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Katrina’s still haunted by her encounter with the Headless Horseman - the night he beckoned to her. Now he has risen again, slashing heads and terrorizing the quiet countryside.

Her only joy during this dismal darkness comes when Ichabod Crane, a gorgeous young man from Connecticut, moves to Sleepy Hollow and their attraction turns to romance.

When the Horseman marks Ichabod as his next victim, Katrina, despite dangerous efforts to save him, sees no other choice than for them to flee.

But the Horseman awaits. Now it’s up to her to sever the horror and alter the Legend of Sleepy Hollow.

276 pages, Kindle Edition

First published August 12, 2013

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Dax Varley

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Dax Varley is the author of SLEEPY HOLLOW, RETURN TO SLEEPY HOLLOW, BLEED, and NIGHTMARE HOUSE. She loves humor, horror and all things paranormal.

When Dax isn't writing, she's collecting odd photos online, reading recaps of her favorite shows, or kicked back with a good book. She lives in Richmond, Texas with her husband, a shelf full of action figures, and about a dozen imaginary friends.

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843 reviews367 followers
December 6, 2025
"All these, however, were mere terrors of the night, phantoms of the mind that walk in darkness..."- The Legend of Sleepy Hollow

3.5 out of 5 stars

He comes at night. In the tiny village of Sleepy Hollow, the Headless Horseman is wreaking havoc. Riding on horseback and showing no mercy, he is murdering the village folk one by one, cutting off their heads swiftly and brutally. This time, he has taken the life of the local schoolmaster. Alarmed by the gruesome killings going on, Katrina Van Tassel, daughter of the richest man in town, decides to do some investigating of her own. It becomes even direr when the Horseman targets a new victim: Ichabod Crane, the new schoolmaster and Katrina’s newfound love. Taking on the Horseman is a dangerous thing, but with the people and village she loves in danger, Katrina must find a way to rid Sleepy Hollow of this evil once and for all.

I’m just a girl, sitting in front of this computer and writing this review, praying for the weather gods to send some fall weather. I live in Central California, and we don’t get fall weather in any way, shape, or form. Anything under 90 degrees is what we consider chilly. We’re lucky if we get a day or two of rain and three leaves that change. Fall just doesn’t happen where I live, which is rather unfortunate if autumn happens to be your favorite season. Therefore, I’m always in search of books set in autumn so I can experience the season using my imagination. Give me the cool weather! Give me the changing leaves! Give me the apples, the pumpkins, the squash! I want it all, dammit!

I’m so happy to say this book delivered. If you’re a fan of any adaptation of Sleepy Hollow, whether it’s the Disney animated special of the Tim Burton movie, you’re absolutely going to love this book. The atmospheric setting and the unabashed love of New England and autumn instantly made me want to go visit Sleepy Hollow and throw a harvest festival. It perfectly captures the spooky season without it feeling like a sappy Hallmark film.

Further, the book was packed full of action and juicy Gothic horror. I didn’t want to stop reading this book once I started it, believe it or not. I was even trying to sneak read it on the job, haha! I was invested in both the characters and the plot. Katrina was a compelling heroine to read about, and Ichabod was just as compelling as a hero. You want them to defeat the evil and be together. Plus some of the dialogue actually made me laugh out loud, a rare feat for a book to do.
”I once heard that the minister sneezed during prayer, and because of Henny, the entire Hollow knew about it before he uttered ‘Amen.’”
Why is the author so accurately describing my workplace?

You don’t have to have read the original to enjoy this retelling, in my opinion, and that’s the hallmark of a good retelling. It kept the foundation of the original story while putting its own spin on it, and in surprisingly delightful ways. Katrina, Ichabod, Brom, and the Horseman are all there. It didn’t feel contrived or that the author was trying to hard to make it seem as different from the story as possible. Everything blended seamlessly for the most part… except the ending.

The ending is one of the big weak spots of this book. I felt it was very rushed and left so many questioned on answered. On the one hand, it’s kind of diabolical because the author is basically forcing you to read the sequel to get the answers you are wanting. On the other hand, I didn’t feel it was entirely necessary to do that. Most books, even if they do have cliffhangers, gives a satisfying conclusion to most other plotlines. Here, it felt like a bad stucco job. For example, So if you’re looking for a book with a satisfying ending, this ain’t gonna be the book for you.

Another nitpick I have is that there were various spelling and grammatical errors in this book.
”Had he really been here, or did I imagined him like before?”

It’s not entirely surprising considering it’s a self-published work (gotta give them some grace), but it did make me put my editing cap on.
”Withered and scorched. It looked as through fire had rained down upon it.”
I edit court transcripts as part of my work as a court reporter, and when I read a book, I don’t expect to go into work mode.

Is this book to be an Oprah’s Book Club pick? Probably not. Is this gonna win the Pulitzer Prize for Fiction? Definitely not. Was this an action-packed, thrilling, romantically Gothic Halloween read that will have you feeling all the autumnal feels? Heck yes. Dax Varley has written a book that’s a rollicking fun ride (no pun intended) and a worthy Sleepy Hollow retelling. Despite various errors in spelling and grammar plus an ending that felt extremely rushed, this is the perfect book to get you in the mood for spooky season and one I will definitely be re-reading.

P.S.: I just have to mention on other thing about this book. It had nothing to do with my enjoyment of it, but it was downright hilarious, and it has to do with this concept: “White Boys Are So Delicious.”

