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Boys in Makeup #2
Pretty Sweet
Seth
Portland was supposed to be my fresh start, my chance to live for myself. Unfortunately, it’s not working out that way. I stay in the apartment Mom chose and major in finance like she wants. I let bad memories keep me from hooking up. I wouldn’t know the first thing about finding a guy who gets me, who’s okay with my need to be held and feel safe.
When I befriend a worker at the assisted living facility where I volunteer, I don’t expect to get invited to dinner, only to realize her son is Jake, a guy I met through friends last fall. Jake’s not only hot, he’s also sweet, a caretaker, and attracted to me too. Since he’s never been with a guy, and I’m a virgin, we’re setting the pace together, learning what we like, one bone-melting touch at a time.
Jake
My childhood was rocky, with an abusive father and a mother I needed to protect. The first thing I did after high school graduation was get us out of there so we could finally breathe. And start living. For me that means managing the garage I own with my best friend and enjoying the modest house I call my own.
Then Seth enters my life. Our connection is palpable. He’s shy, innocent, and sets my blood on fire. He makes it impossible to ignore my attraction to men. The trust he puts in me is more potent than any desire. I get as much from talking to or holding him as when we let our inhibitions go.
Seth and I fulfill each other’s needs—in and out of the bedroom. But our struggles aren’t easy to shake. With my urge to protect and Seth’s desire to fly, we’ll have to strike the right balance, but when we do, the results will be pretty sweet.
**Trigger warning: This book contains mention of unwanted sexual advances/touching.
Portland was supposed to be my fresh start, my chance to live for myself. Unfortunately, it’s not working out that way. I stay in the apartment Mom chose and major in finance like she wants. I let bad memories keep me from hooking up. I wouldn’t know the first thing about finding a guy who gets me, who’s okay with my need to be held and feel safe.
When I befriend a worker at the assisted living facility where I volunteer, I don’t expect to get invited to dinner, only to realize her son is Jake, a guy I met through friends last fall. Jake’s not only hot, he’s also sweet, a caretaker, and attracted to me too. Since he’s never been with a guy, and I’m a virgin, we’re setting the pace together, learning what we like, one bone-melting touch at a time.
Jake
My childhood was rocky, with an abusive father and a mother I needed to protect. The first thing I did after high school graduation was get us out of there so we could finally breathe. And start living. For me that means managing the garage I own with my best friend and enjoying the modest house I call my own.
Then Seth enters my life. Our connection is palpable. He’s shy, innocent, and sets my blood on fire. He makes it impossible to ignore my attraction to men. The trust he puts in me is more potent than any desire. I get as much from talking to or holding him as when we let our inhibitions go.
Seth and I fulfill each other’s needs—in and out of the bedroom. But our struggles aren’t easy to shake. With my urge to protect and Seth’s desire to fly, we’ll have to strike the right balance, but when we do, the results will be pretty sweet.
**Trigger warning: This book contains mention of unwanted sexual advances/touching.
295 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 17, 2020
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Riley Hart
114 books7,132 followersRiley Hart is the girl who wears her heart on her sleeve. She's a hopeless romantic. A lover of sexy stories, passionate men, and writing about all the trouble they can get into together. If she's not writing, you'll probably find her reading.
Riley lives in California with her awesome family, who she is thankful for everyday.
Riley lives in California with her awesome family, who she is thankful for everyday.
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June 24, 2020dnf @ 65%
Sadly, this isn't working for me. Seth is a lovely character and I wanted to love his story, but everyone is so nice, considerate and positive and every dialogue is so meaningful that it doesn't feel natural or real to me. I can enjoy sweet and fluffy stories, but this one gives me anxiety with all the tiptoeing around Seth and trying to always say and do the right thing.
Sadly, this isn't working for me. Seth is a lovely character and I wanted to love his story, but everyone is so nice, considerate and positive and every dialogue is so meaningful that it doesn't feel natural or real to me. I can enjoy sweet and fluffy stories, but this one gives me anxiety with all the tiptoeing around Seth and trying to always say and do the right thing.
May 25, 2021
3 too sweet stars.
August 6, 2020
~3.5~
While I loved the MCs, I wish the sweetness had been toned down just a bit. There's essentially no angst in this story except for one disagreement the men have toward the end, and even that is resolved quickly and reasonably.
On the one hand, I applaud the authors for not manufacturing unnecessary drama; on the other, the MCs read much younger than their 21 and 24 years.
Fortunately, there's enough steam in the story to balance the sweetness. Seth is a complete virgin, while Jake is new to gay sex. But they figure it out together, and both are quick studies.
I questioned why the two were using condoms six months into a committed relationship when Seth had never had another sexual partner, and Jake hadn't had one for, it was hinted at, months prior to meeting Seth. While I know some couples simply prefer condoms, this wasn't explained in any way and made me think the two had trust issues, which wasn't consistent with how the relationship was portrayed in the story (as trusting and long-term).
Jake's mom was amazing, but Seth's mom's change of heart was unearned.
Despite these niggles, I enjoyed Pretty Sweet. It was a quick read for me, and I liked seeing Jesse and Dane again. Skylar's story is next. Boys who wear makeup are so much fun!
While I loved the MCs, I wish the sweetness had been toned down just a bit. There's essentially no angst in this story except for one disagreement the men have toward the end, and even that is resolved quickly and reasonably.
On the one hand, I applaud the authors for not manufacturing unnecessary drama; on the other, the MCs read much younger than their 21 and 24 years.
Fortunately, there's enough steam in the story to balance the sweetness. Seth is a complete virgin, while Jake is new to gay sex. But they figure it out together, and both are quick studies.
I questioned why the two were using condoms six months into a committed relationship when Seth had never had another sexual partner, and Jake hadn't had one for, it was hinted at, months prior to meeting Seth. While I know some couples simply prefer condoms, this wasn't explained in any way and made me think the two had trust issues, which wasn't consistent with how the relationship was portrayed in the story (as trusting and long-term).
Jake's mom was amazing, but Seth's mom's change of heart was unearned.
Despite these niggles, I enjoyed Pretty Sweet. It was a quick read for me, and I liked seeing Jesse and Dane again. Skylar's story is next. Boys who wear makeup are so much fun!
