Kaylee's from a trashy part of town and doesn't have much money. To make ends meet, she works as a maid at the Millbrook Estate, washing dishes and mopping floors. The curvy girl’s determined to make something of herself, but will she be able to escape her trailer park past?
Elliot’s jaded. He’s been through dozens of women, and there always seems to be something missing. The billionaire’s got high standards, but maybe high standards are over-rated. Maybe it’s time to hit the trailer park for some hot, heavenly filth in the form of a sassy, curvy girl with plenty to share.
Rags to riches? Forget that! This story is about riches to rags and the fun two people have when they decide to get dirty together. The billionaire OTT alpha male thinks he’s got it all, but Kaylee shows him there are whole new worlds of taboo fun to be had. No cheating, no cliffhangers, and always an HEA for my readers.
This is one of the worst stories I've ever read. To begin with Kaylee is depicted as a hard-working teenager, still in highschool, with a shitty home life.
She meets forty-something Elliot in an awkward situation while cleaning his house. He hits on her and she IMMEDIATELY OFFERS HIM ANAL SEX RIGHT THEN AND THERE, which he takes her up on. Surprisingly, he invites her back over for lunch the next day, where again they have anal sex, but after he ejaculated in her ass he pumped his cock in her vagina just once or twice for kicks. This is the extent of their relationship, emotionally and physically.
Kaylee ends up knocked up from this, and through the most convoluted storyline ever somehow Kaylee and Elliot are never able to contact each other again, until Kaylee runs into him at another cleaning job a year later where she overhears him telling someone she's his girlfriend.
Uh huh. Right. Because this billionaire considers Kaylee his girlfriend after fucking her twice and having one date with her and never speaking to her again for over a year. Sounds like any reasonable man, yes?
This is just garbage.
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DNF and OMG and WTF😂 Are there such things like negative points and omg what did I read??? And how is it she has so many books? That was by faaaaar the worst I’ve ever read. Omg I cant. I am frozen and I’m laughing about myself. And really average points tending 4???? How???
It felt like I was reading two teenagers trying to talk dirty to each other, even though one was a 40 something year old man. Add in the whole baby storyline…how do two people have so many issues with communicating?!
I love smutty books, but this one just wasn’t it for me.
page 68 WTF am I reading? page 71 I've seen a firehose blasts must be quite impressive to see a firehouse blast Well I was entertained, I can say that much so I'll say it earned it's 2 stars.
Kaylee Goes from stuttering, shy-ish, apologetic maid to naughty talking vixen that just rocked his world on his desk 😈😈😈. I do love Elliot’s & Kaylee’s insta-lust to love attraction, they’re lucky fate gave them a second chance 🥰 Sweet HEA💋
🥧 apple meringue pie…that sounds yummy -the PG version- 😋 (never knew that existed…lol, only lemon)
🤔 why doesn’t her mum work??…ahhh, she’s a drunk-tard, got it… 🍹🤮😵💫 among other things🫤 And ewww Humphrey made me wanna throw up too, gross!!! (the mother-daughter comment)⛔️
4/5 STARS. This book is almost too unbelievable. Kaylee has to clean Elliot’s house and he catches her cleaning his office and is immediately captivated by her. He fucks her right then and there and their relationship goes on from there where he calls her for lunch and then they make love again unprotected. That’s the last time they talk because after a year of no communication she finds out she’s pregnant during that year and she gives birth to Ezra. After that same year she goes back to work and turns out she’s working for Elliot’s crazy, drug addict ex girlfriend Brina. He’s there and he tells Brina he can’t be with her because she’s crazy and because he loves another woman and Kaylee cried at that misconception thinking he was with another woman and turns out he kept talking and telling Brina that he was in love with a maid and telling her how voluptuous she is and how she has all these dreams he wants to help her accomplish. She walks out of the room and yells at Brina and blurts out that she had his child and he grabs her out of the room both in shock and anger and tells her to take him to his son and she does and meanwhile on the ride there he asks her why she didn’t call and she asks the same thing. Turns out Elliot broke his phone and Kaylee’s mother took advantage of her phone so there was no way for them to get in contact. When he meets Ezra he falls in love with his son and his sons mother all over again. He tells Kaylee he loves her and that’s their HEA. In the epilogue turns out she’s preggers again and Elliot asks to marry her and she of course accepts. This book taught me that love can be found even if the wealth dynamics are different or if there is an age gap. Love can be found anywhere, you just have to open your eyes.
SMUT: 3/5 This man did anal the first 2 times and the puss only once and she was preggers after that. But the way he dirty talked and how she responded was mind-blowing and panty dropping.
