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A Loyal Heart
Trust, honesty, love and loyalty... All keys to a successful relationship. Reed and Logan's marriage has lost one of those keys. Can they find it in time to save their union?
- GenresAfrican American Romance
106 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 11, 2020
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AshleyNicole
66 books807 followersI'm just a girl in love with literature. My love affair with romance novels started with I was 13 and has flourished into an obsession. I've always been a writer. Even when I was a little girl, I always had a pen and a notebook poised to let something out. You Make Me Better is my first project that will be published and I am STOKED. My goal is to write stories surrounding positive black love, with a little humor tossed in.
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February 8, 2021
**SPOILERS**
Are you f*ckin kidding me?!!! I had to wait three books just to find out Logan has been showin' her azz because she was pregnant?!!! Seriously?!!! There were so many other reasons I had in my mind for her behavior but, pregnancy damn sure wasn't one of them. Logan being pregnant is not a logical reason for her treating Reed the way she did for two months. It just doesn't make sense. Her being diagnosed with a terminal illness and given a 50/50 chance to live would've made more sense than her being pregnant. Especially, when she didn't get pregnant on purpose. If Logan honestly felt like Reed was going to leave her (which was a bunch of BS), she should've gotten the abortion and took that shyt to the grave. Given his personality and how much he loved Logan, Reed would've NEVER left her. This storyline was not thought out very well and, considering the build-up, it turned out to be a total let down. I'm just glad Mama Hale told convinced Reed not to leave his stupid azz wife although, she deserved it. And, that whole "April's Fool" reference went right over my head. I'm still trying to figure out what Reed meant. I was uber excited when daddy Hale finally got his boy. I almost shed a tear when they told him they were naming the baby Griffin. While the storyline was a bit ridiculous, A Loyal Heart was still a good book and I'm sad the Hale Sister's journey has come to an end.
Are you f*ckin kidding me?!!! I had to wait three books just to find out Logan has been showin' her azz because she was pregnant?!!! Seriously?!!! There were so many other reasons I had in my mind for her behavior but, pregnancy damn sure wasn't one of them. Logan being pregnant is not a logical reason for her treating Reed the way she did for two months. It just doesn't make sense. Her being diagnosed with a terminal illness and given a 50/50 chance to live would've made more sense than her being pregnant. Especially, when she didn't get pregnant on purpose. If Logan honestly felt like Reed was going to leave her (which was a bunch of BS), she should've gotten the abortion and took that shyt to the grave. Given his personality and how much he loved Logan, Reed would've NEVER left her. This storyline was not thought out very well and, considering the build-up, it turned out to be a total let down. I'm just glad Mama Hale told convinced Reed not to leave his stupid azz wife although, she deserved it. And, that whole "April's Fool" reference went right over my head. I'm still trying to figure out what Reed meant. I was uber excited when daddy Hale finally got his boy. I almost shed a tear when they told him they were naming the baby Griffin. While the storyline was a bit ridiculous, A Loyal Heart was still a good book and I'm sad the Hale Sister's journey has come to an end.
June 3, 2023
I’m mad because out of all the reasons that’s why Logan … Ashley that’s the best thing you could come up with?
September 9, 2022
IKYFL!!! This has to be a joke right?!!! This was the huge build-up I've been waiting for?!!! So, you mean to tell me, Logan has been acting like a grade A b*tch and disrespecting her husband so horribly because she was PREGNANT?!!!! She couldn't just have an adult conversation to revisit a decision she and Reed made 15 years ago?!!!! I have nothing else to say about Logan. I'm goin' to get a drink. 😒😒😒😒
April 16, 2022
A 5 star read but, Logan doesn't deserve 5 stars. SMDH at her stupidity!
March 26, 2024
3.5⭐️s cause Logan had me wanting to pull my hair out the whole book. Bless Reed and his patience for his wife. Glad everyone checked Logan’s ditsy self.
April 13, 2020
I'll take Reed. In this final installment of the Hale sisters, this was Logan's story. I knew it would have me in my feelings. The poor guy had no idea why his wife and lover of 20 years was off her rocker. Joey and Reggie tried to play it off, but it was clear everyone was worried. I figured out the little problem though. I was happy it was something special. And Reed had the patience of Job with his wife. I was ready to jump in to help out if needed. It was a relief, and happy things worked out. Reed is the man... I salute his patience and prowess....