June 17, 2020
· Swoony relationship development
· First time
· Hurt/Comfort
· Character growth
· Dual POVs
· Bisexual
· Low angst/Feel good
· Great cast of secondary characters
Jake & Seth's, blossoming relationship development is what romance novels are all about. You couldn't help but fall for both these characters and root for their relationship to work. My favorite part is seeing both men feel comfortable in their skin.
4.5 Stars
· First time
· Hurt/Comfort
· Character growth
· Dual POVs
· Bisexual
· Low angst/Feel good
· Great cast of secondary characters
Jake & Seth's, blossoming relationship development is what romance novels are all about. You couldn't help but fall for both these characters and root for their relationship to work. My favorite part is seeing both men feel comfortable in their skin.
4.5 Stars
November 2, 2020
Re-read November 2020
Perfect for a rainy Sunday.
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This was adorable.
What I liked most was how smooth the relationship between Jake and Seth seemed to flow. But without it ever being boring. They were both such interesting characters that I was never bored, despite the low-angst in this.
Seth loves to wear make-up and volunteers at an assised living facility where he plays the piano and does people's make-up. He didn't come from the nicest home, so when he befriends a woman who treats him like he's her son, Seth couldn't be happier.
When Bonnie invites him over to dinner, Seth meets her son, Jake. Jake and Seth immediately hit it off and strike up a friendship.
It's not long before Seth realizes he is slowly falling in love with Jake. But Jake is straight, so he knows it can never happen.
And even though Jake might look at Seth like he wants to be more than friends, Seth can't have his heart broken like that....
I really liked both Seth and Jake. Jake was overprotective and sweet, and Seth was shy and simply adorable.
Seth had a bad experience in his past, so he was careful with relationships. And Jake never thought he'd ever be with another man. I loved that Seth was a real virgin and Jake a gay virgin, so they had to work up to the sexy times. I always love that in books. That there has to be some trust before anything happens. It always makes the sexy times that much more emotional.
I really liked this and I might even go back to read the first book, which I skipped.
Perfect for a rainy Sunday.
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This was adorable.
What I liked most was how smooth the relationship between Jake and Seth seemed to flow. But without it ever being boring. They were both such interesting characters that I was never bored, despite the low-angst in this.
Seth loves to wear make-up and volunteers at an assised living facility where he plays the piano and does people's make-up. He didn't come from the nicest home, so when he befriends a woman who treats him like he's her son, Seth couldn't be happier.
When Bonnie invites him over to dinner, Seth meets her son, Jake. Jake and Seth immediately hit it off and strike up a friendship.
It's not long before Seth realizes he is slowly falling in love with Jake. But Jake is straight, so he knows it can never happen.
And even though Jake might look at Seth like he wants to be more than friends, Seth can't have his heart broken like that....
I really liked both Seth and Jake. Jake was overprotective and sweet, and Seth was shy and simply adorable.
Seth had a bad experience in his past, so he was careful with relationships. And Jake never thought he'd ever be with another man. I loved that Seth was a real virgin and Jake a gay virgin, so they had to work up to the sexy times. I always love that in books. That there has to be some trust before anything happens. It always makes the sexy times that much more emotional.
I really liked this and I might even go back to read the first book, which I skipped.
June 21, 2020
I think it is finally time for me to bid adieu to both of these authors. While I have read more from Riley Hart than Christina Lee, neither author has ranked higher than a 3-star read for me, with a lot of 1 stars and a lot of DNFs.
I had found myself a bit intrigued by Seth in the first book, but that didn't translate to this book. I found both his and Jake's issues rather superficial, and I'm going to stick with that since one fight pretty much resolved both their issues.
I found this tedious to read. I don't need to be told what you ordered at a restaurant, what you made for lunch, what your clothes look like, the colour of your makeup, time and time again. I ended up skimming a lot of this, especially near the end.
I do think one of the issues is that while I am getting older, the characters in these authors books (particularly Riley Hart) are getting younger. I just find characters in their early 20s all acting like they have all their shit together and know what they want from life and who they are going to spend the rest of their life with gets a big eye roll from me. I didn't know anything when I was in my early 20s, and in my early 30s, I don't know a whole lot more and I know many people my age would say the same.
I had found myself a bit intrigued by Seth in the first book, but that didn't translate to this book. I found both his and Jake's issues rather superficial, and I'm going to stick with that since one fight pretty much resolved both their issues.
I found this tedious to read. I don't need to be told what you ordered at a restaurant, what you made for lunch, what your clothes look like, the colour of your makeup, time and time again. I ended up skimming a lot of this, especially near the end.
I do think one of the issues is that while I am getting older, the characters in these authors books (particularly Riley Hart) are getting younger. I just find characters in their early 20s all acting like they have all their shit together and know what they want from life and who they are going to spend the rest of their life with gets a big eye roll from me. I didn't know anything when I was in my early 20s, and in my early 30s, I don't know a whole lot more and I know many people my age would say the same.
June 30, 2020
2.5 stars
So sweet it gave me a cavity. Everyone was just so ...nice. Rounding up for the sudden and interesting, albeit OTT, burst of angst in the end.
So sweet it gave me a cavity. Everyone was just so ...nice. Rounding up for the sudden and interesting, albeit OTT, burst of angst in the end.
January 16, 2023
3-3.5 stars
i like this but compared to book one, i didn't love it as much as that one. I am interested to see how Skylar's book turns out since we didn't see much of him in this book.
Seth and Jake, were cute but idk i felt like it was a little too easy for them at times, also Seths mom kinda sucked... haha even though there was some redemption, it was still to me not enough to take away about 8 years of hurt.
Overall good read, little angst, except at the end. I hope that Skylar's book is better than this one to be honest though haha
i like this but compared to book one, i didn't love it as much as that one. I am interested to see how Skylar's book turns out since we didn't see much of him in this book.
Seth and Jake, were cute but idk i felt like it was a little too easy for them at times, also Seths mom kinda sucked... haha even though there was some redemption, it was still to me not enough to take away about 8 years of hurt.
Overall good read, little angst, except at the end. I hope that Skylar's book is better than this one to be honest though haha
June 22, 2020
4.5 ⭐ of super fluff and sweetness!
