Athaliah (Atty) and Yaphet both live in Sebel, though in different parts. Atty lives in the North, the daughter of the chieftain of her tribe, and has lived a relatively peaceful life thus far. Her biggest goal is to join her father on a hunt - a goal which she finally obtains after they discover their fields have been attacked just before the harvest. What they learn on the hunt will challenge and change many things.
Yaphet was a child living in a city that was razed when he was a young child. He was taken in by the Asum - the mystical leader - of another tribe in the South. Despite the Asum taking him in and raising him, Yaphet is not accepted by others of the tribe and is considered to be cursed. However, with the protection of the Asum, he is able to grow and learn, and he is even allowed to take part in a sacred hunt. But, what will happen if that protection is no longer available.
This book had a strange beginning. For the first third or so, Atty is the only protagonist. Thus, when the story shifts suddenly to Yaphet, it is jarring. From that point on, we see the story progress with viewpoints from both characters, but it was difficult to follow. The writing style was stilted and there was so much time spent on world-building and explaining the apparent religions that the actual story felt like an afterthought. In addition, the part of the story around Yaphet was very confusing. Even after having finished the book, I still don't know why his story was included or why he faces such animosity among his adopted clan. To me, the animosity feels contrived in order to set up whatever will happen in the next book, but I feel no urgency to read the next book.
If anything, this book needs the help of a developmental editor to really flesh out the story and make the characters more compelling. For example, Atty's tribe is visited by someone for some reason (I still don't know why) and she accompanies them on the hunt early on. Apparently there was some romantic tension between her and Atty because at a clan celebration, she suddenly kisses Atty , and suddenly Atty has this wonderful feeling about her. But it was all out of nowhere and didn't have any basis, in my opinion. Then, the love interest is gone. But, she comes back at the end, I guess to add some tension for the next book, only to tell Atty that even though they have these great feelings, she's going into some order and can't have romantic ties. What was the point of trying to introduce a romance if you aren't going to take it anywhere? It was like the author wanted to have a lesbian relationship for token representation but forgot that all relationships need development, and this one had none.
All in all, it's not a bad story. It just really, REALLY needs the help of an editor to polish it up. Unfortunately, since the next two books are already published, with a fourth one due out in a few months, that's unlikely to happen. Equally unlikely is me reading the sequel to this book.