September 16, 2023
4.5
Only because Reed made me upset with a thing ge thought near the end of the book. I actually read this book first out of the series cause I was too curious about why Logan was being a bitch🤭didn’t regret it, easily the best one in the series (even though Cru and Reggie also have my heart)
Only because Reed made me upset with a thing ge thought near the end of the book. I actually read this book first out of the series cause I was too curious about why Logan was being a bitch🤭didn’t regret it, easily the best one in the series (even though Cru and Reggie also have my heart)
April 12, 2020
If it wasn't for Reed!!!
I would have chucked my kindle and dropped this story! Logan was the least likable Hale sister throughout the series. And that held true to form in the final installment in which we deal with bee that's been in her bonnet since this series started. I was with the family, in that I wanted Reed to remain in the family if they ended up splitting, and Logan could kick rocks lol!! That being said, I still enjoyed the story and felt that Reed was the perfect representation of a good man period!!
I would have chucked my kindle and dropped this story! Logan was the least likable Hale sister throughout the series. And that held true to form in the final installment in which we deal with bee that's been in her bonnet since this series started. I was with the family, in that I wanted Reed to remain in the family if they ended up splitting, and Logan could kick rocks lol!! That being said, I still enjoyed the story and felt that Reed was the perfect representation of a good man period!!
April 13, 2020
AshleyNicole you out did yourself with this series! The humor and wittiness in this story had me rolling! I am so happy to find out what crawled up or better yet incubated in Logan! The story end on a high pitch that I hate to see the end of The Hales! You deserve a five star 🌟 sweetie!
April 13, 2020
Finally!!! I was bout ready to choke Logan out. She worked my nerves treating poor Reed like that with no explanation. This was a great end to an amazing series.
August 23, 2020
Wow!!!!!! I definitely was not expecting what I just read. This was very disappointing considering the build-up we received for this book. From the first book, there was tension surrounding Logan and her husband Reed. I was eager to find out the reason that had Logan exhibiting such childish behavior plus disrespecting her husband. When the reason was revealed, I could only laugh because it was indeed a joke. Logan irritated every bone in my body. So you meant to tell me you behaved this way based off a decision you and your husband made 15 YEARS AGO? You really didn’t feel the need to communicate with your husband because, you know, people change and plans change too? This book was very hard for me to believe or relate to because you just cannot behave this irrational and expect to get positive results. Reed is definitely a good man because there is no way I would have stayed and deal with the behavior Logan displayed. Whew! This book was a very far reach in my opinion. I will continue to read the catalog of this author but this book right here wasn’t it for me
August 10, 2023
“April Fools”…Not Funny
“A Loyal Heart: A Hale Girls Novella (The Hale Girls - - Book 3) was consistently hilarious (especially within their family cluster) and a great read. However, my only critique/criticism, Logan’s dramatics was unnecessary & she was a royal pain in the posterior. No spoilers here, but I suspected (from book 1 clues) her issues were physiological, not mental and definitely not justifiable by accusing Reed of infidelity. …What was weird, Reed’s random attempt at banter, stating “April Fools”. Wait what⁉️…in the midst of a divorce/pandemic/meltdown. Sorry, but that wasn’t funny., and uncharacteristic of Reed. Thereafter, most of their family members have great great sense of humor. Joey dances to her own music, cadence and vibrations🤷🏾♀️‼️She needs therapy for whatever undiagnosed disorders, phobias and or psychosis. Clearly, she has absolutely NO filters, ever. And anyone at anytime is her potential vulnerable prey 🤦🏾♀️😲🤣😂! …Meanwhile, I’m already looking forward to subsequent Hale family drama, events & updates. 👏🏽👏🏾👏🏿💐‼️
“A Loyal Heart: A Hale Girls Novella (The Hale Girls - - Book 3) was consistently hilarious (especially within their family cluster) and a great read. However, my only critique/criticism, Logan’s dramatics was unnecessary & she was a royal pain in the posterior. No spoilers here, but I suspected (from book 1 clues) her issues were physiological, not mental and definitely not justifiable by accusing Reed of infidelity. …What was weird, Reed’s random attempt at banter, stating “April Fools”. Wait what⁉️…in the midst of a divorce/pandemic/meltdown. Sorry, but that wasn’t funny., and uncharacteristic of Reed. Thereafter, most of their family members have great great sense of humor. Joey dances to her own music, cadence and vibrations🤷🏾♀️‼️She needs therapy for whatever undiagnosed disorders, phobias and or psychosis. Clearly, she has absolutely NO filters, ever. And anyone at anytime is her potential vulnerable prey 🤦🏾♀️😲🤣😂! …Meanwhile, I’m already looking forward to subsequent Hale family drama, events & updates. 👏🏽👏🏾👏🏿💐‼️
December 20, 2021
Really🤨?