July 10, 2020
3.5 stars rounded up
So, this was a pretty slow read for me. It took me 6 days. There was just something about it that I had a lot of stops and stars with it. I think, for me, it was because nothing really happened in this, and a lot of the time I actually don't mind that if the relationship is good and the character/relationship part is written well and is exciting, because that's what I care about more than plot. But when the relationship kinda drags and there isn't much of a plot, then the whole thing drags, and that's what happened with this one for me.
And not to say that these two were boring, but it was more how the authors didn't have them do much that could be boring, if that makes sense? Because I found these two adorable and sweet and and lovely together...but also, i guess...there wasn't much conflict between them? It was like they were always so perfect with each other.
Also, when there was was a "conflict" at 87% it was kinda ridiculous and over with quickly and smoothed over pretty easily - which also made it feel wildly unnecessary and just put in there for some slight drama to make this not all fluff.
Which, again, I don't always dislike. I actually enjoyed the fluffy moments between these two, the sweet moments, which is why I decided to round up with this. I didn't feel like it would be fair for me to round this down to 3 stars when I did enjoy these two together so much and their adorableness.
But the lack of a real conflict between the two just made this drag for me. At least with the first book, Dane and Jesse didn't like each other much at first. With this, though? These two liked each other right away, and even when there could be conflict, what with Jake just coming to terms with his bisexuality and his overprotectiveness (born out of a very understandable reason), it ends up not being too much of a big deal.
When Jake gets a little uncomfortable when he's first coming out, Seth is super understanding of it all - which is great, but again, doesn't lend itself to much conflict - and then Jake becomes comfortable with things fairly quickly, so that isn't dragged out that long.
Every instance where there felt like there could be some tension, some conflict, was handled pretty easily and well by everyone, so there wasn't a whole lot going on and so it dragged.
But did I enjoyed these two together? Yes, I very much did. And they were adorable and sweet together and Jake was exactly what Seth needed. I just wish, even with Seth's hangups around sex, that that could have ended up being a bigger issue than it turned out to be.
Like I adored these two together, but even the lack of conflict in their relationship, aside from the almost zero plot, is what made me give this 3.5 stars. This could have been so much better if all the plot points that had potential to turn into more conflict had actually turned into conflict.
But this was still good and fun and sweet, hence my rounding up. But a solid 3.5 stars for me. A book that is of regular book length shouldn't take me 6 days to finish, is all I'm saying.
So, this was a pretty slow read for me. It took me 6 days. There was just something about it that I had a lot of stops and stars with it. I think, for me, it was because nothing really happened in this, and a lot of the time I actually don't mind that if the relationship is good and the character/relationship part is written well and is exciting, because that's what I care about more than plot. But when the relationship kinda drags and there isn't much of a plot, then the whole thing drags, and that's what happened with this one for me.
And not to say that these two were boring, but it was more how the authors didn't have them do much that could be boring, if that makes sense? Because I found these two adorable and sweet and and lovely together...but also, i guess...there wasn't much conflict between them? It was like they were always so perfect with each other.
Also, when there was was a "conflict" at 87% it was kinda ridiculous and over with quickly and smoothed over pretty easily - which also made it feel wildly unnecessary and just put in there for some slight drama to make this not all fluff.
Which, again, I don't always dislike. I actually enjoyed the fluffy moments between these two, the sweet moments, which is why I decided to round up with this. I didn't feel like it would be fair for me to round this down to 3 stars when I did enjoy these two together so much and their adorableness.
But the lack of a real conflict between the two just made this drag for me. At least with the first book, Dane and Jesse didn't like each other much at first. With this, though? These two liked each other right away, and even when there could be conflict, what with Jake just coming to terms with his bisexuality and his overprotectiveness (born out of a very understandable reason), it ends up not being too much of a big deal.
When Jake gets a little uncomfortable when he's first coming out, Seth is super understanding of it all - which is great, but again, doesn't lend itself to much conflict - and then Jake becomes comfortable with things fairly quickly, so that isn't dragged out that long.
Every instance where there felt like there could be some tension, some conflict, was handled pretty easily and well by everyone, so there wasn't a whole lot going on and so it dragged.
But did I enjoyed these two together? Yes, I very much did. And they were adorable and sweet together and Jake was exactly what Seth needed. I just wish, even with Seth's hangups around sex, that that could have ended up being a bigger issue than it turned out to be.
Like I adored these two together, but even the lack of conflict in their relationship, aside from the almost zero plot, is what made me give this 3.5 stars. This could have been so much better if all the plot points that had potential to turn into more conflict had actually turned into conflict.
But this was still good and fun and sweet, hence my rounding up. But a solid 3.5 stars for me. A book that is of regular book length shouldn't take me 6 days to finish, is all I'm saying.
June 18, 2020
~ 3.25 Stars ~
Pretty Sweet is definitely sweet, but also crosses the threshold into corny.
There were quite a lot of overly sentimental moments and teenage like dialogue.
The likes of:
'Oh my god I love Chinese'
'Oh my god I love popcorn'
'I like you. A lot'
'I like you a lot too'
*shaking my head* crossing that line into YA territory.
'Yeah, I really sounded like a kid with a schoolyard crush'
Yes. They both did. At times it was endearing other times too sugary for my current state of mind.
Seth is the adorable, cuddly roommate from Pretty Perfect who would wake up from nightmares and huddle into Jesse's bed. He is the sensitive sort, innocent-like. A negative past experience and a controlling mother has compounded to create a timidity and reluctance to be himself.
Jake is equally sweet. A boy that became a man too soon but still retained his youthful mentality. He has a savior-complex and a nurturer element to his personality. He's thoughtful, caring and sweet. With a tendency to be overly protective.
Truly both of theseboys men don't have a mean bone in their body. They're tentative, communicative, complimentary, reassuring and sweet with each other. At twenty-one and twenty-four they do read younger at times but it sort of fits with the backstory.
There is a duo first time experience happening.
Slow and steady exploration.
Some comfort/healing.
Personal Growth/Self discovery.
I liked it, it had its moments.
I remember being completely in love with Pretty Perfect and being excited for this series, Pretty Sweet didn't quite live up to my expectations. Regardless, I still liked it enough and look forward to the next book, fingers crossed for Skylar's story.
