It was a very typical romance story with all of the cliche plot elements making it predictable. There were logic problems and most times the emotions are forced. Character would be in total agony half a page ago then forgive everything; which is not believable not matter how much they are in love. I found the background stories boring. It just feels like, words -too many words- are used just to invoke empathy. Overall, I did not feel it was well crafted, but the story is there. It has a web novel, amateur feeling.
I feel I should be very bothered that they do not consider the marriage as anything...well as anything. Everyone else in that world seems to value marriage...enough...which makes both of the disregard for the marriage very scummy. This is a total extramarital affair and in broad daylight!! Everyone knows of it, but no one says anything. Even that sister in law who clearly value marriage and can't stand polygamy.
On a different note. Personally, I wish there was more of the politics.