It was still alive. I placed it gently on the ground and used my boot to reshape its skull. The woman I shot"
"It was spring and it had been raining all day, but the rain stopped just before it was going to be sunset. So all the clouds were purply and the sky was really orange. And the grass was all wet with rain and there were fire flies around, like all in the sky, way up in the sky, big ones. And me and my grandma went out to these hills way out past the edge of town, and under the hills there were people sleeping. Not in caves. They were buried under the hills. The people were asleep but they were hugging each other. Families, like moms and dads and little kids. Just packed together, a few thousand. The hills were just blown up like balloons because they were so full of people. Like a pregnant woman's stomach. My grandma told me to lie down but I didn't want to. She laid down and got sucked into the ground. I heard her voice coming out of the ground telling me to come inside."
"In explaining our cruelty, which, I admit, was quite beyond scope of all humanity, I feel I must remind you of how we lost the war. We lost the war in the cruelest way imaginable. Island after island fell, and the enemy drew closer and closer. More and more bombs fell on our cities. Food grew more and more scarce. People starved. House burned, people burned, children burned. We were punished by our own sense of dignity, by our own inability to admit inevitable and total defeat. It was like watching a sword slowly being sunk into your chest, millimeter by millimeter, but you refuse to cry out, refuse to whimper or beg for mercy, and there is nothing you can do but watch the metal disappear into your weeping flesh."
"The world enslaved. Flesh networks spanning the globe. The blood of humanity moving through veins thousands of miles long, cavernous curving tubes as big as super highways. Biological superstructures. Bones the size of the Golden Gate Bridge. Living engineering. Hearts as big as mountains, pumping with tectonic force, chained in relays, moving blood across continents. Exotic neurochemical pestilence flowing from monstrous glandular ridges. Flesh encased nightmares. Farms of non-human tongues babbling blasphemous gibberish. A vast sea bed dotted with lonely eyes."
"I call it "coming back online." That moment when you first come out of drunken blackout. It's always frightening. Where am I? What is this neighborhood? What happened to my face? Where's my wallet? Some people, when they drink enough to disable their short term memory, immediately collapse into an immobile heap. This is nature's failsafe. But I lack this feature. I can walk and talk and carry a tune, yet have no idea of what's going on. I have never come back online to find myself up to any good. I have never emerged from a blackout to find that I have built a convenient spice rack or delivered a moving speech about women's rights. It's always been some fucking calamity."
"Enter the CIA. Their motto: "Where ethical approbation ends, our work begins.""
"The train arrived with the cries of its passengers blending into the squealing of the metal wheels. The blue units worked themselves into their usual frenzy, pulling the passengers out, shouting and clubbing and herding them toward the main gate. Amidst the crush of passengers, the limp bodies of children occasionally came spilling out onto the platform, and the blue units tossed them into a pile. Engel watched all of this impassively.
"A woman came out of the train clutching a child of perhaps three years. She looked about frantically, screaming for a doctor. I gave her a sympathetic look and held out my arms. She approached me, the handsome stolid-looking authority figure that I am. I took the child from her and tenderly examined it. It was still alive. I placed it gently on the ground and used my boot to reshape its skull. The woman I shot"
March 16, 2021
My favourite book.
I am not a well read man, i have read my fair share but i would not consider myself knowledgeable in regard to literature.
This is not a long read, for all those who argue that the stories are disjointed and don't makes sense, all i have to say to you...read it again, if it still doesn't tie together, READ IT AGAIN , and again.
I read it 3 times and listened to an audio version over 10 times.
Perhaps it's just a 1 in a million reader-author pairing but on the off chance you are one of us, read it.
I am not a well read man, i have read my fair share but i would not consider myself knowledgeable in regard to literature.
This is not a long read, for all those who argue that the stories are disjointed and don't makes sense, all i have to say to you...read it again, if it still doesn't tie together, READ IT AGAIN , and again.
I read it 3 times and listened to an audio version over 10 times.
Perhaps it's just a 1 in a million reader-author pairing but on the off chance you are one of us, read it.
July 8, 2025
"We will drink and dance and laugh, and there will be no nightmares. We will be made children again; We will play forever on a street that has no cars. Until then, there will be suffering beyond belief."
