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Please, Daddy. I want to play.

Growing up with dyslexia wasn’t always easy. The doctor’s appointments, the special rooms in school that made me feel small. It’s why I became an accountant, so I could look at numbers instead of strings of words that made my head spin.

But even when I’m reading annual reports, the important phrases still swim and melt together on the screen. I’m starting to think the dyslexia isn’t the problem. I’m just not cut out for adulthood at all.

One day, a mysterious man comes into my accounting firm. He presents my boss with his business plan and my boss reacts with rage. I’m on the verge of tip-toeing into my boss’s office to see what’s going on when the man speaks.

“Neverland Hills is a luxury age play resort in the Little Rocky Mountains. We cater to kind daddies and sweet little boys. We’re not what you think.”

I try to calm myself but I can’t breath. Did he say age play?

I have to speak with this man. I don’t care if I lose my internship at Jim’s Accounting. I need to understand what he does, who he is, and if I fit into this wonderful ranch that could very well be what I’ve been looking for my entire life.

Brent

When my best friends Joe and Paul invited me to start an age play resort in the mountains of Montana, my first instinct was to laugh. But they worked tirelessly with their two littles Jacob and Dennis to whip the ranch into shape and, before I knew it, they transformed the dilapidated farmhouse into a little’s paradise with horses, hiking trails, and a playroom big enough for an entire flock of sweet boys.

Yet though Neverland Hills is in business, the local businesses aren’t ready for us. Joe’s Accounting is just the third accounting firm I’ve gotten kicked out of this week. I’m about to head back to the ranch when, without warning, a beautiful young boy bursts through the door and barrels straight towards me.

“Please, sir,” he gasps, taking a sharp breath. “M-My boss didn’t mean any harm. But I heard your conversation. Please… Can you take me to see the ranch?”

My mind says no. I’m the head of operations at the ranch, not a daddy. I haven’t been a daddy since my last relationship went down in flames. But my heart says otherwise. It begs me to strap him into a booster seat and get him ready to play. I can’t resist his sweet little charm.

I want to tell him to get in. It’s time to take this sweet boy to Neverland.

Nosey Nathan is the first book in Laurie Lochs’s new Neverland Hills series that follows 21-year-old Nathan and his sweet daddy Brent. It includes age play, Daddy kink and enough warm fuzzies to melt your heart. Guaranteed HEA.

139 pages, Kindle Edition

First published July 10, 2020

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3,838 reviews30 followers
July 10, 2020
Drawn in by the cute cover. I’ve read a few little stories now, each with their own take on how things go. From the arrival at Neverland Nathan is pretty much a fall time little, there’s no break, no divide. So the more intimate parts with sex made me feel a little uncomfortable.

It’s a cute story, dual POV and low angst. HEA but does open up for the next pairing. How the dyslexia was dealt with was heartwarming. The swimming part felt a little like the friends were being pushy. I didn’t like how irresponsible Nathan started out but o did like the relationship progression.
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114 reviews
July 14, 2020
Disapointing

This story had potential but didn't deliver. The writing is too unbelievable. People just dont talk like that. I appreciated the emphasis on consent but think it was taken too far. The conversations and reactions between characters is too unrealistic. I made it about half way through the book before I had to give up. I usually finish a book whether im engaged or not but I just couldn't with this one.
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244 reviews63 followers
July 14, 2020
This was such a sweet and comforting book and little nathan and his daddy brent was just adorable together so if you want something warm and comforting that will make you swoon and smile this is the perfect book
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145 reviews19 followers
July 15, 2020
This my 1st book from this author and hopefully not my last. I really enjoyed this book. I cant wait to read the next book in the series .

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Author 140 books840 followers
July 6, 2020
Nosey Nathan is exactly what it sets out to be. A sweet and loving story with minimal angst, lots of kind-hearted loving with a little kink thrown in. If you like your Daddy/Little tales to make you feel good, this is definitely the story for you. Normally I prefer my stories with more bite but it was a really good Sunday read and I'll be following future books in the serie
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234 reviews6 followers
January 12, 2021
eh 😒
i mean i read it... and i’ll probably read the other books but i wouldn’t recommend them 🤷🏼‍♀️
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196 reviews4 followers
July 5, 2020
Nathan currently holds an internship at Jim's small accounting firm. One day a client comes in to get assistance with his new invesment in the Neverland Hills Ranch for Daddies and their littles. Jim is disgusted by this concept and he throws the man out. But Nathan overhears the conversation between the men and he then goes in to argue on the man's behalf. Jim decides that if Nathan agrees with "that kind of thing" that Nathan can leave too, and he fires him. Nathan, quickly runs after the man (Brent) and apologizes on his boss's behalf and practically begs to go with him to the ranch. Brent complies and him and Nathan travel to this magical destination where Nathan hopes he can finally find himself. Neverland Hills is better than Nathan could imagine, he instantly falls in love with the place and is eager to stay. But one of the major rules of the ranch is that in order to attend all littles must be sponsored by a Daddy, which Nathan doesn't have. Maybe he can convince Brent to be his Daddy, maybe they could be something more.


