This is Book 2 of the Wolf Ranch series by Renee Rose and Vanessa Vale. I'm a big Vanessa Vale fan, and because of this series, I might just become a Renee Rose fan, too. The world-building in this series is an intriguing various of the therian story line without feeling too formulaic, much to my relief. Yes, it's that instant, True Mate template, but considering the others of its ilk I've read, I'd rather reread the Wolf Ranch series all over again.
Marina is the half-sister of Audrey (whom we meet in Book 1) who has traveled to Montana to participate in the physician's wedding to a completely unknown rodeo champion in a whirlwind romance/engagement. We have yet another disappointed-in-men-in-general female who finds herself waylaid by Mother Nature in a torrential downpour that floods out the only road to the ranch. She spends a wild night with her soon-to-be brother-in-law at a local motel, only to never tell him who she is lest he has a code against boinking his future sister-in-law. (How's that for a change!) Her subterfuge is easily revealed to the rest at the ranch when she arrives as they all have incredible noses and sniffs out Colton's personal scent all over her before the guy even enters the scene and discovers the truth for himself.
Can you say "awkward"?
Of course, Marina doesn't know anything about shifters and such because no one can tell her about them. Colton is almost ten years older than her and is caught up in the angst of "she's so young and hasn't had a chance to experience life..." After all, she has yet to finish her college degree in mechanical engineering. He can't interfere with that. Forget it that it might be next to impossible to continue life as HE knows it because he is becoming more and more affected by moon madness. To not claim her immediately could spell his own descent into insanity. Okay, he wants to be a good future mate to Marina except... has anyone even thought about asking Marina how she feels about the entire situation? I guess that would spoil the story, you know? But don't worry. The story does conclude with an HEA with all its usual disclaimers.
Main characters: Marina and Colton do not disappoint. I found it very easy to be very sympathetic in their direction early on. Probably because we progress a little more quickly in the story line, taking major jumps over the usual plot line hurdles and concentrating on what little pages left to expand on their complicated relationship. My only problem is with Colton. Sure, he's a big alpha male on leave from the military, wondering if he should re-up for yet another tour of duty. His hesitancy? Moon madness. He can rarely shift and run while in the military, and as he is already middle-aged and without a mate, he's a prime candidate for moon madness, putting those beneath him at harm's way. After all, he has yet to mate, and his brain is already becoming more and more feral. Oh, he can certainly leave and work on the ranch, but it doesn't solve the mateship problem... But then he runs into Marina while she's contemplating what to do as she stares at a swollen river that's blocking her way to the Wolf Ranch. The awkward human takes his breath away, and in less than two hours, both are playing dominance/submission games, delighting both. Colton is blown away by someone who might be able to handle his need to be extremely alpha with a heavy hand on the buttocks. Marina discovers she really likes her men very dominant and her buttocks well-marked by firm swats. Only she knows who he is, but he has no clue that she's Audrey's half-sister. After all, Marina had decided to have a fling. One very, desirable fling with a delicious alpha dude, and done is done while she goes on with her life, really wondering if she wants to be a mechanical engineer just because her father (who's more out of her life than in it) is one. Of course, the studio audience knows she should use her talents as a baker and go into the bakery business because she can really kick ass when it comes to cake. Amazing how Rose and Vale could fit all this fun in the less-than-two-hundred-page count. It's not that easily done.
As for the quality of writing, perhaps two different sets of brain cells are definitely better than just one. I found the editing process to be more advanced here but not entirely free of the usual errors. It could have done for yet another read-through to pick up on stupid little errors that often fraught the final manuscript version because the cerebrum does get tired and often misses some of the most basic of errors. At least it didn't pull me out of my suspension of disbelief. I hate it when that happens. I do appreciate the continued expositional details continued from Book One rather than assume that everyone remembers what happened in the previous read. I appreciate that we continue to see Audrey and Boyd in this book, especially since Audrey and Marina are very close. I would had liked to have seen more of Boyd than we do. I love seeing Rob, the alpha of the family. Of course, Book Three will be about him and more of the moon madness. (Poor pup!) This series definitely does not stand on its own when it comes to the individual novels. Nope! Gotta read them in order! Nothing's free-standing here!
When it comes to balance... well, I think these two might have just barely crossed the line. Not that every sex scene was gratuitous, but a few of them came dangerous close to pushing the bar. I really hate just skimming through sex scenes because I'm getting bored with them. I want the sex scenes to add to the storyline, not just be there as a "fapping" material. (That's "masturbation" to those who don't read manga.) It does do a decent job in representing a more tame BDSM because it does examine the needs of the dom and the sub and does more than just some slap and tickle. Not ideal but definitely better. I only wished there was further exploration of Colton's BDSM nature because it was really ready to burst out... but failed. I also wished Colton's dom side and Marina's budding sub side could have not been so rushed. I'm not saying the overall exposition was missing huge holes. I'm just saying it could have been better.
And what about our villain Jett? Just a mere mention of his cattle being on the wrong property, that's all. Poopy! I did some exploration and discovered a freebie epilogue at Vanessa Vale's website (vanessavaleauthor dot com) for that as well as for Rough. Both are cute. Kind of wished she could have just tacked it on the end of the book... I've seen two epilogues done.
Would I read this book again. Most definitely! Probably even more so than Rough. Would I go out and buy it? Absolutely! And though it's not out yet, I would also purchase Feral which is all about Alpha Rob Wolf and Natalie Shefield, owner of an adjoining property Jett Markle is lusting after. Guess who's gonna cock-block that purchase!