August 19, 2025
During Covid I tried psychedelics for the first time— some acid some shrooms. basic shit. After that I almost never left my room and brain blasted myself with hentai and alt right thinkpieces and watered down Jungian rhetoric for like a year straight. At night I was experiencing visions and seizure-like occurrences and genuinely felt myself at the cusp of some euphoric fall in to psychosis.
Interface is literally me. Everything written here is the truth. At least the truth as I experienced it at 3 in the morning having schizoid hallucinations of a glitch art Megumin shoving maggots down my throat.
Really an enlightening read despite its occasional slip in to cringe.
Interface is literally me. Everything written here is the truth. At least the truth as I experienced it at 3 in the morning having schizoid hallucinations of a glitch art Megumin shoving maggots down my throat.
Really an enlightening read despite its occasional slip in to cringe.
October 28, 2025
"god's not going to come down and give me the answers to everything. All he wants from me is obedience"
you really have to trust the process as this smattering of comments and posts across Reddit (very kindly all compiled here in chronological order: https://www.reddit.com/r/9M9H9E9/wiki...) takes you through multiple dimensions and timelines that weave together all to come to the same conclusion that ignorance is, in fact, bliss
you really have to trust the process as this smattering of comments and posts across Reddit (very kindly all compiled here in chronological order: https://www.reddit.com/r/9M9H9E9/wiki...) takes you through multiple dimensions and timelines that weave together all to come to the same conclusion that ignorance is, in fact, bliss
October 22, 2025
I have only listened so far but I plan to read it through. After experiencing this story I have to say its one of the greatest I've ever come across, absolute masterclass. Truly terrifying in cosmic, global, and personal levels, but also funny at times and truly captivating.
September 6, 2025
one of the most creative ways to write story, and what a story that is!!
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February 24, 2026Still holds up on the re-read. It's strange and gory and a bit ridiculous and at times distasteful, but I really, really like it. The multiple narratives and timelines really lend themselves to the imagination, and the format of it is sick. I wish I could have read this live in 2016- c'est la.
July 4, 2025
4.5/5.0
Thank you Creepcast for reminding me of this story! The Interface Series is a remarkable fusion of an intriguing story and an unique choice in formatting. In less than 3 months, the author told a remarkable story that draws you in and keeps you reading. It leaves you with an ending where you are left to think on the reality of the world and the deep connections across the stories.
Thank you Creepcast for reminding me of this story! The Interface Series is a remarkable fusion of an intriguing story and an unique choice in formatting. In less than 3 months, the author told a remarkable story that draws you in and keeps you reading. It leaves you with an ending where you are left to think on the reality of the world and the deep connections across the stories.
July 6, 2025
90%
what the fuck
what the fuck
July 3, 2025
If you had suggested that one of the greatest horror stories of the 21st century would be a series of 100 entries almost all of which were left as comments on random Reddit posts that often read like the ramblings of a schizophrenic man on LSD, I would’ve thought you were such a man. And yet after moving the curtain aside, this is what I find.
“What did Pompey expect to find on the other side of the curtain? In many Roman temples there was an image of the honored god occupying some central place in the structure. It can be assumed that he expected to find one of these. But did he expect to find the actual presence of god? Could he have possibly expected this? For if he had believed in the Jewish lore, wouldn't he have also expected death? Wouldn't he expect to be punished for defiling the temple? Would he have been so cavalier about pulling back the curtain? Perhaps in his polytheistic mindset, he assumed that his gods, which had seen fit to give him yet another glorious victory, were more powerful than this backwater Jewish god.
What did we expect to be on the other side of the portal? Some kind of intelligence which could explain the bizarre living technology of the flesh interfaces? If the interfaces were the product of an intelligence, was it really something we wanted to make contact with? Did we expect this intelligence to be kind and benevolent? If so, how could we have sent so many living creatures, so many people, so many children to their deaths? What would a benevolent intelligence possibly make of our ruthlessness, our rapacious quest for understanding?
According to Tacitus, the ancient historian, when Pompey pulled back the curtain and gazed upon the Kodesh Hakodashim, "it contained no representation of the deity—the sanctuary was empty and the Holy of Holies untenanted." He found nothing. An empty room. Nor was he met with death. Instead he strode out of the temple alive and healthy, destined to go on to greater and greater political glory until fifteen years later when he was finally stabbed to death on the shores of the Nile delta after his defeat to Julius Caesar in the Roman civil war.”
