This novel is a challenge to review and rate because I loved the first quarter and gradually lost interest until I just skimmed the last third and to be honest I did so with disengagement and my persistence in discovering the denouement, or to be accurate confirming what I had guessed, was almost an act of apology for not reading the novel. Why? because it is a very well written and constructed story - my problem is I don't care about Polidori, as a historical footnote in Byron's life, the creation of 'The Vampyre' or any other aspect of the so famous summer at the Villa Diodati. I am not interested in the real Polidori and Markovit's doesn't make me care about his fictional one.
But the failure is not Benjamin Markovit's - he is a brilliant writer and I am sure many readers will enjoy this novel and his others - I do wish to discourage anyone from reading him.
In honesty the problem is mine - Byron is a fascinating personage (though not one I have read much of - who does read Byron these days?) but it is more as an idol/icon or, to be honest a cliche - what adolescent/teenage boy doesn't (or didn't - what do I know of teenage boys today? Even if I did I probably wouldn't admit it least the worst conclusions be drawn) dream of being 'mad, bad and dangerous to know' whether as a poet, rock star or simply a celebrity bad boy. Byron is the man who gets the boys or girls, depending on which taste you wish to emphasise; he is beautiful, though more often overweight - he is the original celebrity dieter; an artist, poet and rebel; but also the first real celebrity known more for the scandal of his life than his works. But he was also an English nobleman with the arrogance of his class and his lavish kindnesses were often no more than the condescension of his class.
But we do not read Byron - we read about him - this novel is another contribution to that mountain of works, fiction and nonfiction, inspired by Byron. I can imagine Byron as a friend, I am sure I would have gone to bed with him (though I don't flatter myself that even when young he would have fancied me) but none of this makes it any more likely that I will read him and ultimately Byron is a writer, a poet, and if you aren't reading his works why read about his life?
Of course this isn't a Byron novel, it is a novel of the effect Byron had on others, But Polidori was also an author, if he matters it should be because of 'The Vampyre' - but I will never read it so again, why am I reading about him.
I am giving the novel three stars, it probably deserves four, but I can't be any kinder to a work, no matter how well written, that failed to hold my interest.