I don't even know where to begin with this one!
Well, first, I picked this up in honor of Hispanic Heritage Month, and I wanted to make a conscious effort to read Afro-Latinx authors. However, I was completely overwhelmed and weighed down how many mentions there are of how Black, Latino, Latino and Black, Black and Latino, Afro Dominican by way of America, Luz was. I phrase it this way because the social commentary surrounding her identity was incredibly heavy-handed and drawn-out in a way that felt like the overemphasis did not exist for people who belong to either of those communities, but, rather, readers who look like Evan, who might require cushion and over explanations to empathize with Black or Latinx communities. I'm Black. One of my best friends is a Panamanian Afro-Latina. I have never heard her, whom I've known more years of my life than I haven't—or any Black Latino for that matter—harp on their identity that much as an adult. Like…we so get it, sis.
On the topic of identity, you cannot get me to like or even empathize with an "issue-swaying independent" Black woman who comes from immigrants, is queer, and Latino, who falls in love with a "traditionalist" conservative white dude. Their pairing read as, "He doesn't know where I come from, or know what my food tastes like, and he's upper middle class, and was a jock in high school who became a finance bro as as adult, and he's white, and he's conservative, and I'm not like the other girls, I'm also not like the other Black people, I'm a nerd and I blend into the background, but he understands me and at least he wants me <3" which was very…yucky.
This story took place in 2020 and vaguely mentions masking in the beginning then has the setting of the book take place entirely in a way that was functionally (and possibly legally) impossible due to lockdown restrictions. Which technically wouldn't have been an issue except…why even mention masking or Covid if it wasn't a time period you wanted your characters to exist in? Also, we get all the way through election season and we never get to learn if Evan voted for Trump, or what issues made Luz sway which way? No fun! Lastly, you mean to tell me Luz has lived in NYC for years and she doesn't know she likes Italian food until she eats Evan's family's cooking at the end? New York? The largest Italian-American population in North America and third largest Italian population outside of Italy? She avoided Italian food in New York?! I'm from New Jersey, and I couldn't have avoided Italian food (not that I'd ever want to) even if I'd tried.
There were a lot of characters in this book. What I mean by that is a lot of people are named, but they are not developed, and are simply set dressings with human names who sometimes have lines. Which is jarring, except Evan and Luz are also underdeveloped. Simultaneously, the Tomas twins have created one of the most selfish, self-absorbed, entitled, babyish, non-communicating-ass-heffa out of Luz, and I won't be reading book 2 where she seemingly continues her full-time gig of terrorizing Evan.
You know it's bad when the most empathetic human character is the (potentially insurrectionist) finance bro.
1 ⭐️ for Ms. Mary Mack only!
2.5 🌶️