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The Alchemy Wars #0

The Magazine of Fantasy & Science Fiction March/April 2020

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THE MAGAZINE OF
FANTASY & SCIENCE FICTION
March/April • 71st Year of Publication

NOVELLAS

COME THE REVOLUTION -83- Ian Tregillis

NOVELETS

KIKELOMO ULTRASHEEN -8- Dare Segun Falowo
THE LAST LEGEND -36- Matthew Hughes
HACKSILVER -204- Elizabeth Bear
DEATH ON THE NEFERTEM EXPRESS -228- Brian Trent

SHORT STORIES

THE MILLION-MILE SNIPER -31- SL Huang
RED SWORD OF THE CELIAC -128- John Possidente
SAY YOU’RE SORRY -134- Amman Sabet
A SOLITARY CRANE CIRCLES COLD MOUNTAIN -151- Gregor Hartmann
A FEAST OF BUTTERFLIES -172- Amanda Hollander
HUNGRY IS THE EARTH -198- William Ledbetter
THE MAN I LOVE -251- James Patrick Kelly

DEPARTMENTS

BOOKS TO LOOK FOR - 65- Charles de Lint
BOOKS -75- Elizabeth Hand
FILMS: WET SCREAMS -188- David J. Skal
SCIENCE: NATURAL DISASTERS IN UTOPIA -193- Jerry Oltion
COMING ATTRACTIONS -256-
CURIOSITIES -258- Graham Andrews

Cartoons: Arthur Masear (30. 150), Kendra Allenby (74, 127), Mark Heath (132), Nick Downes (187).

COVER BY MONDOLITHIC STUDIOS

260 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 1, 2020

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C.C. Finlay

66 books97 followers
Former Editor, The Magazine of Fantasy & Science Fiction. Author of The Prodigal Troll, the Traitor to the Crown Series, and Wild Things, plus dozens of short stories. World Fantasy Award Winner, and finalist for the Hugo, Nebula, Sidewise, Sturgeon, and Locus Awards. Teacher at Clarion and elsewhere.

Married to novelist Rae Carson.

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August 19, 2021
Hacksilver” by Elizabeth Bear.

Actual rating: 3.6112335569789 stars.

Not nearly as entertaining as the other story set in this world. Also, the utter lack of loquacious dragons is quite very disappointing indeed. But hey, at least there are some fun scenes involving a witty giant with a goat femur fetish, so I guess I can't complain and stuff.



Review to come and stuff. Maybe.

· Follow-up story (available for free from Tor): The Red Mother ★★★★ ½
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1,455 reviews31 followers
March 19, 2020
4.4 stars rounded down. Several really good stories to offset those that didn't connect with me.

8 • Kikelomo Ultrasheen • 23 pages by Dare Segun Falowo
Poor. Daughter of a hairdresser, Kiko, is born with a birthmark, meaning she may be taken by the Onidiri. She learns different hair styles. Many years later her father dies and mother bites off her ear. She goes to Lagos. There was probably symbolism and other stuff that I didn't catch. I didn't connect with the characters and didn't have a sense of what they were trying to accomplish, other than Kiko becoming a hairdresser.

31 • The Million-Mile Sniper • 5 pages by S. L. Huang
OK. People made a movie about the guy/gal who made a projectile intersect orbit with a ship, which would have had to be fired months in advance. It wasn't until Yast came up with evidence that people thought it was anything but random space debris.

36 • The Last Legend • 29 pages by Matthew Hughes
Very Good. Ardal is doing well in school and expecting to have a fine career. That is until his parents die when he is fifteen, his uncle comes to live with him, drinks away all the college money, puts the farm in debt and sells Ardal himself into a horrible apprenticeship. Eventually he runs away.

83 • Come the Revolution • 45 pages by Ian Tregillis
Very Good+. Mag was constructed to be a servitor. When a human gives an order it puts a geas upon her until the task is accomplished. For the first eighteen years of her existence she turns a crank that is sort of a sump pump. She is then brought back to the Forge, not to be destroyed which worried her, but to be reassigned to an ultra-rich family. After being hazed by one of the kitchen robots, she is befriended by Maikel, one of the oldest robots.