Now, I know what you’re thinking. OMG, KATHERINE, YOU CAN’T JUST GO AROUND SAYING WHITE BOYS ARE DELICIOUS. And I know it does, indeed, sound crazy, but hear me out.

Old Hollywood was the Wild, Wild West. Truly. Crazy things happened all the time. Things like Eartha Kitt, Paul Newman, and James Dean having a threesome, which left Eartha Kitt declaring that white boys were, indeed, delicious.

See? Those are her words, not mine. Yzma loved a good threesome.

I think the author must have read that Eartha Kitt said that and ran with that quote, because that’s the only explanation I have for why Ichabod was describes in such an unusual way as this.
”My breath hitched at the thought that this delicious creature was all mine.”
I mean, it’s a little weird, but some people are descriptive like that.
”But then, he could wear sackcloth and be just as delicious.”
Okay, y’all are making me a little nervous. You did hire him to be the next schoolmaster; right?
”The top buttons of his white cambric shirt were unfastened, affording me a view of his glistening chest. I could barely pry my eyes from him as I admired his slender frame. Elise’s devilish word immediately sprang to mind. Delicious.”
Ma’am, this is a Wendy’s drive-thru.
”“I really must thank your father for bringing us such a delicious schoolmaster.” I laughed. “I’m sure delicious was not a requirement.” Though it was a benefit.”
Are… are you well? Is it the influenza talking or are we all losing our sanity?
”“How was your dinner with Ichabod?” she asked. “Isn’t he magnificent?” “He’s…different.” “To put it mildly.” She fluttered her lashes and sighed. “He’s so handsome and gallant and…and…” “Delicious?” “Sinfully.”
LADIES!!! What is this? Are you all planning to eat him with some fava beans and a nice chianti?!!!

It definitely inspired the giggles and a few eyebrow raises, but the Eartha Kitt quote was too perfect to ignore the similarities.
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509 reviews76 followers
March 13, 2022
It was a good retelling of the sleepy hollow. The end was unexpected, i love when i can't predict how a book ends. I like Katrina and Ichabod but Brom was a sexist donkey. The book had romance and mystery. I will be starting the second book tomorrow. The book left me wanting more of the characters.
Profile Image for Anna Kay.
1,457 reviews161 followers
August 30, 2015
Mildly amusing at best, drippy and mediocre at worst. Full review to come.

FULL REVIEW

Another retelling of the original Washington Irving story, The Legend of Sleepy Hollow. I went into this excited, but wary, because as a retelling from the female perspective (Katrina) it was a bit of a dicey concept. You're talking about a girl from the late 1700s. Just how interesting could she be, without the author making her too modern for the novel to work in the context it's meant to be in? And that kind of turned out to be the biggest problem for this particular book. In making Katrina a strong, independent girl, with dreams that extended beyond her life in the Hollow, the author also made her home life a bit unbelievable. She and her friend Elise are entirely unchaperoned and allowed to chase after young men like there's no tomorrow. Elise's obsession with Ichabod and the way she is all up on him is decidedly inappropriate for the late 1700s - it would have been absolutely disgraceful in real life.

Also, the mystery of the Headless Horseman riding again, the murders and his motive for them, was very boring once it was revealed. You spend the entire book trying to figure out how everything ties together and then in the last few pages finding out the identity of the "Horseman" really didn't make any sense and the reason for his haunting was stupid. It had no connection to Katrina, so it really was weird why he haunted her - he had no reason to, as she wasn't part of his revenge. And the hinting at the original Horseman haunting her was never followed up on, which was also disappointing. The killing of Brom Bones disappointed me too, especially after Katrina seemed to realize that he was the better choice, over Ichabod Crane anyways. He rescues Katrina from an impossible situation and almost certain death (while Ichabod just sits back and watches it all happen!) and then oops; Sorry, he's beheaded too! He spent most of the book seeming like an asshole, then in his last few pages he became someone I cared about. Brom also had hella more personality than Ichabod (even if it was mostly annoyingness and sexism).

The romance between Ichabod and Katrina was very lackluster, insta-love type stuff and his behavior is very rakish towards her for the time period. The way they carried on was absolutely scandalous. And no one does anything about it! All in all, it did have some wit to it and was amusing to read at certain points. But mostly this book was boring, with characters who acted averse to their historical time period and a badly thought-out mystery. I would recommend that if you're looking for a Hollow retelling, that you read Crane by Stacey Rourke instead!

VERDICT: 2.5/5 Stars

*I received this book from CreateSpace, on NetGalley. No favors or money were exchanged for this review. This book was published on August 12th, 2013.*
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7,344 reviews203 followers
April 27, 2019
Definitely read this for a challenge.. and now I'm kind of in the halloween spirit? What is spring?

When I hear the words, Sleepy Hollow, I think of the movie - ya know, the one with Johnny Depp. Or that TV show that was once on Fox. I don't think I have ever read a book about it.. but now that has been rectified.

Did you know that the headless horseman is real? Well, it is to Katrina. What does he do in his spare time? He rides around outside on his horse slicing people's heads off without a care in the world. Enter Katrina and Ichabod - the duo who wants to stop him. Of course, they are in way over head but at least they still have theirs.

