Spanked Brats: The Trespasser

by Harley Laroux

This stubborn brat is going to learn that trespassing brings stinging consequences...


Rachel doesn't see any harm in breaking into the Bradley Estate on her way home from university classes: no one lives there anyway! It's the perfect opportunity to skinny dip in the beautiful pool - that is, until she's caught in the act by the Bradley's handsome son, Dean.


Dean gives Rachel a choice: submit to his heavy-handed punishment, or submit to the law. Rachel chooses to be spanked, and is soon kicking and screaming over Dean's lap. But as the spanking goes on, and Rachel's bottom grows even redder, she begins to discover that Dean's brand of strict discipline turns her on.


This Spanking & Discipline oriented erotic short story is written in First Person POV and is about 12k words in length. This is NOT a romance. This is a quick and dirty read, intended to titillate and inspire your inner spankophile! All characters are over 18 years of age. This spanking tale features a Dominant man and submissive woman.


WARNING! These are the fetishes/kinks within...domestic discipline (administered by a stranger), spanking, dubcon/dubious consent (related to protesting punishment/discipline), tears/crying, begging, degradation and degrading language, scolding, ENF (embarrassed naked female), raw sex (no condom use), creampie, cum swallowing, oral sex, gagging/saliva related to oral sex, restraint, fingering.

Genres: BDSM, Novella, Smut, Erotica, Romance, Short Stories, Dark Romance

31 pages, Kindle Edition

First published April 25, 2020

About the author

Harley is an author of Adult Romance and Erotica. They write kink-positive, steamy love stories with queer protagonists, dangerous stakes, and haunting atmospheres.

Harley lives in Washington state with their husband and three cats. Most days they can be found at their desk drinking tea with at least one cat on their lap.

Reviews

[Michelle · Rating 4 out of 5]

Rachel gets more than she bargained for when she sunbathes in her neighbours empty villa complex. Found by Dean, her neighbours son, he takes Rachel in hand to see the error of her ways.

Laroux as usual achieves everything in these 40 pages and with CNC being the underlying theme throughout. I really appreciate everything the author is doing here.

At time of posting this short story is available on Kindle Unlimited.

[RoyJohnson490 · Rating 3 out of 5]

Did I get a Kindle Unlimited free trial just so I could read this smut? Yes. Do I regret it? A little bit. Am I nervous to even acknowledge I read this? Absolutely.

But fuck it. When has shame ever stopped me from doing anything? (Plenty of times but that's besides the point.)

Look you know what you're getting into when you read a work like this. Girl trespasses on hot rich dude's place. Hot rich dude finds out. Hot rich dude spanks the booty until it looks like a fresh red tomato. Yadda yadda yadda.

I'll be blunt. I'm a horny boy who enjoys me some good smut. And this was good smut. Also, the cover had a butt on it and I like a good butt.

Maybe me giving this a 3/5 is, in part, because I'm nervous of even acknowledging this book's existence. Maybe this is me believing there is probably better and sexier smut out there. But as a sex-positive feminist, I should be unafraid to acknowledge when a work of smut did its job successfully. And I can definitely say this did its job successfully.

[Darlene I read WAY to many books · Rating 3 out of 5]

This is not really romance? Just plain smut and dirty times ;)

Rachel girl.. thats pretty much my start she decided to break into a house because she believes no one is their and hasnt been their for ages.. and boy is she wrong.. and she and Owners son Dean have a very hot steamy vibes between them..but before that can happen he informs her she has a choice go to jail for trespassing or his form of punishment.. and boy thats all i can say 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Lots of spanking pretty much the whole book is that.. with dash of sex. Kinda wish there was alittle more on relationship. Maybe a start to one.. its a open end type of ending

Tiny drama, Sexy times, no virgins

Recommend-maybe
Cover-⭐⭐


Domestic discipline (administered by a stranger)
Spanking (tons)
dom/sub undertons
dubcon/dubious consent (during punishment)
Aftercare
Degradation
No condom
HFN

[BobbyH · Rating 4 out of 5]

Yum..

A quick read about a college girl trespassing in a big empty known house with a swimming pool which she sneaks into. Unbeknown to her, one of the owners son's is staying there who spies her & decides to teach her a lesson, the only way he knows i.e a good spanking & rulering plus of course, a good rogering to end with. Lucky bugga !!!