I would recommend this to anyone who's looking for a low-angst, tender hearted, sentimental, steamy romance about two incredibly sweet young men
Pretty Sweet is definitely sweet, but also crosses the threshold into corny.
There were quite a lot of overly sentimental moments and teenage like dialogue.
The likes of:
'Oh my god I love Chinese'
'Oh my god I love popcorn'
'I like you. A lot'
'I like you a lot too'
*shaking my head* crossing that line into YA territory.
'Yeah, I really sounded like a kid with a schoolyard crush'
Yes. They both did. At times it was endearing other times too sugary for my current state of mind.
Seth is the adorable, cuddly roommate from Pretty Perfect who would wake up from nightmares and huddle into Jesse's bed. He is the sensitive sort, innocent-like. A negative past experience and a controlling mother has compounded to create a timidity and reluctance to be himself.
Jake is equally sweet. A boy that became a man too soon but still retained his youthful mentality. He has a savior-complex and a nurturer element to his personality. He's thoughtful, caring and sweet. With a tendency to be overly protective.
Truly both of these
There is a duo first time experience happening.
Slow and steady exploration.
Some comfort/healing.
Personal Growth/Self discovery.
I liked it, it had its moments.
I remember being completely in love with Pretty Perfect and being excited for this series, Pretty Sweet didn't quite live up to my expectations. Regardless, I still liked it enough and look forward to the next book, fingers crossed for Skylar's story.
I would recommend this to anyone who's looking for a low-angst, tender hearted, sentimental, steamy romance about two incredibly sweet young men
June 21, 2020
Awww, so happy Seth found himself a great guy! I absolutely adored him in the first book of this series, so I was looking forward to his story.
Overall, I did really enjoy this. Seth was just a sweetie, and I love his growth and journey in this book, from being timid and unsure and living a life he didn't want, to standing up for himself, getting on a path he chose for himself, and finding confidence in himself and in a relationship. At the same time, I enjoyed Jake accepting his bisexuality and becoming more comfortable with it. This book had a double whammy of first-times for these two, and I enjoyed their story.
This book did read as very...young? Which makes sense, since Seth is only 21 and Jake is only a couple years older than him. But there was a lot of "oh my gods" and "I like you" and these two felt just very young. However, at the same time Jake could have been 30 for all the responsibilities and duties he took on, so yeah. Might not be a problem for most people, but the ages and dynamics did kinda throw me off?
Can't wait for Skyler's story!
Overall, I did really enjoy this. Seth was just a sweetie, and I love his growth and journey in this book, from being timid and unsure and living a life he didn't want, to standing up for himself, getting on a path he chose for himself, and finding confidence in himself and in a relationship. At the same time, I enjoyed Jake accepting his bisexuality and becoming more comfortable with it. This book had a double whammy of first-times for these two, and I enjoyed their story.
This book did read as very...young? Which makes sense, since Seth is only 21 and Jake is only a couple years older than him. But there was a lot of "oh my gods" and "I like you" and these two felt just very young. However, at the same time Jake could have been 30 for all the responsibilities and duties he took on, so yeah. Might not be a problem for most people, but the ages and dynamics did kinda throw me off?
Can't wait for Skyler's story!
July 1, 2020
It took me three days to finished this book. It pained me to give these author's story two stars.
But Pretty Sweet was dragged and boring. I put it down a few times, hope I could clicked with one of the main characters.
While Jake was so perfect, Seth was full of himself. For a 21 year old, he seemed to put too much to his background story. I didn't think the trauma was too traumatic to make him the way he is now.
And the too much telling was killing me, I had to skimmed a lot.
Sorry.
But Pretty Sweet was dragged and boring. I put it down a few times, hope I could clicked with one of the main characters.
While Jake was so perfect, Seth was full of himself. For a 21 year old, he seemed to put too much to his background story. I didn't think the trauma was too traumatic to make him the way he is now.
And the too much telling was killing me, I had to skimmed a lot.
Sorry.
June 17, 2020
So I binge read this. Sure, I fell asleep after being awake for 20 hours straight, but I kept reading while at work (don’t judge me), so I’m considering this binge-reading.
I loved it. And now I’ll say why.
Seth, as a 21-year-old virgin (while I don’t feel this is noteworthy, it is what it is) living far from home, on his own, has the financial backing of his father’s trust fund for him. But still very much controlled by his mother. He is suffocating from her emotional chains, but he is suffocating even more living with the ghosts of his trauma and insecurities.
Jake is probably a little older than Seth, living with his mother after basically saving her when they ran away from his abusive father. His mom is pretty freakin’ awesome and she is the one to introduce Seth to him, after bonding with him at the senior club where they both work/volunteer. Jake has a savior complex. He’s extremely protective of those he loves (understandable), the first of them is his mother, but Set has became a fast second.
The story progresses with not many surprises, but still every little think felt carefully thought of and real. I don’t identify as LGBTQ+, but the story is so well written, I felt them, their struggles, their emotions and their love.
While there is reference to homophobia, it is understated and quickly set straight, and it’s understandable because in my opinion this is a pure love story of two men with a family history that held them back from progressing in their personal lives. Those two men, Jake and Seth, each have their own extremely valid and unfortunately very common reasons to live, feel and act the way they do.
However I loooooved how they fed off of each other and felt strong enough to stand on their own. I loved how they each grew and learned to accept their faults. I loved how simply they loved.
I can’t wait for Skylar’s story, and will forever be a huge fan of this writing duo. They’re magic.
I loved it. And now I’ll say why.
Seth, as a 21-year-old virgin (while I don’t feel this is noteworthy, it is what it is) living far from home, on his own, has the financial backing of his father’s trust fund for him. But still very much controlled by his mother. He is suffocating from her emotional chains, but he is suffocating even more living with the ghosts of his trauma and insecurities.
Jake is probably a little older than Seth, living with his mother after basically saving her when they ran away from his abusive father. His mom is pretty freakin’ awesome and she is the one to introduce Seth to him, after bonding with him at the senior club where they both work/volunteer. Jake has a savior complex. He’s extremely protective of those he loves (understandable), the first of them is his mother, but Set has became a fast second.
