Cute, but cheesy and needed proofing.
I liked the hero and heroine, but I hated how proud the hero was of his “smooth talking.” I don't trust smooth-talking guys; they're so fake and/or working toward an ulterior motive.
I liked most of the family dynamics, except for the sister. She was unbelievably one-dimensional, completely awful until right at the end. I liked that all the siblings were named after Christmas words, but I don't think Noel is a man's name—at least, if it's pronounced Noelle like the “First Noel.”
Favorite quotes:
“Kelly Clarkson's rendition of 'I'll Be Home for Christmas' crooned through the speakers. Starr shook her head at the unnecessary reminder...” (chapter 1, p. 7)
“She exuded the air of a socialite, while Starr embodied... Home. He blinked. Obviously, the holidays had put him in a nostalgic mood.” (chapter 2, p. 19)
“I don't need her to apologize in order to forgive. She winced, because forgiving Angel had never been high on her priority list.” (chapter 13, p. 101)
“'I don't deserve forgiveness.' 'None of us ever do.'” (chapter 15, p. 114)