2.5 Stars
I figured I wouldn't love Logan's story and I was right. I get why she was scared, yet what she did was extreme for no reason at all. You mean to tell me that you've been with and known a man, the love of your life, your husband, for over 20 years and you can't talk to him about a life y'all created🤨? Make it make sense🤔! I wasn't feeling it and kind of would've accepted her cheating over what happened.
The only thing that truly pulled this story together for me was the humor and of course Reed, Logan's husband's, Unconditional Love for her. A lesser man would've left her and her f***ery. She was straight buggin...WOW!
Can't say I enjoyed this wrap up, yet I hope these sisters will pop up in more books, giving more updates on their love lives.
I still suggest reading about the Hale sisters. The humor alone is beyond worth it.
2.5 Stars
I figured I wouldn't love Logan's story and I was right. I get why she was scared, yet what she did was extreme for no reason at all. You mean to tell me that you've been with and known a man, the love of your life, your husband, for over 20 years and you can't talk to him about a life y'all created🤨? Make it make sense🤔! I wasn't feeling it and kind of would've accepted her cheating over what happened.
The only thing that truly pulled this story together for me was the humor and of course Reed, Logan's husband's, Unconditional Love for her. A lesser man would've left her and her f***ery. She was straight buggin...WOW!
Can't say I enjoyed this wrap up, yet I hope these sisters will pop up in more books, giving more updates on their love lives.
I still suggest reading about the Hale sisters. The humor alone is beyond worth it.
January 3, 2022
The Finale
Well, that wrapped up the Hale sisters, it was a great finale. I had a hunch that Logan was pregnant when Joey pointed out the weight gain. I am glad that she and Reed worked everything out. I am also glad Mr. Griffin finally got a boy in the family. His first grandchild and his namesake.
Joey was still the wild, straight shooter, no filter sister that just did not cut her tongue but she was hilarious. The famous line of whether she did not know if she "wanted to be the uncle or aunt" was hilarious. I was glad she and Shane were still going strong. I was also glad Reggie is finally getting her couple of forever with Cru. I will be looking forward to upcoming books and see if they pop in one or two.
I definitely recommend to download and enjoy make sure to start with Joey's novella.
Well, that wrapped up the Hale sisters, it was a great finale. I had a hunch that Logan was pregnant when Joey pointed out the weight gain. I am glad that she and Reed worked everything out. I am also glad Mr. Griffin finally got a boy in the family. His first grandchild and his namesake.
Joey was still the wild, straight shooter, no filter sister that just did not cut her tongue but she was hilarious. The famous line of whether she did not know if she "wanted to be the uncle or aunt" was hilarious. I was glad she and Shane were still going strong. I was also glad Reggie is finally getting her couple of forever with Cru. I will be looking forward to upcoming books and see if they pop in one or two.
I definitely recommend to download and enjoy make sure to start with Joey's novella.
January 9, 2021
Not a Logan Fan!
I absolutely love all of the characters in the Hale sister’s series except for Logan. Logan was just mean and stupid for no reason at all. It was very hard to believe that she truly loved Reed because of the way she treated him. There is no way that you treat someone you love like that. So obviously, their love was not what it was made out to be. I would have divorced her and not looked back had that been me. Anyway, Joey was a riot as usual. I would love to have a family sequel with more emphasis on Shane and Joey.
I absolutely love all of the characters in the Hale sister’s series except for Logan. Logan was just mean and stupid for no reason at all. It was very hard to believe that she truly loved Reed because of the way she treated him. There is no way that you treat someone you love like that. So obviously, their love was not what it was made out to be. I would have divorced her and not looked back had that been me. Anyway, Joey was a riot as usual. I would love to have a family sequel with more emphasis on Shane and Joey.