Now Katrina was a high spirited character. Stubborn but lovable (in a way). I thought she was a smidge crazy because of how she freaked out a lot. I get that she has seen the horseman a ton.. but she's still alive right? Right. She was honestly a very interesting character - especially when she was/wasn't with Ichabod. They had an intriguing relationship.

Speaking of Ichabod, I have no idea how I felt about him. He was lovable and fiercely protective of Katrina when it came to the horseman. I mean, they loved each other didn't they? So they would both do whatever it took to save the other. His character was like the movie and tv version all rolled into one - so super lovable.

Other than all of that, I felt like the ending was a bit rushed.. but I ended up enjoying the book overall.

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3,181 reviews
April 29, 2019
This was okay, I was hoping it would have more differences from the original story. I like the Sleepy Hollow legend and this was a decent version of it. It followed the original pretty well, the main difference was Katrina, who thinks the Horseman is following her and falls in love with Ichabod. I think it would have been cool if it took place now instead of colonial times and the ending was pretty open, but there is a sequel so that makes sense. The narration wasn't bad and it's not too long.
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174 reviews32 followers
September 23, 2013
I had no idea this book was YA until I'd finished it and then I understood why the romance seemed so lackluster to me.

YA books almost never give me a satisfying romance and Severed was no exception: it's love at first sight for both characters and they very happily go full steam ahead with their relationship while the Headless Horseman is terrorizing the village of Sleepy Hollow. Katrina goes from being afraid to having romantic fantasies about her Ichabod and then back to being afraid and then back to... You get the drift. It was pretty unrealistic. Not to mention that the dialogue and the way the characters acted felt way too modern for a book set at the end of the 18th century.

So, the romance was a complete bust but I still had the mystery about the Headless Horseman. He seemed to have a weird connection to Katrina and I wanted to see what it was: was it romantic in a deliciously creepy way? was it because he was controlled by someone close to her that didn't want her harmed? another reason?

Well, unfortunately, the mystery part was also a bust. While I'm sure some people will find the twist at the end a welcome surprise, I felt let down. Having felt pretty anti-climactic to me. And although it was implied that the there's no hint of a possible sequel so far to explore things along that route a bit more.

All in all this was a pretty uneven book when it came to writing, character development and pacing but it had a setting I'm fond of, hence the 3 stars. Had it been unrelated to Sleepy Hollow, it would have been a 2-star read or even maybe a DNF if I felt I had a more promising book on my TBR pile.
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258 reviews40 followers
April 8, 2015
I wasn’t sure how much I’d enjoy this, as I’m admittedly not so versed in Washington Irving's, The Legend of Sleepy Hollow. In the original story, I knew there was a guy named Ichabod Crane and a headless horseman that killed people. And he was scary. And headless. Even though he rode a horse. The more I think about it, he must have had some mad skills to stay on his horse WITH NO HEAD. How did he balance WITH NO HEAD? Did he still duck for low tree limbs? These are important questions.

So that's all I know. My Sleepy Hollow knowledge should count for something if only to ponder epic equestrian talents, right?

I settled easily in Dax Varley's world of Severed, the scenery and time frame painted beautifully. I immediately took a liking to our protagonist, Katrina Van Tassel. Young, beautiful, independent, and curious of the world outside her little town. She's very likeable.

The reader follows her story, from grand plans to venture out, or in her case…escape into the world as she’s derailed by an unexpected love interest (someone’s hot for teacher!), to a Headless Horseman frightening and immobilizing the town. Katrina’s friends are targeted and threatened by this headless, terrifying and elusive killer. To ramp up the tension, there are unfortunate accusations soon thrown about: murder, witchcraft, topped with jail time and sneaky escapes. The book picked up well toward the end with its twists and turns. I won’t go further and spoil it for you but I will say, I enjoyed the writing and setting. Severed is a fun, well written, adventurous little tale, especially with Halloween around the corner.

Spooooky!

I received a copy of this book through the LibraryThing Member Giveaway in exchange for an unbiased review.
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154 reviews8 followers
October 10, 2013
A delightful, suspenseful remake of a beloved classic!

Varley takes the well-known American tale of Sleepy Hollow and transforms it into a novel fit for teens and adults alike. While drawing off some of the original story, much of Severed is Varley's own take on the events. However, the time period is well-captrured, and the pastoral/gothic mood of the original tale can be felt in the re-telling.

We learn much more about our characters in Severed, and it is notable that Ichabod is not the gangly, awkward schoolmaster of Irving's imagination. This helps to increase the romance factor in the story, which is just passionate enough to hold interest without veering into "fifty shades" territory, and I appreciated Varley's tastefulness. The elements of gothicism and the supernatural and well-crafted and blended in to make this "who donnit" both suspenseful and intelligent.

This was a wonderful read. I looked forward every evening to the time when I could nestle into bed and pick up with Katrina and Ichabod's adventure! I look forward to Varley's next work.
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1,291 reviews84 followers
August 9, 2016
4.5 stars
Well done with great characters and edge of your seat tension. If you've read and enjoyed The Legend of Sleepy Hollow by Washington Irving, you will certainly enjoy this tale. It fleshes out the characters in the original tale and makes them believable. While staying true to the original tale's spirit, Varley makes this original and unique.

