Note to self - Even if the book's on sale and you like the author, start reading the description and/or reviews before purchasing. (The dangers of ebooks . . . too easy to buy!).
Bought it when I was on a download binge before a 3 week trip and right after reading a Jaci Burton I really liked. Disappointed that I spent the $ on it, but probably would not have purchased it if I took a second or two to research.
So the reasons for my disappointment - some self-inflicted, some the book's problems.
1) Super short - too short for the price. It's 91 pages - and the story doesn't even go that long because of the bonus materials at the end. I did not see then when buying as I'd not pay that much for a single novella.
2) Not what I was expecting - If I'd read the description more closely maybe I would have had a better idea. It's not a story. It's lots of steamy stuff going on - crazy steamy, crazy menegetrois steamy, but I wouldn't call it erotica with the focus on getting to a happy endy. But there wasn't much of a story - it was like a bit of plot thrown in to justify the sex scenes. Which is okay if that's what you want - but i was looking for a romance with a story.
3) Lawyer story lines. Ms. Burton - go make friends with some folks who practice in large firms and get them to edit your work. I don't even know where to begin, but every aspect of the story was driving me crazy because it was just off. For example, the whole story is premised on a business deal in which one of the male protagonists is selling off a portion of his business, aka "divestiture." Yet the characters refer to it as a merger, an acquistion, and a divestiture. All three may be in the same transaction (in fact a diverstiture to one company is generally an acquisition by an other) but not for the same company. And you don't execute simply by signing documents. And, I'll just shut up now - but it was driving me batty.
I know one is not going to read a book like this for the legal details, but so much is so off. Other crazy stuff - like if the two main characters have a romance one or both will be fired. At what wacky law firm is that? Intra-law firm romances happen all the time. Only time I know where a firing resulted where was a married associate started doing a married secretary - and that was mainly because it affected the secretary's work. And the heroine's career timeline at the firm was also wacky. Plus, they would not really be competing against each other at this stage in their careers And as a partner, you would not (and generally could not without violating ethical rules), drop clients that quickly. Of course, the author is using the word junior partner, when I think she means senior associate.
I'll shut up on this point - but you can write a quick and short and sex novella, and still make it somewhat believable. The legal stuff is just so very, very off.
Anyway - decent sex scenes but that's about it.