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Enthralled
As a vampire, humans meant little more to me than my next meal. That was until I met him. Cold, desperate, alone. Perfect for a predator.But I quickly found out it wasn't so easy to walk away. Now I've brought this human into my life, breaking all the rules.I'm not sure what to do next, but there is one thing I know for sure. I can't let him go...
14 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 8, 2013
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June 21, 2013
3.5
Such a shame this was so short.
I really enjoyed this little look at Alex the Vampire. I’ve never read about such a young vamp before lol.
Interesting but far too short,
Such a shame this was so short.
I really enjoyed this little look at Alex the Vampire. I’ve never read about such a young vamp before lol.
Interesting but far too short,
January 12, 2013
Very short but good vampire m/m. Free on Amazon. I hope the author will eventually write a full novel. This short story has lots of potential.
December 13, 2013
Alex needs to feed, he senses Ryan, a young man down on his luck and decides against his better judgment to drink from him.
Ryan is a lot more than Alex expected and this is going to change both of their lives.
This story had tons of potential and a nice twist that I would love to see explored in a longer story.
Ryan is a lot more than Alex expected and this is going to change both of their lives.
This story had tons of potential and a nice twist that I would love to see explored in a longer story.
September 16, 2014
3,5* upgrade because I would love to read more about Alex and Ryan.
March 23, 2015
3.5 stars rounding up
Enjoyable and well-written free read about a young vamp who picks up an even younger first-time prostitute and gets more than he bargained for. Wish it had been longer.
Enjoyable and well-written free read about a young vamp who picks up an even younger first-time prostitute and gets more than he bargained for. Wish it had been longer.
June 30, 2015
Pros: very easy to read. In its own way quite sweet.
Cons: Too short, therefore everything happening too easy and fast. Relies on well known 'recipes' of the vampire genre instead of actual development.
Good, clear writing for a free ebook. The writer shows promise. I would like to read something longer by her.
Cons: Too short, therefore everything happening too easy and fast. Relies on well known 'recipes' of the vampire genre instead of actual development.
Good, clear writing for a free ebook. The writer shows promise. I would like to read something longer by her.
January 15, 2013
3.5 stars. This short story was sweet and will be an enjoyable reread. Vampire Alex finds more than a quick bite.
May 8, 2016
4 solid stars!
The author is definitely onto something with this story but I feel like the world building was a bit rushed or not right for a short story period..
The author is definitely onto something with this story but I feel like the world building was a bit rushed or not right for a short story period..
October 25, 2021
Ready for Halloween
This is a quick read about a young lad called Ryan who is on the streets and he’s decided the only way he can get money is to sell himself. But he didn’t realise that the first car that he got into was a car that held a vampire.
This is a really good quick read and I really liked Ryan and Alex. I don’t really wanna give the story away but there is something really touching about their connection.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This is a quick read about a young lad called Ryan who is on the streets and he’s decided the only way he can get money is to sell himself. But he didn’t realise that the first car that he got into was a car that held a vampire.
This is a really good quick read and I really liked Ryan and Alex. I don’t really wanna give the story away but there is something really touching about their connection.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 18, 2023
Very dark and way too short. I liked the writing but there wasn’t enough story to really grasp the characters and understand the dynamics of the world the author created. It’s a different take on vampires with a whole set of rules and laws. But it left me wondering, if Ryan had supernatural blood in his family history then he wasn’t merely just a human. So why would Alex be required to kill him in accordance with their law that humans who were aware of vampires, i.e.; supernatural beings, if technically he was a supernatural being himself?
October 26, 2021
He is a vampire and he only sees humans as something to feed on. One day and one lad is about to change it all for him. They are willing to give themselves to a vampire regardless of everything. He knows he cannot let the lad go as it was against the rules to have them as it was. What will happen between them? Will life get better for them both? Follow them to find out
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 21, 2021
This story had potential, but it was just too short to be effective. I liked the premise, and I think the characters might have been wonderful had there been time to develop their relationship. Things that were said to be important just didn't feel important and Ryan's actions just seemed overly dramatic. 3 stars.
October 23, 2021
This was a very short vampire story about a vampire that falls in love with a human. It is a good premise but falls apart in the execution. There just isn't enough to the story to really like the characters or get a feel for the world they live in.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
November 1, 2021
I really liked Enthralled. It was a great short with wonderful characters, Ryan and Alex. Really the only characters in the story. I wished it was longer.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
June 5, 2013
I was given a copy of this book in exchange for a review. I would like to say thanks to the author for allowing me to read an review this book. This book was short and sweet, it was really cute.
