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Remembrance of the Past: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
In Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice, Elizabeth Bennet unexpectedly met Mr. Darcy while visiting Pemberley. In this 'what if' story, Elizabeth Bennet and her relatives - Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner - are in London, ready to start their tour to the Lakes in June. During this time, Elizabeth's path crosses with Mr. Darcy's again. However, Mr. Darcy is not alone in London: besides his close family - Georgiana and Colonel Fitzwilliam - an old and dear friend has returned and claimed a well-deserved place in their lives. This is a story about hopes and desires, about losses and fears, about second chances and happiness. Second Edition (First Edition 2009)
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October 29, 2017
This was a very long read, so - you got your money's worth. There are two parallel main romances going on which can confuse us and do confuse Elizabeth. Elizabeth turns into a blushing tongue-tied, head down onlooker, as she sees the interaction between Darcy and Lady Cassandra. But Darcy is also giving her the green light with his attentions...just what does he propose by that? There are several side romances also.
Many other reviewers have set down the story line so pardon me if I jump from one segment to another.
First of all: Lady Cassandra remains an enigma...even though we have our happy ending. The relationship between her and Col. Fitzwilliam (Oh, and I was jarred every time I read of him as "David" - somehow an earlier author dubbing him as "Richard" imprinted on my brain.) was so uneven. We learn very late in the story *spoiler* that both of them had a serious attraction back at the time of Lady Cassandra's coming out ball. Now - knowing the Colonel and getting to know Lady Cassandra, I find it hard to believe that they kept this all to themselves for so many years. I agree with others that Cassandra is like a "nice' Lady Catherine but "wow & ouch" she really knew how to step on toes and didn't give a cat's meow as she did so. But then she also misinterprets Col. Fitzwilliam's not coming over and demanding an answer to his proposal after a period of time and a rain storm. Sometimes she contradicted what seemed to be her character's outspoken frankness. And to take him into her bed and then basically snub him the next day??? This lady, obviously needs major therapy. Yes, she went through a lot but couldn't seem to settle on what fate would allow her even though she had the answer for everyone else. I was happy in the end with that couple and the epilogue telling up of their child.
Elizabeth and Darcy: he had a lot more depth in this story, especially as we learn of his going to Lady Cassandra's aid and his actions with the villain in this story. I liked reading how he decided to take the second chance but was disappointed that early-on he didn't realize that Cassandra's place in his life could be misinterpreted by Elizabeth. The interruption in his planned second proposal gave us a bit of angst as events from the canon came into play.
The development of the sexual relationship between ODC in this story was much more realistic (for me) than in so many other books. Elizabeth learns to enjoy the various parts gradually as her innocence is gone and her body adjusts. I hate it when virgins enjoy sex and all its aspects their first time in bed. (I think I need to go back and re-read "Everything You Wanted to Know about Sex and Were Afraid to Ask" from my college days - am I that ignorant of how things work? DON'T ANSWER THAT!) But then, too, I was at a point of just wanting to skim over those sections as there were so many. Visits back and forth between bedrooms for snuggles or to check in on how our patient is doing or to satisfy a hunger (as for David and Cassandra) just happened more than anyone could believe anywhere near realistic in that day and age. Lock Georgiana up or she is going to stumble on someone or another going into or out of a bedroom not their own.
Bingley and Jane were nicely handled with Bingley realizing that he has to take blame if he doesn't make a decision based on his own observations and feelings. And, even though I basically hate Caroline, my heart went out to her in the hand fate dealt her. Additionally, as others have stated, really enjoyed Mr. Bennet responding to Lady Catwitch as he did! Right-on!
Loved the Epilogue. Would recommend this book to anyone and everyone and will re-read in the future.
I read this for a second time as I had won a paperback copy in the grand raffle prize for the blog tour of The Darcy Monologues.
Many other reviewers have set down the story line so pardon me if I jump from one segment to another.
First of all: Lady Cassandra remains an enigma...even though we have our happy ending. The relationship between her and Col. Fitzwilliam (Oh, and I was jarred every time I read of him as "David" - somehow an earlier author dubbing him as "Richard" imprinted on my brain.) was so uneven. We learn very late in the story *spoiler* that both of them had a serious attraction back at the time of Lady Cassandra's coming out ball. Now - knowing the Colonel and getting to know Lady Cassandra, I find it hard to believe that they kept this all to themselves for so many years. I agree with others that Cassandra is like a "nice' Lady Catherine but "wow & ouch" she really knew how to step on toes and didn't give a cat's meow as she did so. But then she also misinterprets Col. Fitzwilliam's not coming over and demanding an answer to his proposal after a period of time and a rain storm. Sometimes she contradicted what seemed to be her character's outspoken frankness. And to take him into her bed and then basically snub him the next day??? This lady, obviously needs major therapy. Yes, she went through a lot but couldn't seem to settle on what fate would allow her even though she had the answer for everyone else. I was happy in the end with that couple and the epilogue telling up of their child.
