Jean Angel

Jean Angel #1

by Atul Mohite

Book 1 of the Jean Angel Series:

Jean is growing up as a child in Kala Nagari, a town away from the misery of its neighboring kingdom Zesia. The king of Zesia is ferocious and is after the blood of people suffering from mental illness. He wants his kingdom to be strong and thinks that such people are good for nothing. But there’s a reason why such people are aggrieved in his kingdom. A famous prophet has predicted a prophecy that the king of Zesia shall be dethroned by someone who could see things that others cannot. Will someone with a mind so fragile be able to avenge the mighty king of Zesia?

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Published May 1, 2020

About the author

Atul Mohite is the author of four books - Lucid Dream, Of Two Minds, Lucid Dream - the journey resumes and Jean Angel. He published his first book, Lucid Dream when he was nineteen years old which depicts his career transition from an aspiring engineer to a writer, while his other books have addressed complex themes involving psychology, romance and adventure inspired by his life events. He was born in the city of Karad, Maharashtra where he currently works as an officer at Bank of India. He enjoys listening to music and playing lawn tennis during his spare time.

Reviews

[Khyati Gautam · Rating 2 out of 5]

Jean Angel by Atul Mohite is a fantasy fiction novella set in the kingdom of Zesia. It focuses on a prophecy that states that the cruel ruler of Zesia would be killed by somebody special. There is his queen who never got love from her husband and falls in love with a nobody. She wants to escape the clutches of the King and so does she.

The novella essentially contemplates on the emergence of good to annihilate the evil. And to fulfill this purpose, we have our hero Jean. But there is a lot of story behind his existence and purpose. Everything would be revealed to him after 15 years of birth in the land of Kala Nagari. Would he be able to fulfill the prophecy?

The author has woven a simple story with a hero and the devil. The plotline wasn't unique that instantly pulled me off from the book. The characters are sketched well and ample attention is given to each of them keeping the length of the book in mind. However, the story didn't give out that fantasy vibe to me. The thrill and intrigue were amiss. The language is pretty easy but not exactly suitable for the setting of a fantasy plot. Moreover, the book had proofreading errors seemingly interrupting a reader's experience.

A few instances remained inadequately explained in a book that ultimately ended on a cliffhanger. I would want to read the next part to see if our hero Jean can pull off the show.

[Shazia Noor · Rating 4 out of 5]

"𝖄𝖔𝖚 𝖒𝖚𝖘𝖙 𝖘𝖍𝖆𝖗𝖊 𝖙𝖍𝖊 𝖍𝖆𝖕𝖕𝖎𝖓𝖊𝖘𝖘 𝖗𝖆𝖙𝖍𝖊𝖗 𝖙𝖍𝖆𝖓 𝖙𝖆𝖐𝖎𝖓𝖌 𝖎𝖙 𝖆𝖑𝖑 𝖇𝖞 𝖞𝖔𝖚𝖗𝖘𝖊𝖑𝖋."

⚔️The story kicks off with the kingdom named Zesia, where the king Robert harass the people of his own kingdom.

👴🏻There's a rishi(Mohan) who comes out with a prediction that, one day, the king will be removed from his kingdom, it'll be done by someone who could see things and will have a God's scar on his chest.

⌛People were tired of the King and his strict rules, and they wanted freedom. They wanted art, music, literature in Zesia like that of their neighbouring city, Kala Nagari.

🗡️As the king heard of this prophecy he killed the rishi(Mohan).

👸🏻Queen Tara was just opposite of the king. She wanted peace, happiness, living people not dead people all around her. She wanted to rule which was impossible in a male-dominant kingdom like Zesia.

✨When the king was gone for a year or two. She had a child with a man(Shyam) who was a good person and worked for king forcefully as everybody else does.

🧚🏻‍♀️Who knew the child of prophecy would be none other than Queen and Shyam's own child 'Jean'. Because of the fear of the king Shyam took off with the baby and gave it to a trustable person 'Radha' who take care of Jean for good 15 years but after 15 years Tara finds a letter from Shyam and after reading what is written in the letter she ran away from the cruelty filled kingdom and with a help of man, goes to Kala nagri.

💭Would Tara will find his child?
Would Jean will ever know about the prophecy? Would the king will be defeated and the kingdom will live happily ever after?

📖Read the book and know yourself!

