I had high hopes for this book because recently I've read several wonderful books set in the American West. It's not fun to write reviews for books that I don’t like but if I’m leaving a single star rating, I feel that I should explain why. I think I only persevered to finish this book so I could fairly give the rating. Admittedly, I was busy with moving into a new house at the time but, even considering that, it was a very slow read.
First and foremost is the overwhelming sense of exaggeration within the story. The story itself is not complicated but the prose seems overly ambitious. Every thought and action is expounded upon in what came to be a frustrating level of detail. It’s almost as if Meyers was shooting for a mystical and spiritual atmosphere instead it felt completely rambling, at times contradicting. There are also lengthy backgrounds provided on three main characters which felt bulky and separate from one another, further interrupting the flow of the story.
Second, the dialogue. I realize this is a Western setting; there are Native Americans and cowboys, and I’m sure that the author wanted the dialogue to sound natural. I generally don’t have a problem with that but Meyer’s unfortunate choice of words used to create this informal language didn’t work well at all. Here are some examples of what I mean:
“Want a go for a ride?”
“That kind a idea.”
“It could a been.”
“It should a been.”
So, I know these are simple cases of wanna, kinda, coulda, and shoulda, so why couldn’t they have been written this way? Those separated words felt so awkward and were used so frequently! I couldn’t get used to it even after 400 pages. It was like hitting little speed bumps as I read.
The book is about four men from very different backgrounds who, by becoming allies against a mean-spirited landowner, end up as unlikely friends. It was disquieting how this story played out and certain parts were very difficult to stomach. In my eyes, Meyers failed to convey the necessity or the urgency of what they were doing. I wasn’t convinced and I didn’t believe that it was The Work of Wolves.