Moira MacLeod has partially redeemed herself with this fourth book in The Bread Maker series. Her 3rd novel was a disaster, but this story was entertaining and interesting. The only reason I've given this book a two-star rating, instead of the four stars it deserves, is the lack of editing. From beginning to end, there were endless typos, missing words, words that were spelled incorrectly, grammar mistakes, and glaring errors. It was so disappointing and, frankly, infuriating. This book should never have been published in that appalling condition. I was so distracted with the numerous errors that it significantly reduced my enjoyment of the story. I feel like I should reach out to Ms. MacLeod and offer to edit her next book for free!