… the doorway still framed emptiness. The meal clattered on. Nearly everybody here was English: the air was allowed to come in pleasantly through the open windows under green-striped awnings and feel its way, cool-fingered, from flushing face to face. Nobody was hurried or constrained, time put out no compulsion and the afternoon might have stretched ahead, as it seemed to stretch, brightly blank. Over it, however, habit had spun her web of obligations; a web infinitely fine and fragile from which it was yet impossible to break without outrage. Beyond the dining-room, along the expanses of the lounge, people risen early from their tables were awaiting one another, meek under the rule of precedent, to fulfil a hundred small engagements. Leisure, so linked up with ennui, has been sedulously barred away …
I don't think I've ever loved an author who's this difficult this much.
Difficult as in overcomplicated, overly-ambitious, circuitous; annoying, not tedious. Elizabeth Bowen writes in the tradition of Austen, of Henry James, of Thackeray, but she writes in the era of Waugh, Forster, Woolf, Aldous Huxley, Rebecca West. And while I've given this three stars, it's not so much for the work's accomplishments as it is for the vision, the white-knuckle-restrained execution, the absolute refusal to go along to get along.
Bowen's Hotel want to be a kind of Jamesian "innocents-abroad meet unforeseen-complexity" outing, meant for the boxing-out of mutually antagonistic worldviews, the interplay of thoughts-withheld vs views-expressed--you know-- the old verbal dagger and drawing room wit circuit. It also comes very near to Forster with the "Larky Holiday Outing Goes Dark And Scary-Vertiginous" structure over time. Italian Riviera, Brit expats. Complete with wiser, older Grand Matrons who stand by and comment for depthy reinforcement.
But this is Bowen's first book, and in spite of her courageous efforts to be obtuse, counter-customary and incisive-- no bell is rung, the effort is massive but the effect scatters itself. Unlike her major opuses, The House In Paris and The Last September, our Hotel denizens are never unpacked enough, the structuring weighs down the pace and cohesion. She misses that 'congruity' in James, where as we meet and become familiar with our characters, a shift takes place, toward an accelerated meshing of the narrative cogs. Producing, yes, pace. Direction.
Young Elizabeth Bowen wants it all right off the jump. She uses lots of oblique, vaguely cubist narrative angles on the story, breaking without notice into what today we'd recognize as Rashomon structure, but doesn't manage to circle in on a bright line or direction. Quite so much. (It should be said she's made it difficult for herself, in choosing a heroine who is in the tormented stages of early womanhood, juiced with emotion, uncertainty and rebelliousness on a hair trigger as her literate protagonist. Bright fireworks without and within yes, firm ground for a story, well, difficult.)
"Do you remember the Decameron lady who fished in the sea near here and was carried off by a pirate whom she liked from the first moment better than her husband?"
"Husband's shares were not good in those days," he said tolerantly. "I ought by the way to re-read my Decameron."
"Wouldn't it be nice," she said, suddenly smiling, "if the Saracens were to appear on the skyline, land and ravage the Hotel? They all take for granted--down there--that there aren't any more Saracens, but for all we know they may only be in abeyance. The whole Past, for a matter of fact, may be one enormous abeyance. "But I wonder," she added while a cloud of depression crept over her, "how many of us they would really care to take away?"
He did not know how she wished him to answer, and risked: "It would be an embarrassing choice."
She sighed flatly.
In the end, it all winds up in a poisonous revision of an Austen gallivant: the thorny briar path of Betrothal. For students of Bowen this is an indispensable outing. For the same sort of excursion by a more advanced practitioner, try booking a Passage To India.