Oh geez. I’m not entirely sure where to start. This book was rough. ROUGH. It was probably about 75% percent too long, and the majority of that is because the entire book is repetitive. I’m not sure I’ve ever met a group of characters I disliked more than these ones, especially the heroine, Joelle. I’ve always thought saying a character was “too stupid to live” was one of the meanest things you can say but, I get it. Joelle...I just...
Anyway, here are some examples of what I’m talking about and just note that this goes on through the entire book. If I could do a kindle search of a question mark or any interrogative the results would be in the thousands, I’m certain. Every question is answered with a question, and Joelle especially seems to have trouble grasping anything someone might tell her.
“No. I married the lead singer, Rob. That’s my husband. He’s the singer for the band.”
“You miscarried?” She looked him squarely in the eye. “Yes, I did. And I was glad.” “And that’s what made you sick?” “Yes, it’s what got infected.”
She mostly wore sweatpants, workout pants, t-shirts and sweatshirts. Nick continued to wear suits, slacks, ties and jackets.
“I know. I just needed you to know that I know.,” “Well, I don’t know,” she said, a cloud of confusion adding her mind.
“She wants me to live with her?” “Yes.” Nick kept the rest of Erica's reasons out of it. “She likes me then? Not just as your tagalong?”
But it wasn’t her fault. It wasn’t her fight. Not right now it wasn’t. Maybe it never would be again or maybe it would be in a month.
“What’s it like?” “What’s what like?”
“I don’t get it. I can’t figure it out. Why would Nick bother with you? I get it now though.”
I bought three books in this series and I think I learned a valuable lesson when it comes to wanting to complete entire series. In the future I’ll just buy the first book and go from there because I’m not sure I can even try to get through the next two books.