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That’s in exchange of an honest review that I received an ARC of « Drawn » by Carsen Taite from BSB (via NetGalley).
So, here it is !!!
It’s actually the first time I’m able to read one of Carsen Taite’s books since I’ve begun to read lesfic in English a few years back. I’ve heard a lot of good things (really a lot …) about the author’s talent about writing great "Intrigue & Thriller" and "Romance" through the years so, since I’m a huge fan of both genres, I was impatient to discover her "skillful penmanship" praised by so many other readers … Sadly, I was disappointed. I think it was a lame cop story and an unfinished novel. It’s a real shame because there was a lot of potential in there …
My rating : 2 ⭐️
The story sets in Dallas, Texas and focuses on urban artist Riley Flynn & Detective Claire Hanlon.
Riley spends her days wandering the streets of Dallas, sketching the city she loves. She had a contact with a renowned gallery and she is on the verge of seeing her carrer propelled to the next level because of this bootstrap …
Claire Hanlon is all about the facts, all about the law, all about climbing the Dallas PD ladder & her career advancement hinges on capturing the killer terrorizing the city…
Both meet when dead bodies start showing up in the exact locations Riley was sketching and Claire is designated to lead the investigation. With every reason in the world to distrust the law, Riley’s reluctant to help the striking detective assigned to the case, especially after the cops start treating her like a suspect.
Don’t get me wrong, I loved the interesting blurb & the beautiful drawing on the cover and I appreciated the good touches of humor found from time to time but I wonder why on earth that book is so short and superficial… Has it been cut for some reason ?? Seriously, it doesn’t make any sense because such a short story doesn’t leave any place for :
° a real character development => by the end of the book we don’t really know a lot more about the MCs than we did at the beginning so it’s hard to connect with them.
° the MCs to learn to know each other & really connect the one with the other. => The "attraction" between the MCs is quite often mentioned but I wasn’t able to feel any alchemy in there … so, I wonder if the regular mention of it was to convince us (the readers) that, indeed, there was some chemistery between Claire and Riley. To be able to feel anything, witnessing more interactions between the MCs would have been a good thing, don’t you think ???
° the cops to lead a real and meticulous investigation full of angst and suspence …
The time frame is way too tight to allow both the police work and the romance to be credible …
Yeah, because …
°° That’s stagnant for three weeks and then … Boom !! Like by miracle, in no time they get everything under control and the real culprit under arrest and even saved the "damsel" in distress … => I don’t buy it & think it would have been interesting :
°* to know more about the bad guy (he was far from being convincing, and when it comes to his motive, well…) How did the "psychopath" pick up his victims ?? (did he pick them up totally randomly or did he stalk them before ?? How did he meet them in the first place ?? etc … )
°* to know more about the crappy job, the police corruption and the cover up revolving around the sordid affair about Riley’s father being falsely convicted of murder … Why wasn't there a part about an investigation (maybe a parallel / secret one on the side) about that huge mess up full of loose ends ?? An investigation led by Claire, of course, one which which would have really justified her promotion, a reward for her good job and not because her « Uncle Bruce » pulled some strings … Having such additions as interviews with Bruce (as a suspect this time) & people from back then (some flashbacks also maybe …) would’ve been great. Building this kind of story would have allowed us yo read a very strong thriller …
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°° How can this be called a "romance" with a certain amount of "depth of feelings" & some "Love you" exchanged ??
°°° For one : in the three weeks since they met for the first time, the MCs barely see each other, and when they did it was more often than not in a push-pull situation with passive-aggressive behavior because MC Riley can’t stand the cops and MC Claire is blinded by a misplaced loyalty to her mentor and a career focused mind so she mostly considered the other woman at the best moment like a person of interest and at the worst even like a suspect…
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°°° For two : when they finally act on their so-called "incredible attraction" which "felt right" (at least, we’ve been told so) , we obtain a definitely too quickly escalated intimacy. => They barely kissed that they had already jumped into bed … And what to say about the resulting unhygienic (so, unsafe) first intimate encounter ?? You know the one where a dirty finger is slipped inside the other’s panties right away (and it’s not long before the others followed)… Damn !! They arrived from a dinner and brainstorming session at Nick’s place where they touched some stuff and probably the other two people as well (and we won’t talk about the car ride). This idea that the lesfic MCs are "always perfectly sanitized", so they can "go straight to the G point", is really tiresome. For me that so-called "lovemaking" didn’t bring anything constructive to the story and was a turn-off.
As a matter of fact, in this case, I think the entire romance was unnecessary. Seriously, it slowed down the pace of an already very slow investigation and impaired the quality of what could have been a great thriller if the story had been developed to its full potential.
And, if you ask me, the sex scene was way too abrupt and even forced, like if have such a scene were a prerequisite to make a « good book » … But you know what ??? No, it’s not !! One of the best romance novels I’ve ever read has none of this and it’s awesome !!
In the "Cons" list, I could also add :
° some slight inconsistancies & a couple of typos
° some surprising rambling … And I call this like that because it’s what it seems to be when, for example, in the space of just a few pages, you find redundant expressions like => "Her gut told her Riley was not responsible for these murders, "Her gut told her Riley didn’t have anything to do with these crimes" & "Her gut told her Riley didn’t have anything to do with the murders" …
If I had to make a very short and quite different version of my review, it’d be something like this :
- Did I enjoy this book? => Nope !! It could have been strong, really powerful but it's lame
- Did I find the characters believable? => Nope. How could they be ?? We don’t have any character development …
- Is this book now included in my « must be re-read »-list? => Nope …
- Will I purchase the paperback? => Nope …
- Would I read another book by this author? => Yes. Because I don’t want to stay on a miss, and a lot of the author’s first pieces of work are in my endless TBR list since a long while…
- Would I recommend this book => I’ll let people use their free will to read the novel, or not …
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