オナニーマスター黒沢（4）

オナニーマスター黒沢 (Onani Master Kurosawa) #4

by 伊瀬カツラ

web上で伝説的人気を誇った『オナニーマスター黒沢』がついに電子書籍化！中学二年生の黒沢の楽しみ…。それは学校の女子トイレで同級生をオカズに自慰にふけること。しかし、クラスでイジメに遭っている少女に見つかってしまい……。

Genres: Manga, Fiction, Slice Of Life, Seinen, Drama, Graphic Novels, Graphic Novels Comics

198 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 13, 2018

Reviews

[Rahul · Rating 5 out of 5]

6/5 🌟
What a great turnaround of story and what a great character development of Kurosawa. Definitely became one of my favourite manga series ever. Seems so real and makes you learn about life so much. Would be great if there were more volumes to it. Would definitely want to be the part of Kurosawa's journey.

[Jon Ureña · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a review of the whole series.

I found out about Onani Master Kurosawa the day I started reading it, so I didn't have time to form complex expectations, but I certainly didn't think it would turn into Crime and Punishment. It goes into very interesting psychological depths. On one side we have the protagonist, an introvert who discharges his malice through masturbating to classmates in the girls bathroom; he's constantly on guard, unable and unwilling to get close to people, and he doesn't realize how much the secrets he keeps contribute to distancing him from the world. On the other side we have the introverted girl who blackmails him: she's cut from the same cloth, yet her main issue is her destructive, vengeful tendencies. Once she traps the protagonist into attacking other people for her, she wants him to avenge any minor inconvenience. She's boiling in rage, and rather open about wanting to destroy everybody she dislikes.

The protagonist was able to follow his clandestine masturbatory routine without remorse because he had never connected with anybody. But one of his targets, a cute girl he believed to be stuck up, turns out to be a sweet, introverted girl who is attempting to change into a cheerful, popular person. The protagonist falls for her. Unfortunately, she starts dating someone else, someone unlike the protagonist. That new heartache only fuels his general disdain for humanity, and he falls into a downward spiral consisting of coating or filling the possessions of more girls with his semen, including those of the girl he had fallen for. An instance involving a flute is particularly disgusting. However, that same girl he loved turns out to be the key that gets the protagonist out of that chain of terror attacks: he realizes that everything the girl he had loved had wanted was to belong among people she liked, and the protagonist's actions had just ruined it, making her distrustful and paranoid. He understands that the only way left to get out of the blackmail that his partner in crime is subjecting him to is to come clean, even though that'll ruin his life.

Here comes the Crime and Punishment part. He tells his class that he's been the one leaving his semen where it shouldn't be. He becomes a complete outcast, shunned even by the few people that had always insisted on dragging him along. They bully him relentlessly; they hide or ruin his stuff, they draw insults on his desk, older friends of some of the girls he attacked beat the protagonist up. However, this part of the series turned into maybe the most interesting aspect for me: a dichotomy about how to deal with your own darkness. The protagonist chose to come clean, and although he is hated for who he is and what he has done, he feels free, and ready to endure his punishment for the rest of his life if necessary. On the other side, the introverted girl who was blackmailing him doesn't believe that she can endure all the pain that life throws at her (bullying, her own innate rage and general darkness, etc.), and she chooses to close herself off further. During the time when some people were forgiving the protagonist and letting him in, the introverted girl had become a small, tight ball of hate. One of those times she was getting bullied, she reacted by cutting her own wrist. She survived, but left the school. Although she enrolled in another one, it didn't take much for her to drop it as well, and ended up as a hikikomori, not even leaving her room.

The hopeful, wholesome vibe of the final chapters, while tying off the arcs satisfactorily, didn't ring as realistic for me. I do think that those afflicted with dark impulses should embrace and try to make the best out of them, in a "better to be hated for what you are than to be loved for what you are not" way, but I don't think you could come back from filling a classmate's flute with semen, nor should you. In reality, the protagonist, if he wasn't expelled, he would have been shunned for life, nobody would have wanted to deal with him again, and he would probably have to move far away and make sure that nobody new had a way to learn about his past actions.

Still, I really loved this masturbatory tale.

[Andson Rebello · Rating 2 out of 5]

What a severe disappointment.

[Erik · Rating 5 out of 5]

Satisfying ending!

[YERKO BUSTORF · Rating 4 out of 5]

Guau. Me gustó bastante esta historia, un poco bizarra - he de admitir -; pero, funciona. Detrás de todo tiene un mensaje claro e importante.

[Petar Golubović · Rating 5 out of 5]

What if Raskolnikov was a horny Japanese middleschooler?

[Mrbill · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good ending

[47Time · Rating 5 out of 5]

Kurosawa has finally hit rock bottom. The only way to go from here is up. He will need the help of others to make it. This is the best story I've read in years.

Kurosawa becomes content with his failed life. He considers his deal with Aya to be at an end and is looking toward a future of improvement. Completely unexpectedly, Nagatsuka is the first who forgives Kurosawa, though he is the only one. Aya has a much harder life during this time. She is still being bullied and still hates the bullies with abandon. She knows she is too petty to let go of her hatred. Kurosawa offers to help her, if she needs a hand.

The narration shifts to Takagawa for a while. Kurisawa's confession stirred her deeply, but she eventually asked herself why he did it. He could have gotten away with his deeds easily, but he went through the punishment for a reason. She decides to forgive him and they get to talking again. This gives him the opportunity to apologize to her. She only asks that he keep his promise to become a writer, as he did during an old conversation they had.

Going to cram school creates the opportunity to understand Sugawa the bully better. She is actually shy, but hides it via her aggressive behavior.

Kobayashi never held any grudge agaibst Kurosawa, so he too forgives and forgets his deeds. He organizes a class reunion and invites Kurosawa with no qualms. Kurosawa never forgot about Aya, though most everyone did after she left school and then became a shut-in. During the reunion, Kurosawa finally manages to get her to leave home and join her former colleagues.

Kurisawa moves on with his life, but keeps in surprisingly close contact with Sugawa. He even develops feelings for her, though he doesn't see him working well with her. Her frankness eventually helps him face his reluctance to ask her out. She never lets go of her aggressive nature, not even after she and Kurosawa get married. Yeah, happy end for the fap king.

[Force Fidele KIEN · Rating 4 out of 5]

When I first started this manga, I didn't really like the sketchy art, but I'm glad I pushed on. If not, I would have missed one of the best school life manga. I would put this on the top with Koe no Katachi (A silent voice).

[babab · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.5

[Siegfried · Rating 5 out of 5]

Excelent. Full review at https://patternrecognitions.blogspot....

[First Name · Rating 3 out of 5]

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It's just fine. I appreciated the parodical elements. As for the serious sides of the story, there are definitely better works out there.