Katrina was a great protagonist who did not let others save her, but rather she took matters into her own hands. I loved that she wanted to sail off on adventures and visit the world. There was a bit of insta-love, but everything else was done so well, I forgave that. I was a bit disturbed by the way Brom treated Katrina. It was like he was a big bully and a sexist one at that. I get that we aren't supposed to like him, but I wanted Katrina's dad to catch him at it. I don't think he would have been so smug then.

I wonder if there will be a sequel. Things were wrapped up except for the last line. That makes me think there might be more. I would happily read a second book (kind of wish I had it right now).

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356 reviews64 followers
July 19, 2015
Received from NetGalley for review.

Some books are like chewing tinfoil, or glass. Not because they’re that bad or anything (I wouldn’t advise eating glass, though), but because they just don’t work for you on nearly every level. That’s how I felt whilst trudging through Severed. It’s not badly written at all and I can easily see why some people like it, it just didn’t work for me. I don’t like books that feel like a chore to read and sadly this one did.

Plot: The Headless Horseman. Sleepy Hollow. A reign of destruction. Ichabod Crane. You know the drill. Most people know the story, since its original publication there have been many versions of the story in both print and performance (the film with Johnny Depp is the only one I have paid particular attention to). I’m not sure (because I can’t really be bothered to investigate) how much it differs from all these versions, but I get the impression Ichabod is quite different and the leading lady, Katrina, brings a new dimension (ironic in a dimensionless character) to it.

Setting: Sleepy Hollow. Late 18th century. Puritanical. Generally backwards and sexist. Despite the setting, the narrative style just didn’t feel authentic; there was a weird Queen’s English vibe to it, which for English settlers in America would be the case, I’m sure, but I can’t take someone saying ‘make haste!’ to their horse seriously.

Characters: Katrina – SO BORING. I have never met such a boring protagonist, and she should have been interesting in a crush-the-patriarchy-and-disobey-your-father kind of way at least, but no. She is boring, bland, simpering and a completely flat character. Also, insta-love. Ick.

Ichabod – le sigh. 18th century dreamboat, apparently. I have to give him credit; he was a genuinely interesting character with an actual personality. He was just a lot of fun to read AND he wants to teach slave children, so not all that bad.

Brom – sexist, borderline abusive pig. I get we’re in the 18th century and everything was different back then but that’s not going to make the way he treats Katrina okay, and I’m still going to be pissed about it.

Headless Horseman – not scary at all. Disappointing.

Everyone else – urgh. I didn’t really like anyone except Ichabod. Too backward, too boring, too wet. I just didn’t care about anyone, and I wouldn’t have been upset if the Headless Horseman has beheaded them all.
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817 reviews48 followers
March 24, 2014
3.5-4 Actual Stars for Young Adult Book

I always thought the story of Ichobod Krane and the Legend of Sleepy Hollow was fascinating. This was a quick fun little read. Katrina is full of all sorts of whimsical dreams of leaving her village and all the adventures she will surely have once she leaves. However her plans are throttled when the handsome Ichobod moves to town. They fall quickly into like/love with one another. There relationship was really sweet. Then enters the crazy Headless Horseman. He is wrecking havoc all through out the village, and among Katrina's friends. He seems to have pin pointed Ichobod as a target. Why? I think this question really had me curious, could he have feelings for Karina and want Ichobod out of the way or something else. There is mystery and mayhem a plenty with a dash of sweet romance.
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1,006 reviews125 followers
November 1, 2014
THE REVIEW

Why this book?
Since this legend is always connected to Halloween I thought this retelling would be a good Halloween read

What I thought

I always been fascinated by the legend of Sleep Hollow so when I saw this I knew I had to read it,especially on Halloween. I enjoyed this retelling the characters were likable and the mystery of the Headless Horseman kept me interested. I enjoyed the romance between Katrina and Ichabod. and thought the twist was unexpected.

Overall it was a good read, that I recommend
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839 reviews1,811 followers
December 14, 2013
This was a quick read. It was cute and fun to read the relationship between Katrina and ichabod. I enjoyed the twist on the headless horseman. But overall it had a hard time keeping my attention. I couldn't relate to the story and even the romance was sweet and cute, there was no mystery and therefore let me wanting. The only real interesting part of this story was the mystery and twist of the headless horseman.
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18 reviews1 follower
September 18, 2019
I have always loved The Legend of Sleepy Hollow. This was a great take on the story!
Profile Image for Kristine Hall.
941 reviews72 followers
July 31, 2014
4.5 Star Rating! This is a super creepy, super sexy take on The Legend of Sleepy Hollow, with Katrina Van Tassel as narrator. Really quick and fun (but CREEPY. Did I mention that?) read!

As opposed to the original story, this Katrina has strong, modern ideas and asserts herself, much to the consternation of her father and the villagers. Often, she acknowledges that she gets away with her actions because of her father's money and position, and you can't blame her. At eighteen, Katrina is expected to follow the restrictive social norms, but she has ideas of her own. (GASP! A female has ideas of her own!)

Ichabod, despite the name, is swoon-worthy, and sparks fly fast as he and Katrina meet. I think Katrina being eighteen and Ichabod a young twenty something gave the attraction and passion of the romance more credibility. There are plenty of obstacles (not the least of which is a headless horseman!)keeping these two apart and some interesting and unexpected twists. Varley does a nice job of casting doubt on the relationship, and readers will certainly question whether or not they have this story figured out.