This novel wasn't bad but I didn't find it very good either. Moreso, I was expecting more out of it then it actually was. My issue was that it was so fast-paced and unrealistic that I had a hard time enjoying it. First, the fact that Nathan gets into a car with Brent and travels hours away to this unknown destination. No matter who you are - to me it just doesn't sit well that anyone would just up and travel with someone they don't know that far away. Not to mention Nathan doesn't even inform anyone that he is going. For all he knows Brent could be a murderer - obviously he's not- but the carelessness of Nathan is just bad. It just makes you think to - realistically how many people would get into a car with a stranger???

Second, Nathan instantly fell in love with the place. I had no quims about this but there was a lot of backstory about Nathan and Brent that was missing. It's mentioned briefly that Brent hadn't engaged in this kind of play in a long time, yet we never find out his reasoning behind this. I also think it's odd for them to have so many rules on this ranch. I didn't like when all the Daddies and their boys went swimming and they basically pressured Nathan to skinny dip with them. Nathan really wasn't comfortable with the idea and Brent gave him an out - but there was still very much that pressure on Nathan to give in and do what everyone else was doing.

Third, one thing I did like about how this author handled the relationship between Brent and Nathan was the natural progression their relationship took. While there was instances where it was indicated - three weeks, 2 weeks, months, etc. went by, it was known that during some of these times Brent and Nathan did not have any kind of sexual relationship yet. It was very clear that Brent valued consent and communication above all else - something that is very important in a relationship. It also made their relationship more natural because they didn't just jump into sex. They both took their time to feel each other out and get to know each other - their wants, desires, and fears before they became something more.

If I had to rate this I would probably give this a 2.5/5 stars.

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1,717 reviews7 followers
August 3, 2020
Cute story!

Nosey Nathan was a cute story about Nathan finding his daddy. Brent owns a resort specifically tailored for daddies and their littles. He meets Nathan when he's trying to find an accounting firm to do the books for the resort. Nathan is an intern at the firm and overheard them talking and wants to go to the resort and explore his little side. At the resort he meets two little names Dennis and Jacob and their daddies Paul and Joe. I liked the book but it could have used another round of edits. There were some missing words and some wrong words used but not enough to distract too much from the story. I also wished that the littles used variations of their names when they were little vs big. Like Nathan would have been Nate as a little. Overall, I thought it was a cute story and I'm glad I read it. Now on to the next book in the series. I read this book using the Kindle Unlimited program.
1,044 reviews10 followers
July 8, 2020
Nosey Nathan is an age play book about Nathan and Brent. I really liked the idea of a place where Daddies and boys can go and just be themselves. It was like a dream come true for Nathan, who was interning at an accounting firm, to have Brent come in and want to do business. Though the firm turned Brent down he met Nathan and both their lives changed that day. Daddy Brent found his boy. This is a sweet story and I love the gift Daddy Brent gave to Nathan. I look forward to more stories from Neverland Hills ranch.

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1,524 reviews9 followers
July 10, 2020
Neverland is an all inclusive ABDL ranch for daddies and their boys to play and learn. Brent is a daddy without a boy but when he goes out to find an accountant for the ranch he runs into Nathan. Nathan knows that he’s a little but he’s never had a daddy. When he discovers Neverland he asks Brent to take him there. This is a really cute, sweet story. I voluntarily reviewed an advance copy of this book.

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14 reviews1 follower
December 24, 2022
🌽🌽🌽 out of 5 🌽

Instalove™️> is a fave of mine but this one was a struggle. Is Nathan a mature 21 year old when not in little space or not?? You gotta pick one. There were times where the tone and language use changed that left me confused. A few editing errors that could have contributed to that. After a while it was hard to get through because it seemed disjointed.

It was decent fluff and okay for someone just starting to read about age play.
5,704 reviews39 followers
July 13, 2020
this was adorably sweet.. i enjoyed reading the dyslexic part of this story.. it kinda hit with me because my oldest is dyslexic.. it was adorable.. it was fast paced... it had some spots that werent as interesting as i was hoping for. but overall i did enjoy it and it was sweet.
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1,341 reviews
July 13, 2020
I normally read DDlg books when I want to read age play but I thought I'd try something new. I really enjoyed this. Nathan was so sweet and cute. I loved this book and really want more.

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6,493 reviews22 followers
July 10, 2020
This is a sweet light heart read. The storyline is fast paced and entertaining. Nathan and Jim have interesting interactions. I look forward to reading more of Laurie Lochs.
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6 reviews10 followers
July 29, 2020
I liked this book It was an ARC that I was given to read and review. It was very sweet and the age play was spot on.
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136 reviews1 follower
January 24, 2023
Cute start to a special series. Looking forward to reading the rest😊😁
26 reviews3 followers
May 15, 2025
DNF at 50%. Couldn’t suspend my disbelief enough the way it was written.
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15 reviews3 followers
March 17, 2025
I loved this book and nathan was so sweet can not wait for the next books in the series, the story was amazing and pulled me in so easily awesome series am looking forward to reading

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