In The Magdalene Deception you’ll find a plot that mixes elements of a treasure hunt, contempory and historic fiction, and spy stories. This mix reminded me a lot of Dan Brown’s Robert Langdon series, though The Magdalene Deception felt a bit slower and darker in some moments. It is also much more matter-of-fact in style, I’d say.
Keeping a newly found manuscript secret and away from a Croatian nationalist secret society is at the centre of it all, and while the main characters, Michael and Hana, are at it, you are taken along a trip through a few European countries and get loads of historical background story around it.
This rather historical touch was ok for me, though I imagine that some readers could feel slightly overwhelmed by this cornucopia of historical context at times. What might have happened as a result of this much historical context is that the characters do not really have room to develop in any way. Maybe it is simply the wrong genre for that, but this focus on historical context and developments took away some suspense and atmosphere, which made the characters less interesting than I’d have liked them to be. There could have been room for Michael and Hana getting a little closer, but no. First of all the plot and style of writing do not really allow that, and in addition, Michael is a Catholic priest, so, no chance at all. However, at least they travelled through a nice European setting, with pretty accurate descriptions of the different places.
All in all, this is definitely a good story, and the major reason for me to subtract one star is the lack of any form of character development because of the focus on historical events. Other readers might exactly love that, though.
4 out of 5 stars