I liked this book. The story was well written and flowed beautifully. The characters were well defined within the story and they had such great chemistry. I loved the ending. If you like the works of this wonderful author, then this book is a must-read.
this book was just not my cup of tea! where is the rest of the story and omg who does something like that all for some fantasy? its was just beyond strange for me sorry.
A great story. Basically a pauper to princess type story. Felt there should of been more in between the year she was.. and he was... but it is what it is. But I liked it regardless. The male character was very strong and the lead woman after some hiccups was just as strong minded as the male lead. The secondary woman was annoying and if I was the other girl, I'd want to beat her with a broom and leave. The mom was just as gross. But it all tied in nicely together.
Two stars is far kinder than the 1 star the book richly deserves. Two stars for the storyline and promising start and no cheating. Otherwise, this book is full of unlikable characters and ludicrous things that are so cringeworthy and laughable (but not in a good way).
Trailer Park Daddy tells the story of high school senior Kaylee and older millionaire Elliot, who are from opposite ends of the track. Kaylee is considered trailer trash poor and destitute, while Elliot has everything except the right girl to warm his bed in his jaded life. The beginning has so much promise of a (dirty) Cinderella story with decent characterization, but as soon as Elliot mutters his lusty desires to Kaylee, she turns into a...well, to put it simply, a slut who only thinks with one part of her body, the wrong part. Now, I'm a fan of instalove and I freaken LOVE Alexa Riley books, but the “instalove” in Trailer Park Daddy fails in comparison. It's more of “instalust” (instant lust). And I like instalust in the appropriate dirty book if it's written right and relatable (meaning the characters click with me and/or I really like how the story or situation is written), but this book couldn't even give me the sexy vibes despite trying so hard. And trust me, it did...like those desperate other women who want the hero(es) of a romance book. I laughed and cringed at all the attempted dirty talk and situations and raged at the airheaded characters who say and do dumb things.
To make it short, what other reviewers complain about the flaws of the book has a lot of ground and needs to take into consideration when reviewing the book. Kaylee and Elliot have less than 3 encounters with each other (with them having an*l sex twice), there's a one-year separation and Kaylee has his baby during that time, and when they coincidentally meet up again, they resume things where it is left off and they have their HEA (happily ever after). To be fair, Elliot does penetrate Kaylee's va*ina and “finishes” inside during their 2nd encounter, so the pregnancy issue makes sense, but the sex isn't anything special or soul-searching. And the explanations for their separation are so poorly written and pathetic, despite them being “reasonable.”
The only passable character is Olly (Olivia), Kaylee's best friend, who questions Elliot and Kaylee's “relationship” for Kaylee's sakes, but the story is so rushed that everything falls short. After Olly's concerns for Kaylee are addressed and Kaylee expresses self-doubt, the next chapter shifts to one year later. Olly is only mentioned in passing afterwards and doesn't even grace any scene for support. I like short stories, but when they have disjunction and such unrelatable characters, I just don't feel for the books. (Other possibly acceptable characters are Coralie, Kaylee's dysfunctional and selfish mother, and Brina, the desperate woman who wants to jump Elliot's bones. This is really bad, when you think these types of characters have more “depth” than the main characters! 🤣)
By the time Elliot and Kaylee reunite and all the revelations are poorly and pathetically “explained,” I actually expected Olly to turn out to be a backstabbing “friend,” who wants to ruin any happiness Kaylee has. I mean, as typical as that sort of twist is in this kind of story, at least it wouldn't be as uninspiring and lazy as what S.E. cooked up for the separation. Both have their pros and cons. Grateful that S.E. took a “different, nontypical, (less) drama-free” approach to the separation and kept the story short, but the book isn't short and sweet; it's short and dumb. 😫
I try to avoid (true) romance books with heroines who sleep around or appear so slutty and unlikable, unless I really love the characters and author and the way the story is written, but if everything is a gray, boring blob, it's an epic fail. Now, S.E. Law is not one of my favorite authors and her writing leaves a lot to be desired, but she does have a few surprising touching and/or decent books. You can usually count on her for short and dirty reads with the sexy feels, if not emotional. But her sex descriptions and dirty talking are cringey, and sometimes not in the best way. Trailer Park Daddy is one of the prime examples. I can't and won't go back to reread even for the “steamy” scenes. Another unforgivable reason to not go back? Kaylee and Elliot have NO chemistry, none whatsoever in their instalust. Utterly unacceptable. 😑👎
If you want to read this for a good laugh and self-torture, I recommend it only once. Otherwise if you truly like a book with poorly written characters with no grit or spark, well, it's The One for you.