Elizabeth and Darcy: he had a lot more depth in this story, especially as we learn of his going to Lady Cassandra's aid and his actions with the villain in this story. I liked reading how he decided to take the second chance but was disappointed that early-on he didn't realize that Cassandra's place in his life could be misinterpreted by Elizabeth. The interruption in his planned second proposal gave us a bit of angst as events from the canon came into play.
The development of the sexual relationship between ODC in this story was much more realistic (for me) than in so many other books. Elizabeth learns to enjoy the various parts gradually as her innocence is gone and her body adjusts. I hate it when virgins enjoy sex and all its aspects their first time in bed. (I think I need to go back and re-read "Everything You Wanted to Know about Sex and Were Afraid to Ask" from my college days - am I that ignorant of how things work? DON'T ANSWER THAT!) But then, too, I was at a point of just wanting to skim over those sections as there were so many. Visits back and forth between bedrooms for snuggles or to check in on how our patient is doing or to satisfy a hunger (as for David and Cassandra) just happened more than anyone could believe anywhere near realistic in that day and age. Lock Georgiana up or she is going to stumble on someone or another going into or out of a bedroom not their own.
Bingley and Jane were nicely handled with Bingley realizing that he has to take blame if he doesn't make a decision based on his own observations and feelings. And, even though I basically hate Caroline, my heart went out to her in the hand fate dealt her. Additionally, as others have stated, really enjoyed Mr. Bennet responding to Lady Catwitch as he did! Right-on!
Loved the Epilogue. Would recommend this book to anyone and everyone and will re-read in the future.
I read this for a second time as I had won a paperback copy in the grand raffle prize for the blog tour of The Darcy Monologues.
December 19, 2017
This was a very long read, so - you got your money's worth. There are two parallel main romances going on which can confuse us and do confuse Elizabeth. Elizabeth turns into a blushing tongue-tied, head down onlooker, as she sees the interaction between Darcy and Lady Cassandra. But Darcy is also giving her the green light with his attentions...just what does he propose by that? There are several side romances also.
Many other reviewers have set down the story line so pardon me if I jump from one segment to another.
First of all: Lady Cassandra remains an enigma...even though we have our happy ending. The relationship between her and Col. Fitzwilliam (Oh, and I was jarred every time I read of him as "David" - somehow an earlier author dubbing him as "Richard" imprinted on my brain.) was so uneven. We learn very late in the story *spoiler* that both of them had a serious attraction back at the time of Lady Cassandra's coming out ball. Now - knowing the Colonel and getting to know Lady Cassandra, I find it hard to believe that they kept this all to themselves for so many years. I agree with others that Cassandra is like a "nice' Lady Catherine but "wow & ouch" she really knew how to step on toes and didn't give a cat's meow as she did so. But then she also misinterprets Col. Fitzwilliam's not coming over and demanding an answer to his proposal after a period of time and a rain storm. Sometimes she contradicted what seemed to be her character's outspoken frankness. And to take him into her bed and then basically snub him the next day??? This lady, obviously needs major therapy. Yes, she went through a lot but couldn't seem to settle on what fate would allow her even though she had the answer for everyone else. I was happy in the end with that couple and the epilogue telling up of their child.
Elizabeth and Darcy: he had a lot more depth in this story, especially as we learn of his going to Lady Cassandra's aid and his actions with the villain in this story. I liked reading how he decided to take the second chance but was disappointed that early-on he didn't realize that Cassandra's place in his life could be misinterpreted by Elizabeth. The interruption in his planned second proposal gave us a bit of angst as events from the canon came into play.
The development of the sexual relationship between ODC in this story was much more realistic (for me) than in so many other books. Elizabeth learns to enjoy the various parts gradually as her innocence is gone and her body adjusts. I hate it when virgins enjoy sex and all its aspects their first time in bed. (I think I need to go back and re-read "Everything You Wanted to Know about Sex and Were Afraid to Ask" from my college days - am I that ignorant of how things work? DON'T ANSWER THAT!) But then, too, I was at a point of just wanting to skim over those sections as there were so many. Visits back and forth between bedrooms for snuggles or to check in on how our patient is doing or to satisfy a hunger (as for David and Cassandra) just happened more than anyone could believe anywhere near realistic in that day and age. Lock Georgiana up or she is going to stumble on someone or another going into or out of a bedroom not their own.
Bingley and Jane were nicely handled with Bingley realizing that he has to take blame if he doesn't make a decision based on his own observations and feelings. And, even though I basically hate Caroline, my heart went out to her in the hand fate dealt her. Additionally, as others have stated, really enjoyed Mr. Bennet responding to Lady Catwitch as he did! Right-on!
Loved the Epilogue. Would recommend this book to anyone and everyone and will re-read in the future.
Many other reviewers have set down the story line so pardon me if I jump from one segment to another.