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🗯️The story was very captivating and interesting. I was a bit irritated at the end while I read "...to be continued". I mean it's a short story so why not end it there?

👏🏻Otherwise it is written in a very well manner and filled with thrill, adventures and mysteries.

💁🏻‍♀️I would recommend everyone to read it as it's also short so won't take a lot of time to read.

[Manish Narayan · Rating 4 out of 5]

A historical fiction that revolves around a little boy named Jean who grows up to be a fighter. The book relays on metaphors to explain the significance of emotional stability and to go with what one's heart. The story is a call of awareness for those that need to be educated in the field of mental illnesses and a cry for help for the ones suffering from them.
Jean was the son of Queen Tara but his father wasn't the king due to which he was raised outside of the kingdom without the knowledge of the king at Kala Nagari. He started going to school but could never finish his schooling as Jean meets an angel who taught him how to fight. King Robert, the king of Zesia is a cruel man. He started torturing people who could see things that were not visible to others.
Characters have been developed equally well keeping reads glued throughout.
Overall, the story is filled with twists and turns and drama, creeping a sense of nostalgia up in your mind while you read.

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Jean Angel by Atul Mohite , the story revolves around 15 year boy Jean, who was brought up in Kala Nagari but was born in Zesia Kingdom. In Kingdom , King used to harass people. People out there were living in misery, they wanted freedom and peace from the King and his rules. Where as Queen Tara was a Kind and peace loving human. She wanted loving and kind people living with happiness in the kingdom.

After few years, Queen Tara had given birth to a child named Jean. Jean was the child of Queen Tara and Shyam who was forcefully working in Kingdom.

In back a Rishi named Mohan had given the prediction that one day king will be removed by someone.

And , now that someone in Jean, the child of Queen Tara and Shyam. Shyam was afraid of King so had given his child to Radha , a truthful person, who promises to take care of Jean for next 15 years.

Tara rans away due to the harrasments of king and reached to Kala Nagari to find her child and... She makes Jean remember the things and Jean founds himself to be the son of Tara.
With help of his mother Tara , he decides to do justice and starts finding out king's cruel works. Jean is born with special feature i.e J mark on his chest.

Will Jean kill Robert and will he be able to save the kingdom Zesia? For knowing more you need to read the book yourself.

Story is written in a very good manner. Engaging and captivating one. Writing style is perfect, easy to understand. Book's cover is eye catchy with sober colours. Title is appropriate , story revolves around Jean.

I found this book as an amazing read with mystery , adventures and kindness.

Keep reading...

[Sourav Chatterjee · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow. After a long time I read such an interesting book. This is story of a fifteen year old boy, Jean who is born in Zeasia and brought up in Kala Nagari. The king of Zeasia is so cruel towards his country people. Jean is able to see the future. Will Jean be able to save his country from the cruel king!?
The story is really short and the readers could read the book in one go. The narration is really good, the way the author portraited every character is just awesome. The storyline and the concept is really unique.
I jus loved the cover of the book, is really interesting.
The language is simple and lucid.
The title is appropriate with the story.
I'm waiting for the next part of this book.
A must read!

[Amisha · Rating 2 out of 5]

Well, honestly saying, I am pretty disappointed after reading this book. The plot as well as the prose , both were mediocre. The plot was pretty light, as in the sense it was lacking something. I felt it was lacking some basic detailing. The flow of the storyline is pretty unstable and jumps from one scene to another pretty quickly, such that it didn't gave me time to build my imagination for the scenes described. At many points, the plot was highly unconvincing. All of this was topped off with fragile writing. The writing was so basic and bland for a fantasy story. I didn't feel thrilled at all. The author could have presented the story a bit better.

[Manish Raj · Rating 5 out of 5]

The cover is what made me pick the book and dig into its mystery right away. This is a book that tempts the reader from the very start.This is a thriller bound story which kept readers hold on to the book till the end.This spine-chilling and optimistic book is a perfect read for rejuvenation and fun.

The story is centred about a prophecy that states "The king will bring down by someone who could see things that others cannot!", that someone is no other than Queen's son Jean, who was born out of an affair with Shyam, the royal worker under the king Robert of Kingdom Zesia. Jean had a peculiar visualizing power through his dreams and even meets an Angel who teaches him some tricks and methods to enhance the power and control the mind and his emotions. He supposed to bring peace and instill happiness by eradicating the reign of cruel King Robert.
I love the plot of the story, author has created and forced the readers to be engaged.