I think this excerpt best thematically sums up this entire trip of a story. The anonymous author manages to weave a labyrinthine tale of atrocities, body and cosmic horror with plenty of gore to go around, alternate futures, and various characters not all of whom are human peaking around the curtain to see if something’s there. And if there is something there, is what they find God or is it something less than holy?
I will need to process this one for a long time.
“What did Pompey expect to find on the other side of the curtain? In many Roman temples there was an image of the honored god occupying some central place in the structure. It can be assumed that he expected to find one of these. But did he expect to find the actual presence of god? Could he have possibly expected this? For if he had believed in the Jewish lore, wouldn't he have also expected death? Wouldn't he expect to be punished for defiling the temple? Would he have been so cavalier about pulling back the curtain? Perhaps in his polytheistic mindset, he assumed that his gods, which had seen fit to give him yet another glorious victory, were more powerful than this backwater Jewish god.
What did we expect to be on the other side of the portal? Some kind of intelligence which could explain the bizarre living technology of the flesh interfaces? If the interfaces were the product of an intelligence, was it really something we wanted to make contact with? Did we expect this intelligence to be kind and benevolent? If so, how could we have sent so many living creatures, so many people, so many children to their deaths? What would a benevolent intelligence possibly make of our ruthlessness, our rapacious quest for understanding?
According to Tacitus, the ancient historian, when Pompey pulled back the curtain and gazed upon the Kodesh Hakodashim, "it contained no representation of the deity—the sanctuary was empty and the Holy of Holies untenanted." He found nothing. An empty room. Nor was he met with death. Instead he strode out of the temple alive and healthy, destined to go on to greater and greater political glory until fifteen years later when he was finally stabbed to death on the shores of the Nile delta after his defeat to Julius Caesar in the Roman civil war.”
I think this excerpt best thematically sums up this entire trip of a story. The anonymous author manages to weave a labyrinthine tale of atrocities, body and cosmic horror with plenty of gore to go around, alternate futures, and various characters not all of whom are human peaking around the curtain to see if something’s there. And if there is something there, is what they find God or is it something less than holy?
I will need to process this one for a long time.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 24, 2023
La historia es de lo más original pero sufre notablemente según pasas el umbral de la mitad. Me parece mucho más potente la primera mitad, cuando las tramas permanecen totalmente inmersas en las flesh interfaces, que la posterior. Aún así es interesante la rotura de la cuarta pared, más teniendo en cuenta el formato de publicación original, ese juego de meta/intrahistoria me recuerda a «La casa de las hojas».
Además de ser buena la historia, está bien escrita; es más, hay capítulos extremadamente buenos. Hay frases tremendas y expresiones que me han hecho reir y quedarme boquiabierto. Destacaría la gran caracterización de los personajes y las descripciones lovecraftianas. Hay cuestiones de forma que creo que me he perdido por haberlo leído el ebook y me gustaría que hubiese una edición que incorporase lo mejor posible los detalles de formato.
Además de ser buena la historia, está bien escrita; es más, hay capítulos extremadamente buenos. Hay frases tremendas y expresiones que me han hecho reir y quedarme boquiabierto. Destacaría la gran caracterización de los personajes y las descripciones lovecraftianas. Hay cuestiones de forma que creo que me he perdido por haberlo leído el ebook y me gustaría que hubiese una edición que incorporase lo mejor posible los detalles de formato.
August 16, 2025
i listened to this through CreepCast with Wendigoon & Papa Meat.
this was incredible. i very rarely give out 5 stars. especially to this type of story. but my gosh. Wendigoon’s knowledge about christianity & the bible made this so much more digestible & interesting. the story, the plot was so unique that it’s unlike anything i have ever read before. it’s so original. & that’s hard to come by anymore.
i need to give the author an applause. fantastic job. this took me foreverrrr to listen to but it was so worth it. i was pulled in immediately. i’d love for this author to keep writing.
this was incredible. i very rarely give out 5 stars. especially to this type of story. but my gosh. Wendigoon’s knowledge about christianity & the bible made this so much more digestible & interesting. the story, the plot was so unique that it’s unlike anything i have ever read before. it’s so original. & that’s hard to come by anymore.
i need to give the author an applause. fantastic job. this took me foreverrrr to listen to but it was so worth it. i was pulled in immediately. i’d love for this author to keep writing.
July 12, 2025
This whole experience felt like a cult trying to convert people.