As a fan of Sleepy Hollow tales, I enjoyed the familiarity of the setting and many character names. All characters, new and old, were authentic and well-written. From the sleazy, lecherous Peter Bottoms to the brutish but mysterious Brom, each unique personality is clearly defined, which makes scenes memorable and eliminates having to turn back pages to figure out who is who.

But what measures the greatness of any Sleepy Hollow tale is the Headless Horseman – and Varley’s version is to die for! (pun intended). The kills are not sugar-coated, and so readers be warned that there is plenty of description and bloody horror in this book – and not only in the Horseman’s kills. Katrina is no shrinking Victorian flower, and she is not afraid to get her hands dirty and play dirty to get what she wants and/or to do what she thinks is right. There were several scenes when I cringed and squirmed with discomfort, which is a real kudo to Varley’s writing skills. My audible “EWWWWWW” while reading was enough to get raised eyebrows and questions from people nearby.

The book concluded a bit rapidly for my liking, and I felt there was one major gap left to fill regarding Brom -- plus the very last sentence leaves a wide-open, unanswered question. Given some of Katrina’s actions, I don’t think a sequel would be possible to get that question answered, so it just hangs there. Arrgh!

I recommend this to young adult and adult readers alike, as long as you understand that heads ARE gonna roll.

Thank you to Dax Varley (Dottie Enderle) for giving me an autographed copy of the first version, titled Severed, when I met her at the 2014 Texas Library Association Conference. There were no strings attached, though I am happy to post this honest review in appreciation of her generosity.

Like this review? Find it and others on my blog at http://kristinehallways.blogspot.com
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414 reviews18 followers
January 7, 2014
Severed: A Tale of Sleepy Hollow
Dax Varley
☆★☆★
E-book 256

I recieved this as An ARC from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review

This is a story based in the 1700's told From Katrina's POV. It is a YA romance based on the tale of the legend headless horseman in sleepy hollow.

Other than the spoilt/bitchy Elise (every book has gotta have on of these right) I would have never guessed this was a YA book. The characters acted much wiser and more mature. It wasnt full of whiny childish characters and I loved it. The characters were all well developed and wonderfully descripted.

We do have a slight love triangle that isnt really a love triangle because Katrina was never interested in Broms character. This is your typical YA romance (a bit unhealthy in my eyes) where the heroine will give up everything to be with this person. Love at first sight. willing to put everyone around her in danger. willing to ruin friendship kinda relationship. you get where im going with it. But none the less it didnt take away from the story.

Katrina is a badass heroine like flippin awesome not your typical 1700's gal! I wouldnt have paired her with ichabod crane. He was a weak male hero in my eyes (I was secretly rooting for Brom) Katrina had put herself in danger for him countless times. I honestly felt Katrina was our hero and ichabod our heroine.

Seeing that this is about the Headless horseman you do understand there will be a paranormal aspect to this book and I like it! I thought it was truely wonderful. It wasnt so unrealistic that I was like oh "this is stupid" it was the unrealistic where you could be like "hmm I could see that happening" ! I absolutely loved the ending and the twist of it all! it was so unexpected I was suprised. I just would have NEVER GUESSED that thats what was happening.

My only problem is with the way the book ended. It ended with a question. Which leads me to believe hopefully there will be a follow up to answer some of the questions I had through out the book. Like why was she having such vivid dreams about this horseman? Why did it seem he was drawn to her?

This is a slow book, it isnt a fast book packed full of action. So if your not into the slow moving story then this book wouldn't be for you. I am not usually into slow paced novels but it was such an interesting topic that it held my attention.

I would also like to add this is my First experience with the legend of sleepy hollow. I have heard of the headless horseman but thats about it.
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97 reviews8 followers
January 13, 2014
In Severed, Dax Varley takes on the story many of us know and creates an interesting concept. Set back around the time of The Revolutionary War, the legend of the Headless Horseman is known throughout this small town. The main character is Katrina, the daughter of the wealthiest man in the Hollow. It’s no surprise that she is sought after by many men, none of which are worthy enough to receive the same sentiment.

When the schoolmaster is found dead, and headless, the townspeople panic because the Horseman has struck again. The new schoolmaster comes into town, catching the eye of young Katrina. When the Horseman marks Ichabod, Katrina wants nothing more than to save him, even if it means fleeing her home.

The Legend of Sleepy Hollow has always been one of my favorite tales. Dax did a wonderful job of creating a new dimension to the story, allowing us to see it from a young heroine’s viewpoint. Severed is full of mystery and twists and suspense. It keeps you on the edge of your seat, wondering and guessing what could possibly happen next. The characters are wonderful. Katrina is such a strong woman. She is independent and isn’t afraid to speak her mind. This is a rare delight for the time period. Ichabod is an amusing character, being untraditional in and out of the classroom—another nice rarity. The two of them together are a delight. They have an immediate connection and the bond that is created pulls at your heartstrings, adding a pleasant element of romance to this suspenseful tale. Overall, I would say this is a great book that anyone young or young at heart would enjoy.
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1,185 reviews11 followers
February 24, 2016
•••I listened to the Audible Audio Edition of this book•••



I was a bit annoyed at her mispronunciation of a few words that were used regularly (ie scythe) but overall Sofia Willingham's performance was pretty good. Her portayals of the characters were very interesting and lent a depth of emotion I am sure I would have missed had I just read the book. The terror she conveyed was palpable as was the menace from certain characters.



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Rise Of The Headless Horseman?