The language of the book was lucid and simple . It is a fictional story but it definitely has a lesson in the end. Well I'm leaving it upto you ...to find it . This book has many hidden wonders one could find.

I would recommend readers who love fiction can read this book, it is totally worth to read .

Thank you ✨

[Ishan Agrawal · Rating 4 out of 5]

I have always admired folk stories be it of Indian origin or of foreign. So before picking this one up which bears close resemblance to being a classical tale itself, I dint give much of a thought and fortunately the decision turned out to be in my favour.

The story has various characters namely King Robert, Queen Tara, Radha etc but is centered around a young lad, Jean who is struggling with identity crisis. He posesses a 'J' mark on his body and could never decipher the reason behind it . After reading voraciously so as to get acclimatised to his weird personality, he starts having hallucinations. Soon, he comes to know about his past and his real mother Tara, and pledges to take revenge against the cruel king.

The story is full of adventure and quite different from the ones, flooded in the market today. It has various crests and troughs and the pace is well maintained too.

[Sadaf sarkar · Rating 4 out of 5]

Jean angel is a fantasy from an Indian author . The major action takes place between two which are opposite banks of the river , namely Zesia and Kali Nagri .The book contains court intrigue and tyranny . The book is comparatively short and can be read in one sitting. However, the book ends in a cliffhanger so you will need to wait for the next part .The language is simple and understand. There are certain grammatical and editorial errors but this can be easily overlooked .

[Varsha Agarwal · Rating 4 out of 5]

TITLE: JEAN ANGEL
AUTHOR: ATUL MOHITE
GENRE: FANTASY
RATING: 4/5
BOOK FORMAT: KINDLE
Book 1 of the Jean Angel Series
BOOK REVIEW
The story revolves around 15 years old Jean growing up as a child in Kala Nagri who could be the destroyer of evil and the one who could see things other cannot. This is predicted before jean was born by an elderly man living in zesia named Mohan. His only ability is to predict the future which always led to the prosperity of zesia except for this one when he predicted city (zesia) destruction. For this prediction zesia king Robert brutally killed Mohan.
The king of Zesia is ferocious and is after the blood of people suffering from mental illness. He wants his kingdom to be strong and thinks that such people are good for nothing.
I hooked with the story from the very beginning but at the end, I feel the story can end in a better way but the 2 books of the series are coming. This story is very short; I completed this book in one sitting. The writing style of the author is simple and the language is lucid. This can be a good read for the beginner of the fantasy genre. I recommend this book to all the fantasy genre readers.

[Riya Sarkar · Rating 2 out of 5]

Writing a book with a proper narrative is not just about telling the story, it's also about showing the plot, showing exactly how it happened. This was something that the author failed to do. Quite a lot of plot points were just stated in the narrative rather than actually happening.⁣
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The plot itself was quite smooth going, there was nothing unpredictable in the plot. There were quite a lot of grammatical errors throughout the book. It still had some potential to be intriguing but the narrative which was supposed to be it's spine and support system, couldn't do so.⁣
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The entire characterization throughout the book was so disappointing. The characters just just lacked depth in lots of places where it was important to connect with the characters' emotion. Characters are important parts of a book which I just found lacking in this one.⁣
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It was fantasty book so the author had more room to use his imagination and do better world building which was not done properly. Like a lot of things were just randomly happening, no reason or theories behind them.⁣
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Overall, it could have been much better. It definitely had a lot of potential which was wasted.

[Sanchari Das · Rating 5 out of 5]

"The history is made from what we live today."

Set in the magical land of Zesia and Kala Nagari, "Jean Angel" by Atul Mohite is a fantasy novel that stars the birth and growing up of Jean, the child of the prophecy.

Born out of the extramarital affair of Queen Tara of Zesia and brought up in Kala Nagari by Radha, Jean grows up dreaming strange dreams. His dreams and hallucinations torture him as well as shows him the path to his destiny. Unable to understand the meaning of such dreams, Jean struggles to find a connection between dream and reality, and often oscillates between the two. His life takes a turn when he meets his Angel who trains him so that he may fight with the torturous King Robert of Zesia.