Kaylee is an eighteen year old senior in high school. She also single handedly supports herself and her mom with several side jobs. When she's working her maid gig at a big mansion she meets the owner of the house -- Elliot -- and the two hit it off. From there they pursue a relationship with each other despite their class differences.
Gah! The books in this series are so utterly awful and this one was the worst of them all so far. The only reason I've continued trying them is because of my mistake to buy a couple of the box sets during a Kindle Rewards day. What a mistake that was!
Anyways, this one was just so badly written and choppy. The story doesn't flow well. There are huge time gaps between chapters. The characters are flat and annoying. And there's a lot of plot holes when it comes to them having trouble getting ahold of each other for a year -- namely why doesn't he just hire the same maid service so he can see her again? Or she can go to his house? None of it made sense.
But the absolute worst was the "smut". They are going along having normal conversations and acting like sane people. Then all of a sudden, they start the most horrendous dirty talk. Absolutely the worst cheesiest laughable dirty talk I've ever read. They don't even sound like the same characters once they start with the dirty talk. Their entire personalities change from...normalish, to bad 1970's porno dialog. And she calls him "big boy"! OMG no. That's so cringe.
There was literally nothing I liked about this. It was terrible. And at this point I'm done trying with this series. I was going to try to at least finish the books I already bought. But after four of these terrible stories, I can't read another six of them to finish the box sets I purchased. How does she even have so many stories in this series? How are they getting good reviews? They are terrible. Badly written, cheesy, not GOOD smutty. Just awful all around. And I'm done with the series (and this author) now.
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Trailer Park Daddy, Book 2 of the Forbidden Fantasies series, was a very fast-paced and short novella. The relationship started from the first moment the two main characters met, and was hot from the get-go. Unfortunately, both characters were a bit...immature. She was an 18-year-old senior in high school, and he was a rich man in his middle 40s. Don't get me wrong. While I wasn't overly concerned about the age gap, what did bother me was that, for their ages, their maturity level was atrocious. After hooking up twice, they neither saw nor spoke to each other again for a year, at which time, the MMC learned he was a daddy to a three-month-old baby boy. Why do I say they were immature? Because when one or the other tried to call and/or text after their last hookup, that's all they relied upon...that phone contact...nothing else. The FMC never went back to his house to tell him she was pregnant. He never contacted her place of employment or her high school to locate her, although HE said he searched for her for the entire year. In my opinion, neither tried very hard to reach out. The only way they got together again was when the FMC accepted a job in someone's home (the wannabe-other woman), and the MMC showed up and she "accidentally" informed him that he was a father. The drama and the angst were okay. The book happened so fast (just 9 brief chapters) that there wasn't all that much content so, not only was there no fluff n stuff, but there was no grit and no character descriptions and it just left the reader wondering what happened during the year they were apart. It had the potential to be a really good novel but, in the end, it was just a decent, quick-read novella. It only earned a two-star rating because of the lack of content and the fact there were some inconsistencies and unfinished issues.
ONE HOT LITTLE ADVENTURE!!! Dirty dog! Law brings it, stepping up her game, taking control and calling the shots, kicking the jerks to the curb and jetting right on out, wrapping this baby up sleek, shiny and tight. A swirling whirlwind of crazy mishaps and baffling circumstances, alongside the taxing trials and funky tribulations, rock this baby to the core, rolling with a slew of striking twists and wicked turns, drawing our characters closer than they could have never imagined. Yielding incredibly, well rounded scenario's, that punch dead center with such exuberance and grace, grounding in it's strength and awe inspiring in it's depth. Securing the ups and downs, weaving a cocoon so intricately and tight, drawing you deeper into this tangled web. The attraction and chemistry flows from the pages, alluring and mesmerizing, exposing an undeniable connection, binding them to one another perfectly. The characters are authentic, relatable and realistic with depth and on point personalities that blend and flow fluidly. The scenes are so graphically detailed and descriptive it paints an elaborate backdrop that makes the storylines pop. Fantastic job Law, thanks for sharing this little jewel with us.
S.E. Law is a seriously talented Author, that deserves high praise for her incredible publications and Trailer Park Daddy is just another superbly crafted release.