First of all: Lady Cassandra remains an enigma...even though we have our happy ending. The relationship between her and Col. Fitzwilliam (Oh, and I was jarred every time I read of him as "David" - somehow an earlier author dubbing him as "Richard" imprinted on my brain.) was so uneven. We learn very late in the story *spoiler* that both of them had a serious attraction back at the time of Lady Cassandra's coming out ball. Now - knowing the Colonel and getting to know Lady Cassandra, I find it hard to believe that they kept this all to themselves for so many years. I agree with others that Cassandra is like a "nice' Lady Catherine but "wow & ouch" she really knew how to step on toes and didn't give a cat's meow as she did so. But then she also misinterprets Col. Fitzwilliam's not coming over and demanding an answer to his proposal after a period of time and a rain storm. Sometimes she contradicted what seemed to be her character's outspoken frankness. And to take him into her bed and then basically snub him the next day??? This lady, obviously needs major therapy. Yes, she went through a lot but couldn't seem to settle on what fate would allow her even though she had the answer for everyone else. I was happy in the end with that couple and the epilogue telling up of their child.
Elizabeth and Darcy: he had a lot more depth in this story, especially as we learn of his going to Lady Cassandra's aid and his actions with the villain in this story. I liked reading how he decided to take the second chance but was disappointed that early-on he didn't realize that Cassandra's place in his life could be misinterpreted by Elizabeth. The interruption in his planned second proposal gave us a bit of angst as events from the canon came into play.
The development of the sexual relationship between ODC in this story was much more realistic (for me) than in so many other books. Elizabeth learns to enjoy the various parts gradually as her innocence is gone and her body adjusts. I hate it when virgins enjoy sex and all its aspects their first time in bed. (I think I need to go back and re-read "Everything You Wanted to Know about Sex and Were Afraid to Ask" from my college days - am I that ignorant of how things work? DON'T ANSWER THAT!) But then, too, I was at a point of just wanting to skim over those sections as there were so many. Visits back and forth between bedrooms for snuggles or to check in on how our patient is doing or to satisfy a hunger (as for David and Cassandra) just happened more than anyone could believe anywhere near realistic in that day and age. Lock Georgiana up or she is going to stumble on someone or another going into or out of a bedroom not their own.
Bingley and Jane were nicely handled with Bingley realizing that he has to take blame if he doesn't make a decision based on his own observations and feelings. And, even though I basically hate Caroline, my heart went out to her in the hand fate dealt her. Additionally, as others have stated, really enjoyed Mr. Bennet responding to Lady Catwitch as he did! Right-on!
Loved the Epilogue. Would recommend this book to anyone and everyone and will re-read in the future.
January 12, 2022
For some reason I couldn't get in to this.
I disliked the Cassandra character and found her annoying. She both whiney and a know it all at the same time!
Don't feel I can give it stars as the writing seemed fine. There were just parts of the story that didn't speak to me.
Chances are most other readers won't feel the same way and will enjoy it.
I disliked the Cassandra character and found her annoying. She both whiney and a know it all at the same time!
Don't feel I can give it stars as the writing seemed fine. There were just parts of the story that didn't speak to me.
Chances are most other readers won't feel the same way and will enjoy it.
June 15, 2016
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Have you ever read the first paragraph of a book and knew in that instant you would love it?
Well, that is what I felt with Lory Lilian’s Remembrance of the Past.
In this book, Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy encounter each other at a park in London a couple of months after the Hunsford Proposal and when their paths cross, you know what happens: they will live happily ever after. But what we are interested in is the journey that takes them there, right?
This journey couldn’t have been more endearing. Remembrance of the Past is a slow paced book that will show us how these characters can be perfect for one another, and how much they love each other. Lory Lilian’s words will give us plenty of pleasurable moments from the very beginning.
We will see Mr. Darcy courting Elizabeth, we will see her struggle with her emotions trying to understand what her heart is telling her, we will see her fall in love with Mr. Darcy and, we’ll see her suffer from jealousy! I’ve mentioned several times that I love the “let’s torture Elizabeth club”, and even if Lory Lilian doesn’t torture Elizabeth in this book, she illustrates, at least for a time in the book, Elizabeth uncertain of Darcy’s affection and even jealous! I don’t know about you, but for me, a jealous Elizabeth is one of the secret ingredients to make me love a book:)
One of the curious things about this book is its structure, which is not very frequent. Many books concentrate on the angst at an earlier stage and happiness in the end, but not this one. Remembrance of the Past will give us plenty of romantic and endearing moments that will lead us to believe everything is ready for our couple to be happily ever after. Then, something happens, and the angst begins. For me this structure was very interesting because it allowed me to see Darcy and Elizabeth happy in the beginning of the book and once more in the end of it. It is as if Lory Lillian decided to present us with a double pleasure:)
I loved both Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy in this book, but one of the things I liked the most was Darcy’s sense of honor. I won’t say much about it because I don’t want to spoil the entire plot of the book, but let’s just say Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy have a difference of opinion in this matter, and I am definitely team Darcy on this one! I’m glad the author portrayed Darcy this way. His sense of honor towards the end of the book was something I particularly found very romantic.