Several themes as well as valuable lessons are enclosed in this remarkably compact book. Theme of woman empowerment, importance of hardwork and struggle for freedom is beautifully woven into the tale.

The tale is also spun around the theme of Zesia VS. Kala Nagari that feels similar to the theme of Civilization VS. Nature. Zesia and Kala Nagari are opposite to each other, separated by a river in between; and they are also opposite in character. Zesia is the epitome of imprisonment while Kala Nagari is the land of liberty. Zesia values rules and regulations above all, while in Kala Nagari freedom rules the heart. The women are not suppressed here as they are in Zesia as in Kala Nagari they are all equals. And with liberty, art and culture flourishes the land of Kala Nagari that always seems to be high on music and literature, something that Zesia failed to provide its people with.

The book also hints at how people in this society suffers for being different than others. Jean immediately appears to be a misfit for his ability to know about the history not by reading books but through his dreams. People call them "weak" and refuse to see the strength that they home within. They are also the "weird" ones because they choose not to aline their own thoughts with that of the social beliefs.

The book meticulously combines fantasy with reality. There are magic and supernatural elements but most importantly there are knowledge and hardwork behind everything.

The book ends in a cliffhanger, hinting that it's only the beginning of the journey, the real story is yet to begin; it only prepares Jean to recognize himself as the child of the prophesy, the real battle is far beyond.

"Truth, nobody knew, nobody shall know."

[Booknerds · Rating 4 out of 5]

With an almost pocketbook-esque vibe, Atul Mohite does in 74 pages what many fail to achieve in books triple the length, an engaging plot with characters that one can connect to, deeply.

Jean Angel is the story of a ruthless king, who stops at nothing, to remain in power, even if it means killing everyone who comes in his way, whether it is a queen who feels helpless in her own kingdom, a soldier who fell in love but it took his life, a concerned mother whose only wish is to keep her child protected from unforeseen dangers or a young boy who is plagued by dreams of fulfilling his destiny.

Encapsulating little filler content, the book relays in metaphors the significance of emotional stability and the importance of leading with your heart.

The title of the book creates an interesting juxtaposition between Jean's perception of Angel as his mentor and guide, a friend who is there to help him in times of distress, and the view of the people of Zeasia who consider Jean to be their savior against the cruel king.

The story is a call of awareness for those that need to be educated in the field of mental illnesses and a cry for help for the ones suffering from them. It sends the message that people with mental illnesses are just the same as other people and that they shouldn't be alienated from the society just because they do not fit the status quo.

Accompanied by a driving narrative and tremendously captivating writing, Atul Mohite entertains the reader with a tale full of lore, action and adventure but along the journey leaves behind meaningful messages of acceptance, determination and inner strength.

[Motivationaldailythoughts · Rating 4 out of 5]

Title - Jean Angel
Author - Atul Mohite
Genre - fantasy
Pages - 75
Format - kindle
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The story revolves around the protagonist Jean, a 15 year old boy who was born in Zesia but brought up in Kala Nagari. He was born out of an extramarital affair of queen Tara with Shyam and that's the reason he was not raised in the kingdom. The Queen then ran away and reached to Kala Nagri and started living with Radha as the king began to harass her. Jean is known as the child of prophecy and born with a J mark on his chest.
Was Jean able to save the kingdom of Zesia from the torture of king Robert?
To know read the book.
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The cover of the book is okayish and the title is totally apt. The plot of the story is interesting, dark and captivate. It is a perfect blend of suspense, thrill, superstitions and adventures. All the emotions are beautifully narrated by the author.
Language used by the author is simple and writing style is amazing. Characters are well developed and described.
Hats off to the author for his imagination. Overall, a short and adventurous read. Awaiting it's sequel. The story could be finished in this one too.
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Rating - 4.2/5
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I recommend this book to all fantasy lovers out there.

[Ruchi Patel · Rating 5 out of 5]

It’s a short book that can be read in few hours. Hence I will keep my reviews short to avoid spoilers. The protagonist of the story is Jean. He is fifteen year old boy. He is the son of queen Tara. He was born in Zeasia but brought up in Kala Nagari. He is not son of King And Queen. But he was born out of extra marital affair of Queen with Shyam. But because of this there are consequences. Jean was unaware of his parents and origin. He stopped going to school and he faced hallucinations of an imaginary person named Angel. He began to took training from him. Read thr book to unfold further plot. I loved the plot. It is wonderfully imagined. There are number of twists and turns plotted that makes the plot interesting. I was curious all the time as the story is completely unpredictable. I liked the imagination of the author. The narration style is good. It is like watching a movie. The language of the book is lucid. So that everyone can pick it up. I liked the chosen names for the characters and places. And after a while story took a major turn, that stole my attention. The Angel’s character is something different, that unpredictable for me. Overall good one. I want to read more from the same author. Recommended from my side.

