The third book in the Pendragon series departs from the first two in a couple of ways. First, the entire plot takes place on Earth - though it’s Earth in three different time periods. And second Bobby’s story is presented almost entirely without interruption. There’s one quick chapter from Mark and Courtney’s point of view early on that seems to serve mostly to remind us that they exist, but otherwise the plot is focused entirely on Bobby until the very end.
It’s an interesting change and I can’t help wondering why DJ McHale did it this way. I will admit that my memories of the Mark and Courtney segments are pretty fuzzy from when I read the novels the first time around. Having a layer of story between the main story and the reader is a conceit I enjoy, but it’s most exciting when the middle layer and innermost layer of fiction interact or even merge. Thus far in the series Mark and Courtney have served mostly to react to Bobby’s adventures, and for whatever reason they end up waiting to do so until the whole story is over. It’s odd because I feel like they could have interesting commentary at certain points, and I hope that in the next book they’re given more to do. It does feel a bit like the author wasn’t quite sure what to do with the gimmick but couldn’t abandon it.
Fortunately the main plot is fairly engaging. It’s rather like Pendragon’s equivalent of a Doctor Who historical story, although the only inhuman monster here is Saint Dane. But First Earth turns out to be 1937, so there’s plenty of mobsters and Nazis running around. I’m a little torn on Bobby’s lack of knowledge of history. It does help move the plot along and it mirrors the level of historical knowledge the average reader in the target audience probably has, but I feel like a kid like Bobby would be more interested in World War II and the time leading up to it.
Then again, maybe it’s for the best because as an adult I still like the general historical setting but feel like the alternate universe at the crux of the plot doesn’t quite work. This time the threat centers around changing who wins World War II, and it’s eventually discovered that the upcoming arrival of the Hindenburg is the fulcrum of all three Earth territories. Which is neat, but the actual scenario is that the zeppelin carries treasure that will fund a mobster in league with the Nazis and eventually lead to them building the bomb first and winning the war. I kinda take issue with this, because it’s not like needing the plans was the only thing that would give the Nazis the bomb, and with the way it’s said explicitly that they nuke London, DC, and New York, I feel like as usual the American author is overlooking the role of the USSR in the war.
But one can argue that this is a book series for kids, and the image of a nuked Statue of Liberty used as hovels by the irradiated descendants of New Yorkers is still a pretty good one, even if Planet of the Apes did it better. Plus the whole thing does get us the kid friendly equivalent of “is it morally okay to go back in time and murder young Hitler”.
I do enjoy that the First Earth Traveler is a black man and a veteran of the First World War, and there’s also a woman pilot as a major character which is cool. For all that I quibble with the what-if scenario I appreciate that the book shows the ways life was different in the 30s. It’s always fun seeing a modern character suddenly realize they lack a lot of conveniences and while Bobby himself slots in pretty easily as a generic white guy, I appreciate the story addressing the discrimination and realities of the past.
We also take a jaunt three thousand years into the future to visit the utopian Third Earth. It’s a nice enough place, though again I have some quibbles. Humanity has realized they’ve been using resources too much and too fast, and much of the surface has been returned to nature as we move underground and out into the solar system. But we still have capitalism in the future, and even the Gap - which probably makes the original target audience feel good, but seems kinda strange to me now. It is also kinda funny that Bobby and Gunny have to travel three thousand years in the future to basically hit up Wikipedia. I feel like Third Earth kinda suffers for being a generic sci-fi utopia with little that makes it actually stand out.
Still, for all my issues on rereading this as a grown up, it’s a pretty good story. I do still love the twist that if Bobby had sat around and done nothing, Saint Dane would be defeated. And Bobby definitely gets a chance to grow and learn about himself in this one. I’m not sure it’s really my favorite part of the series but it’s one of the ones that’s always stuck with me more than others, and I imagine if you’ve stuck with the series through here it does a good job on selling you on sticking around for the long haul. Which is what I’m going to do, though first I’m detouring to one of the three Before the War prequels which I never read as a kid. So we’ll see if those add anything or are as skippable as a lot of prequel stories.