The author also introduced us to a new character that will be essential to the plot, and who kept me very curious until the very end: Lady Cassandra. I had mixed feelings towards her, but just like Mr. Darcy, I believe she improves upon further acquaintance. At a time I even though more about her and her story than Elizabeth’s, which is something hard to happen. Her life story is incredible and she will be essential to the happiness of one of my favorite characters in the entire book:) But I will not say much more, because if I continue on this road, I might spoil some of my favorite parts in the book.
But not everything is a sea of roses. We will see some old and some new villains, and Caroline Bingley will be just as annoying as ever. I felt her fate was well deserved and Lory Lilian was kinder to her in the end of the book than I would have been.
Remembrance of the Past is a book that takes us into a long, fascinating and loving journey through the lives of our beloved characters, but also into the lives of additional ones. For me this was a plus because we are not only focused on Darcy and Elizabeth. At a certain point, we shift our interest to the fates of other characters which made the book very rich. It gave me a lot of pleasure to read this book, and I am now looking forward to read Rainy Days:)
Have you ever read the first paragraph of a book and knew in that instant you would love it?
Well, that is what I felt with Lory Lilian’s Remembrance of the Past.
In this book, Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy encounter each other at a park in London a couple of months after the Hunsford Proposal and when their paths cross, you know what happens: they will live happily ever after. But what we are interested in is the journey that takes them there, right?
This journey couldn’t have been more endearing. Remembrance of the Past is a slow paced book that will show us how these characters can be perfect for one another, and how much they love each other. Lory Lilian’s words will give us plenty of pleasurable moments from the very beginning.
We will see Mr. Darcy courting Elizabeth, we will see her struggle with her emotions trying to understand what her heart is telling her, we will see her fall in love with Mr. Darcy and, we’ll see her suffer from jealousy! I’ve mentioned several times that I love the “let’s torture Elizabeth club”, and even if Lory Lilian doesn’t torture Elizabeth in this book, she illustrates, at least for a time in the book, Elizabeth uncertain of Darcy’s affection and even jealous! I don’t know about you, but for me, a jealous Elizabeth is one of the secret ingredients to make me love a book:)
One of the curious things about this book is its structure, which is not very frequent. Many books concentrate on the angst at an earlier stage and happiness in the end, but not this one. Remembrance of the Past will give us plenty of romantic and endearing moments that will lead us to believe everything is ready for our couple to be happily ever after. Then, something happens, and the angst begins. For me this structure was very interesting because it allowed me to see Darcy and Elizabeth happy in the beginning of the book and once more in the end of it. It is as if Lory Lillian decided to present us with a double pleasure:)
I loved both Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy in this book, but one of the things I liked the most was Darcy’s sense of honor. I won’t say much about it because I don’t want to spoil the entire plot of the book, but let’s just say Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy have a difference of opinion in this matter, and I am definitely team Darcy on this one! I’m glad the author portrayed Darcy this way. His sense of honor towards the end of the book was something I particularly found very romantic.
The author also introduced us to a new character that will be essential to the plot, and who kept me very curious until the very end: Lady Cassandra. I had mixed feelings towards her, but just like Mr. Darcy, I believe she improves upon further acquaintance. At a time I even though more about her and her story than Elizabeth’s, which is something hard to happen. Her life story is incredible and she will be essential to the happiness of one of my favorite characters in the entire book:) But I will not say much more, because if I continue on this road, I might spoil some of my favorite parts in the book.
But not everything is a sea of roses. We will see some old and some new villains, and Caroline Bingley will be just as annoying as ever. I felt her fate was well deserved and Lory Lilian was kinder to her in the end of the book than I would have been.
Remembrance of the Past is a book that takes us into a long, fascinating and loving journey through the lives of our beloved characters, but also into the lives of additional ones. For me this was a plus because we are not only focused on Darcy and Elizabeth. At a certain point, we shift our interest to the fates of other characters which made the book very rich. It gave me a lot of pleasure to read this book, and I am now looking forward to read Rainy Days:)
September 28, 2019
I love this book
I have no new insights for you, dear reader. So many of the older reviews have said most of all that can be said.
I will say that is in my top 5 most loved P&P variations.
I love that no one is perfect and no one is totally bad except a couple of characters and they may have mental health problems.
I love that ODC first argument after marrying is so very important, is treated with importance and each of them are willing to compromise and see their partner’s viewpoint.
I love how supportive the characters were of each other.
I love thar Georgiana was able to chastise Cassandra and was totally right and was the only one who saw the wrongness of Cassandra’s attitude.
