In this mediative tale, a runner spends a summer training in a remote mountain town. This story appears in the collection For a Little While by Rick Bass.
Rick Bass was born in Fort Worth, Texas, and grew up in Houston, the son of a geologist. He studied petroleum geology at Utah State University and while working as a petroleum geologist in Jackson, Mississippi, began writing short stories on his lunch breaks. In 1987, he moved with his wife, the artist Elizabeth Hughes Bass, to Montana’s remote Yaak Valley and became an active environmentalist, working to protect his adopted home from the destructive encroachment of roads and logging. He serves on the board of both the Yaak Valley Forest Council and Round River Conservation Studies and continues to live with his family on a ranch in Montana, actively engaged in saving the American wilderness.
Bass received the PEN/Nelson Algren Award in 1988 for his first short story, “The Watch,” and won the James Jones Fellowship Award for his novel Where the Sea Used To Be. His novel The Hermit’s Story was a Los Angeles Times Best Book of the Year in 2000. The Lives of Rocks was a finalist for the Story Prize and was chosen as a Best Book of the Year in 2006 by the Rocky Mountain News. Bass’s stories have also been awarded the Pushcart Prize and the O. Henry Award and have been collected in The Best American Short Stories.
Not as much a narrative than a string of moments—the prose is lonely, meditative, shared with great clarity and no elaboration. About how we run, the young unnamed blurs of fear, reason, and stamina that bring us to run, and the rings of fiery grass that surround our slowing, speeding jackhammer lives. A lot to glean. Loved this one.
This is a beautiful short story. Thank you LeVar Burton for including this story in your podcast and thereby introducing me to Rick Bass. I felt compelled to write a review because I don't understand why this story has such low ratings! In my reading, the fires are a metaphor for the protagonist and the runner's passion for each other. The slow suspenseful build to the passionate ending in the last moment can only be done by a very experienced and talented writer. I really enjoyed how the protagonist kept pulling himself back from his feelings. I also appreciate the sparse writing that explains life in the mountains, but if read again, is deep in significance and meaning. I feel that every single word in this story was intended to be there and not a single word more.
Really odd story. I loved the setting descriptions and details, and found the general plot device (a runner in Montana for the summer to train at high altitude) at least mildly intriguing, but the ending just confused me. I have no idea why she did what she did, and , so I'm not particularly sympathetic, either. Maybe if I listen to it again, I can make more sense of it? Up until that point, it was a nice, meditative listen.
Upon first read/listen, I did not enjoy this. I'm not sure why. It is a very simple story with the setting and almost a character in the story being nature itself. Perhaps after the pandemic, some life changes, and a summer of wildfire smoke, I am better able to appreciate this story. I think LeVar Burton describes it well as a quiet story.