عرف فن الرواية ما نسميه الرواية البوليسية منذ زمن طويل، وكانت أغاثا كريستي رائدتها. تطور هذا النمط من الكتابة كثيراً في العقود الأخيرة، وربما أسهمت الكتابة للسينما والتلفزيون في تطويره وانتشاره لما يكتنز من عناصر تشويق تحبس الأنفاس حتى النهاية.
إنها جانب من دراما الحياة الواقعية التي تشدُّ كثيراً من القرّاء والمشاهدين إلى قراءتها ومتابعتها حتى المشهد الأخير من دون شعور بملل، بل بأعصاب مشدودة تريد حلاً يأتي على الأغلب لصالح القارئ والمشاهد، وربما هو جائزته بعد مشوار حافل بالإثارة.
سيرة القارئ في هذه الرواية أنموذجاً لفن يثيره معظم الوقت. سندع الباقي للقارئ يكتشفه بنفسه، وهذا جزء من هدفنا، أن نشجّع القراءة لتغدو عادة. والرواية البوليسية بالإضافة إلى كل شيء آخر، مجرّد أداة مؤالفة؛ فهل تكون؟
John Greenwood is the pseudonym of John Buxton Hilton.
Hilton was born in 1921 in Buxton, Derbyshire. After his war service in the army he became an Inspector of schools, before retiring in 1970 to take up full-time writing.
He wrote two books on language teaching as well as being a prolific crime writer - his works include the Superintendent Simon Kenworthy series and the Inspector Thomas Brunt series, as well as the Inspector Mosley series as John Greenwood.
This was a book that came up on one of the emails that I receive about new e-books. John Greenwood is a new author to me and I don't know if this is his first book or not.
Imagine getting a call at work from your wife who has gone to pick up your son at school. She tells you that your brother signed your son out of school early and no one knows why or where he is. The roller coaster ride starts here, when in minutes you track down that your brother was in court and has not taken your son. No one has contacted you for ransom yet and you can not determine the motive for why someone would take your son rather than someone who has a lot of money. You have seen enough police shows to know that every hour counts and that the more time that goes by, the less chance you have of getting your child back alive.
This is your only son. The young man who carries all your hopes for the future and without whom your family feels incomplete. Are the police doing all they can after the Amber Alert has been made? Will your tv appeal cause people to be looking for him? Should a reward be offered? You can't just sit. You feel the need to go out and look yourself. Will you find him before time runs out?
The plot was twisted, just the way we like it, with moral dilemmas coming into play. Just how far would you go to get your child back?
This is another of those prematurely-published vanity ebooks. The author had a pretty good idea for a plot; but the rough and unpolished writing style and the total absence of any revision for clarity or editing for accuracy produced many very awkward passages and overall a very inferior novel. The complete lack of effective punctuation was distracting (question marks after numerous statements, few standard-usage commas). Who/whom, they're/there/their, through/threw errors, apostrophes to form plurals, inconsistent verb tenses, misused words and confusing sentences convinced me to give up on this one at about the 45% mark. Oh, and the missing child was thirteen, yet he attended an elementary school and was spoken of as if he were 4 or 5 throughout most of the book.
A few examples of problem passages: "Her face is ringing with stress." "We both can't help but start to cry." "cinder walls" "She nods her head back and forth.""The guy just looks about as much like an officer if there is one." "most missing children are the result of a family member." "Michelle was withering in pain from all the discomforts of pregnancy." "Nothing different from any other hundreds of cases we work on besides the cash." "She quickly releases herself from me." "It is a cul-de-sac, and apparently the largest houses in the neighborhood reside on."
I chose this book because I thought it sounded interesting, and it was, but it also had its downfalls - I'll get to that soon. A thirteen-year-old boy goes missing, like most parents, like most any parents panic and police become involved. Unbeknownst to police or his wife (the boys mother), the husband receives a series of phone calls from the abductors who taunt him to perform certain (illegal) acts to get the boy back. Finally the boy is returned, but the story doesn't end there.... Although I liked this book, in my opinion, it seemed to drag a little too much and at times I became bored.
One major complaint I have is the fact there seem to be so MANY errors and typos, for example, we're being used when were should have been used. Those sort of things are distracting.
This story is about a father and the decisions he needs to make when he is blackmailed by his sons kidnapper. All those who are close to him, are unaware of what is happening. The police are clueless, and unsuccessful in figuring out who has kidnapped his son- or why. He is fed clues, and is helped by his co workers, who don't know how the computer virus at their job, is linked to his son's disappearance. Many twists, and dead bodies...interesting conclusion.
