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Making Monster Girls #4
Making Monster Girls 4
I am so close to triumph I can taste it, and everything is within my grasp.
A bevy of scientifically engineered monster girls.
The destruction of the Matriarchy.
Wealth and power beyond reckoning.
I just need to make The Duchess mine.
For science!
A bevy of scientifically engineered monster girls.
The destruction of the Matriarchy.
Wealth and power beyond reckoning.
I just need to make The Duchess mine.
For science!
367 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 22, 2020
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Eric Vall
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July 10, 2020
Wow!!! A lot happening in this installment! I was surprised by the direction things were going and the end was not what I was expecting heading into this one. The new Monster Girl was fun to meet and I am looking forward to seeing her powers in the next book, considering the person and creature she was made from.
June 27, 2020
Great addition to the series but there are things you could have done better
I want to start by saying that it's a great addition to the story but I have a few things that could have been better. First off there are several misspellings of the new monster girl s name. Second the interactions between Lucien and the MC did felt fake after a point, there comes a point where pacifism should be abandoned. Then there is the fact that the MC is supposed to be smart, but nobody with any sense leaves someone with a sword, then turn his back on the swordbearer without disarming him... Honestly I was tempted to drop the book because of how stupid that was.
I want to start by saying that it's a great addition to the story but I have a few things that could have been better. First off there are several misspellings of the new monster girl s name. Second the interactions between Lucien and the MC did felt fake after a point, there comes a point where pacifism should be abandoned. Then there is the fact that the MC is supposed to be smart, but nobody with any sense leaves someone with a sword, then turn his back on the swordbearer without disarming him... Honestly I was tempted to drop the book because of how stupid that was.
June 25, 2020
Best one yet!
Amazing! Absolutely stunning.
Love the unpredictable twists and turns in this novel and the the characters and creatures only add to the wonder and excitement.
After the last cliffhanger this was a breath of life with a ln unexpected, but happy turn for the intriguing and your ending has me excited for the next book immediately!
I really want more of this absolutely stunning series!
Amazing! Absolutely stunning.
Love the unpredictable twists and turns in this novel and the the characters and creatures only add to the wonder and excitement.
After the last cliffhanger this was a breath of life with a ln unexpected, but happy turn for the intriguing and your ending has me excited for the next book immediately!
I really want more of this absolutely stunning series!
March 1, 2021
Best in the series.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book. A strange twist of fate changes everything for Charles and the girls, including bringing forth a monster-girl. However, they continue toward their ultimate goal along side an unexpected acquaintance. The story and characters were intriguing and engaging. I look forward to reading more about these characters and their further adventures. This book is definitely worth reading.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book. A strange twist of fate changes everything for Charles and the girls, including bringing forth a monster-girl. However, they continue toward their ultimate goal along side an unexpected acquaintance. The story and characters were intriguing and engaging. I look forward to reading more about these characters and their further adventures. This book is definitely worth reading.
June 25, 2020
Thank science or magic!
This story is rapidly growing into something truly epic, each new addition builds on such a way you are left at the edge of your seat and craving more. This dystopian world is fascinating and full of such incredible lore!
This story is rapidly growing into something truly epic, each new addition builds on such a way you are left at the edge of your seat and craving more. This dystopian world is fascinating and full of such incredible lore!
June 27, 2020
Amazing
As always, Eric Vall has delivered an awesome story. As this series continues and fleshes out, I find that I just can't help but to want more and can't wait for the next book.
As always, Eric Vall has delivered an awesome story. As this series continues and fleshes out, I find that I just can't help but to want more and can't wait for the next book.
June 28, 2020
Phenomenal
I love the story progression and the evolution Charles has made. Soon enough this is gonna get even crazier. It’s an amazing read that you definitely have to check out!!!
I love the story progression and the evolution Charles has made. Soon enough this is gonna get even crazier. It’s an amazing read that you definitely have to check out!!!
July 11, 2020
Good book
Good world by the author this book left me wondering if Charles is in fact wizard who is beginning to discover his powers and I believe will you use misinformation to instigate dissection amongst the aristocracy. I cannot wait for the next book
Good world by the author this book left me wondering if Charles is in fact wizard who is beginning to discover his powers and I believe will you use misinformation to instigate dissection amongst the aristocracy. I cannot wait for the next book
August 22, 2020
Very Good.
To me this was a very good book, my only complaint is that Charles makes love to his women so seldom. Imean come on, he has four beautiful eager willing. women at his beck and call, and he takes them so seldom. Dosen't sound like Male actions to me.
To me this was a very good book, my only complaint is that Charles makes love to his women so seldom. Imean come on, he has four beautiful eager willing. women at his beck and call, and he takes them so seldom. Dosen't sound like Male actions to me.