My only wish is that my favorite ladies who are so dead set against dueling could see how unsafe they would have been if the duel had not happened.
Enjoy reading this marvelous book.
I have no new insights for you, dear reader. So many of the older reviews have said most of all that can be said.
I will say that is in my top 5 most loved P&P variations.
I love that no one is perfect and no one is totally bad except a couple of characters and they may have mental health problems.
I love that ODC first argument after marrying is so very important, is treated with importance and each of them are willing to compromise and see their partner’s viewpoint.
I love how supportive the characters were of each other.
I love thar Georgiana was able to chastise Cassandra and was totally right and was the only one who saw the wrongness of Cassandra’s attitude.
My only wish is that my favorite ladies who are so dead set against dueling could see how unsafe they would have been if the duel had not happened.
Enjoy reading this marvelous book.
October 25, 2015
430 pages of utter romance,peppered with trials,tribulations,angst (that is thankfully soon resolved),fantastic,witty dialogue, not forgetting our happy ever after for Darcy and Lizzy.......
Yes, such are the delights that await you,dear reader when you delve into this enchanting tale of second chances,shared walks,deep and meaningful stares........
Needless to say I loved this book!
How Ms Lilian thought of this plot is beyond me, the fact that she did and couched it in such beautiful language is a true measure of her gift as a storyteller!!
Treat yourself to this book-you won't be disappointed.
My sincere thanks to Ms Lilian for this gem!
Yes, such are the delights that await you,dear reader when you delve into this enchanting tale of second chances,shared walks,deep and meaningful stares........
Needless to say I loved this book!
How Ms Lilian thought of this plot is beyond me, the fact that she did and couched it in such beautiful language is a true measure of her gift as a storyteller!!
Treat yourself to this book-you won't be disappointed.
My sincere thanks to Ms Lilian for this gem!
December 28, 2016
Enjoyable but not one of my favorite JAFF stories. While I enjoyed the new character Lady Cassandra, the storyline was too long, the drama was too much at times. Could have been a great book if it was a little less wordy and dramatic.
April 15, 2012
What if Elizabeth encountered Darcy in London before she left on her tour with the Gardiners? What if Darcy invited Elizabeth and her family to Pemberley as his guests? What if there was another important woman in Darcy's life that many expected him to marry?
When Elizabeth re-encounters Mr. Darcy in the company of Mrs. Gardiner, Georgiana, and Colonel Fitzwilliam, she is sent into a spiral of confusion and turmoil. Seeing Darcy again, observing his easy and amiable manner, witnessing his intense gazes – she doesn't know what to make of it all! Why is Mr. Darcy so altered? How badly has she misjudged him? Just as Elizabeth starts to acknowledge that she finds Darcy's company pleasant and desirable, she is introduced to the celebrated and stunning, Lady Cassandra, who just happens to be the Darcys' oldest childhood friend. Outspoken, daring, and independent, Lady Cassandra and her intimate relationship with the Darcys causes a lot of consternation for Elizabeth, yet in the end helps her discover the leadings of her own heart...
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When Elizabeth re-encounters Mr. Darcy in the company of Mrs. Gardiner, Georgiana, and Colonel Fitzwilliam, she is sent into a spiral of confusion and turmoil. Seeing Darcy again, observing his easy and amiable manner, witnessing his intense gazes – she doesn't know what to make of it all! Why is Mr. Darcy so altered? How badly has she misjudged him? Just as Elizabeth starts to acknowledge that she finds Darcy's company pleasant and desirable, she is introduced to the celebrated and stunning, Lady Cassandra, who just happens to be the Darcys' oldest childhood friend. Outspoken, daring, and independent, Lady Cassandra and her intimate relationship with the Darcys causes a lot of consternation for Elizabeth, yet in the end helps her discover the leadings of her own heart...
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April 11, 2016
Lory Lilian introduces what has to be my favourite female character that was not originally created by Jane Austen, Lady Cassandra, in Remembrance of the Past. (Favourite original male character is Sharon Lathan's Dr. Darcy). Lady Cassandra is the perfect match, in very different ways, to the three main characters: Mr. Darcy, Elizabeth, and Colonel Fitzwilliam. I cannot say more without spoiling some plot points, but that I absolutely loved this book!
September 2, 2023
The first 200 pages or so of this were quite good, but after that it seriously declined. Far too long, with minimum plot, boring characterisations, half-hearted attempts at conflict. Further, I noticed that some of the “intimate” passages near the end were basically identical to passages in other works by this author that I’ve read (though I don’t know which she published first, I can’t help but think that’s incredibly lazy).
June 6, 2020
Great story
The entire book is great but the first 7 or so chapters are among the best JAFF beginning chapters ever, in my opinion. The story should be an eight episode series on Netflix or Amazon Prime.
Recommended highly.
The entire book is great but the first 7 or so chapters are among the best JAFF beginning chapters ever, in my opinion. The story should be an eight episode series on Netflix or Amazon Prime.