The story progresses with not many surprises, but still every little think felt carefully thought of and real. I don’t identify as LGBTQ+, but the story is so well written, I felt them, their struggles, their emotions and their love.
While there is reference to homophobia, it is understated and quickly set straight, and it’s understandable because in my opinion this is a pure love story of two men with a family history that held them back from progressing in their personal lives. Those two men, Jake and Seth, each have their own extremely valid and unfortunately very common reasons to live, feel and act the way they do.
However I loooooved how they fed off of each other and felt strong enough to stand on their own. I loved how they each grew and learned to accept their faults. I loved how simply they loved.
I can’t wait for Skylar’s story, and will forever be a huge fan of this writing duo. They’re magic.
August 25, 2022
Jake 24, appeared in Book 1 of this series as a friend of one of the side characters. He Co owns a garage in Portland, Oregon, with a friend and employs 3 other mechanics. They are doing well business wise.
But Jake is still carrying the weight of his younger life, living with an abusive drunkard of a father who physically abused his mother. He feels he has to protect and take care of everyone in his life, whether they want him to or not. He doesn’t have a girlfriend, just occasional hookups. However, he has noticed that he found some guys attractive.
Seth 21, has moved from Philadelphia to Portland to get away from his controlling mother, he can barely breath without her trying to call the shots. He also had a bad experience when he was 12, he liked this school friend Colton a lot and was prepared to kiss him, but the friend wanted much more. Seth managed to escape but there has been huge repercussions in his life.
Jesse, an MC in Book 1 was Seth’s roommate and they now both work in the “Underground” bar, with Seth playing the piano and Jesse singing. Seth also works part time in Rose City Retirement Home doing makeovers for the residents. Here he meets Bonnie, with whom he forms a friendship. She invites him to dinner at her home and there he is introduced to her son, Jake.
Sorry to say, but I couldn’t get attached to either Jake or Seth and I hated the lack of spontaneity in their physical relationship. Every move had to be requested, agreed to and ticked off as consensual before they could even remove their boxers practically 🤣😂
I liked the other characters more than the MC’s in this one, loved Book 1 and now plan to read Skylar’s story who also appeared in Book 1 as a dancer in the “Underground” bar.
But Jake is still carrying the weight of his younger life, living with an abusive drunkard of a father who physically abused his mother. He feels he has to protect and take care of everyone in his life, whether they want him to or not. He doesn’t have a girlfriend, just occasional hookups. However, he has noticed that he found some guys attractive.
Seth 21, has moved from Philadelphia to Portland to get away from his controlling mother, he can barely breath without her trying to call the shots. He also had a bad experience when he was 12, he liked this school friend Colton a lot and was prepared to kiss him, but the friend wanted much more. Seth managed to escape but there has been huge repercussions in his life.
Jesse, an MC in Book 1 was Seth’s roommate and they now both work in the “Underground” bar, with Seth playing the piano and Jesse singing. Seth also works part time in Rose City Retirement Home doing makeovers for the residents. Here he meets Bonnie, with whom he forms a friendship. She invites him to dinner at her home and there he is introduced to her son, Jake.
Sorry to say, but I couldn’t get attached to either Jake or Seth and I hated the lack of spontaneity in their physical relationship. Every move had to be requested, agreed to and ticked off as consensual before they could even remove their boxers practically 🤣😂
I liked the other characters more than the MC’s in this one, loved Book 1 and now plan to read Skylar’s story who also appeared in Book 1 as a dancer in the “Underground” bar.
June 28, 2020
God, this was a tough read😖I DNF at 60%....tough because it is utterly boring. I tried hard, but I think I’m about done with this author for now. I don’t really know what it is though, maybe it’s the LIX that’s too low, to me at least, the characters sound so childish, and nothing really happens🤷🏼♀️Bugger...
July 30, 2020
Pretty Sweet was an adorable story about Seth and his finding his voice, growing a pair and being the man he wanted to be. This story was told without unnecessary drama, yeah. Jake and his mother did some interesting growing of their own. For me this was an easy, well flowing, enjoyable book.
October 12, 2021
Well this story certainly lived up to its title and was pure sweet throughout, everyone was just so nice and so many fluffy moments. Its adorable and full of comfort from start to finish, with two lovely mcs!
I was interested to read Seths story since the last book and i fell in love with him completely here. He has so much development and learn about his past here, he grows so much in this story as finally able step out of his shell. With everyones support he starts to go for what he wants and not just whats expected of him, by the end he really stands up for himself and i loved it.
Jake stole my heart from his first scene and he goes through a lot of progress here too, with being over protective due to his own past and realising he needs to learn not to always be quick to jump into action. I really enjoyed seeing him move forward.
Jake and Seth compliment each other beautifully, both of them are rather new to relationships and i enjoyed the slow burn of their feelings. The relationship building and their interactions, especially at the start with the blushing and stumbling between them.
Side cast were incredible especially Jakes mum Bonnie who was wonderful, made for some entertaining scenes and i love carpet picnics. Oh of course i enjoyed seeing more of Jesse and Dane too, just as much fun as last time. The scenes at the bar are amazing, with the piano and singing. The outfits and make up, i love the descriptions.
Overall an enjoyable and easy lighthearted read, with a happy ending of course! I look forward to Skylars story next.
I was interested to read Seths story since the last book and i fell in love with him completely here. He has so much development and learn about his past here, he grows so much in this story as finally able step out of his shell. With everyones support he starts to go for what he wants and not just whats expected of him, by the end he really stands up for himself and i loved it.
Jake stole my heart from his first scene and he goes through a lot of progress here too, with being over protective due to his own past and realising he needs to learn not to always be quick to jump into action. I really enjoyed seeing him move forward.
Jake and Seth compliment each other beautifully, both of them are rather new to relationships and i enjoyed the slow burn of their feelings. The relationship building and their interactions, especially at the start with the blushing and stumbling between them.
Side cast were incredible especially Jakes mum Bonnie who was wonderful, made for some entertaining scenes and i love carpet picnics. Oh of course i enjoyed seeing more of Jesse and Dane too, just as much fun as last time. The scenes at the bar are amazing, with the piano and singing. The outfits and make up, i love the descriptions.
