I was so disappointed with how badly written this book was compared with the rest of the series. It had no suspense or interesting story line. The big reveal is Ger, the real Duke of Falconberry is still alive, this huge moment is not exciting at all! All it does is show how badly Ran (the younger son) has been used by his brother. First, he is made a steward of his father’s estate where he has made it so much more money than it was previously worth. However, when Ran’s father dies, he is only left three estates that are only worth a $1000/year (he gets no part of the money for the investments he’s made)? Then his brother “dies” and he waits a year to take his title and his bride? If he knew something was wrong with the way his brother was found at the wreck of the Brig Minerva why didn’t he have anyone look into the strangers that where on the boat. Also, his brother Ger, believing the whole time he killed all the people on the boat was so unbelievable; however his becoming the benefactor makes some sense because of his guilt, but I don’t see how he possibly set it up when he was laid up in Ginny’s house half dead.
Once everyone finds out the real Duke is alive, Ruth’s parents expect her to marry Ger, when she is already formally betrothed to his twin, Ran. Additionally, Ruth has no real marriage agreement with Ger - who has a mistress that is with child who lives in the house, but her parents still insist they get married? Then the insipid plot line between Ran and Ruth - are they getting married - are they not getting married, do they love each other or not was supposed to make the story suspenseful, but it felt incredibly flat. Ruth’s parents, The Duke and Duchess are vehemently opposed to Ran and Ruth’s match, to the point where they say Ruth is no longer part of the family, but then decide to finally let them marry and give them $10,000 for her Dowry. Is it because they think Ger will marry Susan, who is engaged to Lord Crosby, a man she trapped into marriage? Also, what happened to the other $20,000 Ger was supposed to give Ran and Ruth to make sure they have enough money to live? Ger also promises to never marry, so that Ruth will still be mistress of Valmont and her sons will be the heirs to the Dukedom. But that whole plot line disappears, when after Ginny has made it absolutely clear she won’t be a duchess, she just changes her mind and everyone is fine with it? Also, the explanation of how Ballentine’s diamonds come to Ger and that he was going to kill himself over it, is incredibly insensitive to real people who struggle with suicide and Depression.
To wrap up my review, this book was poorly written compared to previous works by Mary Kingsford. The story was all over the place, it really had no plot at all and was a terrible end to an otherwise brilliant series. Don’t waste your time reading it!