This series must be listened to (or read) in order. This is the first book. I can't wait to listen to the next one!


Sleepy Hollow is a town unlike any other. It is plagued with hauntings of all kinds. There is the legendary Headless Horseman as well as many other more mundane ones. The wailing woman in white they resolved but many others they have not. Why is Sleepy Hollow so haunted? Who hurried the Hessian? Will they ever be able to banish him for good? Or will the Headless Horseman forever stalk the town and its residents?


The first victim of the Headless Horseman (this time around) was the schoolteacher Nicholas. Whatever his past, he was a kind man and a good teacher. Noone knows why he was targeted or the nature of his offense. Who will be the next target? What is the Horseman's connection to Katrina? Is anyone safe?

***This series is suitable for young adult through adult listeners (or readers) who enjoy reimagined classic supernatural horror stories with new unique twists and a dash of romance :)
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161 reviews17 followers
October 27, 2013
Does anyone know the story of the Headless Horseman and Sleepy Hollow? Because I didn't know a thing until I read this book.

And now I feel like I know something. Well, a version of the story anyway.

It's kinda funny to think that the title of this book is Severed. You know, 'cause it's about people getting their heads chopped off. So bloody.

Not that the story was that bloody.

Did people lose their heads? Yes. Was it absolutely scary and bloody? No. Which is good because I don't handle scary stuff well.

The story follows Katrina, an eighteen year old girl living in Sleepy Hollow in the year 1793. As the Headless Horseman terrorizes the town at night, marking people and taking off the heads of his intended victims, Katrina tries to solve the mystery to help save the people she loves.

I should mention that I am not a huge fan of historical fiction. There's something about reading a book and knowing that proper toilets and showers don't exist that makes me depressed and feel icky. Plus I often think that the plots can be boring because in my mind there is "nothing to do in that era".

But this time around, I was intrigued by the mystery of Sleepy Hollow and I wanted to know what was going to happen next. And I think that reading this in the fall so close to Halloween was perfect because I was totally in the mood for a ghost story.

And it was a GREAT ghost story!
Profile Image for Crystal Robertson.
125 reviews7 followers
November 5, 2015
Beautiful Sleepy Hollow version

I thoroughly enjoyed this read even more so than I anticipated. Dax has done a wonderfully simplistic job with this version of Sleepy Hollow told from the perspective of Katrina who falls for Ichabod Crane who has been brought to town as the new schoolmaster. I was tickled by the humor and whit between characters and impressed by how the characters so easily come to life. This is not a deep thought provoking read but rather an indulgent escape to another place and time. It has definitely left me craving more and I will be reading the second book directly.
I received this in exchange for a fair and honest review.

I studied those vibrant green eyes. “How can you always be so carefree and optimistic?” His lips softened. “Because I prefer it to the alternative.”

There is no other feeling like the anxiety of waiting alone in the dark . Among the shadows you have only your thoughts to occupy you. And it is then that you learn who you are, what you’re capable of… and to what extreme.
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Author 9 books110 followers
April 14, 2015
This is a great modern interpretation of Sleepy Hollow with just enough suspense, romance, and spine-tingling moments to make this spicy page turner a favorite for long afternoons in front of the fire.

Also, the cover is lovely.
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407 reviews45 followers
October 22, 2015
Okay, that wasn't perfect, especially considering the period (so more like 3.5-4), but it made me want to not put it down, so there's that.
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215 reviews3 followers
August 29, 2022
I love The Legend of Sleepy Hollow.

When I was a little girl, Halloween was not complete without McGruff the Crime Dog visiting our school and warning us of the dangers of accepting candy from strangers and a vinyl costume/mask from the drugstore. I would race home from school to catch Punky Brewster’s Halloween episode, Disney’s Halloween Treat, and always… always… The Legend of Sleepy Hollow.

As an adult, I am quite nostalgic for the magical feeling evoked by such films and I try to incorporate them into my traditions (well, not Punky Brewster!).

Every time Sleepy Hollow is re-written, I can’t help but check it out, and when I saw this book a year or two ago, it went on my immediate “to read” list. I only recently found a copy (and the cover was beautiful, I might add) and was so excited that I sat down and read it all in one day.

What was right about it… the town… for the most part, was true to the original tale. We have many of the same names (names that also exist at Sleepy Hollow cemetery as real former residents). We have that Brom is sort of a wise cracking bully that has affections for Katrina. We have that Katrina exists in a (sort of) love triangle between Ichabod and Brom.

What we also have is references to the Tim Burton film… the Hessian being conjured by someone that is controlling his midnight ride.

We have a number of parallels to The Spellbook of KVT as well. A certain amount will surely exist due to them both being based on the same subject matter, but for a period of time, it felt as though I was reading the same book all over again. Katrina is encouraged to marry Brom because he can run the farm and has very little say in it. Katrina is attracted to the beautiful school teacher that she cannot be courted by because he is not wealthy. We have them sneaking away to be together and professing insta love… Spellbook taking it to sexual levels and Severed keeping it more PG. The endings do differ, but they are very, very similar otherwise.

I found the passages about teaching at the school to be excessive. I found the conversations about balancing books to be dull. Although I am fascinated by Sleepy Hollow lore, I felt that this embellished the most boring parts of Ichabod being a school teacher and that became a larger focus than the looming Horseman.