Overall an enjoyable and easy lighthearted read, with a happy ending of course! I look forward to Skylars story next.
August 14, 2020
GFY M/M romance to enjoy !
I like each of these authors, separately and together.
Here we get a M/M romance with a sweet guy, Seth, 21, who likes to wear some make-up, and who plays piano at a club, and volunteers at a retirement home, for piano and as a make-up artist, his specialty enjoyment.
Jake, a bit older, is a mechanic, muscled and strong, a protective man who lives with his Mom, after all they have been through. She is a Nurse at the retirement home where Seth volunteers and invites Seth home to dinner.
So, Seth the gay virgin and straight Jake meet at dinner with Jake’s Mom, and it’s a good start.
Terrific talks, playing games and getting to know each other is fun for each man. We learn their insecurities and strengths, the deepest of thoughts, and the developing attraction, too. Seth’s Mom is controlling and unfeeling. Later on it’s first times with a man for Jake, (and Seth) but it’s only Seth that gives him these thrilling new emotions and reactions. GFY.
Jake respects all of Seth ‘s wishes; Seth can be safe with Jake, not afraid like he was with the guy from his past. Each man is exploring for the first time and both are having great sexy times.
We see Seth stretch his wings, as Jake’s Mom does, too. It’s a lovely story of being unafraid, stepping out of your bubble, and grabbing a good thing when you see it.
ENJOY !
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I like each of these authors, separately and together.
Here we get a M/M romance with a sweet guy, Seth, 21, who likes to wear some make-up, and who plays piano at a club, and volunteers at a retirement home, for piano and as a make-up artist, his specialty enjoyment.
Jake, a bit older, is a mechanic, muscled and strong, a protective man who lives with his Mom, after all they have been through. She is a Nurse at the retirement home where Seth volunteers and invites Seth home to dinner.
So, Seth the gay virgin and straight Jake meet at dinner with Jake’s Mom, and it’s a good start.
Terrific talks, playing games and getting to know each other is fun for each man. We learn their insecurities and strengths, the deepest of thoughts, and the developing attraction, too. Seth’s Mom is controlling and unfeeling. Later on it’s first times with a man for Jake, (and Seth) but it’s only Seth that gives him these thrilling new emotions and reactions. GFY.
Jake respects all of Seth ‘s wishes; Seth can be safe with Jake, not afraid like he was with the guy from his past. Each man is exploring for the first time and both are having great sexy times.
We see Seth stretch his wings, as Jake’s Mom does, too. It’s a lovely story of being unafraid, stepping out of your bubble, and grabbing a good thing when you see it.
ENJOY !
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March 4, 2021
Seth był słodki, Jake był słodki, mama Jake'a była słodka, Jesse był słodki, Dane był słodki, przytulanie było słodkie, pocałunki były słodkie, seks był słodki, wszystko naokoło było słodkie, nawet jedyny gorzki akcent w postaci matki Setha, też okazał się być słodki po zeskrobaniu zewnętrznej, zaschniętej warstwy...
Wszystko było tak cholernie baaaaaaaaaaaaardzo słodkie...
Zęby mnie ciągle bolą...
...i szczęka od ziewania.
Wszystko było tak cholernie baaaaaaaaaaaaardzo słodkie...
Zęby mnie ciągle bolą...
...i szczęka od ziewania.
June 20, 2020
This was very boring for me. I didn’t really care about Seth or about Jake. I didn’t care about their moms. Even the smallest interactions in this book are invested with so much meaning. It took me days to read and I was never excited to pick it up. Who cares?
December 14, 2022
(19.11.2022 audiobook re-read)
June 17, 2020
When I say this book was ADORABLE I mean it. It was the sweetest thing ever. Truth being told, I'm having a hard time lately committing to a whole length novel yet once I started this one I couldn't put it down and I was reminded how happy I get when I immerse myself in a beautiful heartfelt book. Jake and Seth's story was vulnerable and tender. they were both exploring parts of themselves they haven't before and that's without mentioning the sexual part that was rather new to both of them.
We've met Seth in the previous installment. He is Jesse's best friend. They used to live together in Seth's apartment before Jesse found his own HEA with Dane (If you haven't read "Pretty Perfect" it's simply a MUST). Jake has lived a rather sheltered life. He comes from a wealthy family but a cold one. It used to be different when his father was alive, but after his death his mother became WAY too controlling, trying to build a perfect life for her only son, not seeing for a second it's never what he wanted for himself. He didn't know how to stand up to her, how to pursue his real interests which is a big part of the reason he has left home to study (what she wants - and he dislikes), in the university his father went to, and more importantly far from home.
Living with Jesse he realized a lot about himself, what he enjoys doing - playing the piano, putting makeup o himself but also on others and dreaming of becoming a professional makeup artist. As he isn't lacking financially he is able to do both in the assisted living facility he volunteers at. The residents love him and he enjoys spending time with them. He has also found a friend in one of the workers there - Bonnie who become in a way more than just a friend, a sort of a mother figure he wishes his own could be - loving and compassionate.
Jake on the other hand, had a difficult childhood and upbringing. He LOVES his mother and would do right around anything and everything for her, but he couldn't stop his father from mistreating her. There were too many times he wished he could save her and couldn't. When he was old enough, he made the step of taking her away from her abusive partner and together they built a different present and future for themselves. Everything he and his mother shared had brought them closer together but it also made Jake feel responsible for his mother's well being and safety. He truly wants her to have a life of her own and a sense of freedom and independence but it's still hard to "let go" especially now as she is planning on "moving out" of his house.
When Seth appears at his doorstep after his mother invited him for dinner he is surprised. Especially because he has actually met the guy before at his friends' house (Dane's brother in law). It's easy to see what his mother found in Seth. He is simply ADORABLE. Though it's not something he remembers ever feeling towards a guy before... He can admit to himself at times he HAD found some men attractive, yet he has never acted on his attraction. It was too easy to enjoy Seth's company as a good friends not only to his mom but to him as well.