128 • Red Sword of the Celiac • 5 pages by John Possidente
OK. A reviewer tells us the plots of the Celiac books. Alien monster that eats humans.

134 • Say You're Sorry • 17 pages by Amman Sabet
Very Good+. The apology thing has hit New York. Bad things happening to people who insincerely say they're sorry. Bellamy sees it happen to someone on his team, and then to himself.

151 • A Solitary Crane Circles Cold Mountain • 19 pages by Gregor Hartmann
Very Good/Excellent. Lili is working on a method that will allow a generation ship, made from a hollowed out asteroid, to make it to it's destination with rational human beings. All the simulations she has run have led to the colonists killing each other off within a couple of generations.

172 • A Feast of Butterflies • 16 pages by Amanda Hollander
Good/VG. The Judge sends the Constable to the village on the hill to bring back the girl who eats butterflies or his grandson and four other missing boys. Maybe those boys weren't innocent bystanders who just went missing.

198 • Hungry is the Earth • 6 pages by William Ledbetter
OK. Aliens have invaded Earth not in a direct attack but brought an invasive berry plant that keeps crops and other plants from growing. In the end the choice is starve or eat the berries.

204 • Hacksilver • 24 pages by Elizabeth Bear
Very Good+/Excellent. Auga, aka Hacksilver, comes back to his home village after eight years to find that his brother has lost the farm due to a blood debt. He rides into town, not the most cautious of ideas, to find out what his (no love lost) brother was supposed to have done.

228 • Death on the Nefertem Express • 23 pages by Brian Trent
Good/VG. Five passengers plus crew are on the Nefertem Express staying just ahead of dawn which will roast them. They now have thirty minutes to get going again. When they find the engine missing, Jolene is on top of the suspect list because she is an alleged space pirate. But not a murderer.

251 • The Man I Love • 5 pages by James Patrick Kelly
OK+. A bartender opens his business once a week. The patrons are all ghosts in material form.
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439 reviews14 followers
March 19, 2020
Nothing really good, but nothing really bad either, in this issue.

Dare Segun Falowo - Kikelomo Ultrasheen - 3 stars
- The daughter of a hair dresser in Nigeria (?) grows up also learning how to style hair in all of the special ceremonial forms, but ends up being taken into a fantasy/supernatural group at the end of the story. Very hard to understand all of the cultural references, or even to know if they are real or fantasy.

SL Huang - The Million-Mile Sniper - 2 stars
- A sniper in space who has to fire his shots far enough ahead of time that his target would have to follow an advance schedule down to the fraction of a second. Nonsense.

Matthew Hughes - The Last Legend - 4 stars
- A young man with a bright future has that future stolen away when his parents die and an uncle becomes his caretaker and steals all of the family money. He is sold as an apprentice, but finally escapes and fulfills his destiny. A good story.

Ian Tregillis - Come The Revolution - 4 stars
- A robot with an AI brain, but extremely rigid controls over her decision making, lives a boring life in multiple jobs. She ends up at a site with other robots where she is exposed to new ideas and, finally, a major change in her life. An interesting story.

John Possidente - Red Sword Of The Celiac - 2 stars
- A story about a book review of an old book, and the previous two parts of a trilogy. Inventive, but ...

Amman Sabet - Say You’re Sorry - 4 stars
- Some plague (?) hits the world which causes people who give insincere apologies to suffer physical harm. Unusual.

Gregor Hartmann - A Solitary Crane Circles Cold Mountain - 4 stars
- The world is planning to send several thousand colonists on a 400 year trip inside a hollowed out asteroid to an Earth type planet orbiting another star. A sociophysicist is trying out various models to determine what the best social structure would be for the colonists in order to avoid conflict during the long trip. She can't find a workable solution until she tries something which goes totally against normal logic. A good story.

Amanda Hollander - A Feast Of Butterflies - 4 stars
- Five missing young men, a previous set of murders in which they may have been involved, the young sister of one of the murder victims, a constable trying to do the right thing, and magic. A nice story.

William Ledbetter - Hungry Is The Earth - 3 stars
- Alien invaders infest Earth with an alien plant which tends to kill existing plants on Earth. A young sister and brother find out that things might not be exactly how they seem. An odd story.