[Sarath Vijayan · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is an amazing story . The story starts with Mohan who predicts the future of the kingdom of Zesia that "The king shall be removed from his position, and the one doing that will be someone who could see things that others cannot! While he shall carry God’s scar on his chest, and when he enters, the golden days for this kingdom shall come!"Upon hearing this the cruel King Robert kills him.

His wife tara , the queen doesn't likes it . She falls in love with shyam one of soldier in Robert's army and soon she give birth to a baby with scar on his chest and Shyam takes this child to Kala Nagri . He hand over this kid to radha and names him Jean . Jean means god is gracious .Shyam suicides after this .

Jean grows up with special ability to see what others can't see and his real mother tara cames to know about his existence and comes to kala Nagri after 15 years .

What happens after this in order to know more read this book . Will he be successful ? How will he do it ?Who is the Angel in this story ?

The narration of this story is good and wonderful and it's very fast . I am eagerly waiting for its sequel to know more .

The language used is simple and I will recommend this book to all

Overall my rating 4/5

[Reshma · Rating 4 out of 5]

Jean angel by Atul mohite

it's a fantasy story.
This story is revolves around the 15 years old boy jean who is born in zesia but brought up in Kala Nagari .
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The other protagonist are king Robert, queen Tara, shyam and Radha.
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Robert is cruel king of zesia kingdom who harasses his people. queen Tara is forcefully married by king Robert and shyam is warm hearted man he is a member of kings army.
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The king Robert was out from zesia for two years that time queen Tara fell in love with Shyam they queen gave birth. Their child is jean he is the person who changed everything's in zesia kingdom.
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Shyam was scared about king so he gave his child jean to Radha. Radha the person who raised jean for 15 years.
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Later queen Tara ran away from zesia to Kala Nagari to find her child. Jean is a special gifted child from god who is born with the j mark in his chest.
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Will jean helps the zesia kingdom people's?
Will Queen Tara find her child?

Do you want to know about these then read the book. The language of the book is quite simple and understandable.
The title of the book is Very apt for this story.

[Neelam Mungekar · Rating 4 out of 5]

‘Jean Angel: The Child of the Prophecy’ by Atul Arjun Mohite is a story that revolves around 15 years old Jean born in Zesia and brought up in Kala Nagari. The people of Zesia always wanted peace but the king was very cruel and they all longed for the prophecy to come true. And hence, they wait for their savior to come and save them all from the cruel king. Jean being brought up in Kala Nagari has no clue about his family or about his past. Jean is unaware of the prophecy and leading a normal life until one day when he meets an angel and it trains him and lets him know about the required information. Who is Jean? Is Jean really the one to fulfill the prophecy? To know more read ‘Jean Angel: The Child of the Prophecy’
My Thoughts:
The plot is interesting and captivating. The story is fascinating with plot twists on every page also the journey of Jean is very adventurous. The characters are well developed and the author has described them in such a manner that the readers will be connected to them. Language is simple and lucid and the narration is well done. The cover and the title of the book is apt to the plot.
Overall, I enjoyed reading this book and would surely recommend it to all.

[Aditi Mehta · Rating 3 out of 5]

"Jean Angel", novella by Atul Mohite revolves around 15 year old boy Jean, who was born by the extramarital affair of queen Tara and a man named Shyam. The story takes us to otherworldly fantasy landscape, Kingdom of Zesia and Kala Nagri with king, queen, throne, magical prophecy, revenge and villain.

What is the heart of the book is that it is a fast paced adventure, fuelled with themes of questing and redemption. Reading this book is the exhilarating experience. It made me believe that everything is possible.
But what the story lacks is the originality with all the prophecy of the God's chosen one killing the brutal king and saving the kingdom (The book constantly reminds me of Bahubali mixed up with Indian mythology). Though the author makes up for it with audacity and story execution.