May 31, 2020
Communication is key!
Logan and Reed been together forever and made plans based on what they wanted for their futures. Things don’t always pan out the way you think they should but sometimes you just have to ride it out with the one you love. Logan really put him through a lot of unnecessary drama because she couldn’t communicate her feelings. Thankfully, Reed understands her crazy and stuck it out.
Logan and Reed been together forever and made plans based on what they wanted for their futures. Things don’t always pan out the way you think they should but sometimes you just have to ride it out with the one you love. Logan really put him through a lot of unnecessary drama because she couldn’t communicate her feelings. Thankfully, Reed understands her crazy and stuck it out.
June 21, 2020
Interesting
I had been wondering why Logan was pushing Reed away sing Joey and Shane 's story. When I finally found out I must admit it was not what I expected but I was not surprised. I agree with other reviewers, she handled their situation poorly. But I understand she panicked and clearly didn't think about what she was doing. This was not my favorite of the three books, but I liked it none the less.
I had been wondering why Logan was pushing Reed away sing Joey and Shane 's story. When I finally found out I must admit it was not what I expected but I was not surprised. I agree with other reviewers, she handled their situation poorly. But I understand she panicked and clearly didn't think about what she was doing. This was not my favorite of the three books, but I liked it none the less.
June 26, 2020
A Loyal Heart
Ummmm I did not know what to think was happening with Logan. Reed definitely seemed like all her craziness towards him had come to an end because he was done done. It's like they both knew they would be miserable without each other but Logan still had to test that theory. I loved their love though. It went from when they were young up until now and I love that. Definitely a bomb series with The Hale Sisters!!!
Ummmm I did not know what to think was happening with Logan. Reed definitely seemed like all her craziness towards him had come to an end because he was done done. It's like they both knew they would be miserable without each other but Logan still had to test that theory. I loved their love though. It went from when they were young up until now and I love that. Definitely a bomb series with The Hale Sisters!!!
July 22, 2020
Logan and Reed
This last ride with the Hale family is bittersweet. Logan, girl worked my nerves. I prayed for Reed throughout this book. I guessed what the issue was in the second book, but learning the back story was interesting. I'm surely going to miss my girl Joey. I cried laughing at the end, Aladdin will never be the same for me! Cowboy boots and tassels too! 😂 Uncle Joey needs an update eventually, I know she won't be quiet for long.
This last ride with the Hale family is bittersweet. Logan, girl worked my nerves. I prayed for Reed throughout this book. I guessed what the issue was in the second book, but learning the back story was interesting. I'm surely going to miss my girl Joey. I cried laughing at the end, Aladdin will never be the same for me! Cowboy boots and tassels too! 😂 Uncle Joey needs an update eventually, I know she won't be quiet for long.
December 19, 2020
Logan has been redeemed!!
Whew, for two books now I've been ready to toss Logan out with the trash!!! Logan has been redeemed and all is right with the fellas. The entire time Reed was going through it I never believed it was on him. This was the balance that was needed to make everything line up with each of these characters. This author was on point and her creativity flowed throughout this book. A great read!!
Whew, for two books now I've been ready to toss Logan out with the trash!!! Logan has been redeemed and all is right with the fellas. The entire time Reed was going through it I never believed it was on him. This was the balance that was needed to make everything line up with each of these characters. This author was on point and her creativity flowed throughout this book. A great read!!
January 27, 2021
Another okay read. Logan's story made no sense to me and it was hard to read. Everybody walked on eggshells for months. This story was another copy of the first book from another point of view. Logan was my least favorite character out of the sisters. Overly dramatic for what should have been an easy conversation to have with someone you have been with for twenty years. Maybe if the plot was more developed I could relate, but there was not enough substance.
June 13, 2020
A Loyal ❤ : A Hale Girls novella (The Hale Girks Book 3)
The last and final novella is about the oldest Hale sister Logan Raia (sp?) & her husband Reed's twenty year marriage. It ends quite well with 👪, 💘 and a new 👶. I enjoyed this story though I wanted to shake some sense into the main character...IJS.
The last and final novella is about the oldest Hale sister Logan Raia (sp?) & her husband Reed's twenty year marriage. It ends quite well with 👪, 💘 and a new 👶. I enjoyed this story though I wanted to shake some sense into the main character...IJS.