Elizabeth Bear - Hacksilver - 4 stars
- A Viking returns home after many years of travel to find out that his brother and family have been driven away because of a blood debt, and he is dragged into it, too. He ends up having to wrestle a giant in order to survive and, maybe, save his family. Another good story.

Brian Trent - Death On The Nefertem Express - 3 stars
- Sabotage on a train running a tight schedule on an alien world threatens to kill everybody on board the train. Weird science and flat characters.

James Patrick Kelly - The Man I Love - 4 stars
- A man is running a bar all day, every day, in which all of the customers are ghosts in mid-transition from life to eternity. Not much to it, but a good story.
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317 reviews2 followers
May 25, 2026
Favorite Stories:
The Man I Loved by James Patrick Kelly: This was SO GOOD, this was one of those stories that improves your day, makes you smile and has makes me want more stories from the Happy Valley Tavern.
The Last Legend by Matthew Hughes: I had no clue until the very end where this story was going
Of the 12 stories only 2 were duds (in my opinion)
...Also some of the cartoons were hilarious!
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1,005 reviews53 followers
April 3, 2020
A better than average issue with good tales by Matthew Hughes, Gregor Hartmann, Amanda Hollander, Elizabeth Bear and a fantastic tale involving thinking mechanicals beings by Ian Tregillis.

- "Kikelomo Ultrasheen" by Dare Segun Falowo: an African fantasy story about a girl blessed or cursed with the ability to affect people by weaving and perming their hair. When she is forced to run away to the city, she falls into company of people who can use her ability until she returns years later to her mother to fulfil her destiny.

- "The Million-Mile Sniper" by SL Huang: a somewhat unbelievable tale of a sniper that can find its target spaceship for an unimaginable distance away, and a detective who somehow is able to deduce what happened from the evidence.

- "The Last Legend" by Matthew Hughes: a fascinating tale about a boy who is destined for greatness; until tragedy strikes and he is forced to make a living with a lowly job. Then an incident happens and he is forced to run away. Then, while in the company of another man, he encounters a strange magical dead region with only a blind man living in it. As in all such tales, it would be destiny that they would all come together at that time; or perhaps the strong hand of determinism and the strange lack of free will.

- "Come the Revolution" by Ian Tregillis: a gripping tale set in an alternative world where mechanical thinking beings serve humans and are limited in their actions by the interaction of various internal geas that force them to obey commands or suffer 'pain'. But one particular mechanical 'dreams' of being free and one day that dream is fulfilled; with repercussions for humanity.

- "Red Sword of the Celiac" by John Possidente: a short piece about a reviewer reluctantly reviewing an editor's favorite 'unknown author' book.

- "Say You're Sorry" by Amman Sabet: a tale where saying your are sorry but not meaning it will have physical repercussions for the person involved.

- "A Solitary Crane Circles Cold Mountain" by Gregor Hartmann: an interesting look at a future where civilisation has become more environmentally oriented. But one last legacy of the previous 'machine-oriented' past remains: a hollow asteroid to be launched to a new world on a journey that will last many generations. It is the job of one woman to figure out how the inhabitants of the asteroid will survive the journey with an 'intact' society (not reverting to say, cannibalism) but as her many attempts to create a working one fail, it may require a rethink and a journey to simpler times for her to get the right answer.

- "A Feast of Butterflies" by Amanda Hollander: an unusual fantasy story about a police officer in an unnamed area ruled by a corrupt landowner who demands that he arrests a girl that may be linked to the disappearance of his grandson. During his investigations, he learns more about the unusual girl who feasts on butterflies from his predecessor's files and comes to an arrangement with her to locate the grandson and get rid of the landowner in a most unusual manner.

- "Hungry Is the Earth" by William Ledbetter: on a Earth invaded by strange plants that are harvested by aliens, one girl struggles to feed and save his younger brother. But hope seems lost when her plant seeds fail and she makes one last desperate attempt, not knowing if it will kill them or turn them into something not quite human.

- "Hacksilver" by Elizabeth Bear: a returning Viking discovers his brother's farm taken over and his brother exiled for a crime. When he himself is exiled, he has only his wits to help him with a wresting match with a giant and prove that his brother has been framed for the crime.