Alex, a vampire was driving around looking for a snack, but he got much more. Ryan was on the side of the road trying to find someone to pick him up so he could make some money. However, Ryan didn't expect to get more than just money.
This book was short, but sweet. It was a really good read. I enjoyed the way this book started, and finished. I hope the author will add on to the book. It would be an amazing book if she did. This short story is definitly something i will read again, when I want something short and sweet. I hope to read other books by this author in the future, I really enjoyed her writing style.
If you enjoy m/m books, and anything with vampires in it, then pick this book up. It is something that can be read over and over!
Alex, a vampire was driving around looking for a snack, but he got much more. Ryan was on the side of the road trying to find someone to pick him up so he could make some money. However, Ryan didn't expect to get more than just money.
This book was short, but sweet. It was a really good read. I enjoyed the way this book started, and finished. I hope the author will add on to the book. It would be an amazing book if she did. This short story is definitly something i will read again, when I want something short and sweet. I hope to read other books by this author in the future, I really enjoyed her writing style.
If you enjoy m/m books, and anything with vampires in it, then pick this book up. It is something that can be read over and over!
June 13, 2014
This was a very good short vampire romance. I will say that the copy I have was poorly formatted, a few pages were over-laid on each other. Having said that I was able to read it and truly enjoyed the story so much I did not count off on the review for that. It may have been fixed by now.
Alex picks up prostitutes to feed. When he picked up Ryan he was surprised that he couldn’t enthral him and that made for some complications when Ryan realized he was a vampire.
I loved this story. I liked both characters and how they each would give their lives for the other. Yes it was sudden but hey she did this on 15 pages it had to move fast! I would love to see this in a full-length story or see more of Alex and Ryan.
If you like short stories, love at first sight, Vampires, and an overall sweet sexy story, this is for you!
Alex picks up prostitutes to feed. When he picked up Ryan he was surprised that he couldn’t enthral him and that made for some complications when Ryan realized he was a vampire.
I loved this story. I liked both characters and how they each would give their lives for the other. Yes it was sudden but hey she did this on 15 pages it had to move fast! I would love to see this in a full-length story or see more of Alex and Ryan.
If you like short stories, love at first sight, Vampires, and an overall sweet sexy story, this is for you!
August 24, 2013
★★★Enthralled by Kayci Morgan
I was given this R2R in exchange for an honest review.
This is a M/M erotica short. Vamp/Human
I was sort of disappointed with this one. I was a big idea, for such a short story. It needs development. There were just too many things hinted at, that needed explored. I think she really cut herself short on this one.
I was given this R2R in exchange for an honest review.
This is a M/M erotica short. Vamp/Human
I was sort of disappointed with this one. I was a big idea, for such a short story. It needs development. There were just too many things hinted at, that needed explored. I think she really cut herself short on this one.
November 20, 2015
This was....
Sorry, but this was terrible.
The writing itself was choppy and amateurish, and the author tried WAY too hard to fill all the gaping holes in the plot and world-building. There's no excuse for a story this short to be this clunky.
It didn't even take ten minutes to read, but I'm still aggravated by the time I wasted on it.
Sorry, but this was terrible.
The writing itself was choppy and amateurish, and the author tried WAY too hard to fill all the gaping holes in the plot and world-building. There's no excuse for a story this short to be this clunky.
It didn't even take ten minutes to read, but I'm still aggravated by the time I wasted on it.
January 13, 2013
3.5 stars
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March 29, 2013When a young vampire picks up a first time prostitute, both get more than they were expecting.
March 31, 2013
Very short but nice little story.
May 30, 2018
A sweet but very short story.
April 28, 2014
Enjoyable read, but waaaay to short D:
April 30, 2014
2.5 I think a little more detail would have enhanced my enjoyment of this one, but it was still a quick, fun little read.
September 12, 2016
Good beginning, but too short
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July 1, 2014NTS: full novel after this ...taste of transgression
July 16, 2014
Enthralled
Enthralled
Enthralled is a good read it just goes to show you even vampires need love to how great is that
Enthralled
Enthralled is a good read it just goes to show you even vampires need love to how great is that
January 1, 2015
My main problem was that this was just a bit too short for the story idea. Everything was a bit too rushed. Great idea that's meant to be drawn out a bit longer.
July 20, 2015
A (very) short, sweet romance between a vampire and his unusual victim.
Worth a look if you enjoy M/M fiction.
Worth a look if you enjoy M/M fiction.
October 16, 2015
Well written and compelling (haha pun intended). I love Alex and Ryan and the fact that I could connect with them in such a short story. It left me dying for more (again pun totally intended).
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