I am voluntarily reviewing this novel after receiving a free copy.
Actual rating: 4.25 stars
I was excited to see this come up on the ARC service I use! I really adored the first one - something about the style and characters really struck a chord with me - so I was both excited and worried about reading the second. I don't think it quite lives up to the first, but it's still a good read.
My main issue is probably how the first chunk of the story just feels like Jack is spinning her wheels. She doesn't have a goal or purpose anymore, and as a result she just kinda wanders around doing nothing in particular. I didn't really understand why she didn't use a contact she made in the first book to at least get on her feet, especially since that character kinda came out of nowhere in the first book and really only existed for a single scene. It would have given more weight to that earlier moment/helped incorporate that character more into the narrative vs them just existing to give Jack a kick in the butt exactly when she needed it. (There's also a silly detail where she makes money by literally just knocking people out on the streets, going through their pockets, and healing them. It just seemed very goofy to me, almost slapstick.)
Once the plot picks up, though, it gets moving. I liked the addition of Jack's new friend (Patrick, I think?) and the continued exploration of what the boxes are, who the Builder is, and what powers Jack has. I liked Patrick well enough, especially as we learn more about him. Definitely don't trust him, but I hope I'm wrong about that.
(Side note, but there was something very odd I noticed - Jack uses an assumed name at first with Patrick, but there are several times where he calls her Jack, to the point where I assumed she had actually admitted her real name and I just missed it. Later we find that's not the case, which makes me wonder if this was an error on the author's part, or if it was intentional? If it was intentional, I can't imagine Jack literally not noticing him using her actual name while she's under an alias, that seems very out of character. Just odd. We'll see if it comes to anything in the future.)
Imo, it's once Jack connects with the mob that things really heat up. It's fascinating to see her get roped into their world and how she deals with it, and it really puts the morality she forged in the first book to the test. Jack is a fascinating character to follow because she's not your typical heroine - she is deeply flawed and broken, but wants so badly to be better. I adore how tough and scrappy she is, how clever, and how loving, underneath it all.
The mob plot leads us into some shocking twists and turns, especially as Jack uncovers more and more things she can do. We get old characters popping back up (another side note, there was a reunion that I really thought would be very poignant, but ended up being kinda flat, sadly), old foes, and that ending!! I am super excited to see where the story goes from here. I can't imagine Jack's plan will work without consequences, but I'm hooked, for sure.
Overall, if you liked the first book, you'll love this one, as long as you forgive the slow start. I am super excited to see how things wrap up in the next book.