Seth is VERY attracted to Jake, but it still takes them a while to admit their feelings to one another. While Seth is out his first encounter with a guy left him traumatized. He WANTS to act on his desires, but after what he went through he finds it hard to trust. It doesn't take him long to realize if there is a person he CAN trust (except his best friend Jesse) it's Jake and since it's all new to Jake as well, they have the time to experiment and explore each other with no pressure. That's exactly what both men needed in the physical sense, but also emotionally. Getting closer, talking about their lives and their past. Building a true foundation of trust. One that allows both of them to try things they have never done before.
Both men have their issues to deal with. But together they give each other the strength to believe in themselves. It was beautiful seeing the positive effect both men had on each other. Seth becoming more independent and Jake learning to trust and letting go - of his need to protect the people he loves but also be able to show his own vulnerabilities. It was baby steps for both of them. Yet every move, every moment between them was SUCH a joy to read. Even the more difficult conversations they shared, there was something about THEM together, that melted my heart.
I truly can't recommend this book enough. It was sweet and tender. It was emotional yet not overly angsty. It was sad but more than that it was hopeful. I truly couldn't have asked for more. Christina and Riley DEFINITELY did it again! Can't wait for Skylar's book!
I kindly received this ARC in exchange for my honest opinion.
More Reviews HERE
We've met Seth in the previous installment. He is Jesse's best friend. They used to live together in Seth's apartment before Jesse found his own HEA with Dane (If you haven't read "Pretty Perfect" it's simply a MUST). Jake has lived a rather sheltered life. He comes from a wealthy family but a cold one. It used to be different when his father was alive, but after his death his mother became WAY too controlling, trying to build a perfect life for her only son, not seeing for a second it's never what he wanted for himself. He didn't know how to stand up to her, how to pursue his real interests which is a big part of the reason he has left home to study (what she wants - and he dislikes), in the university his father went to, and more importantly far from home.
Living with Jesse he realized a lot about himself, what he enjoys doing - playing the piano, putting makeup o himself but also on others and dreaming of becoming a professional makeup artist. As he isn't lacking financially he is able to do both in the assisted living facility he volunteers at. The residents love him and he enjoys spending time with them. He has also found a friend in one of the workers there - Bonnie who become in a way more than just a friend, a sort of a mother figure he wishes his own could be - loving and compassionate.
Jake on the other hand, had a difficult childhood and upbringing. He LOVES his mother and would do right around anything and everything for her, but he couldn't stop his father from mistreating her. There were too many times he wished he could save her and couldn't. When he was old enough, he made the step of taking her away from her abusive partner and together they built a different present and future for themselves. Everything he and his mother shared had brought them closer together but it also made Jake feel responsible for his mother's well being and safety. He truly wants her to have a life of her own and a sense of freedom and independence but it's still hard to "let go" especially now as she is planning on "moving out" of his house.
When Seth appears at his doorstep after his mother invited him for dinner he is surprised. Especially because he has actually met the guy before at his friends' house (Dane's brother in law). It's easy to see what his mother found in Seth. He is simply ADORABLE. Though it's not something he remembers ever feeling towards a guy before... He can admit to himself at times he HAD found some men attractive, yet he has never acted on his attraction. It was too easy to enjoy Seth's company as a good friends not only to his mom but to him as well.
Seth is VERY attracted to Jake, but it still takes them a while to admit their feelings to one another. While Seth is out his first encounter with a guy left him traumatized. He WANTS to act on his desires, but after what he went through he finds it hard to trust. It doesn't take him long to realize if there is a person he CAN trust (except his best friend Jesse) it's Jake and since it's all new to Jake as well, they have the time to experiment and explore each other with no pressure. That's exactly what both men needed in the physical sense, but also emotionally. Getting closer, talking about their lives and their past. Building a true foundation of trust. One that allows both of them to try things they have never done before.
Both men have their issues to deal with. But together they give each other the strength to believe in themselves. It was beautiful seeing the positive effect both men had on each other. Seth becoming more independent and Jake learning to trust and letting go - of his need to protect the people he loves but also be able to show his own vulnerabilities. It was baby steps for both of them. Yet every move, every moment between them was SUCH a joy to read. Even the more difficult conversations they shared, there was something about THEM together, that melted my heart.
I truly can't recommend this book enough. It was sweet and tender. It was emotional yet not overly angsty. It was sad but more than that it was hopeful. I truly couldn't have asked for more. Christina and Riley DEFINITELY did it again! Can't wait for Skylar's book!
I kindly received this ARC in exchange for my honest opinion.
More Reviews HERE
June 17, 2020
Pretty Sweet, the second book in the Boys in Makeup series, is fabulous! I love everything about this Christina Lee and Riley Hart book.
This is a phenomenal story. Seth and Jake are perfect for one another. The way they gravitate to each other and the natural evolution of their relationship is impeccable.
Seth's a superb character; adorable and lovable, yet totally wounded. However, he fully comes alive when performing. He's a breathe of fresh air with his makeup, and his motivation to work at the nursing home. He's certainly a complex character who's rich but lonely. As his past is unveiled, the reader learns of his motivations, his desire to be strong, and his strength in the end. His relationship with his mother is certainly painful, and has been a leading factor in who he is. As for his loneliness and his fear of being touched, cue the heart-breaking emotions.
Through Seth's friendship with Bonnie, who is delightful, Seth meets her son Jake. Jake's a mechanic who's locked away his bisexual side. I enjoy the way he gravitates towards the cute Seth. It's all easy and natural, with attraction and want added in. As for Bonnie, she's a delight in general and her relationship with Seth is totally feel-good.
I love these men together. They each come with some baggage, but together they help one another, complimenting each other perfectly. Jake's coming out as bisexual, and exploring sex with a man for the first time is wonderfully explored. As well, Seth is a virgin, doubling the first time fun.
Written in alternating 1st person pov, the characters fully come alive, with their emotions on their sleeves. This author combo is superb, gifting us complex characters and a heartfelt storyline.
If you love hurt/comfort romances, you will love Pretty Sweet. I love this series and hope these authors continue this for a while.
This is a phenomenal story. Seth and Jake are perfect for one another. The way they gravitate to each other and the natural evolution of their relationship is impeccable.