- "Death on the Nefertem Express" by Brian Trent: when a train that stays on the edge of disaster on a planet breaks down, it takes a probable pirate turned detective to figure out who caused the breakdown, why and how to save herself and the passengers. The clue to solve the mystery is there
for the reader to see.

- "The Man I Love" by James Patrick Kelly: in an unusual bar where ghosts come to congregate, one lonely ghosts waits for a special person to come to bar. And on this night, he does indeed come.
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540 reviews12 followers
April 18, 2020
Favourites:
The Last Legend by Matthew Hughes—colourful, fantastical, wowza.
Come the Revolution by Ian Tregillis— a robot tragedy, and the robots get my sympathy.
A Feast of Butterflies by Amanda Hollander— I don’t like spiders and snakes, but I couldn’t put it down.
Hacksilver by Elizabeth Bear— A high five out of five! This one hits all the spots.
Death on the Nefertem Express— Suspense, all the skills of Agatha Christie in a quick read, and a snappy ending.
The Man I Love by James Patrick Kelly— Romantic, left me wishing for saxophone music.
The rest of the stories were definitely eminently readable.
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338 reviews22 followers
March 2, 2020
This issue contains an Alchemy Wars prequel novella, "Come the Revolution", by Ian Tregillis. Queen Mab's awakening, her life, and her freedom, make for a compelling tale.
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April 20, 2020
I picked up this issue of F&SF specifically for Come the Revolution, a prequel novella to The Alchemy Wars, a brilliant alternate history series that was the perfect combination of concept and execution.

It was great to be back in this imaginative alt-history world and I really enjoyed seeing the backstory and humble beginnings of the mad Queen Mab, who eventually goes on to lead a robot “Clakker” army seeking vengeance on humanity. This story moves with alacrity and Tregillis is once again in fine form as he’s crafted an excellent primer for newcomers to the series or those thinking of embarking on a reread.

See this review and others at The Speculative Shelf.
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416 reviews4 followers
April 3, 2020
The Man I Love" by James Patrick Kelly was my favorite, but I also enjoyed SL Huang's "The Million Mile Sniper," Amanda Hollander's "A Feast for Butterflies," Elizabeth Bear's "Hacksilver," and Ian Tregellis's novella. A very solid issue overall!
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290 reviews
May 30, 2020
4.5/5, rounded up. I ended up enjoying most of the stories in this edition. Favs included: "The Last Legend," "Come the Revolution," and "A Solitary Crane Circles Cold Mountain."

Of note, I haven't read Tregillis's Alchemy Wars series, but the prequel novella is still very enjoyable with no prior knowledge, and I might even pick it up later...
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357 reviews4 followers
April 2, 2020
My favorite stories:

- KIKELOMO ULTRASHEEN by Dare Segun Falowo. 
Braided hair as milestones in a journey through life. Wonderful poetic cadence to the prose. Be sure to read about Yoruba culture before reading this story!

- THE MILLION-MILE SNIPER by SL Huang. 
In cinema, the surface reality is less engaging than the constructed myth. But sometimes the constructed myth pales in comparision to the hidden reality.

- THE LAST LEGEND by Matthew Hughes. A young boy is inexplicably orphaned, inexplicably apprenticed and finally inexplicably on the lam. But maybe everything wasn’t inexplicable after all.

- COME THE REVOLUTION by Ian Tregillis. Servitors of the world unite…you have nothing to lose but your geasa!
 The 17th century robot uprising told from a lowly servitor’s viewpoint. I really felt her pain.

- A SOLITARY CRANE CIRCLES COLD MOUNTAIN by Gregor Hartmann.
 Two problems—Planning a proper society for a generational ship that doesn’t end in cannibalism AND somehow convincing the recent anti-Machinist cultural revolution to go ahead with its launch.

- A FEAST OF BUTTERFLIES by Amanda Hollander. “Injustice could drive you mad. Or…it could change your very nature.” 
I am really enjoying the stories of newcomer Hollander. I hope we see more of her stories in upcoming issues. Pairs well with Bannerless (Carrie Vaughn.)