Recommended highly.
July 4, 2020
After reading a truly awful P&P modern retelling, this was a nice palette cleanse
May 28, 2015
Ms. Lilian is a very verbose writer, that's for sure. This variation takes a look at what would happen if Elizabeth and Darcy met again a few months after Darcy's disastrous first proposal, in London, prior to her trip to Derbyshire. What if Darcy appeared to have another young lady attached to him at this point....right at the point that Elizabeth feels her heart change for him?
What I liked: I liked Lady Cassandra for the most part. She was an interesting and somewhat complex compared to most of the other characters in P&P. I liked her story arch overall and how everything plays out. I also liked the character Lord Markham (okay I didn't like him per se, I thought he was a good villain!) I also think they gave Caroline's character an interesting twist. As always, I think Darcy's devotion to Elizabeth is heartwarming. I like that she skips a few months - a year ahead towards the end before the epilogue even begins, just so we can get more information about their futures.
What I did NOT like: Although there were some very exciting scenes, packed full of interesting events, much of the book was wordy, and not altogether useful to the plot or story whatsoever. This is a long book, and although I enjoy long books, I also feel there needs to be a reason for their length. So much of this could have been cut out easily. I've read other Lory Lilian books, and I have come to the same conclusion. It's just her style, but I find myself wanting to skip whole pages. There are a few parts where I am annoyed with Darcy, and that's not good! At one point I was annoyed with all the men in the book! I hate that they were like "it's men's business". Ugh! Yeah...that might be what they actually would have said, but it was rude, and I wouldn't have accepted it as easily as they did...although they were still angry. I feel like they weren't angry enough! lol. Also in the end when Darcy becomes whiney that Elizabeth doesn't give him enough attention...that is not Mr. Darcy...
Overall I enjoyed the book, but I don't think I'll pick it up again. I liked Lady Cassandra and I liked Markham's story, but it's not enough to get me to read this tome a second time. lol.
What I liked: I liked Lady Cassandra for the most part. She was an interesting and somewhat complex compared to most of the other characters in P&P. I liked her story arch overall and how everything plays out. I also liked the character Lord Markham (okay I didn't like him per se, I thought he was a good villain!) I also think they gave Caroline's character an interesting twist. As always, I think Darcy's devotion to Elizabeth is heartwarming. I like that she skips a few months - a year ahead towards the end before the epilogue even begins, just so we can get more information about their futures.
What I did NOT like: Although there were some very exciting scenes, packed full of interesting events, much of the book was wordy, and not altogether useful to the plot or story whatsoever. This is a long book, and although I enjoy long books, I also feel there needs to be a reason for their length. So much of this could have been cut out easily. I've read other Lory Lilian books, and I have come to the same conclusion. It's just her style, but I find myself wanting to skip whole pages. There are a few parts where I am annoyed with Darcy, and that's not good! At one point I was annoyed with all the men in the book! I hate that they were like "it's men's business". Ugh! Yeah...that might be what they actually would have said, but it was rude, and I wouldn't have accepted it as easily as they did...although they were still angry. I feel like they weren't angry enough! lol. Also in the end when Darcy becomes whiney that Elizabeth doesn't give him enough attention...that is not Mr. Darcy...
Overall I enjoyed the book, but I don't think I'll pick it up again. I liked Lady Cassandra and I liked Markham's story, but it's not enough to get me to read this tome a second time. lol.
May 18, 2021
Decent, but Lilian spent too long dwelling on her OC, Cassandra, whom she pairs with Colonel Fitzwilliam. Not that Cassandra wasn't an interesting character -- she was well-written and interesting -- but this is P&P fanfiction. The OCs should be well-rounded, but they shouldn't take up quite as much page time as Cassandra did in this one. Same for Markham, whose parallels to Wickham were too immediate for me to ignore and ended up being a caricatured, predictable villain (and also an example of poor representation regarding mental illness).
That alone wouldn't have lowered it to a three-star rating; there were other issues. The first half of this book was really good, but the moment Elizabeth and Darcy started hanging out in gardens together unchaperoned, it got pretty OOC. I just don't see them as people who would place themselves and their families into such a perilous situation, considering the strict moral standards of the time.
Also, there is literally NO ONE on God's green earth who can convince me that Fitzwilliam Darcy is not the biggest virgin in all of literature. Bingley? Okay, MAYBE--he's an easygoing, good-natured dude; I can at least imagine it. Colonel Fitzwilliam? Not a stretch.
But Darcy? That dude doesn't know how to talk his way into a pleasant country dance with a pretty woman. Mr Prim and Proper, I-Must-Uphold-the-Honor-of-My-Family-Reputation-and-My-Entire-Crisis-Revolves-Around-My-Falling-for-an-Unsuitable-Woman DARCY? This dude DOESN'T fuck, I'm sorry. There is no possible way.