Katrina the blabber mouth couldn’t keep Marten’s secret to save his life and by the end of the book, she’d invited almost the entire town on it, it seemed! Just as she seemed to want to scandalize herself and Ichabod to the whole village. It left me wondering why she wanted to run away at all. Someone with her character, here, would have just told her father that she was marrying Ichabod and cared less about the consequences.

The former bewitched love was too far fetched for me and the ambivalence at the end had me rooting for Brom. The ending was sort of a play on whether Brom was or wasn’t responsible for the Horseman but also sort of out of nowhere and it all became a bit jumbled and clumsy and not the least bit believable.

I’m still waiting on a perfect rewrite that steers away from the more current trends in these books and takes on a fresh new look. That said, I’ll still read the sequel to see if the real Horseman is involved.
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273 reviews120 followers
October 22, 2024
📚Sleepy Hollow, Book 1, Sleepy Hollow Series
🖌️Author: Dax Varley
📝P.g.: 264
🗂️Genre: Paranormal fiction

“Another restless night. Every creak of a tree limb jolted me. Every call of an owl set me on edge. Sounds that usually lured me to sleep had me gripping my pillow. All reminders that it was his time. His territory. And he could be just outside my window...right now. “

🎃Summary:
Katrina is still haunted by her encounter with the Headless Horseman in the town of Sleepy Hollow. Now he has risen again and spreads terror, and marking his victims. Her terror is lessened when Ichabod Crane moves into town, the new schoolmaster. But the Headless Horseman is determined to take the head of his victims and Ichabod is his next victim.

🎃Review:
If you are familiar with the book “The Legend of Sleepy Hollow” by Washington Irving or have watched the movie “Sleepy Hollow” starring Johnny Depp, you know the premises of the story. What Dax Varley had done to the story is different. She transformed Katrina into a warrior, fighting for her loved ones and doing anything in her power to stop the Headless Horseman.

The story is written from her point of view, without any chapters, a thing which tires the reader but because the book is quite small, it’s not such a big of a deal. The plot is engaging, even though in the beginning it was slow placed.

Albeityou don’t expect the big reveal at the end of the book, it keeps you wanting for more as the story is concluded in the second book of the series “Return to Sleepy Hollow”

🎃Thoughts:
All in all, a perfect halloween read that would keep you entairtained.

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Profile Image for Therese Arkenberg.
Author 31 books15 followers
August 6, 2016
Dry legalese: I received a copy of this book through the LibraryThing Members Giveaways program in exchange for an honest review.

This book won me over, despite the sometimes awkward prose. The protagonist’s internal monologue intrudes in many cases when her thoughts are already “shown” by the action, and it feels like Varley is just trying to give Katrina the last word. There are also a handful of awkward typos, and *literally* is used figuratively at one point—which, wherever you stand on the debate in modern times, seems like an anachronism. The dialogue, however, is flawless, to the point that I could hear the characters speaking in my head. This only made it more jarring when I pulled back from the story and read lines like “the state of my condition” and “I looked a question at him”. Also, there are no chapter breaks—only some scene markers—so while this story was hard to put down anyway, it was a little more difficult than it needed to be on that point. I hope Varley considers adding chapters in her future stories.

Because the dialogue and imagery are strong, while the narration and inner monologue less so, I wound up approaching this like a screenplay. And it would make an awesome movie. Speaking of which, while at first I felt there were some similarities with Tim Burton’s Sleepy Hollow movie, it turns out most of those are rooted in the original Sleepy Hollow tale (except possibly Ichabod’s connection to witchcraft—but frankly, I think Dax Varley did an even better job than the movie with that by adding a clever twist…a twist of the knife in my heart, that is). Varley adds an air of conspiracy to Sleepy Hollow with the town’s ruling Council and its politics, and makes us care about a cast of fully-developed characters and a squee-out-loud adorkable romance between Ichabod and Katrina. Not to mention, by telling this story from Katrina’s point of view she gives voice at last to a female character who appears often in Sleepy Hollow retellings, but rarely gets to show it her way.

I fell for Ichabod Crane the second he started cracking jokes about the “tales of debauchery” he wrote back Hartford to pay his way through university. And I don’t usually like writer characters, so that says something. Varley’s choice to show excerpts from Ichabod’s writing didn’t pay off, I don’t think, because his style as written doesn’t fit with actual 18th century literature as I've read it (another case where the prose doesn’t live up to the story), but I like the way the man’s mind works, his insight into the female gender (refreshing in a historical male character) and his silly sense of humor. Plus he’s a cutie. I rooted for Katrina as she became desperate to save him and damn, did I want to crawl between the pages and give the poor guy a hug, between what was revealed of his past and the awful way he has to face not just the Horseman hunting him, but also the lynch mob the town turns into. The advice they give writers—“take the worst thing that can happen to your characters and do it”—is followed here.

Even more minor characters, like Katrina’s friends (male and female) and Brom, the anti-love interest, were fully developed and had their sympathetic moments as well as moments of very human screwing up. The Horseman had plenty of creepy imagery surrounding him—the details of his sword were a nice touch and, without spoilers, gave atmosphere to an already tense scene—although not scary enough to cause nightmares. Although there was one scene with a wrecked ship…

Compassion for the characters and keen suspense kept me reading as the story made plenty of twists and turns, all the way to a really twisted ending…so twisted I had to take a walk to clear my head after reading it. There are some lingering questions about the rules the Horseman operates on and the fate of minor characters, especially at Katrina’s plantation, enough to make me hope for a sequel (all the surviving characters deserve some happiness)!

