The only positive I have for this book is the fact that the writing is a tad better than pervious books. And I have to stress, only a tad better. There are still some rather ridiculous phrases (e.g. “her eyes filled with water”, “her eyes burst open”, and “a case of stairs”) that took me completely out of the story when I came across them and since I had a lot of trouble getting through this story to begin with, that just made it worse for me.
The biggest issue for me was that I didn’t care about any of the characters. For one thing, there were far too many of them, especially for all the perspective switching that was done. Never were we left in a single character’s perspective for more than a page and most of the time the jumps were completely unnecessary. We would go from a character on one side of the room and then suddenly be with a character on the other side for no reason other than they had to think about something for two paragraphs, and then we were off to someone else. It made the whole story feel disjointed and left me feeling as though I was being told what all the characters were supposedly feeling rather than being shown. Also, some of the breaks were utterly nonsensical because there was no pov shift or even a time break.
I hate love triangles so that didn’t engender this book to me either. I didn’t believe Michael and Amber’s “love” story (I read the other two books and didn’t believe it there either) so I genuinely didn’t care when they kept insisting they loved each other or anything else about their relationship. Malakai having been around protecting Amber since she was a baby just gave me creepy pedophilia vibes so I wasn’t thrilled with that relationship either.
Speaking of pedophilia vibes, the whole Zaraquel storyline with the angel being in love with her was creepy. She looked 15 and was technically much younger so in my mind that’s a double whammy for gross. I don’t care if you’re immortal, you shouldn’t be looking at an underage girl that way.
Overall, I consider my 3 star rating to be very fair.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.