That alone wouldn't have lowered it to a three-star rating; there were other issues. The first half of this book was really good, but the moment Elizabeth and Darcy started hanging out in gardens together unchaperoned, it got pretty OOC. I just don't see them as people who would place themselves and their families into such a perilous situation, considering the strict moral standards of the time.
Also, there is literally NO ONE on God's green earth who can convince me that Fitzwilliam Darcy is not the biggest virgin in all of literature. Bingley? Okay, MAYBE--he's an easygoing, good-natured dude; I can at least imagine it. Colonel Fitzwilliam? Not a stretch.
But Darcy? That dude doesn't know how to talk his way into a pleasant country dance with a pretty woman. Mr Prim and Proper, I-Must-Uphold-the-Honor-of-My-Family-Reputation-and-My-Entire-Crisis-Revolves-Around-My-Falling-for-an-Unsuitable-Woman DARCY? This dude DOESN'T fuck, I'm sorry. There is no possible way.
August 8, 2021
Good book
I loved the book and the love stories. I loved Darcy and Lizzy and Lady Cassandra was a breath of fresh air. Well miss Bingley always manages to mess up everything. I cannot believe she actually went back for a second bite of that apple!
I loved the book and the love stories. I loved Darcy and Lizzy and Lady Cassandra was a breath of fresh air. Well miss Bingley always manages to mess up everything. I cannot believe she actually went back for a second bite of that apple!
February 24, 2012
I loved the storyline of how Lizzy bumps into Darcy in London before her trip to the Lakes with her aunt and uncle. There is obviously a lot of akwardness there but to see Lizzy's feelings transform as you read of her perceived jealousy (Lady Cassandra and Darcy) is highly entertaining. I have to agree with other reviews that I've read - a classic Jane Austen novel written for that era should not be explicit in sex scenes and certainly not before marriage (and I'm not talking Darcy and Lizzy here). I agree complety with Alexa Adams who said "steamy aspects aside, the book's scenario allows the romance to unfold with a satisfying rapidity, though an understanding between our heroes does not come easy..It was a fun read, much better written than some of the other novels of this kind, but I would have enjoyed it more if everyone had kept their stockings on." Well said Alexa!
September 18, 2011
This book is a P&P 'what if' and takes the premise of what-if Darcy and Lizzy meet up sooner than later after his disastrous proposal at Hunsford. And what-if new a new main character is tossed into the mix with a few mysteries attached to her.
Though the book shifts points of views so you are not stuck with just one person's thoughts, it truly is Darcy's story. He makes a decision the day he sees Lizzy in the London park and what follows is based on that.
It is almost as if someone has hit the reset button and given them a 'do over' chance. This story is what they do with it.
This is not for you if you are a P&P purist and it is heavy on the Romance, but has some good, active conflict (Wickham's back and badder than ever).
With that being understood, I can recommend it.
Though the book shifts points of views so you are not stuck with just one person's thoughts, it truly is Darcy's story. He makes a decision the day he sees Lizzy in the London park and what follows is based on that.
It is almost as if someone has hit the reset button and given them a 'do over' chance. This story is what they do with it.
This is not for you if you are a P&P purist and it is heavy on the Romance, but has some good, active conflict (Wickham's back and badder than ever).
With that being understood, I can recommend it.
April 11, 2015
I have read and enjoyed all of Lori Lillians books so far and this is no exception.
A very interesting alternative to P&P!
One of my favourite characters is Lady Cassandra, what an interesting, beautiful original character.
I'm looking forward to reading more austenesque from Lori Lillian.
A very interesting alternative to P&P!
One of my favourite characters is Lady Cassandra, what an interesting, beautiful original character.
I'm looking forward to reading more austenesque from Lori Lillian.
October 7, 2020
Avid Reader
What a powerful story about self forgiveness and redemption! Lady Cassandra loved the Colonel since she was 17, and he was 24. They fell in love at her come-out ball but neither one confessed to the other. Thanks to a scandal causes by the first Viscount Markham, she left, fell in love, and married a man that she knew for mere days. They were happy for a few months until they encountered the Markham brothers who insulted Lady Cassandra. Her husband went out to confront the brothers unknownst to Lady Cassandra. He was found two days later shot in the back with two bullet holes. A distraught Lady Cassandra list her baby because she was too distraught to eat or sleep. Since she had grown up with Darcy and Georgina, Darcy came to her rescue, but she didn't return to England until Elizabeth rejected Darcy most violently! A true friendship eventually develops between Elizabeth and Lady Cassandra. Both share a mutual dislike of Caroline Bingley, but it's Lady Cassandra who has no compunction when it comes to consistently and constantly giving Caroline a thorough sit down and tongue lashing. Since Lady Cassandra is a high ranking member of the ton and a great friend of Darcy 's, there is very little that Caroline can do. Lady Cassandra has a long and tortured road to happiness, but it finally arrived after 80% of the book is complete. Caroline Bingley 's insidious behavior lands her in the arms of the second Viscount Markham after he unsuccessfully tries to attack Elizabeth. Elizabeth is saved by Lady Cassandra. Caroline is devastated when she learns that Lord Markham tricked her into inviting him to Netherfield to win Elizabeth, but she is already engaged to Darcy. Eventually, Darcy and the Colonel take their revenge in a duel. Darcy and the Colonel know that Viscount Markham killed Lady Cassandra 's husband. Darcy wounds him, and Caroline reunites with him while on a continental tour. A marriage that she will later regret! Jane and Bingley reunite and marry and have a son. Darcy and Elizabeth travail one problem after another until they finally marry, but even then, their enjoyment is short-lived.
