The action picks up right off the bat as we follow Jay in his quest to get a certain waiter’s attention and is taken way off course as the two of them witness a kidnapping and need to beat a hasty escape. Turns out there’s more to both Jay and the waiter he intended to seduce – Bryce – and it’s led to them working together to rescue the man who had been kidnapped right in front of them.
This was a pretty quick read for me, topping out at two sittings to go from cover to cover; which is nothing against the quality of the prose, quite the opposite! The world building is clear without being overly weighty. Many stories fall into the trap of feeling the need to explain their backgrounds far beyond what’s required of the tale being told. Here, while I sometimes felt a personal curiosity about the politics or geology of the world(s) being described, (because I’m an absolute sci-fi nerd like that), there’s always enough to understand what’s going on without being pulled down any unnecessary rabbit holes. It’s a good balance which leaves us with a brisk pace in the prose, no getting bogged down in details which have no bearing on the plot and action.
The characters are delightful, as well. Because of the structure of the story, we’re with Jay and Bryce about 95% of the time, with very little in the way of side characters. As the focus of the story is almost entirely on these two and how they get to know one another and come to trust each other, this works out really well, and nothing feels lost by the restricted cast. A quick read or not, the development of the relationship feels natural and well executed. Both men have more to them than they let on at first, leading to distrust and even more recalcitrance, but over the course of the book they find ways to communicate and to get across to one another what they really mean and feel. It’s satisfying to watch as they figure out how to trust one another, how to know for certain that they can trust one another and that they aren’t just being fed more lies, and by the end they’re depending on one another as well.
Without giving direct spoilers, there’s very good reason why Jay in particular is quiet about his past, wounds which still affect him into the present and which make trusting anyone – especially someone like who Bryce turns out to be – difficult. It’s rewarding to watch not only Jay start to come around on those issues, but to see Bryce come to the realization of how deep those injuries actually go, and alter his behavior accordingly.
Hollows has always had a touch for interpersonal relationships, and for crafting her prose is such a way that you feel like you’re reading the thoughts of both sides even if the narration is only giving one directly. This holds true in Return to Duty. After reading it I feel as though I’ve spent very nearly as much time inside Bryce’s head as I have Jay’s, and it was a delight to watch them both go through their arcs.
If you’re a hardcore sci-fi nerd looking for old school sci-fi pulp, or something as intricate and involved as Dune, this’ll be a bit light for you. But if you’re wanting something on that lighter side of sci-fi, with focus on character interactions and a healthy dose of romantic and sexual tension – and plenty of fun banter into the mix! – then I can wholeheartedly recommend this book. It’s a lot of fun, and I’m looking forward to the next one from Hollows!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.