I didn't particularly enjoy reading The Raptures, but more than that, I just had no idea what it was trying to do as a novel.
Tonally, The Raptures comes across as very twee, almost didactic. It's a novel that feels like it was written to have a moral, some message that was supposed to be moving and inspiring but that in actuality felt very flat and saccharine. The story doesn't outright try to explicitly articulate a moral, but the feeling that it's supposed to have one is there nevertheless, implied by both the way that the narrative is set up and the way that it concludes.
Then we have the structure of the book, which was a bit all over the place for me. For one, it was hard to tell what kind of perspective The Raptures wanted us to focus on. We get first-person-POV chapters from Hannah's perspective, but we also get third-person-POV chapters from Hannah's perspective--and from other characters--as well as the occasional omniscient third-person narration about the goings-on in the town. It was very confusing to follow sometimes, and it made it hard to really inhabit these characters' minds since it was unclear where, exactly, the narration was coming from. I also just really missed some of the beautiful writing that was front and center in Carson's previous novel, The Fire Starters. The best I can say about her writing in this novel is that it was serviceable.
Narratively, The Raptures is supposed to be about the community of Ballylack, the kinds of people who live there, and the various dynamics that they have with each other in the wake of an emerging epidemic within their community. The problem with this is that neither Ballylack nor its inhabitants are written to be particularly interesting. The execution of the story never surprises in any way: there's an epidemic that targets children, parents are afraid for their children, parents grieve their children. Beyond that, I didn't feel like I really got a good grasp of what set this community apart in terms of its social environment, its geography, the lifestyles of its inhabitants, etc. It was all rather flat.
My fundamental problem with The Raptures, though, is that I have no idea what it was trying to do as a novel. The story is straightforward, simplistically so, and it goes pretty much the way you expect it to: there's an epidemic killing children, and so the children proceed to die one by one. With the exception of a few revelations, that's literally the whole plot of the book. And it was so boring. The story has no momentum, nothing to make you want to keep reading, because nothing surprising or interesting ever happens. Child #1 dies, then child #2 dies, then child #3 dies, and then--you guessed it--child #4 dies. And of course this is devastating for the characters, but the way the story is set up makes it so that you become increasingly inured to its characters' pain: by the fifth or sixth time you're reading the same set of reactions to the same exact event, you just feel bored more than anything else. On top of all of this, the novel tries to incorporate a magical realism element throughout its narrative--the operative word, here, being tries, because it doesn't succeed. Again, I have no idea what the magical realism was supposed to accomplish. Magical realism is supposed to excite you! to shake things up! to unsettle the foundations of what's considered "normal" or "real" in everyday life. The magical realism here, by contrast, is lackluster, perfunctory. It feels like it's there to make the story Quirky rather than to actually enliven the story for any meaningful reason. It's there just to be there--and frankly so are a lot of the elements of this book's narrative.
Needless to say, I found The Raptures to be a largely disappointing read. I really enjoyed Carson's The Fire Starters and was so confident that I'd love this novel as well. Clearly, though, The Raptures was not the book for me. It's one of those books that I just know I'm never going to think about again because it was just so utterly unimpressionable to me as a novel.
Thank you to Penguin Random House UK for providing me with an e-ARC of this novel via NetGalley!