The narration is fine and cover each and every pace in a effortless way but what it lacks is the complexity which the story demands but despite this I found myself engaging with the story and couldn't put it down till it's completed and I found myself asking for more.
The climax is perfectly executed "end is the beginning" and I was left wishing it would come sooner.

[Saranya Raghavan · Rating 4 out of 5]

Book review: ✍️
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Title: Jean Angel: The Child Of The Prophecy
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Author: Atul Arjun Mohite
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Format: Kindle
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Genre: Fantasy
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The story revolves around a fifteen-year-old protagonist Jean. He was born out of an extramarital affair of queen Tara with Shyam, so brought up in a different City called Kala Nagari, after the death of Shyam.✍️ After so much harassment from King, The queen runs away to reaches Kala Nagari where she meets Radha and Another traveller Jean who struggles with schooling as he goes through several strange dreams and starts hallucinating of a person he calls as Angel From whom he starts learning everything.✍️ Meanwhile, at Zesia King Robert continues to kill those suffering from mental illness since he believes in a prophecy that his kingdom will be destroyed by a person who could see things that others cannot.✍️
loved the cover of the book as it is grabbing the reader's attention. The title is very felicitous for the story. Nextly, the language is simple and lucid. To find out more about this, one must buy and read this book...This is an enthralling Read...✍️
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[book_louse09 · Rating 4 out of 5]

The book 'Jean Angel' is written by Atul Mohite is about the fantacy of Zesia kingdom. This is a short read with amazing storyline where a 15 year old boy named Jean is marked with a J letter on his chest. He sees different visual images which he is not able to understand.
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The story is like there is a cruel king who dosen't have mercy on anyone. The people of the Kingdom wants freedom from him. Once a Rishi told a prophecy that the king will be removed by "someone who could see things that others cannot." So the king starts hunting that person afraid that the prophecy might be true.
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On the other hand Queen kindles a extramarital romance with Shyam, an employee in the kingdom and has a child named Jean. Worried what the King might do to his child once he finds out, Shyam gave the child to a woman named Radha for 15 years.
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But here comes the twist where after few years Tara ran away to Kala Nagri to find her child Jean. She tells him the secret and Jean now wants to help his mother from that cruel king. So will Jean be able to save the kingdom? Will he be able to kill the king?
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The title of the book is perfect where 'Angel' one will get to know once you read the book. The plot is gripping and interesting to read filled with suspense. The cover is also very attractive with a boy sitting in front of a castle. A book which i will recommend to read.

[Sai Amirapu · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short read

The story is all about the prophecy that states "The king will bring down by someone who could see things that others cannot!", that someone is no other than Queen's son Jean, who was born out of an affair with Shyam, the royal worker under the king Robert of Kingdom Zesia.
Is it not treachery? Hmmm... May be circumstances dragged them. But...
Well!!! Anyways
Jean had a peculiar visualizing power through his dreams and even meets an Angel who teaches him some tricks and methods to enhance the power and control the mind and his emotions. He supposed to bring peace and instill happiness by eradicating the reign of cruel King Robert.

Here in place after fifteen long years, Tara, the 'Queen' got to know the whereabouts of her son and was in search of her son. Does she found him? Does jean get back to Zesia? There are two other amazing characters Rene and Nath. Looking forward to read it's sequel.

Rating: 3.2/5.

[Ashwani Kumar Sinha · Rating 4 out of 5]

My Review - A short, crisp plot driven fantasy book.
You can't judge a fantasy by the very first book of it's series.
But what I get is, the story will probably ends in the next book.

I failed to acknowledge any character development, and I also failed to feel attached to any character emotional.
But I should not forget to mention, that's it's just style and this book is purely plot and story driven. And you can't expect more in less than 100 pages.

The story is About Jean, who has royal blood but still due to some circumstances can't able to afford the luxurious life of Royal palace, he was miles aware about this truth, but as the pages of destiny reveals, everything starts coming close and towards an end. (Read book blurb on Amazon for more insight). Well author decided to not end the story and continue it in next part. I guess the next part might have some twist of events and maybe story get stretched a bit more and we might able to get insight of Queen' past. A small book, but a potential fantasy book.
The seems very much promising to me, hope he will stand upgo my expectations.
Let's see how author decides to proceed with it.