[amanda · Rating 2 out of 5]

read Dec 30, 2022 - Dec 30, 2022: 2 stars

[Käthe · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book gave me "Call Me Maybe" music video vibes and it definitely earned its spot in my list of favorite erotica novellas.
Rachel is a little stupid. I mean, come on, going skinny dipping in some stranger's pool when you don't actually know if there aren't any employees on the grounds.
And yeah, it just gets worse from thereon, thanks to Dean.
Along with Manson from the Dare and Aiden from Dirty First Dates: The Arcade, Dean is definitely the patient sort of dom who can still be scary enough if he wants, and I LOVE that about him.
I really like how he emphasized the whole "I don't want to hurt you, I just want to teach you a lesson" ordeal, because along with the consent, that's another thing people often overlook or ignore when it comes to BDSM - even though it is crucial.
And since we're speaking of consent, there is plenty of that too.
I understand that this is a spanking-centered story and hence it might be catered more towards people with a spanking fetish - but honestly, it's in the name, so what are you expecting.
Just like most of Harley's stories, this one has a few morals that make it a worthwhile read.

[Karly Wise · Rating 3 out of 5]

⭐⭐⭐/5
🔥🔥🔥🔥/5

Kinks: Discipline; Spanking; Dub-Con; Tears/Crying; Begging; Degradation; Humiliation; Raw Sex; Bondage

Tropes:
Trespasser/Homeowners Son
Strangers
Punishment
Erotica
Less Than 50 Pages

Harley is truly the queen of uber short, one sitting, erotic short stories. This is 31 pages of pure punishing goodness.

[J.B. Sharp · Rating 4 out of 5]

I keep coming back for more with these little bites of naughty from Harley! Quick, hot and just enough to leave you satisfied ;)

[Naiara Chiquetto · Rating 5 out of 5]

Girl invades guy’s house to use the pool. Guy decides to teacher her some manners through submission. Girl and guy end up having a lot of fun with a very red bottom and many tears. Delicious.

[Renee · Rating 5 out of 5]

10/10

I love Dean. Dean is the best.

Best book I've read this week.

[isa (queenofswordsandwords) · Rating 3 out of 5]

this was fine, it's a quick story so there is not much to discuss. you get what the blurb says.

[mads · Rating 3 out of 5]

making my way through Harley’s oeuvre, don’t mind meee 🤸🏻‍♀️this one is naturally another great, short, & very smutty story

[Taylor Cerny · Rating 4 out of 5]

Spanked Brats by Harley LaRoux - 4/5 stars

This was another of LaRoux's short form erotic fiction, and another super fun and quick read. This one was not quite as memorable to me as some of her darker stories, but it was sexy and fun, giving a twist to the idea of a girl being punished for trespassing.

Something that I really appreciated from this story was that despite the two MC's being complete strangers, and one breaking into the other's property, there was still consent throughout.

A fun story from LaRoux, quick and sexy!

[Sorcha Rowan · Rating 5 out of 5]

Yes, Harley has a thing. Yes, there are themes and situations she puts her characters in again and again. Yes, there's spanking and it's SO FUCKING GOOD. Why do I keep reading these? It's a question one reviewer asked and I'll answer it. Her stories are sexy, well written, and a definite non-guilty pleasure. I will forever and always read a Harley Laroux book asap.

[Betty Jo · Rating 3 out of 5]

I’m trying to read all of Harleys backlist. This is 31 pages of a girl getting spanked for trespassing at a house nobody was supposed to be home at. The son finds her naked lounging at the pool after she ruined their grass jumping the wall so now he has to punish her. This is a very “ok well I read it” kinda three stars.

[Jacqueline (on brand) · Rating 5 out of 5]

Trespassing has consequences

Trespass at the neighbors fancy home? Check

Use their pool? Check

Get caught red handed and get your a** handed to you?!?! Ya da*n straight!!!

