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Like so many others I love discovering new crime series and select them randomly without knowing much about the author. Reading through this book, I had assumed this was a brand new author finding their way, so was surprised to see how successful Adam was when i reached the end. He is clearly an accomplished writer, so either this is an outlier or his books just aren't for me. In short this is very poor.
The book is very short at 295 pages - with short chapters and blank page inserts between chapters meaning you can probably get through this in a 3 1/2 hour session. On a positive note that means you can race through the story and the pace does keep you involved, and the brevity allows you to plough on through to the end. However the plot is all over the place and my main issue with the book is how incompetent this entire team of detectives are, with the possible exception of Dex. I've tried tie summarise my main issues below:
- You don't know anything about the first victim apart from he ran a construction company and he was anti-religion. That's it. No attempts are made by the police to establish his last known whereabouts, there's no fleshing out of the character, nothing. You can't feel any sympathy for him as he basically exists as an empty corpse.
- The DCI interviews the victims wife in the early stages of the book and finds out in the next chapter she is potentially having an affair with a famous Rugby player. The wife never features again as a suspect, is never interviewed or asked about this. The focus turns entirely to the Rugby player..
- The police don't really seem to conduct any kind of investigation. At one point they gain a vital piece of evidence as a construction worker has to literally run after them and knock on their car window to tell them about an argument (in front of may witnesses) that provides a red herring suspect. Wouldn't it have been wise to actually interview the workers at the construction site?
- One vital clue they have is a threatening E-Mail sent to the victim, which is traced to the local Library. One of the detectives on the team (described earlier as exceptional) is tasked with tracing the CCTV. She does this and reports back that there is nothing to see here. It later transpires the killer in fully visible and identifiable from the CCTV but the detective didn't bother reporting this as he wasn't a suspect at the time. This is almost beyond parody - one man features on the CCTV during the period the threatening E-Mail was sent and this crack detective didn't even deem it worthy of mentioning.
- The entire case is solved as the murderer breaks into the DCI's house and leaves a confession letter (unsigned) his entire plan was to commit 2 murders (done) and then kill himself on that very night. The only reason he is caught is because he leaves this letter. There's no point to this, and the reasoning is that all of a sudden (after 3/4 of the book) he is now "playing a game" with the detective. This is never evident before this moment, but is mentioned about 4 times subsequently.
- At one point the DCI is asked to go home for the day and speak to her boss in the morning. A couple of chapters later she is suspended (never clear what for) and this point is never mentioned, and seems to be introduced entirely so she can go rogue and confront the killer alone.
- The main character, as others have said is very unlikeable. There's an odd unconscious bit of racism, which is never mentioned again, she would rather let her husband and kids think she is having an affair than tell them she has cancer, spends most of the time sulking or miserable and being generally dreadful to most people she encounters. The plot even seems to go out of it's way to make her look incompetent. Early on she is shown a picture of the famous Rugby player from a google image search which she takes of photo of. The teenage girl tells her she can just search and download. Nowhere else is she portrayed as a technophobe, this scene just makes her look stupid.
- At one point the DCI spots the rugby player suspect in a pub and walks across to him and has her photo taken. There is no point to this scene other than later down the line her husband finds it and thinks she's having an affair. In the scene in the pub the suspect knows she's a police officer, she already has an internet full of photos she can use, it's just a scene designed to cause problems later down the line.
- You can work out who the killer is after about 100 pages - based on one line.
All in all if the police had done nothing but drink coffee for the entire period of this book, the only difference to the outcome would have been that the killer committed suicide rather than being caught. They prevent no murders, never even interview the suspect themselves, or not the team responsible for his arrest and generally just make a mess of things. We keep being told the team is small, almost as if the author noticed how incompetent they all were and inserted this as a retconned reason for that incompetence.
So not a good book. However I bought this as a boxset of 4 so will try the next one and see if it improves. As I said at the start the author is clearly very accomplished, and maybe this was just an off day.