“The Light Pantheon rules from above. The Dark Pantheon rules from below. Together, they defeated the other divine races and became the masters of Etinhym.”
Eadric is the son of the Grave Queen, but he was raised in the Crown Realm as part of the alliance between the two pantheons. After reaching the age of eighteen, he’s finally able to choose the Path that will allow him to acquire demigod abilities and explore the many realms of Etinhym. Although his goal is to become a Grave Lord, serving under his mother, he finds himself following the trail of a conspiracy that threatens the Divine Pact that has kept the jotuns, the valkyries, the greater demons, and the dragons from uniting against the gods.
Eadric’s story will take him through strange realms—from a spatially disjointed forest that twists and turns on itself to a living ocean of blood and even a skyscape full of floating castles. He’ll also have to face off against strange monsters, corrupted spirits, and even towering abominations. If he fails, then the war that follows will likely be the last war Etinhym ever sees—a war that will surely lead to the extermination of the human race.
***This book contains RPG elements, harsh language in a few chapters, and violent descriptions.***
EA Hooper is a lifelong storyteller. As a child he made stories with action figures or legos that would go for months on end. In elementary school he made comics during classes. Then in middle school he started writing stories in notebooks for his friends to read, beginning his pursuit of becoming a writer. Eventually he went to Austin Peay State University and earned a Bachelors Degree in English in 2013. He now lives with his wife and their cats.
Read thru about halfway, the main character is still a total jerk. I'm sure he'll have a harsh comeuppance somewhere in the book, but I had to stop. I couldn't sympathise with him at all, and I wasn't enjoying the reading.
But this isn’t for me unfortunately. The characters read like cardboard. I couldn’t make it past 30%. I’ve tried this author before and had similar thoughts. I think I’ll be avoiding this author in the future.
I have very mixed feelings about this book. There were little gems in that made me think this book could be more than it was. I liked the fight scenes. They were fairly well written and the limitations of the protagonists abilities were easy to follow with the gamified combat system. The world building was generally engaging and I found the author added some interesting little twists on old concepts in fantasy.
But this books character work and dialogue were painful. I read this book in audio format and I think that further hampered my experience of the book. As the narrator had the protagonist sounding like a petulant child instead of a feared demigod, making his gruff talk feel forced and cringeworthy. All the worst cliches in fantasy are on display here as well, from instant love to every female character feeling like a placemat to fulfil the protagonist's whims.
And even worse than all these other issues is after making the effort to slog through this book, it ends on a cliffhanger. What makes it especially egregious is the fact that I know it would've taken only a chapter or two to give me a somewhat satisfying ending.
Ending poorly, is not the only issue with the plot. The whole thing reads as a questing fantasy but is written like it's supposed to be an epic. The joys of reading a questing fantasy are the time spent with characters and the interesting conversations that occur in the downtime. Instead the characters in this book read like arrogant assholes, cowering damsels in distress, over the top villains (without the charm that can sometimes make them work) and sidekicks with as much personality as an Oblivion NPC.
If you enjoy good world building, interesting fight scenes and can ignore some serious flaws then I'd probably recommend this book. But I wouldn't chosen to read this book if I knew then what I know now.
First, my review: “This was a fun book. I am glad that I read it. You should try it too.”
Over the past year it has become apparent that my reviews are somewhat antagonistic and I apologize to those of you that have taken offense. I think I had hoped to change peoples’ minds about reviewing works of art and that seems to have backfired spectacularly. However, I am still going to be true to myself and write what I believe.
To the author: Thank you for this chance to escape reality and enjoy the world you created! Keep up the good work.
To my fellow reviewers: Messaging me and reviewing my reviews is as productive as trying to shovel water out of the ocean. Stop. I get it. Let’s just all live peacefully.
To potential readers: Art needs to be experienced at an individual level. You are the only one that can determine what you like and don’t like. Don’t let others make that decision for you. You should definitely read the book and completely ignore all of the reviews. You are a much better judge of what you will like than anyone here.
Did not work for me. Language was modern while the setting was medieval fantasy, which was constantly jarring. Characters didn't feel authentic or fleshed out enough. Also like most lit RPGs, everything is too simplistic, finite and defined by a number that we're constantly made aware of. I've yet to read any lit RPG where the literature is the foreground and RPG elements take a supportive backseat. Usually the reader is constantly made aware of the numbers, which makes it feel like its just a game and not real, and takes away any sense of tension or threat. I want the books I read, especially mediaeval fantasy, to feel real and visceral.
Once I started reading I had a hard time putting this down! The main character seems like a bit of a jerk, but it isn't enough to make you root against him. The other characters feel great and important in their world of gods and monsters and I'm excited to read the sequel! Definitely a must-read if you're a fan of adventure and good storytelling!
1) though the main character is an asshole for a good chunk of the book, he feels redeemable and you see real growth. He doesn’t remain inflexible in his ideas being challenged or the world proving his thoughts wrong.
2) the magic system is very interesting. The heart health system makes the combat feel very real, in a way I wouldn’t have expected from the description.
I really enjoyed the world tree series that Mr Hooper wrote so when I saw that he had started a new series I bought it right away. I loved this first book and can't wait to see what happens in book 2.
The main character has a distinct asshole streak in his character. The story, setting, and world building make it fit perfectly. The author did any excellent job on the characters. Definitely going to continue the story.
Pretty good but the constant foreshadowing got annoying quickly. Once or twice is fine but when its happening constantly it really takes me out of the story.