Extremely disappointing and ridiculous.
This story is the most unrealistic and fantastical ‘historical fiction’ that I have ever read. There is no way that anything written in this book would have ever happened or been allowed to happen. In order to make the story line happen the author ignored all the realities of this time period and how life was like for the royal family.
Firstly and very misleadingly, it’s written about a fictionalised royal family and not based on actual historic figures - which is not said anywhere in the books description. It was only in the first chapter when I couldn’t match up the names of the royal family with the time period that I realised it was all made up characters. I wouldn’t have bought it if I had known that. However, I decided to give it a chance, but it just got worse and worse from there.
SPOILERS BELOW:
Here’s a list of all the things that would never ever have happened and are completely ridiculous and show how little knowledge this author has about royalty and British history.
1. The princess was sent to live with a country Earl on her own with no royal attendants, governess, secret police or body guards.
2. They gave her a fake identity as a commoner and made her sleep in the servants quarters and do kitchen work. If they had wanted to have given her a secret identity she would have been an aristocrat of some no name second cousin of an Earl. A princess would not have been allowed to be treated like a servant and no one would believe someone with her manner, accent, fine clothing and horse to have been a commoner.
3. They let her socialise with their 18 year old son unchaperoned for months.
4. They said ‘oh they’re only children, we don’t have to worry about them getting romantic’. Fact, 17 and 18 years old was a very marriageable age in this time period and even today people would have been concerned about that!
5. When inevitably the Earls son gets the princess pregnant, they decide to secretly marry her off to their son, WITHOUT TELLING THE KING AND QUEEN, are you kidding me!!!??? They would never have done that and it probably could have been treason to do such a thing. The marriage probably wouldn’t have been valid anyway as princesses needed the permission of the monarch to be married by law, especially underaged ones!! Having some vague permission from the King to make decisions on Charlottes behalf for her welfare while staying with them does not give them permission to do that!
6. They tell the King nothing about the marriage or the pregnancy and decide they’ll deal with it all after the war when Charlotte can go back home. And what, rock up at Buckingham palace with a baby on her hip!!?
7. The solution to an unwanted pregnancy in this era is that she would have had the baby in secret and given it away. It would have been pretty easy to do given no one knew who she was and she was given a secret identity where she was staying!
8. They didn’t tell any of the staff that Charlotte and the Earls son were now married, leaving her the shame of being perceived of having an illicit affair and giving birth to a bastard child.
9. Magically, the Earls son dies in the war, followed by the Earl himself, Charlotte (who dies in childbirth) and then the Earls wife. Leaving no one who knows that Charlotte a princess and that the baby is therefore a princess, that the baby was not a bastard and in fact heir to the Earls estate. That nothing was recorded in a Will naming who the child is is ridiculous. As soon as the Earl died the baby would have been named the heir. Because of this, the servants let someone take the baby and raise it as the daughter of a servant.
10. The royal family is told Charlotte died of pneumonia and not childbirth and that they forged her death certificate. But they don’t think it will be a big deal to tell them the truth about everything later....
11. The royal family decide not to collect her body until months later, delaying her official funeral. Thereby, allowing the baby to be long gone by the time anybody comes to the estate to collect Charlottes body and her possessions.
12. The servants at the estate decide to tell no one that Charlotte had a baby, or that someone has taken the baby, even after they are told she was a princess and royal attendants turn up at the estate!
This is all before I am even half way through this book. If you are a lover of royal history and are fascinated with all the details of how life was for royal figures or British aristocrats then stay away from this book.
On top of all this the writing is very basic, worse than self published novels I have read