Really good
Ms. Myia, I really enjoyed my first read it your work. I thought the characters were good characters. Kelis could have been many girls that wanted to live out their good fantasy. Moesha, Celine, Gregory got their karma along with Rick.
Maceo and Zae were such hoes. Although, they never promised the women nothing they were just living the hood life, until Briki and Courtney realized the four of them had each other, Briki was able to let Zae be himself with her and in doing so she found out she actually enjoyed his ways. The love that formed was unbelievable. Court and Maceo learned to love one another once Maceo let some of his pain go.
I loved how Zae took in Brikis sister without any problems. I would love to read about Maceo going back to school and finally living his love of playing ball of him and Zae maybe going legit, him and Courtney getting married having a family. Good story