Now I'd like to believe I would never join a cult especially one started by a supposed madman on a shit ton of LSD but with everything going on like demon penise trees and hentai tentacle angel monsters and pussy tunnels, I'm ashamed to admit I would join this cult pretty willingly.
Perfect story for non-drug users who would like to experience a crazy LSD trip through time and religious mythology.
I recommend listening to it through CreepCast though, there were a lot of religious symbolisms that would've gone right over my head if it wasn't for Wendigoon's insights.
Now I'd like to believe I would never join a cult especially one started by a supposed madman on a shit ton of LSD but with everything going on like demon penise trees and hentai tentacle angel monsters and pussy tunnels, I'm ashamed to admit I would join this cult pretty willingly.
Perfect story for non-drug users who would like to experience a crazy LSD trip through time and religious mythology.
I recommend listening to it through CreepCast though, there were a lot of religious symbolisms that would've gone right over my head if it wasn't for Wendigoon's insights.
February 23, 2021
Good, if you temper your expectations. This story does not answer most questions. The narrative is incomplete and scattered. If you need a story to draw down most of the plot threads it opens, this is not the book for you.
June 30, 2025
one of the best horror stories I've read..
July 14, 2025
I don’t even know where to begin with this story. There’s really not a great way to read all of without finding an archive of it because a lot of it has been taken down off of Reddit. I listened to a podcast read it because it gets so deep and references so much that it’s super easy to have it fly over your head.
This is a Conspiracy/Alternate History/Biblical/Psycholgical Horror/Sci-Fi/Crime/Body Horror/Time Travel/4th wall breaking/Ai/Drug addiction/Dystopian Schizophrenic story, told in a nonlinear structure. The first few entries feel incomprehensible. Ramblings of someone burnt out after years of abusing LSD. Each entry being from a different time period. Past, Present, and Future. There is no main character at first, just a narrator telling you that everything you know about history is wrong.
Each entry for the first half or so of the story are seperate little vignettes. Vaguely connected, but not really. Each feeling like incredible short stories on their own. However, as the story progresses every little detail becomes not only important, but connected. The way in which the story is told, random Reddit replies to random Reddit threads even plays deeply into the narrative. There are so many incredible parts to this super well oiled machine. It’s surprises me that to this day the author has never revealed himself. This is an achievement.
It’s scary, disturbing, sad, and even really funny at times. The scope of this is massive and I began to worry towards the end how this story would wrap up, but so did the narrator/author. The author is a character in the story and you see him struggle to come up with an ending. He has total control over what happens and at the same time none at all. Mother Horse Eyes transcends the bounds of written word. As a character she is absolutely terrifying, unable to be stopped even by the author.
If you are familiar with the Bible on a very deep level, you’ll appreciate the hell out of this story. Most of the biblical references flew over my head entirely.
This shit is so fucking good.
This is a Conspiracy/Alternate History/Biblical/Psycholgical Horror/Sci-Fi/Crime/Body Horror/Time Travel/4th wall breaking/Ai/Drug addiction/Dystopian Schizophrenic story, told in a nonlinear structure. The first few entries feel incomprehensible. Ramblings of someone burnt out after years of abusing LSD. Each entry being from a different time period. Past, Present, and Future. There is no main character at first, just a narrator telling you that everything you know about history is wrong.
Each entry for the first half or so of the story are seperate little vignettes. Vaguely connected, but not really. Each feeling like incredible short stories on their own. However, as the story progresses every little detail becomes not only important, but connected. The way in which the story is told, random Reddit replies to random Reddit threads even plays deeply into the narrative. There are so many incredible parts to this super well oiled machine. It’s surprises me that to this day the author has never revealed himself. This is an achievement.
It’s scary, disturbing, sad, and even really funny at times. The scope of this is massive and I began to worry towards the end how this story would wrap up, but so did the narrator/author. The author is a character in the story and you see him struggle to come up with an ending. He has total control over what happens and at the same time none at all. Mother Horse Eyes transcends the bounds of written word. As a character she is absolutely terrifying, unable to be stopped even by the author.
If you are familiar with the Bible on a very deep level, you’ll appreciate the hell out of this story. Most of the biblical references flew over my head entirely.
This shit is so fucking good.
July 3, 2025
I listened to this in the form of podcast which reads and discusses horror stories, and it was the best 11 hour listening experience I have had.
