Prepare for the true Big O of Daddy Kink Erotica! This explosive bundle collects 200 books where YOUNGER INEXPERIENCED AND SPOILED BRATS and their HUGE OLDER ALPHA MALES achieve the pinnacle of Pleasure.
From, ROUGH MEN OF THE HOUSE who take whatever they want, BOYS SHE GREW UP WITH who are incapable of restraining their enormous appetites, MEDICAL MEN who like to RAVAGE THEIR PATIENTS, GIRLS SHE GREW UP WITH who crave to lick, swallow, and slurp her crystal rock gem, SPOILED BRATS who like to FEED their men, SPOILED BRATS who like to be TAKEN in their SLEEP, and even a few paranormal fairytale, and vampire stories, this daddy kink comes in ever flavor for your urges ;)
So, get make sure to get some towels to help you dry off, because this is one taboo collection that’s sure to pack more heat than your centers are ready for ;) <3.
Good: I like Hayden Ash's writing. She has great ideas and stories that leave you wanting more. There are several stories I actively groaned at the end, feeling a good 100 pages could follow. There were a lot I had never read before. The only problem with the writing (for me personally) were the vampire stories that took various HEAs and shredded them to bits. However, like I said, that's my personal opinion.
Now bad - and it's bad. There are at least 8 (I lost track of the number) stories that are repeated. You aren't getting 200 stories, just 150+. That irritated me intensely. Secondly, the errors in spelling, in punctuation, in grammar, in formatting are ridiculous. At first, I didn't really mind. After a while, I wanted to rip my hair out. Spelling errors; periods in the middle of sentences; missing words; two instances of epilogue being attached to the wrong stories, a few stories where the main character's name changed three times, it's extremely unprofessional. The author desperately needs a few good beta readers to prevent this kind of mess. I don't know if the author self publishes, but if not, a new editor is needed.
As I said before, they are good stories. It's just a mess to read some of them.
There's a lot happening in all these books. There are a lot of hot sex scenes to be read if you don't like hot sex don't read any of these stories. I wonder how much step- Daddy and Step-sibling action actually happens. There are a lot of HAWT stories about it. *breaks out the fan*