Seth's a superb character; adorable and lovable, yet totally wounded. However, he fully comes alive when performing. He's a breathe of fresh air with his makeup, and his motivation to work at the nursing home. He's certainly a complex character who's rich but lonely. As his past is unveiled, the reader learns of his motivations, his desire to be strong, and his strength in the end. His relationship with his mother is certainly painful, and has been a leading factor in who he is. As for his loneliness and his fear of being touched, cue the heart-breaking emotions.
Through Seth's friendship with Bonnie, who is delightful, Seth meets her son Jake. Jake's a mechanic who's locked away his bisexual side. I enjoy the way he gravitates towards the cute Seth. It's all easy and natural, with attraction and want added in. As for Bonnie, she's a delight in general and her relationship with Seth is totally feel-good.
I love these men together. They each come with some baggage, but together they help one another, complimenting each other perfectly. Jake's coming out as bisexual, and exploring sex with a man for the first time is wonderfully explored. As well, Seth is a virgin, doubling the first time fun.
Written in alternating 1st person pov, the characters fully come alive, with their emotions on their sleeves. This author combo is superb, gifting us complex characters and a heartfelt storyline.
If you love hurt/comfort romances, you will love Pretty Sweet. I love this series and hope these authors continue this for a while.
June 24, 2020
I want to be compassionate while being honest in this review. I understand the authors have to really crank out the books frequently to make a living. I also understand that this is fluffy mind candy, which is what I was looking for and what I enjoy from these authors, especially Riley, but this felt formulaic and like it was light without a lot of heart (true character development )behind it because they were in a big rush. Low-end 2.5 rounded up
September 7, 2020
Something about this book just didn't gel with me like the first in the series. It kind of felt like I was reading about a couple of teenagers instead of grown ass men. I did like it but didn't love it.
January 16, 2021
I needed this book. The story, the characters, the events, the two man-virgins, sexual discovery, and more--I needed it all. One of my friends just lost a young family member and I needed escape. Is that why this is at least four stars bordering on five? IDK. But I do know that Seth was so sweet and grew into his own as this book unfolded.
Fear is paralyzing and Seth lived in a world of being afraid to spread his wings and only doing what his mother wanted for him. She was a bit harsh but we need characters like her to provide contrast so I didn't dwell on her. Jake, on the other hand, is so used to caregiving and protecting those he loves, especially his mother, that it was inevitable that these two polar opposites would be attracted to each other. Jake is discovering that he may be attracted to men, or at least Seth, who is a virgin, so their moments of sexual intimacy were smoking hot. And sweet.
Both progressed through their fears, changed and grew--in their own strengths and together. If you are looking for low angst, nice characters, and a fast track to love, this is "pretty sweet."
Fear is paralyzing and Seth lived in a world of being afraid to spread his wings and only doing what his mother wanted for him. She was a bit harsh but we need characters like her to provide contrast so I didn't dwell on her. Jake, on the other hand, is so used to caregiving and protecting those he loves, especially his mother, that it was inevitable that these two polar opposites would be attracted to each other. Jake is discovering that he may be attracted to men, or at least Seth, who is a virgin, so their moments of sexual intimacy were smoking hot. And sweet.
Both progressed through their fears, changed and grew--in their own strengths and together. If you are looking for low angst, nice characters, and a fast track to love, this is "pretty sweet."
June 17, 2020
Loved it!!!
All the swoons with this book! It was so aptly named because everything about it was really pretty sweet! I knew I would love Seth when we met him in Pretty Perfect and I was so excited to get his story. And yes, this book made me feel so good and was so enjoyable to read, but it also was a very touching and moving story about finding yourself and discovering how to be your best self. Both Seth and Jake both had some demons to get past and growing to do and it was a joy watching them do that together and fall in love along the way. This was a beautifully written story with tender first times, a lovely bi-awakening, amazing dialogue and fabulous side characters that were so integral into Seth and Jake's story. Loved everything about it and cannot wait for Skylars story next!
All the swoons with this book! It was so aptly named because everything about it was really pretty sweet! I knew I would love Seth when we met him in Pretty Perfect and I was so excited to get his story. And yes, this book made me feel so good and was so enjoyable to read, but it also was a very touching and moving story about finding yourself and discovering how to be your best self. Both Seth and Jake both had some demons to get past and growing to do and it was a joy watching them do that together and fall in love along the way. This was a beautifully written story with tender first times, a lovely bi-awakening, amazing dialogue and fabulous side characters that were so integral into Seth and Jake's story. Loved everything about it and cannot wait for Skylars story next!
June 21, 2020
Sweet sweet sweet
OMG so much love for this book! We finally get Seth’s story, and just like I thought, it was with Jake!
The name of this book definitely makes it justice. Pretty sweet is what these guys were. Jake was so thoughtful and patient, but also protective and just a sweetheart. Watching Seth grow and gain confidence during this book was amazing, I felt so happy and proud of him, I absolutely adored it.
Bonnie was plain awesome as a mom, she stole my heart.
This is a definite feel-good, low-angst, sexy MUST READ! Loved it!
OMG so much love for this book! We finally get Seth’s story, and just like I thought, it was with Jake!
The name of this book definitely makes it justice. Pretty sweet is what these guys were. Jake was so thoughtful and patient, but also protective and just a sweetheart. Watching Seth grow and gain confidence during this book was amazing, I felt so happy and proud of him, I absolutely adored it.
Bonnie was plain awesome as a mom, she stole my heart.
This is a definite feel-good, low-angst, sexy MUST READ! Loved it!
April 11, 2021
2.5* rounded up.
This was cute - but I wasn’t fully engaged in the story. Why did Seth need a man for the light to switch on and him to suddenly decide to take control of his life? It was odd and artificial - and I didn’t get that evolution I guess.
I wasn’t a fan of the forced angst at the end, and the 180 in the personality of his heavily controlling mother.
I jumped in at book 2 so maybe this makes more sense if you start at 1 - but I don’t think I’ll bother
This was cute - but I wasn’t fully engaged in the story. Why did Seth need a man for the light to switch on and him to suddenly decide to take control of his life? It was odd and artificial - and I didn’t get that evolution I guess.
I wasn’t a fan of the forced angst at the end, and the 180 in the personality of his heavily controlling mother.
I jumped in at book 2 so maybe this makes more sense if you start at 1 - but I don’t think I’ll bother
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