[Siddhant Kataria · Rating 2 out of 5]

[Don’t Miss It Because Of The Rating] (2.8/5)

One day, you unlock your cupboard and find a doorway to fantasy land, so that’s what happens when we read a book based on the fantasy genre. Jean Angel- The Child Of The Prophecy by Atul Mohite is one such book.

Jean is going to be the saviour of the people of Zesia, a kingdom ruled by the ruthless king Robert. The story begins with the prophecy of Mohan, who tells the citizens that the one who can see what others cannot, and he who will carry a God’s scar on his chest, will be their deliverance. Robert is known for his cruelty. One who stands in his way will be decimated to protect his ego. Robert fails to please his wife Tara, who longs for a man’s love and cannot stand his cruelty; she ends up falling for one of the guards named Shyam. Later, Shyam delivers their baby to a lady who lives in the land across the river, Kala Nagari. Kala Nagari receives its first rainfall after years of drought, and people believe this to be as divine intervention. Is this the child of the prophecy? If yes, how will Robert not know about it? What will happen to Tara? Will Shyam be able to inform her, or will he be killed by the king’s men? What about the lady? How will she protect the kid?

The story is interesting. The writing style is good, but there are moments where explanation would have worked better for the readers. The storyline deserves to be extolled, but the lack of explanation raises many questions, like why did Shyam trust the lady in Kala Nagari? Also, the story confused me if it was set in the modern or ancient world. Overall, the author seems to be in haste. Nevertheless, I have heard that other volumes to this series are well explained, and the story gets better ahead, so this was its inception.

[Anjedah / bookriot_awesomeyou · Rating 4 out of 5]

Fantastic

I actually expected it to be get quite rushed towards the end (BECAUSE THERE WAS JUST FEW PAGES BUT A LOT IS HAPPENING!), but it didn’t.
There’s nothing to get disappointed when it comes to the way he delivers his masterpieces. A story where a cruel king runs a devastated kingdom just to satisfy his greed. A prophecy was made. A son born out of affair will unrule the king and his kingdom.
Overall, Jean Angel is more laid-back with just the right amount of magic, adventure, romance, and more. The book has all the elements that can keep a reader engaged from start to finish.

It felt like there’s a lot more room for more story to tell, but at the same time it didn’t feel lacking in a way. Somewhere in the grey area of wanting more and feeling already satisfied with how it wrapped up.

[Manoj Kumar · Rating 5 out of 5]

R•E•V•I•E•W 📚

🌸Book Name: Jean Angel: The Child Of Prophecy
🌸Author: Atul Arjun Mohite
🌸Format: Kindle
🌸Language: English
🌸 Pages: 75
🌸 Genre: Sci-fi
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟/5

Jean Angel is the third book in the series 'Jean Angel'. The story is a real thriller. The story continues on everyone supporting Jean and his battles to be the New King according to the prophecy.
The main plot of the book is King Robert's behaviour from being cruel to being polite.
The book ends with a lot of unanswered questions.The language used is really good and narration is simply intresting. The blurb is thought provoking with the mention of Jean, Son of Tara and Shyam. The storyline is very lively. What happened to Jean and his delusional life in this series? Grab your copy of the book and read it.

[Ajayshankar11 · Rating 3 out of 5]

Jean Angel by Atul Mohite is a interesting period drama short read. It is more like a introductory book, setting the stage for next book.

Blurb gives away the plot and more than what is penned in present book. As the name goes it's about Jean, he getting to know about himself and the prophecy. Read to know about him, his parents, his kingdom Kala Nagari, about Radha under whom he grows, how he crosses path with Angel and more by reading the plot.

Plot is entertaining but is raw, lacks depth in characters and plot, narration is gripping but doesn't flow smoothly. Conclusive climax would have made read better.

Personally feel a mixed bag one time read.

[Niharika Srivastava · Rating 4 out of 5]

A story set in Zesia and Kala Nagari, both separated by the river. Shisha having luxury and riches but rule by a cruel king Robert where as Kala Nagari happy and compassionate land. The story revolves around a prophecy, "The king shall be removed from his position, and the one doing that will be someone who could see things that others cannot! While he shall carry God’s scar on his chest, and when he enters, the golden days for this kingdom shall come!".