Elliot and Kaylee are going to melt your heart as well as your Kindle. That's right, while these two characters couldn't be anymore opposite, they do happen to share things in common. Their mutual lust & chemistry as well as their determination to do what is right are just two of the similarities between them. They met by chance and came together by choice. However, their happily ever after is definitely hard won and much deserved. I try truly hard never to give away any part of the plot, so that I do not ruin it for other reader's. Should you be looking for a beautifully designed romance, then please let me assure you... You've found it, right here. I encourage you to follow along as Kaylee finds her own Prince Charming and Elliot finds his one true love.
I was beyond fortunate to have requested an advanced reader's copy of Trailer Park Daddy in exchange for my honest and voluntarily given opinion and I highly recommend reading not only this release, but absolutely anything published by S.E. Law.
Kaylee was living with her mother in the trailer park because she was working as a maid trying to figure a way for a better life. Her latest job took her to a mansion and while she was cleaning the owner shows up on the floor she's on with a woman. Elliot is tired of women being with him for what he has and he is real tired of them being aggressive about getting him. So when he being bother yet again by a woman he doesn't want Kaylee hides so she isn't seen. However after the woman leaves she stumbles and he catches her. Elliot is stunned by Kaylee and can't believe what she witnessed. Yet when she is busy trying to clean her mess he is even more intrigued by her. Things get heated between them and Kaylee worries about her job. Will Elliot try to get Kaylee to go out with him? Can they be together with their different lifestyles?
This is a steamy story that will hook you in from the first chapter and leave you wanting more with the last one. This is a well written and very entertaining story. I would recommend this book to any book lover.
I received a free ARC copy of the book in return for a free review.
Kaylee is an 18 year old girl trying to finish high school despite her home life. She lives in a trailer park with her mother, who is always high and sleeping with everyone. She says where she lives is trashy but she isn't. Kaylee is working as a maid to support herself and her mother. Elliot is a billionaire who hasn't met anyone to spark his desire until he meets Kaylee. Immediately they have sex in his office and it continues from there. There is plenty of heat between the characters and it felt like the reader is being asked to believe they are in love. I have an issue with the way Elliot spoke to Kaylee. She claims multiple times she isn't trashy yet she constant tells Elliot that she is trashy to get him hot and bothered. He in turns calls her trashy girl. Yet he loves her enough to pine for her when he can't get in touch with her. I am not sold. The story is a quick read with lots of heat if you can get around that point.
A fast and dirty read, I liked that the story was easy to read, the action moved quickly. The girl, Kaylee, was definitely a sympathetic character, but she fluctuated from a doormat to her mom to a sex kitten with the rich dude. It was fun to expend plausibility for a little while, but it had some definite developmental issues. I wanted to give it a higher rating, I thought it had potential to be better. The miscommunication was understandable, but the time frame wasn't. The mom and Humphrey thing, that was just wrong and raised so many red flags for me. Although I enjoyed the basic story, the heat level, and the speed that I was able to read through it, I wanted it to be better. I do enjoy the writing style of the author, but she stressed the whole trailer park/poor trashy fast girl motif too much, it was kind of insulting to poor girls in general. If the story gets edited and improved, I will definitely adjust this review in the future. It was an okay read, definitely worth the hour to read it, and improvements would only make it better.
I loved this book. S E Law never fails to disappoint. Kaylee is just doing what she can to get through school but also support her mum who relies on Kaylee to work at the same time as doing to school as she is too lazy to work. Kaylee is run raged and dreams of going to college and getting a career but her mum says it will never happen. But a chance encounter with the lovely Elliott on a job changed everything and she starts to fall for him. After a steamy account in the office she is soon having lunch with him the next day. But then things happen and unexpected they lose contact until another unexpected encounter brings them back together and this time Elliott is determined to keep the only women he has loved, and that Kaylee, but Kaylee has a secret she has been keeping and it is one big surprise for Elliott.
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Kaylee is eighteen year old and in the last semester of high school and working part time to support her mother and her because her mother is lazy and won’t work to support them both. While working as a maid, Kaylee get assigned to clean rooms of this mansion that belongs to a Elliott, the ancestor of the founding father of their town.
Kaylee witnesses an embarrassing scene between Elliott and his employee, but she doesn’t make it known she is there till after the employee leaves. Elliott who is forty, is quite taken with Kaylee that they start a relationship, but after two days, Kaylee can’t seem to reach Elliott. Time passes and they meet up again where they pick up where they left off and live happily ever after.
I was given an advanced copy of this book to read and review with my honest and fair opinion.
