Urara is a common, average, run-of-the-mill girl living a simple life at a fancy school courtesy of a scholarship. Except she’s in a light novel, which these days means she died somewhere and came back somewhere else. Somewhere else just happens to be an otome game and she was a countess in somewhere and THEN it gets complicated. Boys ensue.
Oh, I had high hopes, such high hopes. This book gets off to a good start, it really does. At exactly a fifth of the way through, there was a plot twist so shocking and unexpected that I almost wanted to reread the book and see it through fresh eyes. That’s good writing and all credit to the author - a good twist is hard to do.
That, however, is where the problems begin and I will be very up front and acknowledge that some of these problems are on me and some are not. I think this is aimed at a specific audience that I’m adjacent to rather than on target for.
To go back to the plot twist - this comes too early in the story and there is no hope for the story to hit that peak afterwards, so it becomes a bit of a slog waiting for the other shoe to drop for the rest of cast. I expect a certain level of obtuseness in many light novel characters so the fact that they don’t notice didn’t bother me, but the time in between just isn’t spent very well.
For my part, my level of knowledge of otome games is not deep and I spent this entire book feeling like I was missing out on some arch observations that would make the story more interesting. One other character is also reincarnated into this world and she knows these games very well, but it felt like nothing was being done with it.
Also, the guys aren’t that interesting, which for an otome game seems terribly damning. Part of it is my fault - I have a hard time getting Japanese names right (thank god I don’t spend all my time reading manga or anything!) and it takes some time to get my head around them. Here, I never did, so the boys turn into this amorphous blob of testosterone and sparkles after a while.
So after wading through competitive stuff that seems to matter rather little in the grand scheme, we get a final bit of plot that ties everything together, although I had kind of figured all that out when it first came up so it felt a bit flat. The last short story also doesn’t paint one of the main characters in the most flattering light and made me more concerned about the happy ending then elated.
I get the point - this is a story about wish fulfillment and second chances and starting over and also romance. It just works fitfully rather than from start to finish. I was also not expecting it to be so long - it’s definitely big for a light novel - and yet not say much in the end.
I feel like I’m being super mean here, when this book truly wasn’t that bad. But I can’t help but see things I would have preferred to be done better or differently or ways the characters could have been more interesting and it’s kind of a bummer. I don’t regret reading it, but I wouldn’t read it again or continue on if it were a series.
3 stars - I loved that plot twist, but I think this is going for a particular type of romance and story that I’m not always a fan of. There’s too much journey and not enough destination. It’s definitely frilly and swoony and full of declarations, so if that’s up your street this book won’t let you down.