This story is incredibly complex, with so many narratives that are all deeply connected in a way that is neve explicitly spelled out but in a way that if you see the threads you can feel the connection. This author understands that if you treat the reader like they are stupid, the story will become boring and tedious as everything is spelled out. They perfectly leave little bits and pieces that tie this narrative that spans centuries and generation, and entire globe and multiple dimensions, into one cohesive piece that gives little aha moments at every turn.
The story did begin to lose me a bit when we returned to the narrators life in the second half, but they were able to save it a bit in the end with a conclusion that felt like an end but still left me with so many questions that I just want more now. I think this section was the weakest of the storylines, but it did not feel unnecessary.
I would be horrified and fascinated to live inside of the mind of this author for a day, I truly will never comprehend how they came up with all of this. Such an incredible imagination.
I highly recommend this series to anyone who likes horror and getting to discover what the story truly is over the course of the narrative. That said, I recommend that you stick with it until the end, and take time to theorize and speculate about what it all means as you go. It really leans into the conspiracy theory side, and its much more fun if you play along and find the conspiracies and connections in the story yourself.
This story is incredibly complex, with so many narratives that are all deeply connected in a way that is neve explicitly spelled out but in a way that if you see the threads you can feel the connection. This author understands that if you treat the reader like they are stupid, the story will become boring and tedious as everything is spelled out. They perfectly leave little bits and pieces that tie this narrative that spans centuries and generation, and entire globe and multiple dimensions, into one cohesive piece that gives little aha moments at every turn.
The story did begin to lose me a bit when we returned to the narrators life in the second half, but they were able to save it a bit in the end with a conclusion that felt like an end but still left me with so many questions that I just want more now. I think this section was the weakest of the storylines, but it did not feel unnecessary.
I would be horrified and fascinated to live inside of the mind of this author for a day, I truly will never comprehend how they came up with all of this. Such an incredible imagination.
I highly recommend this series to anyone who likes horror and getting to discover what the story truly is over the course of the narrative. That said, I recommend that you stick with it until the end, and take time to theorize and speculate about what it all means as you go. It really leans into the conspiracy theory side, and its much more fun if you play along and find the conspiracies and connections in the story yourself.
July 22, 2025
I have an odd affinity for anything that could have possibly been made by someone sober. This story is essentially the creepypasta equivalent of that. It was posted to reddit under various comment sections, with some original post and even a segment being posted by a news outlet. The various storylines throughout very in topics such as: Addiction, LSD, World War II, Mk Ultra, both male and female genitalia, the devil(from the bible), and cats. It's all presented in the trippiest way possible with about five ongoing storylines at one point before getting more and more meta. I guess all that is to say this story isn't for everyone. Pretty much everyone I see praise this(like myself) seem to have tastes that it fits perfectly into. It is my favorite creepypasta(if you can label something as experimental as this) and probably my favorite horror story ever written. There are moments of uniquely creative and effective horror, moments that are beautifully written, and moments that are just cool. I implore you to at least try reading it. You don't have to read all of it as it is also the longest creepypasta I have ever read, but at least try to get into it. It is one of the impressive and vast things ever written in terms of horror and it deserves at least a chance from everyone.
Also I feel like I should at least mention that, yes, I discovered this story from CreepCast. I did read it myself afterwards(I can not pay attention to every second of an 11 hour podcast so I missed some stuff) but that may have informed my love for the story. The theorizing that they do and the fact they immediately clock all the biblical references which this story is ripe with definitely elevate the story.
Favorite posts: The Island, Ah the Simple Nemesis, Terraform, Rachel Feels, Along Came An Old Crone, The Oily Ones, Jerking Off Until Mother Opens the Door, A Mother's Son
Also I feel like I should at least mention that, yes, I discovered this story from CreepCast. I did read it myself afterwards(I can not pay attention to every second of an 11 hour podcast so I missed some stuff) but that may have informed my love for the story. The theorizing that they do and the fact they immediately clock all the biblical references which this story is ripe with definitely elevate the story.
Favorite posts: The Island, Ah the Simple Nemesis, Terraform, Rachel Feels, Along Came An Old Crone, The Oily Ones, Jerking Off Until Mother Opens the Door, A Mother's Son
February 12, 2026
I'm not counting this towards my reading goal but I need to talk about it.
I listened to Creep Cast read this on their podcast for eleven hours, and have watched several breakdowns of it on YouTube because I love it that much.