The story line was very interesting, kill a man to save your son, but the book was rife with errors, both punctuation and grammatical. I persevered because the story line was interesting, but it was a hard reading.
I love this & I can't wait for more. I will be also leaving a review on Goodreads @ Amazon. And letting everyone know about it. So i gave it a 5 Stars.
I was captivated from the beginning and enjoyed this book till the very end. I will agree that the editing is not good but i was willing to overlook this and nust enjoy a good read.
The story had intriguing potential but bored me in so many places. Possibly adding a few noisy neighbors during the long kidnapping would have added some interest.😁
Readers (and Goodreads) should note that this is not the same John Greenwood as the John Greenwood of Mr. Mosley, whose real name was John Buxton Hilton.
I got this e book free and choose it by the title. It was a good mystery and once I started I didn't want to stop reading it...... A son is kidnapped at school and the police are led to belive it was the boys uncle. The father is being told he can save his son by following orders. With many twist and turns of events you just don't see the ending coming. There was a couple of times the author used the wrong name for one of the detectives but if you love a good mystery you will want to read this one.
I have to agree with other reviewers. The plot was great and the characters were good but it really did need some more editing/proofreading. I read it as an ebook and wasn't sure if there were other editions? I decided to overlook the errors and then before I knew it I was hooked and had to finish it.
Considering it was one of those free books, I really enjoyed it. It told about a kidnapping of a couple's son. There were many twists and turns, so that was different. However the grammatical errors were so distracting it was difficult to read at times. And why he didn't go to the cops ever even when he had one breathing down his neck really bothered me.
I wouldn't suggest this book to my friends as the errors would also drive them crazy.
Got about 20 or so pages into this book and had to stop. The writing was awful and the characters not believable. And apparently the author didn't bother springing for an editor.
I am always willing to give independent writers the benefit of the doubt, and have discovered several talented writers as a result. The lack of even the most basic proofreading efforts, however, overrides any talent a writer may have, and swiftly lands a book in my Kindle cemetery. I've never understood why a person would put the time and effort into pounding out a novel, but fail to ensure the final product is free of at least the most rudimentary of errors.
Mr. Greenwood began with a workable plot, but it quickly became bogged down with puzzling detours which seemed to add nothing to the main theme. The absence of punctuation made it difficult to follow dialogue and even the simplest declarative sentences. The book was full of issues such as the use of "there" when it should have been "they're", and similar errors.
I finished this book despite the awkward writing, which is something I rarely do. I wish I could have assigned a higher rating, but a novel isn't finished until it has been thoroughly edited. I truly hope Mr. Greenwood recognizes this very important fact and follows through on future endeavors.
Fatal Decision is a suspense by John Greenwood. It is a very good book and it keeps you reading. You simply can’t put it down. Sheldon is an IT manager and he, Jim, and Brian are frantically working to keep the servers from crashing and stop whatever virus that was causing the problems. In the middle of this crisis, Sheldon gets a phone call from his wife, Michelle. Their son Tommy is missing. Someone posing as Sheldon’s brother Lawrence checked him out of school. Sheldon immediately leaves and heads for Tommy’s school. Detective Stanton meets him there and the investigation into Tommy’s disappearance begins. Sheldon gets a call from the kidnapper and is given tasks to do. If he does what he is told and does not tell anyone, Tommy will be returned unharmed. Can Sheldon follow the instructions or will they prove to be too much for him? Why did they choose Tommy to kidnap? What do they want?
The storyline of the book was pretty good. I have to admit that it kept me reading to see what happened. However I can not stand books with typing/grammatical errors. There are SO many in this book (kindle version) virtually ever two pages. Surely authors have people who proofread their work?? I also found myself getting infuriated with the main character and why at every opportunity he never went to the police or confided in anyone. I got so annoyed with him, in the end I didn't care whether he lived or died!
I really thought this was an interesting read. The story begins when Sheldon and Michelle Smith's son, Tommy is kidnapped from his school. The investigation into the kidnapping begins, but the story twists and turns as Sheldon starts receiving calls and e-mails that show something completely strange is going on. Readers need to hang on tight, because this is a mysterious thrill ride that is going to twist, turn and tantalize the mind. This is a compelling story written in a reader friendly fashion and a definite page turner. Great job