- HACKSILVER by Elizabeth Bear. 
Bad luck or good luck? You can never be sure which until the end of the day, especially if you are trying to bend it to the latter.
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260 reviews8 followers
April 27, 2020
If I had to choose a single story from this issue of F&SF I think I would go for “Kikelomo Ultrasheen”, from Dare Segun Falowo - a story inspired in local Nigerian mythology, drawing also from childhood memories of the author. One of those stories that is so well written that you simply forgot you are reading, while strange moons and new gods appear in front of you - hypnotic.

Other stories that I loved were the novella “Come the Revolution” by Ian Tregillis, or “A Feast of Butterflies” by Amanda Hollander. The former, even dealing with a worn-out science fiction trope (the rebellion of the machines), it still shines for its original steampunk setting and the character building. Amanda Hollander, on the other hand, offers a dark fantasy tale that overflows with imagination, a small masterpiece of storytelling using fantastic elements to deal with the bleak reality of bullying.

But there’s more in this issue. C.C. Finlay rescues a couple of stories from Matthew Hughes and Elizabeth Bear coming from a failed anthology project of mythology-inspired stories edited by Gardner Dozois. Matthew Hugues delivers an entertaining pulp story about a runaway orphan that meets an eccentric hermit that will turn out to be something completely different. The story from Elizabeth Bear is also quite interesting - a peculiar tale of family blood debts using elements from Northern Europe mythology.

Finally, there’s also a couple of short stories that I also enjoyed very much: “Red Sword of the Celiac”, by John Possidente, and “The Man I Love”, by James Patrick Kelly. The first one is a fictional review of a genre novel from one of those cult authors that nobody knows but some fans adore - those that you are always looking for in dusty bookshelves in second-hand bookstores. “The Man I Love”, that closes the issue, is a touching story about lonely ghosts in forgotten bars, of time-enduring love.
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97 reviews2 followers
April 28, 2020
Time and time again I become more fascinated by the diverse mystery stories that appear in science fiction magazines such as Fantasy & Science Fiction. They are wondrous and imaginative and cleverly written. This particular issue was a real treat for me. It included a great mystery whodunit in the Agatha Christie tradition titled: Death on the Nefertem Express by Brian Trent. This story is a classic mystery with an other-worldly twist. I also really enjoyed another Sci-Fi crime story titled: The Million-Mile Sniper by SL Huang. The other standout for me was the Science Department column titled: Natural Disasters in Utopia. A hauntingly relevant article for our times, (Almost too relevant) about the science of location during a natural disaster, with a message about the importance of helping others in need. Very appropriate. Bravo Jerry Oltion! The amount of fiction from fresh voices (both old and new) is well worth the cover price of this magazine. Great issue!
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5 reviews
June 4, 2020
Each issue a Masterpiece

In my opinion this publication is mesmerizingly entertaining and enthralling. Each issue transports you to infinite realms of imagination. You are guaranteed to have your sense of wonder renewed and your heart touched by the profundity contained within.
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650 reviews11 followers
July 5, 2020
Total Average: 4.2

Story Breakdown:
Kikelomo Ultrasheen - 4
The Million Mile Sniper - 5
The Last Legend - 4
Come the Revolution - 5
The Red Sword of the Celiac - 3
For My Shipmates at Journey's End - 4
Say You're Sorry - 4
A Solitary Crane Circles Cold Mountain - 5
4 Vesta - 4
A Feast of Butterflies - 4
Hungry is the Earth - 5
Hacksilver - 4
Death on the Nefertem Express - 4
The Man I Love - 4
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136 reviews1 follower
May 23, 2021
My first foray into a modern literary magazine--and it was quite a hoot. Even recognized one of the authors (a friend!). Really enjoyed this and am considering whether I should subscribe. On the one hand, I like the idea of supporting this kind of writing, but I also know that I have a limited amount of time to read--I'd like to get some novels in there too :).

Throwing the question out there: is anyone a subscriber? Hit me up and tell me what you think.
94 reviews1 follower
July 14, 2020
Just finished Come the Revolution, by Ian Tregillis. Stunning story, and very apropos for the current moment vis-a-vis US race relations.