Wrapping up with a few issues the story touched on: Katrina’s father owns a plantation in 18th century New York, when slavery was legal (the author’s done her research! Although I should note one nagging historical detail: many Hessians, rather than being greedy mercenaries, were often hired out by their feudal lords to fight in stranger’s wars. The Horseman may have a more tragic backstory than we realize). Ichabod is an abolitionist, proud of the emancipation laws already being passed in Connecticut (again, research is shown! But not in a dull doing-the-homework sort of way) and convinces Katrina’s father to let him teach the slave children to read and do sums. I was worried this may make Ichabod and Katrina White Savior types and the enslaved people into caricatures, and to be honest I’m uneasy with how often the slave characters get used as narrative devices and/or pushed to the side more often than the white minor characters, although this is partially because that’s how the society of Sleepy Hollow operates—enslaved people are there to be used and pushed aside. Katrina does show gratitude for what her servants do for her, and individuals like Leta and Isaiah show gumption and a sense of humor, although Simon’s giving Katrina a magical charm falls a bit too near the Magical Negro trope for my tastes. I’m also not clear on Katrina’s motivations with regards to the slaves—is she an abolitionist, even though slave labor is what her inheritance is built on? Clearly she’s motivated later by her relationship with abolitionist Ichabod, but it may have been more interesting to see more of her feelings and opinions developing. Another reason why I want a sequel, in which Katrina inherits the farm and frees the enslaved characters. Educated by Ichabod, they go on to start in their own stories and are all far too smart to ever run afoul of ghosts (Leta could become a monster hunter, she’s that genre savvy). That’s what happens and no-one can convince me otherwise.

The threatened sexual assault of female characters is a sore spot for me, so I pay attention when it crops up. Katrina is menaced by some truly despicable villains, but can clearly handle it. While it’s very unpleasant for her, I felt safe as a reader that I wouldn’t have to actually read about her being hurt, and there was some catharsis in how she takes revenge on the scum in question. From the feminist point of view, there’s also a nice throwaway line where Katrina and a girlfriend talk about the copy of 1001 Arabian Nights Ichabod lends them, and Katrina calls out the king/sultan on his virgin-murdering ways. She’s not going to quietly accept a happy ending for him with the final princess! And of course, Katrina’s own Ichabod is not at all despicable. As I may have mentioned, I like these characters a lot and would really love to read more about them. ;D
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134 reviews
February 26, 2024
I was excited for this one as I'd watched Sleepy Hollow (1999) for the first time last year and really enjoyed it. A retelling of the classic, with romance and mystery, sounded right up my alley.

The good things: it was easy to read, relatively fast-paced, and the plot surrounding the Horseman was engaging. I didn't care much for the romance, but when chaos ensued and danger happened, I was definitely paying attention.

The bad: writing was mediocre, characters lack depth, relationships felt hollow (HA!), and the worst crime this book did to me: the romance. I've been in a huge fantasy/gothic romance mood, so this should've satiated it. But nooo these 2 characters were professing their undying love to each other by page 90 and every single time they meet, I had to cringe so badly. It was incredibly cheesy, and for what reason?? I found it funny that they still barely knew each other by the end, and Katrina even said in the beginning he wouldn't be a perfect man, he had to have flaws. And yetttt, what do we know? He has none.

Also, completely my fault for not realizing this was YA when I got it. I was expecting an adult, or new adult book at best. This explains the simplistic writing style and insta-love romance. I might've enjoyed this much more when I was a teen, but it definitely doesn't do much for me now.

Overall, not a terrible book, but certainly not a masterpiece either. I won't be remembering much about this story, that's for sure. Not picking up book 2.
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597 reviews21 followers
December 3, 2022
This is a very interesting take on Washington Irving's The Legend of Sleepy Hollow. They both tell the story of The Headless Horseman, who is the ghost of a Hessian soldier who was decapitated by cannon fire during the Revolutionary War. In Dax Varley's version, Ichabod Crane is a sexy young school teacher who is hired to fill a vacancy when the previous school teacher is beheaded by the Headless Horseman. Katrina is determined to save Ichabod's life when he is marked by the Horseman to be his next victim. Katrina has already lost childhood friends to the Horseman, and she's determined to figure out how to stop him before that can happen to Ichabod.

I enjoyed this book very much. It was a very quick read, well written and interesting. Some characters were more fleshed out than others, but the story had a lot more going for it than against it. It definitely kept my attention and I'm looking forward to reading book 2 to see what happens next!

5/5 stars.
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428 reviews1 follower
October 4, 2018
I went in to this book expecting it to be bad. Retellings often are, maybe not inherently but because they lack the magic of the source material and it's impossible not to compare them. This book is not only surprisingly not bad, it's actually good. A little cheesy on the romance side, but that's to be expected from a YA book. In terms of it being a retelling of The Legend of Sleepy Hollow, it's impressive. It keeps the spirit of the original and sticks to the important things, but changes things that aren't quite......right for modern society. (Ichabod's attraction to Katrina being largely founded on her dad's money, his aptitude for physical disciple of his pupils, Irving's low-key but overt racism, etc). It would have benefited from a few more female characters that weren't bitchy caricatures, but overall a solid work.
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