December 31, 2020
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!!!!
I have been so entertained with the Hale sisters! I’m so glad that Logan and Reed got it together. Joey cutting up, Reggie wasn’t shortstopping herself. Just laughter, love, and family. Please read the whole series from the beginning. You will not be disappointed.
I have been so entertained with the Hale sisters! I’m so glad that Logan and Reed got it together. Joey cutting up, Reggie wasn’t shortstopping herself. Just laughter, love, and family. Please read the whole series from the beginning. You will not be disappointed.
March 18, 2021
Logan and Reed
I wasn't expecting to cry or like Logan but Loyal Heart is definitely my favorite. Marriage isn't easy and things and people change over the years but communication is key. Logan went a little too far with the lie and treatment of Reed but they won in the end. Thanks for the Hale Girls!!
I wasn't expecting to cry or like Logan but Loyal Heart is definitely my favorite. Marriage isn't easy and things and people change over the years but communication is key. Logan went a little too far with the lie and treatment of Reed but they won in the end. Thanks for the Hale Girls!!
June 3, 2021
Logan and Reed
Wow!! Logan was so immature, petty and childish. I wanted to ring her neck. Reed was way too kind with her, but that's the love of his life, so I respect it. He was patient and fought hard for his marriage. All it took was a simple conversation and Logan failed miserably. I loved getting to know the Hale sisters.
Wow!! Logan was so immature, petty and childish. I wanted to ring her neck. Reed was way too kind with her, but that's the love of his life, so I respect it. He was patient and fought hard for his marriage. All it took was a simple conversation and Logan failed miserably. I loved getting to know the Hale sisters.
July 20, 2021
Loved it
I loved all 3 of the books about the Hale sisters, I was a little upset with Logan she was a little dramatic instead of just telling her husband what was the matter. I hope we can get a follow up on how things are going the wedding for Regi and if, she had a baby and Joey and Shane situation.
I loved all 3 of the books about the Hale sisters, I was a little upset with Logan she was a little dramatic instead of just telling her husband what was the matter. I hope we can get a follow up on how things are going the wedding for Regi and if, she had a baby and Joey and Shane situation.
February 9, 2022
Confirmed
I guessed the dilemma back in Joey & Shane’s book but needed the confirmation in Logan and Reed’s.
The whole series was so much fun. I loved Joseph! Her mouth was so reckless but absolutely hilarious!
Loved every minute of the Hale’s. Hope to get cameos of them in future books or short holiday shorts. What would it be like for Joseph to get pregnant 🥴🥴😂😂😂
I guessed the dilemma back in Joey & Shane’s book but needed the confirmation in Logan and Reed’s.
The whole series was so much fun. I loved Joseph! Her mouth was so reckless but absolutely hilarious!
Loved every minute of the Hale’s. Hope to get cameos of them in future books or short holiday shorts. What would it be like for Joseph to get pregnant 🥴🥴😂😂😂
May 9, 2022
A Loyal Heart
Whew, honeeey!
Ms. Logan!!! 🤔
I understood how she felt and her concern was VERY real because ppl have been known to react how she feared Reed would BUT sis was extra x2 😩
Although extra, I enjoyed the story. I just wished sis had talked to SOMEBODY at least once cause she did the most 🤣🤣
Happy reading 💖
Whew, honeeey!
Ms. Logan!!! 🤔
I understood how she felt and her concern was VERY real because ppl have been known to react how she feared Reed would BUT sis was extra x2 😩
Although extra, I enjoyed the story. I just wished sis had talked to SOMEBODY at least once cause she did the most 🤣🤣
Happy reading 💖
June 30, 2020
I have fallen in love
I've read 5 of her novellas in the last 2 days. I am really digging this author. Kindle unlimited or not I would pay to read her books. I laugh, I smile and I escape from the everyday.
I've read 5 of her novellas in the last 2 days. I am really digging this author. Kindle unlimited or not I would pay to read her books. I laugh, I smile and I escape from the everyday.
November 29, 2020
No
I did not enjoy any of the books in this series. I skipped through this one which was predictable. The other two i didn't even finish. Couldn't get into them. First time reading books from this author that I didn't like.
I did not enjoy any of the books in this series. I skipped through this one which was predictable. The other two i didn't even finish. Couldn't get into them. First time reading books from this author that I didn't like.
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