With one notable exception (and I'll get to that when I write up the review of the rest of the stories), this was a terrific issue, easily the best I've read from F&SF in the past 6 months.
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14 reviews
March 23, 2020
Ian Tregillis's novella, "Come the Revolution," is a stand-out. Superbly imagined and written, it's an original take on the robot trope. I've placed Tregillis's The Mechanical on my "Want to Read" list.
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Author 38 books2 followers
April 5, 2020
My favorites were “The Last Legend”, “Come the Revolution”, and “Say You’re Sorry”

Great cover this issue!
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358 reviews15 followers
August 4, 2020
I liked "Death on the Neferten" by Brian Trent and also "The Last Legend" by Matthew Hughes.

This issue had a few stories from a cancelled Garder Dozois anthology "The Book of Legends"
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Author 2 books8 followers
May 24, 2020
Another strong issue. Standouts for me were KIKELOMO ULTRASHEEN by Dare Segun Falowo and COME THE REVOLUTION by Ian Tregillis
115 reviews1 follower
June 24, 2022
A solid issue. 4* mainly on the strength of the Tregillis novella.
I particularly liked:

“Hacksilver”, by Elizabeth Bear, giving us her take on a Viking story of family, muster, and betrayal
“Come the Revolution”, by Ian Tregillis, about a mechanical woman who finds her way towards freedom. This I enjoyed so much that I’ve started reading Tregillis’ trilogy in this universe, and am enjoying it greatly.
“Death of the Nefertem Express”, by Brian Trent, an obvious take on the famous Christie mystery, and quite a bit of fun.
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Author 19 books11 followers
January 31, 2021
If this is what the future of Sci-fi is, I don't wanna go there.
Author 16 books5 followers
July 3, 2023
This issue made me buy the Alchemy Wars trilogy.
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64 reviews
January 12, 2021
Absorbing Stories

Design a society, spend a day with a Viking, live with environmental destruction and some intriguing characters in this issue. I liked the combination of whimsy and seriousness, as well as good writing.
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385 reviews4 followers
October 17, 2020
Kikelomo Ultrasheen - Dare Segun Falowo ***
A coming of age story for a young hairdresser, marked from birth by the Onidiri to heal people by removing bad ori (in the form of snakes and insects) from their heads. The conflict with her mother over her destiny was a little vague but a nice story overall. The second person works well for a "chosen one" style tale, and lots of detail on different hairstyles!

The Million-Mile Sniper - SL Huang **
Short piece framed as commentary on a film based on the titular assassin's final job and conspiracy theories around it. Fun idea but not much there; could be fleshed out more but not sure the premise would withstand it. 

The Last Legend - Matthew Hughes **
Fine, well-told but somewhat tired - a young orphaned boy escapes from his miserable apprenticeship and drunkard uncle, goes on a journey and fulfils his destiny. Nothing really bad about it but nothing that sparks either. 

Come The Revolution - Ian Tregillis ****
Prequel to Tregillis' Alchemy Wars trilogy where clockwork servitors are the technology and military force providing the Dutch empire the power to dominate world affairs. Tells the origin of Mab, a central character from the novels, and deals with similar themes - freedom, slavery, and different ways the slaves cope and rebel against their owners. A good intro to the series or some nice backstory if you've read it. 

Red Sword Of The Celiac - John Possidente **
Like the idea of setting the story up as a review of another book, but this didn't quite work for me. Possibly missing some of the meta references but it felt like a straight review of an invented book, without revealing anything going on in the background. 

Say You're Sorry - Amman Sabet ***
New York is afflicted by a condition where insincere apologies cause ironic injuries to the person apologising. Realy like the idea and using it to explore how apologies themselves are used, usually for the benefit of the person who caused harm, what a sincere apology means and what it means to accept one or not. But, the relationships between the central character and his partner and dad felt a bit flat and it never quite took the extra step it needed. 

A Solitary Crane Circles Cold Mountain - Gregor Hartmann *
Something defeatist and sad about a story where the grand plan is to strip people of all modern knowledge and send them on a colony ship believing they are Han dynasty villagers, because that societal structure will apparently prevent devolution on the 20-generation journey. Even less enthused by the reason to leave the planet seemingly being that restrictions and efforts to repair the damage done by human industrialisation are too strict. 

A Feast Of Butterflies - Amanda Hollander ***
A new constable comes to a corrupt town and tries to keep his head down until he has to investigate the disappearance of five boys, including the grandson of the Judge, the de facto boss. Liked the strangeness of the cursed girl who is suspected and the general atmosphere but the final reveal was a little underwhelming and then taken a step further without adding much. 

