Adorkable (A college mystery)
By Shane K. Morton
Published by the author, 2020
Four stars
A really charming, winsome story, I liked this book a great deal. We follow Billy Williams and his best friend Gwen to college – at a fictional Kentucky university called Moray State. The set-up is sort of a classic YA trope – gay boy leaving his conservative, church-driven family in the small-town south to find freedom (and a boyfriend) at college.
On top of that there’s a mystery in Billy’s family – his uncle William, who he resembles in every way, died mysteriously while attending Moray State twenty years before – and that mystery haunts his family still. (Note here, that the late uncle would be 42 now, so that means Billy’s parents could be my children!)
All I’m guessing is that Moray State is based on wherever Shane Morton went to school, because it is described in loving detail in a way that makes it feel real. Billy’s two-pronged goal in college also feels authentic – finding himself in the world of dance and acting, and finding out about this mysterious doppelganger of an uncle.
There is a great deal that charms with Morton’s prose, but there are also weird points of carelessness that irked me throughout. I don’t know what it is with the resistance to using contractions in dialogue – because that’s the way people talk. Morton is no novice novelist, and it was weird to see this hiccup in his writing. The big payoff at the end was rather telegraphed in advanced, which I don’t mind; but it was handled in what was, to me, an oddly perfunctory way. All of this is what cost the book a star in my rating.
What I loved is the characters, from Billy himself, to his bestie Gwen, and their quirky roommates – Yuki and Barbie (oh, boy, Barbie pushed credulity, but was hilarious). Alex and Dante, vying for Billy’s attentions (much to Billy’s dismay), are as interesting as all the other students in the story become. The adults, from Billy’s teachers to the parental Williamses come to life, and sometimes in surprising ways. (I will say that I read this book after reading a new book on the lives of gay couples in Mississippi, which taught me a lot about the realities of being gay in the south. It gave me insight into the characters in Morton’s novel)
I enjoyed this book so much I couldn’t give it a 3, but its literary flaws made a five impossible. Morton’s voice and his ability to express emotions are what carried it to a four.