This one was another hot read by Harley

[Bárbara · Rating 2 out of 5]

Realmente es un 2,5. Es una historia erótica, muy pwp y agradezco la sinceridad de la autora, que al principio te pone que no es una historia romántica ni de amor (ni pretende serlo, es más, lo toma como experimentación personal de la persona que lee por si siente ganas de saber cosas sobre ciertos kinks) y por poner los tw al principio. No me parece que escriba mal, es más me deja con ganas de leer alguna de sus otras historias, pero si se lleva el 2,5 es por el dubius-con/non-con (y porque los personajes, sobre todo el femenino, lo aceptaba sin problema Y SÉ QUE ES FICCIÓN pero no puedo no racionalizar las cosas), pensaba que no me iba a importar pero me fue una traba a la hora de disfrutar más de la historia.

[Trini · Rating 5 out of 5]

Highly erotic story of submission

I enjoyed reading this story by Harley Laroux. She writes very well describing for my imagination the sexy arousal happening to Rachel while getting her punishment from Dean for what she comes to know. Her behaviour as a spoiled brat has gone unchecked until now. Her body and mind move towards uncharted waters as she breaks down realising she deserves her punishment and admitting it fuels her desire; her need to please and get her needs satisfied.

[Buffy · Rating 3 out of 5]

I love spanking stories and quite enjoyed reading Harley Laroux, so when someone recommended this for a story on brats, I had to check it out. Overall, this is decent smut with spanking scenes. Rachel is a brat (and quite an annoying one), and she gets to experience discipline when she meets the strong and handsome Dean. It's not my favorite erotic story, but it's well-written. I would love to read more stories like this by Harley and wish there's a sequel to tell the story of these two to add more romance elements.

[— nova · Rating 3 out of 5]

rachel has made a habit of jumping the fence of an estate house to go swimming during the summer when she knows no one lives there. she's caught by the son of the owners, dean, and taught a lesson.

i've enjoyed everything Harley Laroux has written so far including this one. it was a short, smutty read with just a bit of plot. definitely not my favorite, but still good.

[Alex · Rating 3 out of 5]

Rachel has been sneaking into a pool all summer while the tenets are away but one day, as she tans in the nude, she is found by the owner’s son. His options are for the police to be called or for her to submit for punishment.

There is no such thing as a bad Harley book and all of them have kink which is the correct method of writing- I’ll die on that hill.

Includes spanking.

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
POV: Solo 1st

[nat · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.5 ⭐️
honestly fun kane kinky novella, which was hot
rachel’s trespasses a house to use a pool and gets caught by the owners son dean who gives her the option of cops or getting spanked by him
that was basically the whole sum of this novella and it was a fun time, could see it getting turned into a full length if the author ever went back to it because of the open ending and would love it if it did

[Lysette Turner · Rating 5 out of 5]

A spanking delight!

I'm actually not the biggest fan of spanking but Harley's use of it here is SO HOT I get why so many people go nuts for it. The punishment scenes are filled with exciting anticipation building to tremendous crescendo. This book is a great & sexy intro to the genre for anyone curious.

[Elena · Rating 3 out of 5]

Listen, it shouldn't be so embarrassing to acknowledge that I read this book, but it is.

Anyways, it was a good smutty story. Miss Harley Laroux certainly knows how to write spiciness.

The story delivers what it promises and makes for an enjoyable short read.

[Alana Sanchez · Rating 3 out of 5]

I give thus 2.5 it was really quick read but novellas this short can't rate much but it was fun and short wasn't my favorite of Harleys novellas but it was alright love this authors writing wrote some of my favorite books

[Yara · Rating 5 out of 5]

I love it 🥺 I loved it when he held her in his arms after spanking her 🥺 I loved how he was actually sweet and caring 🥺 we need a part 2 where they actually get together but she acts up on purpose for him to spank her and he knows and enjoys it

[Cheryl · Rating 3 out of 5]

Fast read

I appreciated how open the author wrote the blurb and how her writing of this trope reflected on the characters. It really fit a niche want of a very quick read with a little bit of a kink.

[Lagena · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fun fast read

This was my first book by this author. It was a fun and fast read. Perfect read right before bed.

[Patti · Rating 3 out of 5]

quick, short smut read

[layla · Rating 3 out of 5]

foi uma leitura diferente mas bem interessante. Fluiu bem fácil e eu terminei em menos de 30 minutos.