Three stars for the effort. Both hers and mine.
What do you say about a book where we first meet the H is drinking in a strip bar he doesn’t seem to want to be. Then he leaves there
to meet up w/his construction crew,which seems like a very odd cover
to have since construction isn’t a fast or quick thing if done right and these guys have to leave at a moments notice. That’s when you realize it must be daytime,can’t be fixing a roof at night. So our supposed alpha hole SEAL is day drinking at a strip club ,that’s just beyond pathetic, if it’s undercover it not mentioned .
While the h is waking up w/a stranger whom she happily berates as she kicks him to the curb. Like she’s any better then him or any of the other alpha holes in books like this where sex is only a way to use ppl to have their needs meet til “the one” magically appears one day. Jay wants to think she’s better then the men she’s been around but she’s the same only with a smaller body and breasts and a vagina.
Both characters preach to use about having a “ brotherhood” w/fellow SEALS or a “sisterhood “ w/the MC but it’s all BS.
Angel is a loose cannon who thinks with his dick and doesn’t really want to share anything w/any one. And “Jay” is the same . Jay instead of Genevieve ,because Genevieve doesn’t sound tough enough,so she takes something that makes her sound masculine, even though supposedly Jay her all female MC want to prove they’re just as good as the men. If not better. There’s gotta be some irony there somewhere.
Anyway, these are two F’ed up hot messes in a pod.
Angel is a loose cannon who seems to day drink in strip clubs instead of managing the construction company he owns, makes most of decisions w/ or thinks w/ his dick. But at least he has a job, Jay supposedly owns a tattoo shop but all you see her do is her do is itch at her “girls” about missing women,all the while telling us she can’t confide in them nor them w/ her while she’s pining or panting for Angel’s dick. Their chemistry feels forced And their interactions though I know are supposed to feel “hot” a bit forced as well and a touch convoluted. Like their what you might expect two ppl w/strong personalities who don’t know to trust ,both alpha holes to act. But that’s just it,it’s over the top and feels fake like it’s just an act. Now I get Jays hurting and hasn’t had the best life,but she just feels like a one dimensional itchy lil girl. A girl who seems to think if she emulates all the big beads in her life that she’ll be one to but for me she didn’t ,she just felt whiny and troubled and itchy and in desperate need of therapy. Not be the leader of a MC. An definitely not someone who’s just as messed up as she is. And Angel is.
All either of the MC’s thought about the H’s dick and after just 16 chapters, his so wasn’t worth it.
Would I recommend? Hell no.
But take a chance if you want, maybe shallow day drinking SEALs and the women who share their obsession w/their dicks is right for you.
Sorry,still a tad bitter over my wasted time.