No virgin No contraception mentioned Safe read No OM, just one crazy persistent OW who kept being rejected by H No cheating, HEA Overall score: 2.5 melodramatic instalove stars
S E Law hit the mark with this OTT read filled with goodness. This book tells the story of Elliot Connery and Kaylee. Elliot is rich and lives in a mansion. Kaylee is eighteen years old and a senior in high school living at a rundown trailer park. Kaylee works for a cleaning service when she is not in school. She meets Elliot while cleaning his house. Kaylee is cleaning his office and he walks in. She tries to stay hidden but she is so star-struck she makes quite the splash. It doesn't take long for Elliot to take Kaylee right over his desk! They have so much chemistry. Elliot asks Kaylee to have lunch with him the next day. Everything seems to be in place for Kaylee to break free from the confines of the trailer park. Until it isn't. This book is a must read and I highly recommend!
Kaylee comes from a dysfunctional family. Her mother is beyond understanding and she treats Kaylee horrible to use as the sole source of income. Kaylee is working trying to get out in time when Elliot is apprehended by a woman who won't take no for an answer resulting in Kaylee having to remain hidden until they leave the room. Too bad things don't go the way you plan causing her not only to make a mess but to in fact meet Elliot. Elliot is captivated right from the beginning which starts an adventurous romance but when miscommunication comes in to play, will Elliot and Kaylee lose out on a chance for a happily ever after? I voluntarily agreed to receive an ARC of this book for an honest review. One person found this helpful
I really enjoyed this story. It revolved around a maid, Kaylee, who was assigned to work at a millionaire's mansion one day. They end up messing around and find each other extremely attractive. They even plan another date together and have even more fun that day, but after that their communication completely stops. The Kaylee is left wondering what happened and if she was wrong about Elliot. This story is really steamy but also a little sad and frustrating at some parts. I love that it end with a HEA though! I received a free copy of this story from the author as part of her ARC team and am leaving a voluntary honest review.
The Miracle Of Insta-Love: By Korkoi - Habba! Habba! Habba! This is another work of art, that enforces my sentiment that S. E. Law is a really talented storyteller. Elliot and Kaylee are from two different walks of life, but their attraction to each other is instant. Even time and space doesn’t douse the flame ignited between them, which is evident when they run into each other again and pertinent information is released. This is a book that deserves to be on your weekend reading list.
I received a copy of this ARC and I am voluntarily leaving a review.
Kaylee gets more then she bargained for working as a maid when she started at Elliot’s home. Not knowing Kaylee is there, Elliot's is being preposition by an employee and he wasn’t into her. Kaylee trying to sneak away falls and now Elliot notices her. She’s just what he needs. Chemistry, yes! Surprises in store, yes! Some explaining to do yes! Dreams can come true! A fast, fun read, keeps you turning the pages!
This is the latest great story by S.E. Law. I didn't want to put it down. I couldn't wait to see what happened between Kaylee and Elliot.
Kaylee is 18 and has been working as a maid to pay the bills at home. She meets Elliot on one of her jobs. He is the owner of the manor and he is drawn to her. He asks to see her again. They have another amazing encounter but something happens that will stand in their way to happiness. Will they find their way back to each other?
Her and her friend work for a maid service. She lives in a trailer park with her drug and pot smoking mother who beds anyone for her drugs. She pays everything as her mother spends everything on drugs. She is sent to clean a bathroom and office. She is behind something and over hears a woman trying to seduce the man of the house. When she tries to sneak out he catches her. Things progress from there. There is much more. I received a review copy and voluntarily review it.
I got what I was expecting from this author; good character development in a tight package (the BOOK, not Kaylee!) and smoking hot chemistry. Having said that, the way Kaylee and Elliot lost each other left me unable to suspend belief any further. She TOLD him what part of town she was from! Cell phones and snooty personal assistants be damned, WHY didn't he get in his doggone car and GET her once he knew how he felt about her!? Or get a private detective or something?? Okay, I'm backing off now. This was the one snag that took me out of the story for a moment. For the most part, Kaylee and Elliot have a sexy whirlwind Trailer Park entanglement happening. Grab your wine or whiskey and enjoy!
Great book. There was an immediate attraction between the characters. They lose touch but in the most unexpected, yet ironic way, they are brought back into each other’s lives. I can’t say anymore...you’ll need to read the book to find out what happens. I was given an advance copy of this book for an honest review.
S.E.Law is one of my favor writers! I was honored to be a part of her ARC team! This book was awesome!! I couldn’t put it down. Kaylee had it hard growing up, her mother was a piece of work & I’m glad she doesn’t have to live with her mother anymore. Olly was Kaylee’s best friend & what helped her deal with her life. Then Elliott came into the picture & sweep her off her feet!! A must read!!