This book had so much potential but failed to deliver. I was really excited by the blurb but it felt like I was reading a cheap read that had been over-edited, with chases you would expect to find in a low-budget television film. Some readers may not see this as a problem but, for me, I was irritated and glad that this was a short book.
The premise of the story is completely intriguing but the execution was not. I felt bored by the narrative and do not think the writer successfully conveyed the panic and tension. Sentence structures were too similar and predictable; I don’t normally critique books on this level but this was a feature that certainly lessened my enjoyment.
I found the key character, Jake, a rather wet blanket. His reactions to his environment were weak and understated. Now, I’m not arguing that all male characters should be this cliched, muscle-bound, fearless hero. However, Jake seems to be at the other end of the spectrum and his weaknesses were irritating. He appears to land himself in trouble with snooping on his mysterious neighbours and, whilst this does move the plot forwards, Jake is unable to cope with what he has seen.
As mentioned, this felt like a low-budget film. The car chases were predictable and over-used. The characters felt like carbon-copies from previous stories. Indeed, moving to a remote house that backs on to a forest, was I surprised when faces started appearing at windows? Or that the power suddenly cut out several times? Alas, no. This was too formulaic for my liking.
So, time to for the positives. Why, I hear you ask, have I awarded this three stars? Why did I even persevere and finish this book, if I did not enjoy it very much? Well, first of all, it was entertaining (even if it was for the wrong reasons). Secondly, the plot’s foundations were pretty good. As I have said, it had the potential, it just wasn’t delivered very well. The twists that happened at the end of the story were unexpected and I loved the final reveal on the very last page – definitely something that made me gasp! The village setting could have been developed a bit more but I loved imagining the house that Jake and Kate move in to – it sounded idyllic.
This was an ok book. I have definitely read better ones out there that are of the same genre. I don’t think I would rush to read another of James’ books, but this would definitely depend on other reviews and recommendations. It is easy to follow and to distract you which, I guess, is something that quite a few readers are looking for at the moment.
With thanks to Bloodhound books for providing me with a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.