How CUTE is the cover for Back in the Burbs? It honestly makes me long for summer when I can just lay outside and enjoy the sunshine. This book was a bit of hit and miss for me, and for the most part, I did enjoy the storyline. (I also absolutely 100000% loved the hero and would like to keep him with me at all times, but we’ll circle back to that.) Back in the Burbs is a cute, funny, romcom with a 35-year-old heroine (finally!) trying to pick up the pieces of her life and get back on track, and it sucked me in right from the start. I was so excited to be reading about an older (...ish, I mean I’m close in age to the heroine for once but I refuse to call her old) heroine like Mallory that honestly I needed nothing more to start reading. It was also hella funny, and I love when authors can land subtle jokes really really well. (Avery Flynn and Tracy Wolff nailed it, don’t worry).
Mallory, overall, was pretty great. She was funny, she was relatable, and she was a hot mess, but she was still a delight. She had been so beaten down that you wanted her to succeed and so you cheered for her every time she started to stand up for herself. Her tête-à-têtes with Nick, Mister Growly “Measures the Grass”, were absolutely delightful and hilarious and I found myself audibly snorting a few times because the image in my head was honestly just so funny. Their little battles, in addition to the slowwww process of getting to know one another, was one of the best parts of this novel. Those moments were sweet, they were funny, and they were, a few times, kinda heart-squeezing, and those are my favorite.
Back in the Burbs was a really solid and well put together story for about, 65-70% of the book. I’m not entirely sure what happened, but for some reason around that mark things went downhill. I absolutely support a heroine finding herself, but for some reason Mallory became a little too self-absorbed and “woe is me” and I know she went through a lot so she needed time to process, but she was too busy acting like a teenager than a thirty-something year old woman who knew what communication was. It became frustrating watching her continually make certain choices when a lot of her problems could have been solved by being honest, not only with herself, but with the people around her. I won’t say more than that because I don’t want to get too far into it and reach spoiler territory, but I was disappointed in the added (unnecessary) drama of it all.
One of my other issues with this book was that you could tell (more times than I want to admit) that it was written by two different authors. There were a number of continuity and consistency errors that I couldn’t overlook because a few of them actually impacted the story and what I thought was happening because the plot shifted quickly and it was a bit like whiplash. I wish like hell those hadn’t been in the story because I was struggling enough with where the plot was heading that those little errors just made things slightly worse. I think it also impacted the romance of the story, because that fell flat as well. There was so much focus on Mallory and how she was improving upon herself that the romantic side of this book fell to the backburner and then when it did happen it just kind of … happened. I’m all for insta-love, but this wasn’t quite believable because for most of the story they just felt more like friends/neighbors than anything else, and the transition was a bit abrupt.
But Nick. Sweet, sweet Nick Holloway. Talk about a book boyfriend! That man more than made up for Mallory’s faults. The gooiest cinnamon roll of a man with the grumpiest outer shell, Nick was patient, he was kind, he was a neighbor with the best intentions and a hidden superhero cape, and I adored him. He found humor in Mallory when she was completely and unapologetically herself, and honestly, what more could you want? He was an absolute treasure and I’ll probably be gushing about him for the next forever.
I love Nick Holloway.
Overall, this story was cute. I did (for the most part) really have a lot of fun with Mallory. And I love that she was a constant work in progress and doing her best to not repeat her past mistakes. She was endearing and she got to spend time with Nick who, did I mention already I love? Because I love Nick. I know this book is being very well received, and I encourage you to pick it up if you love to laugh and enjoy a story with more mature characters. Problems aside, I’m happy to have met Mallory and, again, I really and truly loved Nick. Very much.
{Many thanks to Entangled Publishing for my review copy of this story!}