The cruel King Robert had a soft hearted Queen Tara, who craved for love and respect and was against the unjust practices of the king. The story narrates how she give birth to the child, who was christened as Jean meaning God is gracious. Jean was a gifted child and was brought up by Radha from Kala Nagari. Unknown of the mystery of the kingdom and the legacy how Tara and Jean team up to actualize the prophecy is narrated in the story.
The book has very effective character sketches including that of Shyam and the Angel. The characters are well structured specially Jean and his inherent qualities and approaches in life. Reading the book felt more like watching a spiced up movie. Although at time it acted as a backdrop as it seemed inspired from various fictitious sources.
But no doubt that the book is a very nice leisure read with simple writing style and well paced storyline.

The book ends up with a great suspense. I am eagerly waiting for the sequel that shall unveil the happenings after Jean reached Zesia and meets Renee, who is impressively introduced in the book.

[Kavitha Sharma · Rating 4 out of 5]

'Jean Angel' by @atulmohite91 is a fantasy fiction, the story revolves around a fifteen years old Jean and his supernatural powers. The kingdom of Zesia is not like other kingdom, it is under the dictatorship of Robert. Robert ,a tyrannical king who is ready to kill anyone if they disobey his orders. His relationship with his wife is not really good and she is merely a slave to his desires. Robert’s wife Tara is a queen who seeks freedom and she got tired of the king’s dictatorship, finally she sought the freedom from one of the kings soldiers.

The extra marital affair of Tara with the king’s soldier becomes intense and eventually they are in the struggle to save the life of their new born baby Jean.

‘Jean Angel’ is a young adult fantasy novel which is written in simple and lucid language. I was expecting a lot of fantasy elements, but the author has not introduced many fantasy elements into this book. The book is around seventy five pages and it is an easy read for all the beginners and if you are a lover of easy breezy fantasy book, then I would recommend this book for you. The readers can expect a sequel of this book as it has ended abruptly. The story line of this is not very much exciting but as there is a sequel, the readers can expect exciting adventures in that! I would like to recommend this book for all beginners who love fantasy fictions

My Rating : 3.6

[Chitra Iyer · Rating 3 out of 5]

Hey guys! Today I have a review for you. It is a fantasy book called Jean Angel by Atul Mohite. Now, I don’t usually read books of this genre but the summary looked good enough so I decided to give it a try.

Let us get down to the review then.

Summary

Fifteen year old Jean was born in Zeasia but brought up in Kala Nagari, which is across the other end of the river. The reason for he not being raised in the kingdom where he was born is the fact that he was born out of an extramarital affair of Queen Tara with Shyam, who receives a tortured death as the king returns from his travelling. The Queen then decides to run away as the king begins to harass her for what she had done.

She reaches Kala Nagari, where she lives with Radha who earns her living through providing service to the travellers. There, lives another traveller named Jean, raised as Radha’s son! Unaware of his origins, Jean struggles through school & becomes a misfit immediately as he goes through strange dreams & hallucinations of a person that he calls Angel. He stops going to school, soon enough, & takes all his training from Angel that includes physical training & controlling his emotions through meditation. The hallucination can be due to his excessive reading he does for understanding his personality, but he is too young to realize that.

He carries a birth scar of ‘J’ on his chest that he is supposed to hide from others since it might look strange to the others. While the scar, is why he receives the name ‘Jean’ meaning the God is gracious. At Zeasia, King Robert continues to kill those suffering with mental illness since he believes in a prophecy that his kingdom will be finished by ‘someone who could see things that others cannot!’ Clearly, Jean qualifies as one such person. Will he bring the mighty king down fulfilling the prophecy?

What I Liked

The story line is good. The introduction sets the tone of the book – adventurous, and the reader wants to keep reading to find out what happens next.

The characters are described in detail, albeit sketchy at places. The story has all the right elements. A cruel King, and a Queen who wants to escape it all. A child born but raised in a different land who dreams of strange things he doesn’t know the significance of. And then towards the end, he realises his purpose for a greater good.

I found the story interesting and thought there was some good imagination at play using simple language.

What I Did Not Like

Firstly, there are lots of editing and proofreading mistakes. The jarring narrative makes it difficult to enjoy the story.

Other Details

Jean Angel is the first book that I have come across by the author. He has authored other books as well. Here is his Goodreads profile, check it out.

https://www.goodreads.com/author/show...

Would I Recommend It?

If you are a fantasy lover, then yes, you’ll surely enjoy it.