Despite that I don’t consider this book a good read, I find it difficult to rate. There were things I liked (all of which came in the beginning) but they were outweighed by things I didn’t like. By 25 - 30% into the story, I’d grown underwhelmed, and by the time I stopped reading, I was thoroughly disappointed.
Take my opinion as you will. I’m a published author, editor, and writing coach.
When I first started reading Bound to You, I was a little shocked that it wasn’t unreadable, because the majority of self-published books I try out are very poorly written. There’s a scene in the beginning with Zagan (the hero) and a group of humans that I found particularly well-written. This got me excited.
But my excitement was not to last.
The author definitely has potential. However, this book would’ve benefitted from several more revisions.
Coryn, the heroine, is annoying; she’s quite possible the most insufferable heroine I’ve ever read about. She’s immature and self-centered and doesn’t act how you’d think someone who’s lived her life would act. Every time she and Zagan share an intimate moment, she’s immediately pissed off at him (or herself, for surrendering to him) afterward. She loves him, she hates him, she loves him, she hates him, and I’m wanting her to just stop already. It’s exhausting being in her head. My advice to the author: there are other ways to build drama besides making one of the characters overly dramatic.
And the relationship between Coryn and Zagan is… confusing and chaotic. It takes a while for them to grow close. Despite this, the first sex scene happens about a third of the way into the book, and the way it’s written doesn’t correlate with their feelings for one another at the time. If they’re the type to engage in casual sex, that’s one thing. But they aren’t the type, and the tryst in question, along with their supposed feelings during it, weren’t casual and weren’t believable. It’s almost as if this sex scene was originally written between a different couple and the author inserted it into this book and changed the names.
My second critique is how much TELLING of emotions there is. I don’t know if I’ve read a book where emotions are so often told (sometimes ridiculously) and not at all shown.
Some examples (these are direct quotes):
“A mixture of emotions—shock, happiness, and … disappointment?—played across her features in quick succession,”
can you imagine what this would look like in real life? I can, and it doesn’t look good.
“Zagan looked dumbstruck and hurt.”
“Her face, so recently filled with forgiveness for him, had turned so quickly to sadness. And while he struggled to find the right thing to say, her sadness transitioned to rage.”
“When Zagan’s expression morphed quickly from confusion to shock and then utter delight,”
how quickly, I wonder?
“As Zagan’s expression turned from surprise to contemplation to regret,
“He panted as he looked into her eyes, a mixture of confusion and disappointment and hurt reflected back at him.”
The entire book is like this. Now, maybe you’re not like me and this method of writing doesn’t bother you. It drives me crazy. It’s simply lazy writing. Not to mention what a face must look like portraying several emotions in a short amount of time. What are the other characters doing while the subject contorts their face into different expressions? It’s unrealistic, as expressions (or eyes—don’t get me started about book characters and their uncanny ability to discern how someone’s feeling by their eyes) don’t work that way. Nor do emotions, really.
There were some inconsistencies and grammatical errors, but neither were so prevalent that most readers would notice them. I am NOT most readers.
I DNF this book. The characters and the writing bothered me too much to see the story through. It got sloppier as it progressed. You may like this book if you can’t relate to my criticisms. I am not a fan of a lot of books that other people obsess over. If the premise interests you and you have a high tolerance for writing that, while not abysmal, needs improvement, give Bound to You a chance!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout, and this is my voluntary and unbiased review.