Hungry Is The Earth - William Ledbetter ***
Classic alien invasion story with a girl trying to look after her younger brother as the food dwindles, due to the aggressive alien berries the otherwise seemingly peaceful invaders brought with them. Solid stuff, not a twist ending - more of a gentle turn - but well done. 

Hacksilver - Elizabeth Bear ****
A viking trader returns home after years to find his family's farm taken by a neighbour to settle his brother's blood debt, and that he must also help pay it. Strong sense of place and liked the gentle fantasy of manipulating luck. The satisfaction of the protagonist's revenge on his arrogant adversary after having injustices piled upon him is rich, textbook stuff. 

Death On The Nefertem Express - Brian Trent **
Problem with an SF locked room mystery is that, if the answer is an SF device you haven't introduced until the reveal, what's the point? Not helped by flat caricatures as your suspects. 

The Man I Love - James Patrick Kelly ****
Happy to admit I'm a sucker for a sweet love story and this was super sugary, but it's only a small dose so where's the harm. Our narrator runs a bar for ghosts - they usually fade away eventually but one young woman has been coming for decades and always plays the same song on the jukebox. 
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May 16, 2026
NOVELLAS
Come the Revolution - Ian Tregillis
Maklobellathistrogantus, mab for short, is a mechanical (robot) of the guild of the Brasswork Throne. Set in roughly the 1700s or 1800s Netherlands. A story of mechanical slavery. It's a prequel to his The Alchemy Wars trilogy. The story reminded me a lot of Detroit: Become Human.
ENJOYABLE

NOVELETS
Kikelomo Ultrasheen - Dare Segun Falowo
Hairdressing sure is magical.
BLAH

The Last Legend - Matthew Hughes
A promising young boy has dreams of greatness but lives a life misery. Will he ever be able to achieve his dreams?
OK

Hacksilver - Elizabeth Bear
A man who went a-viking returns after eight years to his family home, to find much has changed. This is much more legend than fantasy.
ENJOYABLE

Death on the Nefertem Express - Brian Trent
The Nefertem Express is a treaded vehicle heading ever westward to avoid the dawn that incinerates everything. This is its first run. Five passengers are aboard and one of them intends to murder all the others, but who is it?
OK

SHORT STORIES
The Million-Mile Sniper - S.L. Huang
An analysis of an omnidoc (movie) that informs the reader of the differences between the dramatization and actual events.
MEH

Red Sword of the Celiac - John Possidente
A review of a fictional novel trilogy about an immortal monster protagonist that eats people.
OK

Say You're Sorry - Amman Sabet
Our world as it is except that saying "Sorry" can cause immediate and inexplicable calamity.
MEH

A Solitary Crane Circles Cold Mountain - Gregor Hartmann
Lili is a sociophysicist developing the ideal society for a generation worldship that will take 400 years to reach its destination without any of the 18,000 passengers in stasis. The setting is China in maybe a century or two hence, with a world in chaos, and a culture ruled by what would currently be considered as social justice eco-terrorists.
HIGHLY ENJOYABLE

A Feast of Butterflies - Amanda Hollander
Strange modern fairy tale of a constable searching for a Judge's son and a girl who eats butterflies.
BLAH

Hungry is the Earth - William Ledbetter
Alien berries infects their hosts so they can spread across the galaxy and be planted on every planet.
BLAH

The Man I Love - James Patrick Kelly
The protagonist runs a bar he inherited from his uncle. It's only open on Mondays. All its patrons are ghosts.
OK
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October 24, 2021
(Amazon unlimited.) Because I’m not interested in editorial comment, book reviews, convention reviews, just the stories, and certainly not poetry, this had been so disappointing. I appreciate it provides jobs, and others will enjoy half the magazine not being fiction. I’m not into verbiage, just simple story telling which takes me to different worlds. Given not every story is good, on average about 1/4 of the pages get read, as I skip the rest.
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August 25, 2020
All good stories with a couple that were outstanding for me. These would be The Last Legend by Matthew Hughes and Death on the Nefertem Express by Brian Trent. The second is a bit of a locked room mystery with a severe time constraint.
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