This story genuinely baffles me. The intelligence you must to have to write something like this, the research required...and to think that the author has stayed anonymous for a decade now. CRAZY!
So many different storylines that span centuries and not a single one feels out of place. They all work towards the same goal, exploring humanity's desire to keep pushing. Keep looking for answers, keep inventing new technologies, keep pushing the envelope until we end up where we are destined to be...with MOTHER.
Of course I have storylines that I love more than others. My favorite storyline is the old crone's and my least favorite is probably Karen's. But I don't mind because it has a purpose in the narrative. You cannot remove Karen's story; it's too important to understanding the overall themes. To understanding what MOTHER is.
UGH! I love this thing so much. I love stories that are dense like this. That you can keep coming back to over and over, and you still get that feeling of awe every time. I hope the author writes something again soon.
I listened to Creep Cast read this on their podcast for eleven hours, and have watched several breakdowns of it on YouTube because I love it that much.
This story genuinely baffles me. The intelligence you must to have to write something like this, the research required...and to think that the author has stayed anonymous for a decade now. CRAZY!
So many different storylines that span centuries and not a single one feels out of place. They all work towards the same goal, exploring humanity's desire to keep pushing. Keep looking for answers, keep inventing new technologies, keep pushing the envelope until we end up where we are destined to be...with MOTHER.
Of course I have storylines that I love more than others. My favorite storyline is the old crone's and my least favorite is probably Karen's. But I don't mind because it has a purpose in the narrative. You cannot remove Karen's story; it's too important to understanding the overall themes. To understanding what MOTHER is.
UGH! I love this thing so much. I love stories that are dense like this. That you can keep coming back to over and over, and you still get that feeling of awe every time. I hope the author writes something again soon.
February 25, 2026
loved
11 hours
- come unto these yellow sands. we are about to be unborn
- author of this i will find you and i will read everything you have ever written. always be on guard
- the most incredible and individual writing i have ever heard, just glorious
- it is not common for a story to give me actual, literal chills, but the vignette of the marines encountering the soldier on the island gave me a physical response. even in writing this review and thinking about it i get chills
- i'm really glad i read the bible before this, as someone who is not christian i definitely would've missed out on the quite brilliant references here otherwise
- its so funny how like every single one of the parts has an absolutely INSANE first sentence. magical space pussy. michael jackson was murdered. when i was a child they took my mother and replaced her with sewed together livestock. i can only imagine stumbling across something like that organically, let alone for something as mundane as "pirates didn't have parrots!"
- probably one of if not the best stories about addiction i've ever heard?
- blends what is presumably at least based in the reality of the writer with stories of the mother in an unbelievable way. like genuinely how do you come up with this???
- "god, i wanted to bow."
11 hours
- come unto these yellow sands. we are about to be unborn
- author of this i will find you and i will read everything you have ever written. always be on guard
- the most incredible and individual writing i have ever heard, just glorious
- it is not common for a story to give me actual, literal chills, but the vignette of the marines encountering the soldier on the island gave me a physical response. even in writing this review and thinking about it i get chills
- i'm really glad i read the bible before this, as someone who is not christian i definitely would've missed out on the quite brilliant references here otherwise
- its so funny how like every single one of the parts has an absolutely INSANE first sentence. magical space pussy. michael jackson was murdered. when i was a child they took my mother and replaced her with sewed together livestock. i can only imagine stumbling across something like that organically, let alone for something as mundane as "pirates didn't have parrots!"
- probably one of if not the best stories about addiction i've ever heard?
- blends what is presumably at least based in the reality of the writer with stories of the mother in an unbelievable way. like genuinely how do you come up with this???
- "god, i wanted to bow."
July 24, 2025
it is purely transcendental that this collection of interwoven conceptual narratives can clearly and linearly blend into one digestible story. it is a dream to be able to craft a compelling and deeply informed commentary on one’s personal subjective childhood trauma and the weight of brokenness throughout many histories — various potential pasts, presents, and futures — and return to the meeting of one’s self as a motif of pulling yourself out of the things that have been done onto you and the world they you live in. the act of entering into the darkness is what inevitably allows your inner child, still stuck, to enter into the light. to spend hours reading a pieced together version of a manuscript collected through comment sections across various forum boards felt like entering my own flesh interface. truly masterful writing, this will remain with me for a very long time.
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