What a powerful story about self forgiveness and redemption! Lady Cassandra loved the Colonel since she was 17, and he was 24. They fell in love at her come-out ball but neither one confessed to the other. Thanks to a scandal causes by the first Viscount Markham, she left, fell in love, and married a man that she knew for mere days. They were happy for a few months until they encountered the Markham brothers who insulted Lady Cassandra. Her husband went out to confront the brothers unknownst to Lady Cassandra. He was found two days later shot in the back with two bullet holes. A distraught Lady Cassandra list her baby because she was too distraught to eat or sleep. Since she had grown up with Darcy and Georgina, Darcy came to her rescue, but she didn't return to England until Elizabeth rejected Darcy most violently! A true friendship eventually develops between Elizabeth and Lady Cassandra. Both share a mutual dislike of Caroline Bingley, but it's Lady Cassandra who has no compunction when it comes to consistently and constantly giving Caroline a thorough sit down and tongue lashing. Since Lady Cassandra is a high ranking member of the ton and a great friend of Darcy 's, there is very little that Caroline can do. Lady Cassandra has a long and tortured road to happiness, but it finally arrived after 80% of the book is complete. Caroline Bingley 's insidious behavior lands her in the arms of the second Viscount Markham after he unsuccessfully tries to attack Elizabeth. Elizabeth is saved by Lady Cassandra. Caroline is devastated when she learns that Lord Markham tricked her into inviting him to Netherfield to win Elizabeth, but she is already engaged to Darcy. Eventually, Darcy and the Colonel take their revenge in a duel. Darcy and the Colonel know that Viscount Markham killed Lady Cassandra 's husband. Darcy wounds him, and Caroline reunites with him while on a continental tour. A marriage that she will later regret! Jane and Bingley reunite and marry and have a son. Darcy and Elizabeth travail one problem after another until they finally marry, but even then, their enjoyment is short-lived.
July 7, 2023
Pretty I have read this book multiple times its detailed and complex and good.
Worth your time.
I find this author to fairly reliable in quality, original content and characters.
Worth your time.
I find this author to fairly reliable in quality, original content and characters.
July 8, 2013
I love these "what if" Jane Austen variations, but if this had been any other historical fiction, I wouldn't have bothered. The story was interesting, but it may not have been worth enduring the rambling dialog and lengthy scenes that did little to advance the plot. In this niche JAFF subgenre I'm ridiculously hooked on, this long winded novel is not a favorite.
June 6, 2018
I got confused... was this book about Darcy and Elizabeth, or about Lady Cassandra, the world's most annoying, bossy, interfering "friend" who knows what's best for EVERYONE but treats the guy who loves her like trash?
Not a bad story, but Cassandra got on my nerves so hard that I could hardly take it.
Not a bad story, but Cassandra got on my nerves so hard that I could hardly take it.
March 5, 2019
I enjoyed the early story, 3 stars. However it really began to drag on. The Markham storyline was completely unnecessary & Lady Cassandra became a bit annoying - neither plotlines were developed enough to be interesting so they just took away from D&E. When D&E are still having misunderstandings at the end it just becomes frustrating that there has been no growth between them!
June 11, 2016
Elizabeth and Darcy, the same but different as with any variation, but this one adds a new character in the mix. She acted as the voice of reason/conscience type mirror for everyone except herself. I enjoyed this one.
December 28, 2016
I'm giving 3 stars, because I really enjoyed the first part of the book. I like this author and I like how passionate are her characters.
However, I don't enjoy much when the second characters have too much space and the book has so many sub-plots going on that I kinda lost my interest.
However, I don't enjoy much when the second characters have too much space and the book has so many sub-plots going on that I kinda lost my interest.
December 3, 2017
This was such a loooong read. Which usually I don’t mind but it felt like it dragged in some places but also like there were way too many events/storylines crammed into one book. I could easily have seen this book being split into two.
February 20, 2023
Such a delightful, thoughtful P&P variation!! A pleasure to read even with the invention of additional characters. Well done!
May 3, 2018
Went on for too long.
December 17, 2023
I enjoy this author! but this book was extremly long, with no reason at all, and boring ... the last 45% was a skip read till the end.
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