June 24, 2020
Can't wait
The story is getting more interesting and informative but also sad seeing how twisted feelings can be. Mc shows he is not weak and can be a form of change
The story is getting more interesting and informative but also sad seeing how twisted feelings can be. Mc shows he is not weak and can be a form of change
June 24, 2020
Okay
Well,the story is really good.But,for a man hell bent on taking over the world.He has no spine when it comes to killing a man that tried to kill him.All I’m saying.
Well,the story is really good.But,for a man hell bent on taking over the world.He has no spine when it comes to killing a man that tried to kill him.All I’m saying.
June 25, 2020
Fantastic!!
This was a great read! I absolutely loved the development in the story. I seriously can not wait for the next book in the series to be released!!
This was a great read! I absolutely loved the development in the story. I seriously can not wait for the next book in the series to be released!!
June 26, 2020
For science!!!
Love the dual rows of teeth. Also like how we are delving into more of the magic side of the world. Keep it up!
Love the dual rows of teeth. Also like how we are delving into more of the magic side of the world. Keep it up!
June 29, 2020
Awsom
I have got to get the next book the suspense is killing me I love you're work and pleas stay well
I have got to get the next book the suspense is killing me I love you're work and pleas stay well
July 1, 2020
Great
They keep getting better don't stop writing. Just another in a long line of books that I must have another of.
They keep getting better don't stop writing. Just another in a long line of books that I must have another of.
July 2, 2020
More please
Read all four books,each non-stop,couldn't do anything until the end.Now all. I can do is be for the next episode.PLEASE
Read all four books,each non-stop,couldn't do anything until the end.Now all. I can do is be for the next episode.PLEASE
July 6, 2020
Good read
Good read, other than a few name mistakes, very easy to read over though. Something is different with Charles, some thing magic!
Good read, other than a few name mistakes, very easy to read over though. Something is different with Charles, some thing magic!
July 8, 2020
More good stuff
If you got far enough to read the 4th book you can guess what you're in for , if you liked the other 3 you will like this
If you got far enough to read the 4th book you can guess what you're in for , if you liked the other 3 you will like this
July 8, 2020
Great Read
I can’t wait for the next book in the series. A great storyline that keeps you on the edge of your seat.
I can’t wait for the next book in the series. A great storyline that keeps you on the edge of your seat.
July 14, 2020
great read
I thought this was a great way to continue the story as well. I can't wait until the next book comes out and we get to see what happens with Ebony.
I thought this was a great way to continue the story as well. I can't wait until the next book comes out and we get to see what happens with Ebony.
July 24, 2020
Awesome
It is an awesome continueation of the series love love it . Great book . great read . Just buy it
It is an awesome continueation of the series love love it . Great book . great read . Just buy it
July 26, 2020
Down with the queen
Oh boy! Not a bad installment. Lots happened and more action n on the horizon. Hopefully this will continue to grow in intensity.
Oh boy! Not a bad installment. Lots happened and more action n on the horizon. Hopefully this will continue to grow in intensity.
July 28, 2020
Gooe book
Very good series so far love the monster girls,they are very unique and one of a kind.love how is playing out so far cant wait for the next book to come out
Very good series so far love the monster girls,they are very unique and one of a kind.love how is playing out so far cant wait for the next book to come out
July 31, 2020
Still Enjoying this books
I am continuing looking forward to reading what happens next. I almost thought that We were going to have multiple new monster girls in this book.
I am continuing looking forward to reading what happens next. I almost thought that We were going to have multiple new monster girls in this book.
August 7, 2020
Kind of repetitive with lots of pretty dumb plot lines, not terrible but the writing could be better.
August 8, 2020
Amazing
Absolutely loved this whole series so far and can’t wait for the next one to come out so I can see what will happen next
Absolutely loved this whole series so far and can’t wait for the next one to come out so I can see what will happen next
August 13, 2020
This series is getting better and better and I like the way the books just continue
August 15, 2020
More suspense
Just when you think the author cannot further surprise you, he nails you with a wild cliffhanger. The black magic tie-is interesting.
Just when you think the author cannot further surprise you, he nails you with a wild cliffhanger. The black magic tie-is interesting.
March 17, 2022
Amazing story
I have enjoyed this awesome fun adventure of Charles and growing haram of monster girls that are helping change the world for the better.
I have enjoyed this awesome fun adventure of Charles and growing haram of monster girls that are helping change the world for the better.
June 30, 2020
Very Enjoyable Read!!!
This book was a lot of and very enjoyable. The whole series has been. I can't wait to read the next book!
This book was a lot of and very enjoyable. The whole series has been. I can't wait to read the next book!
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